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Unit 2 Stay Healthy
单元话题书面表达练习
单元话题:健康生活
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.生命的意义在于运动。假设你叫李明,某学生英文网站正在进行”我运动,我健康, 我快乐”的征文活动, 你打算投稿,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英语写一篇短文。
作文要求:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯,词数70个左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Exercise, health and happiness
Exercise is really important in our life.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.“拥抱健康生活,点亮美好未来”是青少年学生的永恒追求。假如你是李华,应学校英语社团的邀请,为同学们开设题为“Suggestions on Health”的一场演讲,向大家提出你的建议。请根据以下图文提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As a student, if we want to have a bright future, we should have a healthy life. How to keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you.
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That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
3.健康高于一切。没有健康的身体,一切无从谈起。怎样才能保持健康呢?请以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇60词左右的短文,从运动、饮食、睡眠等方面谈谈你的看法。
具体要求:
1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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How to keep healthy Keeping healthy is important for everyone. First, we should exercise often, like running or playing ball games. Second, eating healthy food such as vegetables and fruit is necessary. Third, getting enough sleep every night helps our body rest well. Also, drinking plenty of water is good for us.
If we follow these ways, we can stay healthy and happy.
4.2024年5月国家卫健委发布了“健康素养66条”。为了鼓励大家践行健康生活,学校计划举办一场英语演讲比赛,假设你是李华,请你结合以下提示,准备一份英语发言稿。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 文中须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone! To live a healthy life, I would like to tell you something about “Health Literacy”.
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Thank you for listening.
5.假定你是李华,近日你校开展关于“身心同频,向阳而行”的征文活动。请你结合图表信息,以“To be a Healthy Student”为题,写一篇英语短文发表自己的看法。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
3.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
4.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
To be a Healthy Student
Health is important to everyone. But how to be a healthy student? Here are my suggestions.
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6.某英语报纸进行了一次有关中学生健康情况的调查,发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧,主要原因有:不健康的饮食习惯;体育锻炼不足;心理压力大;不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此,该报纸发起了题为“How to Keep Healthy”的征文活动,倡导中学生拥有健康的生活方式。请你写一篇70字左右的文章来参加这次活动,谈谈如何保持身体健康。
How to Keep Healthy
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7.喜欢吃零食是导致孩子们肥胖的主要原因之一。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文,简要谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.吃零食是一种坏习惯;
2.科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖,人们摄取过多脂肪和糖,容易发胖。
要求:
1.文中须包含所有的要点提示,可适当使用多种句式,补充细节;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.80-100词。
参考词汇:take in摄取;overweight肥胖的;超重的
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8.在生活中,如果没有健康的身体,财富、地位……一切也都将失去意义。请以Ways to Keep Healthy为题,参照导图信息,写一篇短文。
内容包括:①简单介绍健康身体的重要性;
②就如何保持身体健康,提出你的建议。
注意:①文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
②写作词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Ways to Keep Healthy
As we all know, health is
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◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.陶行知曾说:“思想决定行动,行动养成习惯,习惯形成品质,品质决定命运。”本周你们班级将组织“良好习惯,伴其一生”主题班会。假如你是Billy,Danny是你的好朋友,他是个品学兼优的学生,为了号召同学们向他学习,请你根据下列表格提升介绍他的好习惯,并谈谈自己的看法。
休闲活动
每周锻炼三到四次;每天打扫自己的房间;周末经常帮助妈妈做家务……
学习习惯
每天阅读半小时;总是按时完成作业;从不熬夜(stay up late)……
饮食健康
经常吃水果和蔬菜;每天早上喝牛奶;几乎从不吃垃圾食品……
我的看法
好习惯很重要……
要求:1.表格的内容要全部包括,可适当发挥;
2.语句通畅,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.总词数:80-100词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.青年是社会的中坚力量,肩负着祖国的未来,然而在当今快节奏的生活中,出现了一些因忙碌而缺乏锻炼、爱吃快餐和垃圾食品、习惯熬夜的“脆皮青年”。请你根据下面的表格内容以“Enjoy Healthy Living”为题,给他们提一些建议,让他们拥有更健康的生活。
Enjoy Healthy Living
Sports habits
Eating habits
Sleeping habits
……
run, play ping-pong...
fast food, fruit and vegetables...
stay up, get up early...
……
写作要求:1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Enjoy Healthy Living
Youth (青年) is the future of our country. But today some of them have unhealthy living habits. To make them healthier, here are some suggestions.
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Unit 2 Stay Healthy
单元话题书面表达练习
单元话题:健康生活
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.生命的意义在于运动。假设你叫李明,某学生英文网站正在进行”我运动,我健康, 我快乐”的征文活动, 你打算投稿,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英语写一篇短文。
作文要求:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯,词数70个左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Exercise, health and happiness
Exercise is really important in our life.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文:
Exercise, health and happiness
Exercise is really important in our life. It not only keeps our bodies strong and less likely to get sick, but also lifts our spirits when we feel down.
At school, I join the morning jogging three times a week and play basketball in PE classes twice. At home, I ride bikes with my family every weekend to enjoy fresh air while exercising.
Let’s stick to working out. It will surely bring us lasting health and happiness!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:补充运动“减少生病”的细节,丰富学校/家庭运动的频率与体验。
[写作步骤]
第一步:拓展运动重要性;
第二步:细化学校和家庭的运动安排;
第三步:呼吁坚持运动,强化主题。
[亮点词汇]
①less likely to get sick更少生病
②stick to working out坚持锻炼
[高分句型]
①It not only keeps our bodies strong and less likely to get sick, but also lifts our spirits when we feel down. (用“not only…but also”和时间状语从句)
2.“拥抱健康生活,点亮美好未来”是青少年学生的永恒追求。假如你是李华,应学校英语社团的邀请,为同学们开设题为“Suggestions on Health”的一场演讲,向大家提出你的建议。请根据以下图文提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。词数70左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As a student, if we want to have a bright future, we should have a healthy life. How to keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you.
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That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. As a student, if we want to have a bright future, we should have a healthy life. How to keep healthy? Here are some suggestions for you.
First, we should have a healthy diet. We’d better have meals with less salt and sugar. Eat more fruits and vegetables. They’re good for our bodies. I think it’s important to drink milk and eat an egg every day. Second, we should stay positive. Communicate with people. Do more exercise too, like running, skating or playing ball games. Also, make sure to get enough sleep every night. If we follow these tips, we can keep healthy and study better.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据图文提示提出关于健康的建议,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题——如何保持健康;
第二步,从饮食、保持积极等方面提出保持健康的建议;
第三步,表达对良好结果的肯定预期。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②communicate with sb.和某人沟通
③make sure to do sth.确保做某事
[高分句型]
①I think it’s important to drink milk and eat an egg every day. (省略that的宾语从句)
②If we follow these tips, we can keep healthy and study better. (if引导的条件状语从句)
3.健康高于一切。没有健康的身体,一切无从谈起。怎样才能保持健康呢?请以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇60词左右的短文,从运动、饮食、睡眠等方面谈谈你的看法。
具体要求:
1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】参考范文:
How to keep healthy Keeping healthy is important for everyone. First, we should exercise often, like running or playing ball games. Second, eating healthy food such as vegetables and fruit is necessary. Third, getting enough sleep every night helps our body rest well. Also, drinking plenty of water is good for us.
If we follow these ways, we can stay healthy and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:话题作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,并适当增加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点明主题,指出保持健康对每个人都重要;
第二步:分点阐述方法,从经常运动、健康饮食、充足睡眠和足量饮水四个方面提出具体建议;
第三步:总结观点,简要总结遵循这些方法能带来的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①keeping healthy保持健康
②exercise often经常锻炼
③healthy food健康食物
④enough sleep充足睡眠
⑤plenty of water大量的水
[高分句型]
①First, we should exercise often, like running or playing ball games. (运用like举例的插入语)
②Second, eating healthy food such as vegetables and fruit is necessary. (动名词短语作主语)
③If we follow these ways, we can stay healthy and happy. (if引导的条件状语从句)
4.2024年5月国家卫健委发布了“健康素养66条”。为了鼓励大家践行健康生活,学校计划举办一场英语演讲比赛,假设你是李华,请你结合以下提示,准备一份英语发言稿。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 文中须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone! To live a healthy life, I would like to tell you something about “Health Literacy”.
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】 例文:
Hello, everyone! To live a healthy life, I would like to tell you something about “Health Literacy”.
First, we should have good eating habits. Eat more fruits, vegetables and less junk food. It can give us enough energy. Second, doing sports is a must, as activities like running, playing ball games can make us stronger. Also, reading some books about health helps us know more about how to keep healthy. What’s more, we should care for others. It can make us happy. Finally, we should keep a good mood. By following these tips in “Health Literacy”, we can enjoy a healthy life.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示写作,须包含提示中的所有信息,逻辑清晰,无明显语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,另起一段;
第二步,从饮食习惯、运动、阅读有关健康的书籍、关心他人以及保持好心情这几方面阐述观点;
第三步,对阐述作出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①good eating habits好的饮食习惯
②make us stronger使我们更强壮
③keep a good mood保持好心情
④reading some books about health读一些有关健康的书
[高分句型]
Second, doing sports is a must, as activities like running, playing ball games can make us stronger. (as引导的原因状语从句)
5.假定你是李华,近日你校开展关于“身心同频,向阳而行”的征文活动。请你结合图表信息,以“To be a Healthy Student”为题,写一篇英语短文发表自己的看法。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
3.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
4.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
To be a Healthy Student
Health is important to everyone. But how to be a healthy student? Here are my suggestions.
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【答案】参考答案:
To be a Healthy Student
Health is very important to everyone. But how to be a healthy student? Here are my suggestions.
To be a healthy student, we should not only have a sound body but also have a sound mind. First, playing sports is good for our health. We can run, swim or play basketball. Meanwhile, having enough sleep makes you full of energy. Besides, it’s important to keep a balanced diet. We must have vegetables and fruit every day. Finally, staying positive brings us benefits. Always smile at ourselves and be in a good mood.
All in all, follow the advice and you’ll be a healthy student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏要点;注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述自己的观点——健康包括身体健康和心理健康两方面;
第二步,详细介绍如何成为一名健康的学生;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only... but also...不但……而且……
②be in a good mood保持好心情
③all in all总之
[高分句型]
①To be a healthy student, we should not only have a sound body but also have a sound mind.(动词不定式表目的)
②First, playing sports is good for our health.(动名词短语作主语)
6.某英语报纸进行了一次有关中学生健康情况的调查,发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧,主要原因有:不健康的饮食习惯;体育锻炼不足;心理压力大;不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此,该报纸发起了题为“How to Keep Healthy”的征文活动,倡导中学生拥有健康的生活方式。请你写一篇70字左右的文章来参加这次活动,谈谈如何保持身体健康。
How to Keep Healthy
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【答案】One possible version:
How to Keep Healthy
Everyone knows that health is very important. But do you know how to keep healthy? First, we should have a healthy eating habit. It means eating more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Second, it’s good for us to take more exercise. Third, we should learn to make ourselves relaxed. We should have a good rest and often talk with our family and friends. It’s easy to keep healthy if you follow the advice.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步:引出健康重要性;
第二步:从饮食、锻炼、压力管理和沟通等方面介绍应如何保持健康;
第三步:总结保持健康的好处,呼吁大家行动起来。
【亮点词汇】
①mean doing意思是做某事,意味着做某事
②take exercise锻炼
③make sb.+adj.使某人处于某种状态或感受
④keep healthy保持健康
【高分句型】
①Everyone knows that health is very important. (含有that的宾语从句)
②Second, it’s good for us to take more exercise. (it作形式主语;不定式作真正的主语)
③It’s easy to keep healthy if you follow the advice. (it作形式主语;if引导条件状语从句)
7.喜欢吃零食是导致孩子们肥胖的主要原因之一。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文,简要谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.吃零食是一种坏习惯;
2.科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖,人们摄取过多脂肪和糖,容易发胖。
要求:
1.文中须包含所有的要点提示,可适当使用多种句式,补充细节;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.80-100词。
参考词汇:take in摄取;overweight肥胖的;超重的
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【答案】例文
Many children like eating snacks today. I think it is a bad habit.
Snacks are delicious, but they are bad for our health if we eat lots of them. Do you know why? Scientists say some snacks have too much fat and sugar. If we take in too much of them, we will easily become fat. Becoming overweight can cause a lot of health problems and even illnesses.
So in order to keep healthy, we should not eat too many snacks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,为材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:需围绕“零食导致儿童肥胖”展开论述,包含零食的危害、科学依据(脂肪与糖过量)及健康建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步:指出许多儿童爱吃零食,并表明观点
第二步:说明零食虽美味但有害,引用科学依据,并延伸肥胖带来的健康问题;
第三步:总结应避免过量食用零食以保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①a bad habit坏习惯
②health problems健康问题
③keep healthy保持健康
④cause illnesses导致疾病
⑤too much fat过多脂肪
[高分句型]
①Snacks are delicious, but they are bad for our health if we eat lots of them. (but连接的并列句与if条件状语从句)
②If we take in too much of them, we will easily become fat. (if引导的条件状语从句)
③Becoming overweight can cause a lot of health problems and even illnesses. (动名词短语作主语)
8.在生活中,如果没有健康的身体,财富、地位……一切也都将失去意义。请以Ways to Keep Healthy为题,参照导图信息,写一篇短文。
内容包括:①简单介绍健康身体的重要性;
②就如何保持身体健康,提出你的建议。
注意:①文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
②写作词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Ways to Keep Healthy
As we all know, health is
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【答案】例文:
Ways to Keep Healthy
As we all know, health is the most precious treasure in life. In life, without a healthy body, wealth and status lose their meaning. So, how can we keep healthy?
Firstly, getting enough sleep is essential. It helps us recover and prepares us for the next day. Secondly, regular exercise is important. It strengthens our body and improves our mood. Thirdly, eating healthy food is a must. We should have more vegetables and fruits, and less junk food. Lastly, keeping a positive attitude also contributes to our health.
In short, by following these ways, we can enjoy a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,主题是如何保持健康;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“保持健康的方法”的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“健康是生活中最宝贵的财富”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。从“保证充足的睡眠、进行锻炼、食用健康食品、保持积极的态度”几个方面重点介绍保持健康的方法;
第三步:书写结语。重申保持健康的关键在于行动,自然收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①essential adj. 必要的
②regular adj. 有规律的
③contribute to 有助于
[高分句型]
①It helps us recover and prepares us for the next day.(并列结构)
②Lastly, keeping a positive attitude also contributes to our health.(动名词作主语)
◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.陶行知曾说:“思想决定行动,行动养成习惯,习惯形成品质,品质决定命运。”本周你们班级将组织“良好习惯,伴其一生”主题班会。假如你是Billy,Danny是你的好朋友,他是个品学兼优的学生,为了号召同学们向他学习,请你根据下列表格提升介绍他的好习惯,并谈谈自己的看法。
休闲活动
每周锻炼三到四次;每天打扫自己的房间;周末经常帮助妈妈做家务……
学习习惯
每天阅读半小时;总是按时完成作业;从不熬夜(stay up late)……
饮食健康
经常吃水果和蔬菜;每天早上喝牛奶;几乎从不吃垃圾食品……
我的看法
好习惯很重要……
要求:1.表格的内容要全部包括,可适当发挥;
2.语句通畅,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.总词数:80-100词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. On the weekend, he often helps his mother with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting enough sleep is necessary for students. What’s more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every morning. He hardly ever eats junk food. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it’s important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从休闲活动、学习习惯以及饮食健康等方面介绍Danny 的好习惯,并谈谈自己的看法。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①in good health身体健康
②help sb with sth帮某人做某事
③get enough sleep得到充足的睡眠
④stays up熬夜
[高分句型]
①His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it’s important for us to develop good habits. (宾语从句)
10.青年是社会的中坚力量,肩负着祖国的未来,然而在当今快节奏的生活中,出现了一些因忙碌而缺乏锻炼、爱吃快餐和垃圾食品、习惯熬夜的“脆皮青年”。请你根据下面的表格内容以“Enjoy Healthy Living”为题,给他们提一些建议,让他们拥有更健康的生活。
Enjoy Healthy Living
Sports habits
Eating habits
Sleeping habits
……
run, play ping-pong...
fast food, fruit and vegetables...
stay up, get up early...
……
写作要求:1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3) 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Enjoy Healthy Living
Youth (青年) is the future of our country. But today some of them have unhealthy living habits. To make them healthier, here are some suggestions.
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Healthy Living
Youth (青年) is the future of our country. But today some of them have unhealthy living habits. To make them healthier, here are some suggestions.
First, they should have good sports habits. Running for thirty minutes every day is good for their hearts and lungs. Playing ping-pong is also a good way to keep fit. What’s more, it’s important for them to have healthy eating habits. Don’t eat too much junk food and fast food. They had better eat more fruit and vegetables every day. Third, it’s necessary that they should have regular sleeping habits. Staying up late is bad for their health, so they must go to bed and get up early. Finally, happiness is important for their health, so try to keep happy all the time. Be happy to be healthy.
If they follow the advice, they will live a healthier and happier life and have a bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:根据表格提示完成写作内容,不要遗漏要点,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表明给青年提供如何健康生活的建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“运动习惯、饮食习惯、睡觉习惯、感受”几个方面提出建议;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望青年身体好,拥有美好的未来。
[亮点词汇]
① be good for 对……有好处
② had better 最好
③ regular 规律的
[高分句型]
① Running for thirty minutes every day is good for their hearts and lungs.(动名词作主语)
② Third, it’s necessary that they should have regular sleeping habits. (it作形式主语的句型)
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