2026年中考英语作文热点素材 part 8 自然与环境

该初中英语中考复习知识清单聚焦“自然与环境”主题作文备考，涵盖范文解析、核心词汇、实用句型及篇章结构指导等内容，构建了从“素材积累”到“句式运用”再到“篇章组织”的系统性复习框架。 清单采用“主题分类+功能模块”方式整合素材，如将“环保行动”“环境描写”分设好句好段，标注“pollution”“solve”等高频词汇及“First of all...What's more...”等衔接句式，培养学生的语言能力和思维品质。特别设计“范文点评”和“句式仿写提示”，如解析“步行上学”范文的逻辑层次，助力学生掌握写作方法，提升自主复习效率，为教师提供精准教学支持。

初中英语作文热点素材 part 8 自然与环境 A New Town Taihu New Town is in the south of Wuxi. It has changed a lot in the past five years. There used to be many big factories here. The government has moved them all away, so the air is fresh and there is no pollution. There are still a few problems. One of them is there are too few bus lines. But I believe all these problems will be solved soon. The new town will become a wonderful place to live. 炫词 used to过去常常 government政府 pollution 污染 solve解决 酷句 The government has moved them all away, so the air is fresh and there is no pollution. 政府已迁走所有的工厂，所以空气是清新的，并且没有污染。 （连词so和and连接几个简单句，使前后句连贯。） 译文 一座新城 太湖新城在无锡南部，它近五年来变化巨大。过去这里曾经有很多大型工厂，政府已把它们都迁走，所以空气很清新，并且没有污染。问题尚存一些，其中之一是公交线路太少。但是我相信所有的这些问题会很快被解决。这座新城会变成一个宜居之地。 Going to School on Foot I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health. Next, it's fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What's more, if we walk, our parents won't have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won't be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot. 炫词 first of all首先 what's more而且 酷句 What's more，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school. 还有，如果我们步行，我们的父母就不必开车送我们去学校。 （what's more是插入语。if we walk是条件状语从句。） 译文 步行去上学 我认为步行去上学对我们来说是有益的。首先，步行去上学是一种极好的锻炼方式，有利于健康。其次，每天和朋友一起走是有趣的。我们能谈论一些有趣的事情并且更加了解彼此。还有，如果我们步行，我们的父母就不必开车送我们去学校。城市里的小汽车就会更少。多步行、少开车使我们的城市更干净。街道也不会像现在这样拥挤。我希望越来越多的学生将步行去上学。 Our Earth—Our Future—Just Save It！ 拯救地球就是拯救未来！ 好句 ∗开头句∗ 1.Welcome to Guilin. Guilin is in the north of Guangxi. 欢迎来桂林旅游。桂林位于广西北部。 2.In the golden autumn warm sunshine，my family went to the Qingcheng Park，the biggest park in Hohhot. 在金秋煦暖阳光的照耀下，我们全家去了呼和浩特市最大的公园青城公园。 3.My hometown is a very small but beautiful mountain village in Jiangxi Provence. 我的家乡是江西省的一个很小但很美丽的山村。 4.Early in the morning，when getting out of the house I saw a big fog. 一大早，当我走出房门时，我发现起大雾了。 5.Today，I read a piece of news in“China Daily”. 今天我读了«中国日报»上的一条消息。 ∗中间句∗ 1.The waste gases produced by cars and trucks have been linked to cancer and other serious illnesses. 小汽车、卡车排出的废气与癌症及其他严重疾病有关。 2.Thanks to efforts from the automotive industry，today's cars are much cleaner than in the past. 多亏了汽车厂的努力，现在的小汽车比以前环保多了。 3.Waste water is being poured continuously into the rivers. 污水正不断地被排入河里。 4.Furthermore，wherever we go today，we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. 另外，不论我们走到哪里，都会见到随意丢弃的垃圾。 5.The heavy fog covered the ground here and there. 大地被大雾所笼罩。 6.The heavy fog has to get out like tides when the sun's shining. 当太阳照耀时，大雾就不得不像潮水一样退去。 7.Fortunately，the environment has been paid attention to by mankind，and some organizations have been set up to protect environment. 幸好，人类已开始重视环境问题，一些环保组织已建立了起来。 ∗结尾句∗ 1.To cherish the environment is to love ourselves. 爱护环境就是爱护我们自己。 2.Please keep in mind that we have only one earth. 请记住我们只有一个地球。 3.I hope that the environment will be improved in the near future. Let the earth become more beautiful！ 我希望地球的环境在不久的将来能得到改善。让地球变得更加美丽吧！ 4.Thus a great deal of energy is saved and serious air pollution is reduced. 因此，节约了大量的能源，并且减轻了严重的空气污染。 5.On the whole，the elimination of air pollution needs the co-efforts from the government and the public with the help of science and technology. 总之，空气污染的消除依靠科技以及政府和公众的共同努力。 6.If people don't stop polluting the seas and rivers，there will be no fish left. 如果人类不停止污染海洋、河流，将不会再有鱼类存在。 好段 How to protect our environment? Well, clean heavy smoke, prevent waste water from pouring into the rivers, plant more trees and make people realize the importance of protecting the environment. In this way, we can keep our environment clean and beautiful. 点评 作者运用很多祈使句，说明保护环境的具体做法，简洁明了。 译文 如何保护我们的环境？ 清洁浓烟，阻止废水流入河流，种植更多的树，让人们意识到保护环境的重要性。这样我们才能保持我们的环境清洁美丽。 The air in our city is not fresh at all. Too many people are in the street and too many cars are running on the roads. Besides, many factories are giving off smoke in black or grey gases. Everyone knows fresh air is very important to our health. No creature can live without it. Pollution air makes us low-spirited, unhappy and even sick. I hope the air around us is as fresh as that in country areas. 点评 作者运用“Too many people are in the street and too many cars are running on the roads. Besides，many factories are giving off smoke in black or grey gases. ”等现在进行时的句子，展现给读者冒着黑烟的耸立的烟囱、奔驰的汽车、污浊的空气画面，作者深感空气对人类生存的重要性。文章感情真挚，引人深思。 译文 我们城市的空气一点儿也不新鲜。街上人太多，许多汽车在街上跑。除此之外，许多工厂排出黑色和灰色的烟。 每个人都知道新鲜空气对我们的健康是很重要的。没有了新鲜空气就没有生物能生存。污染的空气使我们情绪低落、不愉快甚至患病。我希望我们周围的空气像乡村地区的空气一样新鲜。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Although the factory will bring much money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good. First, the drinking water will be badly polluted, yet your prevention work is far from enough. Second, the air over our city will be polluted. We will never be able to breathe fresh air. Last, if you build the factory, there will not be any room for us to play games and have sports after school. 点评 本段运用了first，second，last论述作者及他的同学们反对建工厂的缘由，论述思路清晰。 译文 虽然工厂可以给我市赚取很多钱，但我们认为它给我们带来的将是弊大于利。首先，饮用水将被严重污染，而你们的防污措施还远远不充分。第二，我市上空的空气将被污染。我们将不再呼吸新鲜空气。最后，如果建厂，放学后我们将没有地方玩耍和进行体育锻炼。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Now in some places of our country, a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland. The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years. 点评 本段介绍我国森林正在消失的现状。文中有because引导的原因状语从句，还有smaller and smaller这样的比较结构，表达方式丰富。 译文 在我国的一些地区，由于需要木材和更多的耕地，许多人一直在砍伐森林中的树木，森林面积正变得越来越小。一些科学家预言二三十年后将不会再有大片的森林。 ∗∗∗∗∗ During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse. There are fewer tigers left in the world now. Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces. 点评 本段介绍了老虎目前的生存环境。文中living conditions，spaces等词汇的运用，显示出作者词汇量之丰富。 译文 在过去的几年中，许多森林被砍伐，这使老虎的生存环境越来越糟。现在世界上老虎的数量非常少。老虎是世界性的动物，它们应该有自己的生存空间。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Everyone agrees that water pollution is a serious problem today. Rivers, lakes and even oceans all over the world are becoming polluted by garbage and dangerous chemicals. Oil and other chemicals can kill fish and make water unsafe for drinking. Polluted water is a hazard to everyone. 点评 本段介绍了水污染的情况及其危害，运用了宾语从句以及make water unsafe的结构，句式多变，语言流畅。 译文 大家一致认为水污染已是当今的一个严重问题。世界范围内的河流、湖泊甚至海洋都受到垃圾和危险的化学制剂的污染。石油和其他化学品可以杀死鱼，使水变得不能饮用。被污染的水对每个人都是有害的。 ∗∗∗∗∗ The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. 点评 本段是对前文的总结，并提出了对未来的希望。文中fortunately运用得好，起到承上启下的作用。 译文 地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它。幸运的是，越来越多的人们已经意识到这些问题。政府已经采取了很多措施来解决这些问题，防止污染法已经被通过。 ∗∗∗∗∗ But every coin has two sides. The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems. For example, the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health, too many private cars will lead to traffic jams and a great deal of energy will be wasted and so on. 点评 本段列举了私家车的快速发展会导致一系列问题，运用given off by cars作air的定语结构，句式有变化。 译文 当然，任何事物都有其两面性。快速发展的私家车会导致一系列问题。例如，汽车排出的废气对人体健康有很大的损害，太多的私家车会导致交通阻塞，大量能源被浪费等。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence. 点评 本段用事例来说明污染的严重性，运用了多种时态的被动语态结构，句子连贯。 译文 全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如，汽车使得空气污浊影响人们的健康，工厂排放有毒气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排入河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。事实上，污染正威胁着我们的生存。 ∗∗∗∗∗ The beach is rather rough with many big and small stones on the surface. The sand is also very big in form and brown in color. At the time of low tide, we can see the reefs appearing out of the water. We may see some boys of the nearby villages. With bamboo baskets on their backs or under their arms, they are trying to pick up the small crabs among the rocks. 点评 本段描写“近景”。着重描写了海滩、沙子、海礁，描写海边的一些小男孩，运用了较复杂的with结构。 译文 海滩不平坦，布满了大大小小的石头。沙子很粗，呈褐色。退潮时，可以看见海礁浮出水面。此外，还会看见附近村庄的一些男孩，他们背着或者挎着竹篓正试着抓岩石间的小螃蟹。 ∗∗∗∗∗ In spring, the trees along the river become green. The flowers on the river bank come out. Some are red, some are yellow and some are white. The river water is very clean and clear. In summer, the river brings us much happiness. We all like fishing, boating and swimming in it. In autumn, pieces of yellow leaves fall with the wind. Some of them float on the water just like some little boats. The river looks like a nice and quiet picture. Winter is coming, it is white everywhere. The river has iced up. We often skate on the ice happily. 点评 作者描述了许多家乡的小河四季各异的风景和它给“我们”带来的欢乐。抒发了对小河的热爱。文章层次分明。一是写景融入了人的活动，例如：钓鱼、划船、游泳，使文章更感人；二是结尾处的抒情，使文章寓情于景，情景交融。 译文 春天，沿河的树都变绿了，河岸的花儿都开放了，有红的、黄的，还有白的，河水非常干净清澈。 夏天，小河给我们带来了无穷欢乐，我们都喜欢在河里钓鱼、划船、游泳。 秋天，黄叶随风飘落，一些叶子像一艘艘小船漂浮在水面上，小河就像一幅美丽静谧的画。 冬天来了，遍地都是白色。小河结冰了，我们经常在那里快乐地滑冰。 ∗∗∗∗∗ In spring, everything starts to grow. After it rains, the grass turns green and the flowers begin to come out. You'll find the mountains are very colorful. In May, it is a good season for the people to eat some delicious fruits. You can see some red and white fruits here and there on the mountains. They look like olive. It tastes sour and sweet. Besides, there are many wild pears and lots of other nice fruits, which I can't name. When autumn comes, the pine needles will fall down to the ground. The needles become thicker and thicker. When we walk on it, it's very comfortable. 点评 本段按春、夏、秋、冬的顺序介绍了家乡山的美景。文中运用了colorful，red and white fruits等色彩词汇和比喻的手法使文章的描写更加生动、绚丽多彩。 译文 春天，万物开始生长。下过雨后，小草变绿、鲜花含苞待放。你会发现山也变得多姿多彩了。 五月是人们吃美味水果的好时节。山上到处都是红色和白色的野果，它们看起来像橄榄，尝起来又酸又甜。除此之外，山上还有很多野梨和其他叫不上名字的好水果。 当秋天来临时，松针会掉到地上，而且越来越厚，当我们走上去时，会感到很舒服。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $