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Unit 6 Hitting the road Developing ideas 教学反思
本次教学围绕徐霞客相关阅读与写作展开,聚焦“信息梳理”与“语言输出”双目标,结合学生课堂表现和学习效果,反思如下:
一、教学亮点
情境与任务驱动有效:以“向Lily推荐旅行家”为主线,贯穿Pre-reading到Post-reading的各项活动,学生目标明确,参与积极性较高,尤其在口语介绍环节能主动运用所学词汇和时间轴信息。
阅读策略渗透到位:通过“主旨匹配”“时间轴梳理”“细节设问”等环节,逐步引导学生掌握抓取关键信息、梳理文章结构的方法,多数学生能独立完成段落匹配和时间轴填写,达成知识与能力目标。
情感目标自然融入:结合黄山探峰事例分析徐霞客的执着品质,联系《徐霞客游记》的价值感知其分享精神,学生能直观理解“Exploring the unexplored”的内涵,增强对传统文化的认同。
二、存在问题
1. 难点突破不够深入:对于“开篇以晚年经历切入的写作技巧”,仅通过教师提问和简单解释完成,缺乏学生自主讨论和案例对比,部分学生未能真正理解该写作手法的优势。
2. 个体差异关注不足:小组合作中,部分基础薄弱学生参与度低,依赖同伴输出;口语评价环节未能覆盖所有学生,难以精准掌握每个学生的语言运用情况。
3. 写作铺垫略显仓促:由于前半程阅读环节耗时略长,写作铺垫仅停留于问题链呈现,未提供句式模板或段落框架,给基础薄弱学生的书面输出带来困难。
三、改进方向
1. 强化难点分层引导:设计“对比阅读”任务,呈现“开篇介绍生平”与“开篇描述晚年”两种文本片段,让学生通过对比自主发现后者的吸引读者的效果,加深对写作技巧的理解。
2. 优化小组与评价设计:采用“异质分组”,明确小组内分工(记录员、发言人、补充员),确保每位学生都有参与机会;口语评价采用“小组互评+教师抽样点评”模式,结合评价量表让学生清晰了解自身不足。
3. 完善写作支架搭建:增加“句式模板”(如Xu Xiake dreamed of.../He set out.../Thanks to his..., we can...)和“段落框架”示例,降低写作难度;同时预留5分钟课堂草稿时间,教师针对性指导基础薄弱学生。
4. 拓展课堂延伸:课后可布置“查阅徐霞客其他旅行故事”的拓展任务,为后续写作积累更多素材,也进一步深化对旅行家精神的理解。
$Unit 6 Hitting the road
Developing ideas: Reading for writing 教学设计
一、教学目标:
1.
知识目标:掌握traveller、explore、geographical discoveries等核心词汇;理解课文关于徐霞客生平、梦想、成就的关键信息。
2.
能力目标:能梳理文章时间线与核心事件,完成细节理解题;能模仿文本结构,向他人介绍徐霞客。
3.
情感目标:感受徐霞客勇敢、执着、乐于探索的精神,培养对祖国河山的热爱。
二、教学重难点
1. 重点:梳理徐霞客的生平经历、梦想与成就;掌握阅读中抓取关键信息和时间节点的方法。
难点:理解文本开篇以徐霞客晚年经历切入的写作技巧;运用所学信息完成连贯的介绍或书信写作。
三、教学过程
(一)Pre-reading:
1.
词汇预热:呈现walk through、climb、explore等动词短语和traveller、geographical discoveries等核心词汇,结合图片引导学生跟读理解。
2.
情境导入:提问“Have you heard of any great Chinese travellers?” 引出徐霞客,展示课题“Exploring the unexplored”,引导学生猜测含义(达人所未达,探人所未知)。
3.
填空练习:完成关于徐霞客的基础信息填空,初步感知核心内容。
(二)While-reading
1.
主旨匹配:让学生快速阅读课文各部分,将“A. 地理发现”“B. 晚年经历”“C. 人生梦想”“D. 成就与影响”与对应段落匹配,把握文章结构。
2.
细节研读:
1)分段阅读,完成针对性问题:①徐霞客晚年的状况与心态;②早年梦想与旅行决心;③黄山探峰的具体事例与发现;④《徐霞客游记》的价值。
2)小组合作:根据“From an early age→At 22→In 1640”等时间节点,梳理对应事件,完成时间轴表格,强化信息梳理能力。
3.
难点解析:引导学生思考“作者为何从徐霞客晚年切入?”,明确其吸引读者、引发好奇的写作效果。
(三)Post-reading
1.
人物评价:结合课文细节,提炼徐霞客brave、persistent、curious、helpful and sharing等品质,强调“基于行为客观评价”的原则。
2.
口语输出:设定“向Lily推荐中国伟大旅行家”的情境,学生结合时间轴和人物品质,尝试口头介绍徐霞客,教师依据“内容、准确性、流利度”等维度简单点评。
3.
写作铺垫:回顾书信写作的基本格式,呈现作业中书信需涵盖的核心问题(Who was he? What was his dream? 等),引导学生梳理写作思路。
(四)Summary & Homework
1.
课堂总结:师生共同回顾徐霞客的生平、成就与精神,重申“Exploring the unexplored”的核心内涵。
2.
分层作业:
A层(基础):流利朗读课文,熟记核心词汇和关键句子。
B层(提升):根据问题链,给Lily写一封信,介绍徐霞客的事迹及旅行家精神,字数80-100词。
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Unit 6 Hitting the road
Developing ideas: Reading for writing
By:Tan Xiao
2026.06.27
Exploring the unexplored
traveller
Pre-reading
walk through
climb
explore
seas and
mountains
geographical discoveries
Talk about Xu Xiake’s experiences.
Xu Xiake was a famous _______from the Ming Dynasty in China. He loved to________ the nature and spent over 30 years _______________ rivers and forests. He _______ high mountains and crossed wild seas. He made many______________________.
traveller
explore
walking through
climbed
geographical discoveries
2
Discovering what has not been discovered before.
He kept diaries during his travelling.
He wrote his travel experiences in his diary.
He walked through many places.
He loved travelling to explore something.
Pre-reading
达人所未达,探人所未知
What can we learn from the title and the pictures?
A. Xu’s geographical discoveries
B. Xu’s last year
C. Xu’s dream
D. Xu’s achievement and influence
B
C
A
D
Match the main ideas with each part.
Tip: Pay attention to
the first sentences and key words.
While-reading
4
Let’s recommend a great Chinese traveller to Lily.
Lead-in
1). What was Xu’s last year like?
In 1640, Xu
was seriously ____.
had to end his _______.
had no _______.
ill
last trip
regrets
2). Why does the writer start from Xu Xiake’s last year?
To attract readers and to raise their curiosity.
Xu’s last year
While-reading (Detail-reading)
1. Read part1 and answer.
1). What was Xu’s dream from an early age?
A. To become a famous writer.
B. To be a great Geographer.
C. To visit China’s seas and mountains.
2). Although it was difficult to travel far at that time, what did Xu do?
A. He gave up his dream.
B. He travelled for about 30 years.
C. He only travelled nearby.
While-reading
2. Read part2 and answer.
Xu’s dream
Learning to learn
采用时间轴的方式有利于
我们梳理关键时间节点和
相应的重要事件、把握阅读材料的要旨。
From an early age
At 22
In the ......
In 1640
dreamed of ......
set out......
......
......
time
event
While-reading
3). Group work.
1). What did Xu do when he visited Mount Huangshan?
A. He just enjoyed the scenery.
B. He compared the heights of two peaks.
C. He wrote a poem about the mountain.
2). What was the result of Xu’s exploration?
A. Lianhua Peak was higher.
B. Tiandu Peak was higher.
C. They were of the same height.
While-reading
3. Read part3 and answer.
Xu’s geographical discoveries
3). Why does the writer mention the two peaks?
To prove that Xu is very persistent(执着的) and always insists in finding out the truth by himself.
莲花峰是黄山风景区内第一高峰,为36大峰之首,海拔1864.8米。
天都峰是黄山风景区内第三高峰,为36大峰之一,海拔1810米。
Xu’s achievement and influence
1). What can we learn from Xu’s Travel Notes?
2). What is the best description of Xu’s life?
We can learn about China almost 400 years ago.
“Exploring the unexplored”.
3. Read part4 and answer.
While-reading
A _____ traveller
Xu Xiake
Name
He made many ____________________ .
Thanks to his travel notes, we can learn about China ____________ .
geographical discoveries
400 years ago.
Achievements
He dreamed of visiting China’s ________________ from an early age.
He ______ on his life’s journey at 22 and travelled for _____________.
seas and montains
set out
about 30 years
He is the ________ traveller in Chinese History. He is _______________________ .
Experiences
Comments
greatest
brave, curious and sharing
I want to be a person ___ him I can learn from him that we should ___________________
and ____________ .
Opinions
like
have our own dreams
never give up
great
Post-reading
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Xu spent his whole life on the road.
To find out the truth, Xu climbed both peaks.
At the time, it was very difficult to travel far. This didn't stop him, however.
Xu recorded his travel experiences in his diary.
Persistent 执着的
Brave 勇敢的
Helpful and Sharing 乐于分享的
Curious 充满好奇的
Post-reading
Attention!
1. To make comments on a person, it’s important to be respectful and objective.
2. Judge a person from what he/she did.
It’s time to introduce Xu Xiake to Lily.
Choice A
Choice B
Evaluation
items Content
(内容) Accuracy
(准确性) Fluency
(流利度) Grammar
(语法) Retell without
your books
Points 0-2 0-2 0-2 0-2 1
Post-reading
Homework
A:流利朗读课文
B:借助问题链,向Lily写一封letter 介绍徐霞客的事迹以及旅行家精神。
Xu Xiake
Who was he?
What was his dream?
What did achievements did he get?
What are people’s comments?
What’s your opinion?
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