03.Unit 1 Career talks（写作讲练）-2025-2026学年下学期八年级英语单元知识基础巩固（外研版2024）

2025-2026学年下学期八年级英语单元知识基础巩固(外研版2024) Unit 1 Career talks写作讲练 目录 第一部分 写作主题阐释锁定基础 高效学习 第二部分 必备词句积累用法精析 变式巩固 第三部分 写作强化训练深度优化 扫清盲区 ◇Part 01 写作主题阐释 一、主题阐述 在科技快速发展的时代，许多传统职业因自动化与技术革新逐渐被替代，而新兴领域又催生了诸多全新职业。本单元写作话题要求同学们对比描述一种 “即将消失的职业” 和一种 “未来的职业”，通过分析其兴衰原因、工作特征及社会影响，展现对职业变迁的理解与思考。 主题内涵：核心是探讨职业与时代发展的关系 ——“即将消失的职业” 多因技术替代（如自动化设备取代人工）、需求减少等因素走向衰退；“未来的职业” 则依托新技术（如人工智能、新能源）、新需求（如绿色发展、智慧服务）而产生，两者共同反映社会进步的轨迹。 审题要点：需明确两大描述对象，不可遗漏其一；要结合具体原因分析（如 “为何消失”“为何兴起”），避免空泛描述；注意时态运用（描述趋势用一般将来时，解释现状用一般现在时）；需体现对比逻辑，可从工作内容、技能要求等维度展开。 二、写作框架 整体结构框架 引言：引出职业变迁的背景，点明写作对象 主体：分别描述 “即将消失的职业” 与 “未来的职业”（含名称、原因、特征） 结尾：总结职业变迁的启示，表达个人看法 1.引言部分：用场景或趋势引入话题，明确核心内容。 例：With the development of science and technology, some traditional jobs are disappearing, while new jobs are emerging. Today, I’d like to talk about a job soon to be history and a job of the future. 2.主体部分 主体部分 1（即将消失的职业）：先点明职业名称，再解释消失的原因，最后补充其曾经的价值。 例：One job that will soon be history is the supermarket cashier. As self-checkout machines are widely used in stores, fewer cashiers are needed. In the past, cashiers helped customers pay for goods and answered their questions warmly. 主体部分 2（未来的职业）：先介绍职业名称，再说明兴起的原因，最后描述其技能要求。 例：A typical job of the future is the drone pilot. With the development of logistics and agriculture, drones are used to deliver packages and spray crops. Drone pilots need to master how to control drones and check their equipment. 3.结尾部分：总结趋势，提炼观点或表达感悟。 例：Jobs change with time. No matter what job we do in the future, learning new skills is always important. ◇Part 02 必备词句积累 一、主题词汇 职业名称类：cashier（收银员）、telephone operator（电话接线员）、data entry clerk（数据录入员）、toll collector（收费员）、AI trainer（人工智能训练师）、drone pilot（无人机飞手）、renewable energy technician（新能源技术员）、smart home designer（智能家居设计师）、robot maintenance worker（机器人维修员）、space tourism guide（太空导游）。 例：Toll collectors on highways are gradually losing their jobs because of ETC systems.（高速公路收费员因 ETC 系统逐渐失业。） 原因描述类：automate（使自动化）、replace（取代）、outdated（过时的）、decline（衰退）、emerge（兴起）、demand（需求）、advance（进步）、innovation（创新）、technology（技术）、digital（数字的）。 例：Data entry clerks are likely to be replaced by computer programs.（数据录入员可能被计算机程序取代。） 特征描述类：manual（手工的）、repetitive（重复的）、skilled（有技能的）、high-tech（高科技的）、flexible（灵活的）、necessary（必要的）、valuable（有价值的）、disappearing（消失中的）、future-oriented（面向未来的）、professional（专业的）。 例：Drone pilots need to have skilled operating abilities and professional knowledge.（无人机飞手需要具备熟练的操作能力和专业知识。） 其他类：machine（机器）、computer（计算机）、industry（行业）、society（社会）、skill（技能）、education（教育）、develop（发展）、need（需要）、provide（提供）、service（服务）、logistics（物流）、agriculture（农业）、environment（环境）、green（绿色的）、intelligent（智能的）、automation（自动化）、artificial intelligence（人工智能）、career（职业）、work（工作）。 例：Artificial intelligence has brought great changes to many careers.（人工智能给许多职业带来了巨大变化。） 二、主题句式 1.引入话题 With the development of..., some jobs are...while others are... 例：With the development of automation, some jobs are disappearing while others are being created.（随着自动化的发展，一些工作正在消失，而另一些工作正在被创造。） In modern society, great changes have taken place in the world of work. 例：In modern society, great changes have taken place in the world of work, especially with new technologies.（在现代社会，职场发生了巨大变化，尤其是在新技术的推动下。） It is not surprising that some traditional jobs are becoming a thing of the past. 例：It is not surprising that some traditional jobs are becoming a thing of the past because of new machines.（由于新机器的出现，一些传统工作成为历史并不奇怪。） As technology advances, more new jobs will appear in the future. 例：As technology advances, more new jobs will appear in the future, such as AI trainers.（随着技术进步，未来将出现更多新职业，如人工智能训练师。） 2.原因分析 ...is likely to disappear because of... 例：Telephone operators are likely to disappear because of intelligent voice systems.（电话接线员可能因智能语音系统而消失。） The main reason for the decline of...is... 例：The main reason for the decline of data entry clerks is the development of computer software.（数据录入员减少的主要原因是计算机软件的发展。） ...has emerged due to the demand for... 例：Renewable energy technicians have emerged due to the demand for green development.（因绿色发展的需求，新能源技术员应运而生。） With the popularity of..., ...is no longer necessary. 例：With the popularity of online banking, many bank tellers are no longer necessary.（随着网上银行的普及，许多银行柜员不再必要。） ...can be easily done by machines, so...are needed less. 例：Repetitive work can be easily done by machines, so manual workers are needed less.（重复的工作能被机器轻松完成，因此对体力劳动者的需求减少。） The rise of...has led to the disappearance of... 例：The rise of self-checkout systems has led to the disappearance of some supermarket cashiers.（自助结账系统的兴起导致部分超市收银员消失。） Because people need..., ...will become more popular. 例：Because people need intelligent home services, smart home designers will become more popular.（因为人们需要智能家居服务，智能家居设计师将更受欢迎。） 3.对比描述 On one hand, ...is disappearing; on the other hand, ...is emerging. 例：On one hand, toll collectors are disappearing; on the other hand, drone pilots are emerging.（一方面，收费员正在消失；另一方面，无人机飞手正在兴起。） Unlike..., which is..., ...is... 例：Unlike traditional cashiers, who do repetitive work, AI trainers are engaged in creative work.（不同于做重复工作的传统收银员，人工智能训练师从事创造性工作。） ...requires manual skills, while...needs high-tech knowledge. 例：A traditional tailor requires manual skills, while a 3D clothing designer needs high-tech knowledge.（传统裁缝需要手工技能，而 3D 服装设计师需要高科技知识。） By contrast, ...will be more important in the future than before. 例：By contrast, renewable energy technicians will be more important in the future than before.（相比之下，新能源技术员在未来将比以前更重要。） While...is becoming outdated, ...is developing rapidly. 例：While traditional printing jobs are becoming outdated, digital media jobs are developing rapidly.（当传统印刷工作逐渐过时，数字媒体工作正在快速发展。） 4.预测展望 It is predicted that...will no longer exist in 10 years. 例：It is predicted that traditional postal workers will no longer exist in 10 years.（据预测，传统邮递员将在 10 年内不复存在。） In the near future, ...will become one of the most popular jobs. 例：In the near future, robot maintenance workers will become one of the most popular jobs.（在不久的将来，机器人维修员将成为最受欢迎的职业之一。） ...is expected to grow quickly as...develops. 例：Space tourism guides are expected to grow quickly as space technology develops.（随着太空技术的发展，太空导游职业预计将快速发展。） We can see that...will replace...in many fields. 例：We can see that intelligent machines will replace human workers in many fields.（我们可以看到，智能机器将在许多领域取代人类工人。） To work in the future, we need to learn skills related to... 例：To work in the future, we need to learn skills related to artificial intelligence and big data.（为了在未来工作，我们需要学习与人工智能和大数据相关的技能。） ...will be in great demand because of... 例：Drone pilots will be in great demand because of the development of logistics and agriculture.（因物流和农业的发展，无人机飞手将需求旺盛。） It is certain that...will change the way we work. 例：It is certain that new technologies will change the way we work and create more future jobs.（新技术肯定会改变我们的工作方式，并创造更多未来职业。） 巩｜固｜练｜习 根据提示翻译句子。 1.由于自助收银机的普及，超市收银员可能会消失。（because of） 2.据预测，未来十年人工智能训练师将需求旺盛。（It is predicted that...） 3.一方面，电话接线员正在消失；另一方面，智能家居设计师正在兴起。（On one hand...On the other hand...） 4.新能源技术员的兴起是因为人们对绿色发展的需求。（due to） 5.为了在未来工作，我们需要学习与机器人相关的技能。（related to） 三、范文例析 With the development of technology, some jobs are disappearing while new ones are coming. A job soon to be history is the supermarket cashier. Self-checkout machines have replaced many cashiers, as they work faster and never get tired. A job of the future is the drone pilot. Drones are used in agriculture and logistics now. Drone pilots need to master how to control drones and check equipment. They are in great demand. Jobs change with time. We should learn new skills to adapt to the future. 【范文分析】 结构完整：遵循 “引言 - 主体 - 结尾” 框架，引言点出职业变迁背景，主体分别介绍超市收银员（消失的职业）和无人机飞手（未来的职业），结尾总结启示，逻辑清晰。 词汇精准：运用 “replace”“master”“in great demand” 等主题核心词汇，“self-checkout machines”“drone” 等具体职业相关表达，贴合话题且符合八年级水平。 句式多样：使用 “With the development of...” 引入话题，“as” 引导原因状语从句解释收银员消失的原因，“need to” 描述未来职业技能要求，句式丰富且实用。 内容贴切：选取超市收银员、无人机飞手等生活化例子，原因分析具体（机器更快、农业物流需求），避免空泛，符合审题要点。 【优化策略】 逻辑衔接优化：使用对比类连接词增强文章层次，如用 “However”“By contrast” 衔接两类职业，用 “For example” 补充具体案例，避免句子堆砌。例如将 “Self-checkout machines have replaced many cashiers. They work faster.” 优化为 “Self-checkout machines have replaced many cashiers, for they work faster and never get tired.” 语言升级技巧：替换基础词汇提升表达质感，如用 “vanish” 替代 “disappear”，“be in great need” 替代 “be needed much”；将简单句合并为复合句，如把 “Drones are useful. Drone pilots are popular.” 改为 “Since drones are useful in many fields, drone pilots are becoming more popular.” 。 内容深化方法：描述职业时增加细节，如讲消失的职业可补充 “曾经帮助老人解决支付问题”，讲未来职业可添加 “需要通过专业培训考试”，让内容更真实具体。结合生活经验举例，如 “我家附近的超市只有 2 个收银员，却有 8 台自助机”，增强说服力。 错误规避策略：写作后自查时态一致性（描述未来用一般将来时，现状用一般现在时），避免中式英语，如不说 “Future jobs are very new”，而说 “Future jobs are newly emerging”；检查名词单复数，如 “AI trainer” 变为复数 “AI trainers” 时的拼写正确。 ◇Part 03 写作强化训练 提｜升｜练｜习 1．为了激发同学们对未来职业的思考与探索热情，你所在的学校特地举办以 “My Dream Job”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据下面表格中的提示，写一篇短文投稿。 What a guide for foreign (外国的) visitors Why Introduce China: places of interest folk art (民间艺术) How study English hard ... 参考词汇：beautiful, experience, paper-cutting (剪纸), long history, rich culture, achieve, excellent, believe, .... 要求：1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于60。 (标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) My Dream Job Everyone has a dream job and my dream is to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter来信询问你的好朋友及你们未来的职业计划。请你根据以下提示写一封回信。 内容包括： 1.介绍你的好朋友（外貌、性格、爱好，使用形容词或者副词的比较级，最高级）； 2.介绍你们的梦想工作/职业计划（谈论你们的梦想职业及为达成梦想职业而做的具体准备）； 3.情感表达：写出你对实现梦想职业的期待。 词数：80-100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Tell me about your best friend and your plans! Yours, Li Hua 3．假如你是Ella，在图书馆偶然看到右边这则广告，你非常心动，想要应聘。 请写一封email 阐述你的优势或应聘理由。 要求：30词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．青春路上，我们都对未来有着美好的憧憬。本月，学校英语报The Youth正在开展“说梦想，话未来”为主题的征文活动。假如你是Jane，请以“I Want to Be a/an ____________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你梦想中的职业，向学校英语报投稿。 要求如下： 1. 补全标题； 2. 参考表格中要点，不少于60词； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 I Want to Be a(n) ____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请以“Me in the future”为题写一篇短文。 要点： (1)What’s your dream job? (2)Why do you choose this job? (3)What will you do to make your dream come true? 注意： (1)短文须包括所有要点； (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3)词数70词左右。 Me in the Future ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是张华，你的学校正在开展以“我的未来我做主”为主题的职业规划活动，现在向全校同学征集职业规划的文章。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，写一篇英语短文向学校报刊主编Amanda投稿。 参考词汇：help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on… 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于60词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Dear Amanda, I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hua 7．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike想了解你的家庭成员的爱好和职业，并询问你未来的梦想职业。请你根据以下提示并结合自身情况，给他写一封回信，并说一说你为什么想从事这一职业。 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 8．假如你是李华，你准备参与暑期的“职业体验夏令营 (Career Experience Summer Camp)”，请你根据下面报名信息表中的内容，写一封申请信。 Career Experience Summer Camp1. Personal Information Name: ________ Age: ________ 2. Career Field Selection (职业领域选择) □Teacher  □Artist  □Doctor  □Other: ________ Reason: ________ 3. Required Questions Why do you think dreams are important for teenagers? __________________________________________________________________________________________ What’s your plan to realize your dream (at least 3 points)? __________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作要求：1. 文中须包含信息表中的全部内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir/ Madam, Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’m 15 years old. I really want to join the “Career Experience Summer Camp”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can go to this fun summer camp. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua ( 一 / 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年下学期八年级英语单元知识基础巩固(外研版2024) Unit 1 Career talks写作讲练 目录 第一部分 写作主题阐释锁定基础 高效学习 第二部分 必备词句积累用法精析 变式巩固 第三部分 写作强化训练深度优化 扫清盲区 ◇Part 01 写作主题阐释 一、主题阐述 在科技快速发展的时代，许多传统职业因自动化与技术革新逐渐被替代，而新兴领域又催生了诸多全新职业。本单元写作话题要求同学们对比描述一种 “即将消失的职业” 和一种 “未来的职业”，通过分析其兴衰原因、工作特征及社会影响，展现对职业变迁的理解与思考。 主题内涵：核心是探讨职业与时代发展的关系 ——“即将消失的职业” 多因技术替代（如自动化设备取代人工）、需求减少等因素走向衰退；“未来的职业” 则依托新技术（如人工智能、新能源）、新需求（如绿色发展、智慧服务）而产生，两者共同反映社会进步的轨迹。 审题要点：需明确两大描述对象，不可遗漏其一；要结合具体原因分析（如 “为何消失”“为何兴起”），避免空泛描述；注意时态运用（描述趋势用一般将来时，解释现状用一般现在时）；需体现对比逻辑，可从工作内容、技能要求等维度展开。 二、写作框架 整体结构框架 引言：引出职业变迁的背景，点明写作对象 主体：分别描述 “即将消失的职业” 与 “未来的职业”（含名称、原因、特征） 结尾：总结职业变迁的启示，表达个人看法 1.引言部分：用场景或趋势引入话题，明确核心内容。 例：With the development of science and technology, some traditional jobs are disappearing, while new jobs are emerging. Today, I’d like to talk about a job soon to be history and a job of the future. 2.主体部分 主体部分 1（即将消失的职业）：先点明职业名称，再解释消失的原因，最后补充其曾经的价值。 例：One job that will soon be history is the supermarket cashier. As self-checkout machines are widely used in stores, fewer cashiers are needed. In the past, cashiers helped customers pay for goods and answered their questions warmly. 主体部分 2（未来的职业）：先介绍职业名称，再说明兴起的原因，最后描述其技能要求。 例：A typical job of the future is the drone pilot. With the development of logistics and agriculture, drones are used to deliver packages and spray crops. Drone pilots need to master how to control drones and check their equipment. 3.结尾部分：总结趋势，提炼观点或表达感悟。 例：Jobs change with time. No matter what job we do in the future, learning new skills is always important. ◇Part 02 必备词句积累 一、主题词汇 职业名称类：cashier（收银员）、telephone operator（电话接线员）、data entry clerk（数据录入员）、toll collector（收费员）、AI trainer（人工智能训练师）、drone pilot（无人机飞手）、renewable energy technician（新能源技术员）、smart home designer（智能家居设计师）、robot maintenance worker（机器人维修员）、space tourism guide（太空导游）。 例：Toll collectors on highways are gradually losing their jobs because of ETC systems.（高速公路收费员因 ETC 系统逐渐失业。） 原因描述类：automate（使自动化）、replace（取代）、outdated（过时的）、decline（衰退）、emerge（兴起）、demand（需求）、advance（进步）、innovation（创新）、technology（技术）、digital（数字的）。 例：Data entry clerks are likely to be replaced by computer programs.（数据录入员可能被计算机程序取代。） 特征描述类：manual（手工的）、repetitive（重复的）、skilled（有技能的）、high-tech（高科技的）、flexible（灵活的）、necessary（必要的）、valuable（有价值的）、disappearing（消失中的）、future-oriented（面向未来的）、professional（专业的）。 例：Drone pilots need to have skilled operating abilities and professional knowledge.（无人机飞手需要具备熟练的操作能力和专业知识。） 其他类：machine（机器）、computer（计算机）、industry（行业）、society（社会）、skill（技能）、education（教育）、develop（发展）、need（需要）、provide（提供）、service（服务）、logistics（物流）、agriculture（农业）、environment（环境）、green（绿色的）、intelligent（智能的）、automation（自动化）、artificial intelligence（人工智能）、career（职业）、work（工作）。 例：Artificial intelligence has brought great changes to many careers.（人工智能给许多职业带来了巨大变化。） 二、主题句式 1.引入话题 With the development of..., some jobs are...while others are... 例：With the development of automation, some jobs are disappearing while others are being created.（随着自动化的发展，一些工作正在消失，而另一些工作正在被创造。） In modern society, great changes have taken place in the world of work. 例：In modern society, great changes have taken place in the world of work, especially with new technologies.（在现代社会，职场发生了巨大变化，尤其是在新技术的推动下。） It is not surprising that some traditional jobs are becoming a thing of the past. 例：It is not surprising that some traditional jobs are becoming a thing of the past because of new machines.（由于新机器的出现，一些传统工作成为历史并不奇怪。） As technology advances, more new jobs will appear in the future. 例：As technology advances, more new jobs will appear in the future, such as AI trainers.（随着技术进步，未来将出现更多新职业，如人工智能训练师。） 2.原因分析 ...is likely to disappear because of... 例：Telephone operators are likely to disappear because of intelligent voice systems.（电话接线员可能因智能语音系统而消失。） The main reason for the decline of...is... 例：The main reason for the decline of data entry clerks is the development of computer software.（数据录入员减少的主要原因是计算机软件的发展。） ...has emerged due to the demand for... 例：Renewable energy technicians have emerged due to the demand for green development.（因绿色发展的需求，新能源技术员应运而生。） With the popularity of..., ...is no longer necessary. 例：With the popularity of online banking, many bank tellers are no longer necessary.（随着网上银行的普及，许多银行柜员不再必要。） ...can be easily done by machines, so...are needed less. 例：Repetitive work can be easily done by machines, so manual workers are needed less.（重复的工作能被机器轻松完成，因此对体力劳动者的需求减少。） The rise of...has led to the disappearance of... 例：The rise of self-checkout systems has led to the disappearance of some supermarket cashiers.（自助结账系统的兴起导致部分超市收银员消失。） Because people need..., ...will become more popular. 例：Because people need intelligent home services, smart home designers will become more popular.（因为人们需要智能家居服务，智能家居设计师将更受欢迎。） 3.对比描述 On one hand, ...is disappearing; on the other hand, ...is emerging. 例：On one hand, toll collectors are disappearing; on the other hand, drone pilots are emerging.（一方面，收费员正在消失；另一方面，无人机飞手正在兴起。） Unlike..., which is..., ...is... 例：Unlike traditional cashiers, who do repetitive work, AI trainers are engaged in creative work.（不同于做重复工作的传统收银员，人工智能训练师从事创造性工作。） ...requires manual skills, while...needs high-tech knowledge. 例：A traditional tailor requires manual skills, while a 3D clothing designer needs high-tech knowledge.（传统裁缝需要手工技能，而 3D 服装设计师需要高科技知识。） By contrast, ...will be more important in the future than before. 例：By contrast, renewable energy technicians will be more important in the future than before.（相比之下，新能源技术员在未来将比以前更重要。） While...is becoming outdated, ...is developing rapidly. 例：While traditional printing jobs are becoming outdated, digital media jobs are developing rapidly.（当传统印刷工作逐渐过时，数字媒体工作正在快速发展。） 4.预测展望 It is predicted that...will no longer exist in 10 years. 例：It is predicted that traditional postal workers will no longer exist in 10 years.（据预测，传统邮递员将在 10 年内不复存在。） In the near future, ...will become one of the most popular jobs. 例：In the near future, robot maintenance workers will become one of the most popular jobs.（在不久的将来，机器人维修员将成为最受欢迎的职业之一。） ...is expected to grow quickly as...develops. 例：Space tourism guides are expected to grow quickly as space technology develops.（随着太空技术的发展，太空导游职业预计将快速发展。） We can see that...will replace...in many fields. 例：We can see that intelligent machines will replace human workers in many fields.（我们可以看到，智能机器将在许多领域取代人类工人。） To work in the future, we need to learn skills related to... 例：To work in the future, we need to learn skills related to artificial intelligence and big data.（为了在未来工作，我们需要学习与人工智能和大数据相关的技能。） ...will be in great demand because of... 例：Drone pilots will be in great demand because of the development of logistics and agriculture.（因物流和农业的发展，无人机飞手将需求旺盛。） It is certain that...will change the way we work. 例：It is certain that new technologies will change the way we work and create more future jobs.（新技术肯定会改变我们的工作方式，并创造更多未来职业。） 巩｜固｜练｜习 根据提示翻译句子。 1.由于自助收银机的普及，超市收银员可能会消失。（because of） 2.据预测，未来十年人工智能训练师将需求旺盛。（It is predicted that...） 3.一方面，电话接线员正在消失；另一方面，智能家居设计师正在兴起。（On one hand...On the other hand...） 4.新能源技术员的兴起是因为人们对绿色发展的需求。（due to） 5.为了在未来工作，我们需要学习与机器人相关的技能。（related to） 答案与解析： 1.Supermarket cashiers are likely to disappear because of the popularity of self-checkout machines. 解析：考查 “because of + 名词短语” 表原因的用法，“普及” 译为 “popularity”，符合八年级词汇要求，“be likely to” 体现 “可能” 的语气。 2.It is predicted that AI trainers will be in great demand in the next ten years. 解析：考查形式主语句式 “It is predicted that...”，“需求旺盛” 译为 “be in great demand”，“未来十年” 用 “in the next ten years” 表时间。 3.On one hand, telephone operators are disappearing; on the other hand, smart home designers are emerging. 解析：考查对比句式的运用，“消失” 用 “disappear”，“兴起” 用 “emerge”，均为主题核心词汇，句式结构对称清晰。 4.The rise of renewable energy technicians is due to people's demand for green development. 解析：考查 “due to” 表原因的用法，“新能源技术员” 译为 “renewable energy technicians”，“绿色发展” 为 “green development”，贴合热点话题。 5.To work in the future, we need to learn skills related to robots. 解析：考查 “related to” 表 “与…… 相关” 的用法，不定式 “To work” 表目的，符合未来职业话题的语境要求。 三、范文例析 With the development of technology, some jobs are disappearing while new ones are coming. A job soon to be history is the supermarket cashier. Self-checkout machines have replaced many cashiers, as they work faster and never get tired. A job of the future is the drone pilot. Drones are used in agriculture and logistics now. Drone pilots need to master how to control drones and check equipment. They are in great demand. Jobs change with time. We should learn new skills to adapt to the future. 【范文分析】 结构完整：遵循 “引言 - 主体 - 结尾” 框架，引言点出职业变迁背景，主体分别介绍超市收银员（消失的职业）和无人机飞手（未来的职业），结尾总结启示，逻辑清晰。 词汇精准：运用 “replace”“master”“in great demand” 等主题核心词汇，“self-checkout machines”“drone” 等具体职业相关表达，贴合话题且符合八年级水平。 句式多样：使用 “With the development of...” 引入话题，“as” 引导原因状语从句解释收银员消失的原因，“need to” 描述未来职业技能要求，句式丰富且实用。 内容贴切：选取超市收银员、无人机飞手等生活化例子，原因分析具体（机器更快、农业物流需求），避免空泛，符合审题要点。 【优化策略】 逻辑衔接优化：使用对比类连接词增强文章层次，如用 “However”“By contrast” 衔接两类职业，用 “For example” 补充具体案例，避免句子堆砌。例如将 “Self-checkout machines have replaced many cashiers. They work faster.” 优化为 “Self-checkout machines have replaced many cashiers, for they work faster and never get tired.” 语言升级技巧：替换基础词汇提升表达质感，如用 “vanish” 替代 “disappear”，“be in great need” 替代 “be needed much”；将简单句合并为复合句，如把 “Drones are useful. Drone pilots are popular.” 改为 “Since drones are useful in many fields, drone pilots are becoming more popular.” 。 内容深化方法：描述职业时增加细节，如讲消失的职业可补充 “曾经帮助老人解决支付问题”，讲未来职业可添加 “需要通过专业培训考试”，让内容更真实具体。结合生活经验举例，如 “我家附近的超市只有 2 个收银员，却有 8 台自助机”，增强说服力。 错误规避策略：写作后自查时态一致性（描述未来用一般将来时，现状用一般现在时），避免中式英语，如不说 “Future jobs are very new”，而说 “Future jobs are newly emerging”；检查名词单复数，如 “AI trainer” 变为复数 “AI trainers” 时的拼写正确。 ◇Part 03 写作强化训练 提｜升｜练｜习 1．为了激发同学们对未来职业的思考与探索热情，你所在的学校特地举办以 “My Dream Job”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据下面表格中的提示，写一篇短文投稿。 What a guide for foreign (外国的) visitors Why Introduce China: places of interest folk art (民间艺术) How study English hard ... 参考词汇：beautiful, experience, paper-cutting (剪纸), long history, rich culture, achieve, excellent, believe, .... 要求：1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于60。 (标题和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) My Dream Job Everyone has a dream job and my dream is to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter来信询问你的好朋友及你们未来的职业计划。请你根据以下提示写一封回信。 内容包括： 1.介绍你的好朋友（外貌、性格、爱好，使用形容词或者副词的比较级，最高级）； 2.介绍你们的梦想工作/职业计划（谈论你们的梦想职业及为达成梦想职业而做的具体准备）； 3.情感表达：写出你对实现梦想职业的期待。 词数：80-100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Tell me about your best friend and your plans! Yours, Li Hua 3．假如你是Ella，在图书馆偶然看到右边这则广告，你非常心动，想要应聘。 请写一封email 阐述你的优势或应聘理由。 要求：30词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．青春路上，我们都对未来有着美好的憧憬。本月，学校英语报The Youth正在开展“说梦想，话未来”为主题的征文活动。假如你是Jane，请以“I Want to Be a/an ____________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你梦想中的职业，向学校英语报投稿。 要求如下： 1. 补全标题； 2. 参考表格中要点，不少于60词； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 I Want to Be a(n) ____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请以“Me in the future”为题写一篇短文。 要点： (1)What’s your dream job? (2)Why do you choose this job? (3)What will you do to make your dream come true? 注意： (1)短文须包括所有要点； (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3)词数70词左右。 Me in the Future ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是张华，你的学校正在开展以“我的未来我做主”为主题的职业规划活动，现在向全校同学征集职业规划的文章。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，写一篇英语短文向学校报刊主编Amanda投稿。 参考词汇：help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on… 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于60词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) Dear Amanda, I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Hua 7．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike想了解你的家庭成员的爱好和职业，并询问你未来的梦想职业。请你根据以下提示并结合自身情况，给他写一封回信，并说一说你为什么想从事这一职业。 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 8．假如你是李华，你准备参与暑期的“职业体验夏令营 (Career Experience Summer Camp)”，请你根据下面报名信息表中的内容，写一封申请信。 Career Experience Summer Camp1. Personal Information Name: ________ Age: ________ 2. Career Field Selection (职业领域选择) □Teacher  □Artist  □Doctor  □Other: ________ Reason: ________ 3. Required Questions Why do you think dreams are important for teenagers? __________________________________________________________________________________________ What’s your plan to realize your dream (at least 3 points)? __________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作要求：1. 文中须包含信息表中的全部内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir/ Madam, Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’m 15 years old. I really want to join the “Career Experience Summer Camp”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can go to this fun summer camp. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 参考答案 1． My Dream Job Everyone has a dream job and my dream is to become a guide for foreign visitors. Why do I want to be such a guide? Because I want to introduce China’s beauty to the world. I can take visitors to famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the West Lake. I also want to show them our wonderful folk art, like paper-cutting. How can I make my dream come true? First, I will study English very hard to communicate well with foreign visitors. Second, I will read more books and watch videos about Chinese history and culture to get more knowledge. Finally, I will try to visit different places in China to get real experience. I believe if I work hard, I can achieve my dream. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍梦想的工作是什么； 第二步、介绍原因以及实现梦想的方式； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②come true实现 ③achieve my dream实现我的梦想 [高分句型] I believe if I work hard, I can achieve my dream.(宾语从句；条件状语从句) 2． Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. I want to tell you about my best friend and our dream job plans. My best friend is Lin Tao. He is the tallest boy in our class and more outgoing than me. He’s friendlier than most classmates, so everyone likes him. He loves painting more than any other activity. Lin Tao’s dream job is to be an art teacher. He will take art classes to improve his skills and practice painting every day. My dream is to be a soccer coach. I will join the school soccer club to learn strategies and exercise more. I believe we can make our dreams come true. It will be great to do what we love! I’m looking forward to your reply. Tell me about your best friend and your plans! Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； 时态：一般现在时（介绍朋友和计划）和一般将来时（未来梦想）； 提示：需包含朋友介绍（用比较级/最高级）、职业计划及准备、情感表达。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山回应来信，并介绍好朋友； 第二步：说明两人的梦想职业及具体准备； 第三步：表达对实现梦想的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do sth.做某事高兴 ②come true实现 ③look forward to盼望 [高分句型] ①He is the tallest boy in our class and more outgoing than me.（运用了形容词最高级the tallest和比较级more...than结构） ②I believe we can make our dreams come true.（运用了宾语从句，表达坚定信念） 3． Dear Mr Reed, I’m Ella. I like reading very much. So my friends say I’m a “bookworm”. When there is much noise around me, I can say “Shh.” I can do it. I look forward to your reply. Yours, Ella [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③ 提示：材料所给内容需完整回答，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简介自己； 第二步，详细介绍自己的优势； 第三步，表明希望被聘用。 [亮点词汇] ①very much非常 ②so所以 ③look forward to期待 ④around me我周围 [高分句型] ①So my friends say I’m a “bookworm”. (含有宾语从句的复合句) ②When there is much noise around me, I can say “Shh.” (when引导时间状语从句) 4． I Want to Be a Teacher I want to be a teacher in the future, because teachers can light up students’ paths. I like this job because it’s meaningful. Teachers can not only share knowledge but also guide students to grow into better people. To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard. I’m sure I can achieve my dream as long as I study hard and keep on trying. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：围绕 “想成为教师” 这一核心要点展开，突出“追求梦想”的核心主题。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明核心梦想； 第二步，进一步阐述喜欢教师这份工作的深层原因； 第三步，提出实现梦想的具体行动规划。 [亮点词汇] ①light up照亮；点燃 ②study hard努力学习 [高分句型] ①Teachers can not only share knowledge but also guide students to grow into better people. (not only...but also... 结构，表并列关系) ②I like this job because it’s meaningful. (because引导原因状语从句) 5．              Me in the Future    I want to be a teacher in the future. I choose this job because I love sharing knowledge and helping children grow. It is a meaningful job.     To make my dream come true, I will study hard and read more books. I will also practice teaching by helping my classmates.     I believe if I keep working hard, I can become a good teacher one day. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山说明梦想职业，并解释选择这个职业的原因； 第二步，具体介绍如何做来实现自己的理想； 第三步，表达自己实现理想的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①share knowledge分享知识 ②come true实现 ③keep working hard坚持努力工作 [高分句型] ①I choose this job because I love sharing knowledge and helping children grow. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②I believe if I keep working hard, I can become a good teacher one day. (宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句) 6． Dear Amanda, I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job. My dream is to become a doctor. The main reason is that I want to help others recover from illnesses and bring hope to patients and their families. To achieve this goal, I need to possess good qualities like patience and responsibility. I’m studying science subjects hard at school to lay a solid foundation. In my spare time, I often read medical books and volunteer at the community clinic to gain practical experience. I believe with continuous effort, I can realize my dream and make a difference in people’s lives. Yours, Zhang Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的理想职业——医生； 第二步，介绍自己想当医生的原因、具备的品质以及如何实现自己的梦想； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth.想要做某事 ②recover from illnesses从疾病中康复 ③make a difference产生影响 [高分句型] The main reason is that I want to help others recover from illnesses and bring hope to patients and their families. (that引导的表语从句) 7． Dear Mike, How are you doing? I’m glad to tell you something about my family and my dream. My father is a police officer. His hobby is doing kung fu because he wants to stay strong. My mother is a Chinese teacher. She enjoys reading books in her free time. As for me, I like drawing and I want to be an artist in the future. I think art is beautiful and I can express my ideas through pictures. Best wishes!                                                                                                                                                      Yours,                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信类应用文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，谈及梦想用一般将来时； ③结构：开头寒暄+介绍家人职业与爱好+介绍自己的梦想与原因+祝福结尾； ④目标：回应朋友提问，说明自己的理想与家庭情况。 [写作步骤] 第一步：寒暄问候，引出话题； 第二步：介绍父亲的职业和爱好及原因； 第三步：介绍母亲的职业和爱好； 第四步：说明自己的爱好和未来想从事的职业及理由； 第五步：表达美好祝愿，收尾。 [亮点词汇] ① be glad to 对……高兴 ② enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事 ③ in one’s free time 在某人空闲时 ④ want to be 想成为 ⑤ express one’s ideas 表达某人的想法 ⑥ in the future 在将来 [高分句型] ① His hobby is doing kung fu because he wants to stay strong.（because引导原因状语从句） ② I like drawing and I want to be an artist in the future.（并列句） 8． Dear Sir/ Madam, Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’m 15 years old. I really want to join the “Career Experience Summer Camp”. Dreams can give us goals in life and make us work harder. With a dream, we can find happiness and become better people. My dream is to become a doctor, because doctors save lives and help people feel better. To make my dream come true, I will try my best every day. First, I will listen to teachers carefully in the school. Next, I will read books about medicine and watch videos to learn more. Finally, I will keep a healthy lifestyle, like exercising and eating vegetables, because a doctor needs to be strong too. I know it will not be easy, but I will never give up. I believe my dream can come true if I keep working hard! I hope I can go to this fun summer camp. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息表内容中“提示信息”的要求，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍姓名、年龄、职业。 第二步：阐述梦想为何对青少年很重要。 第三步：阐述为实现梦想的做出的计划。 [亮点词汇] ①give up放弃 ②keep doing sth.保持做某事 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①I hope I can go to this fun summer camp. (宾语从句） ②Finally, I will keep a healthy lifestyle, like exercising and eating vegetables, because a doctor needs to be strong too. (Because引导的原因状语从句) ( 一 / 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $