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Unit 1 Time to Relax
单元话题满分范文必背
Unit 1 Time to Relax单元话题:闲暇活动和爱好
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.在繁忙而充实的学习之余, 青少年还应该拥有健康阳光的爱好, 如运动、读书、绘画、旅游、助人为乐等。请选择你的一项爱好要点:
1. 你的爱好是什么;
2. 你培养和发展爱好的过程是什么;
3. 你从你的爱好中获得了什么体验和感受。
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校;
2. 语句通顺, 符合逻辑, 可适当发挥;
3. 词数控制在80个左右。
________ Makes My Life More Colorful
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2.你平时是如何度过课余时光的?参加体育活动、外出旅游、看电视、玩游戏,还是听音乐、读课外书呢?假如你是李华,请以“My Free Time”为题,根据以下提示要点,用英语写一篇短文谈谈你对空闲时间的安排。
提示:1.你在空闲时通常做什么?
2.这对你是好还是坏?为什么?
3.你将来将发展什么兴趣爱好?为什么?
要求:1.短文须包括所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.70词左右;
4.不能抄袭试卷原文。
My Free Time
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3.亲爱的同学们,课余时间、周末、假期,你们通常都是怎样度过的呢?请以“My Free Time”为题,写一篇短文。
信息提示:
1.参加运动,强身健体;
2.娱乐活动,放松心情;
3.做家务,帮助父母;
4.课外阅读,开阔视野。
要点:
1.根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译;
2.文中不得出现真实人名或校名;
3.词数为80—100。文章的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
My Free Time
I have lots of things to do in my free time.
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4.每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好, 比如看电影、 听音乐、 阅读、 唱歌、集邮、运动等。假如你是李华,请根据提示,用英语给你的朋友John写一封电子邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好——打篮球。
提示:
1. Introduce why you like playing basketball.
2. Tell your experience of playing basketball:
(1) played basketball at a young age
(2) joined the school basketball team.
3. Tell how you feel.
要求:
(1)短文须包括提示中的要点,并适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。
(3) 词数80个左右。
Dear John,
How’s everything going? It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
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How about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件,想要了解你的兴趣爱好。请你用英文回复一封邮件,介绍你的一个爱好、你是如何发展它的以及从这个爱好中获得的益处等。
提示词语: play basketball, practise, club, make friends, fun
提示问题:
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop it?
3. What can you get from your hobby?
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on?
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.你们学校英文校刊正在开展以“My favourite sport”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你最喜欢的运动。
提示词语: running, easy, playground, at weekends, keep fit
内容提示:Why do you like it?
·When and where do you usually do the sport?
·What benefits do you get from doing the sport?
My Favourite Sport
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7.请根据以下要点提示,以“My hobby”为题写一篇120词左右的英语短文。
要点提示:
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3. Share the pleasure you get from your hobby. Give at least one example.
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8.爱好是心灵的乐章,奏响生命的旋律。有益的兴趣爱好既能丰富你的业余生活,又能促进身心健康发展。请你写一篇以“My Hobby”为题的短文,分享你的兴趣爱好。
要点如下:
1. What’s your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3. What advantages can hobbies bring to you?
...
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 必须包含提示的内容,并进行相应的拓展;
3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
4. 词数:100词左右。(开头句已给出,不计入总词数)
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies.
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◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.健康的爱好是青少年生活中不可或缺的一部分。校刊英语专栏将开展主题为“My Hobby”的英文征文活动,请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文投稿,向大家介绍你的爱好。
内容包括:
1.你的一项爱好是什么?
2.你是如何发展这项爱好的 (如何开始,……)?
3.你从中的收获是什么?
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含写作要点的所有信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数80左右 (短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:be interested in对……感兴趣 develop v.培养 improve v.提高 pleasure n.快乐
My Hobby
Everyone has a hobby.
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10.初中生活忙碌又充实,有学习知识的快乐,也有成长的烦恼,假如你是一名初二的中学生李华,你认为丰富多彩的业余生活有利于身心健康,请以“My Spare Time”为题,写一篇短文谈谈你的业余生活。
内容要点:
1.我的业余时间充满了有趣的活动;这些活动使我放松;
2.喜欢在图书馆看各种各样的书;可以帮助我开阔视野;
3.放学后会做运动,比如跑步,打篮球;对健康有好处;
4.有时会听音乐;有时会和朋友一起跳舞;
5.在周末会做一些家务;可以发展生活技能。
注意:1.词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
提示词汇: 开阔视野: open one’s eyes
My Spare Time
I’m a middle school student.
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Unit 1 Time to Relax
单元话题满分范文必背
Unit 1 Time to Relax单元话题:闲暇活动和爱好
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练
基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础,巩固自我
重难语篇提升练 专注提升,挑战自我
◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练
1.在繁忙而充实的学习之余, 青少年还应该拥有健康阳光的爱好, 如运动、读书、绘画、旅游、助人为乐等。请选择你的一项爱好要点:
1. 你的爱好是什么;
2. 你培养和发展爱好的过程是什么;
3. 你从你的爱好中获得了什么体验和感受。
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校;
2. 语句通顺, 符合逻辑, 可适当发挥;
3. 词数控制在80个左右。
________ Makes My Life More Colorful
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【答案】例文
Painting Makes My Life More Colorful
It’s important to build up some hobbies in life. Painting is the hobby that makes my life more colorful.
I still remember the first time when my mom took me to the art museum. I was deeply interested in the great painting. Then I took the painting training classes. I became more and more interested in painting. I even got the third prize in the competition. I feel proud of myself.
Painting makes my life more colorful.I really enjoy it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”(描述长期爱好)和“一般过去时”(描述培养过程);
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出自己的爱好;
第二步、描述爱好的培养与发展过程;
第三步、阐述从爱好中获得的体验与感受,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①build up培养
②was deeply interested in对……深感兴趣
③feel proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①It’s important to build up some hobbies in life.(动词不定式作主语,it作形式主语)
②Painting is the hobby that makes my life more colorful.(运用that引导的定语从句,补充说明爱好的作用)
③I still remember the first time when my mom took me to the art museum.(运用when引导的时间状语从句,连接动作)
2.你平时是如何度过课余时光的?参加体育活动、外出旅游、看电视、玩游戏,还是听音乐、读课外书呢?假如你是李华,请以“My Free Time”为题,根据以下提示要点,用英语写一篇短文谈谈你对空闲时间的安排。
提示:1.你在空闲时通常做什么?
2.这对你是好还是坏?为什么?
3.你将来将发展什么兴趣爱好?为什么?
要求:1.短文须包括所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.70词左右;
4.不能抄袭试卷原文。
My Free Time
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【答案】
例文
My Free Time
In my free time, I usually read books because books are good for my study and I can get more knowledge from them. Also I like listening to English songs. I think it is helpful for my English learning. And music can make me relaxed so that I can get good grades. In the future, I want to develop an interest in drawing. I think it is creative and fun.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍自己空闲时间通常做什么,然后介绍自己空闲时间做的事对自己是好还是坏及原因,最后介绍将来在空闲时间会有什么爱好以及原因。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③be helpful for对……有帮助
④in the future未来、今后
[高分句型]
①In my free time, I usually read books because books are good for my study and I can get more knowledge from them. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it is helpful for my English learning. (宾语从句)
3.亲爱的同学们,课余时间、周末、假期,你们通常都是怎样度过的呢?请以“My Free Time”为题,写一篇短文。
信息提示:
1.参加运动,强身健体;
2.娱乐活动,放松心情;
3.做家务,帮助父母;
4.课外阅读,开阔视野。
要点:
1.根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译;
2.文中不得出现真实人名或校名;
3.词数为80—100。文章的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
My Free Time
I have lots of things to do in my free time.
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【答案】One possible version:
My Free Time
I have lots of things to do in my free time.
Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework on weekends, too. When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, science fiction, or even a poem. Reading calms my heart down and helps me broaden my horizons effectively.
I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,总述自己课余时间有很多事情可做;
第二步,分述课余时间常做的几件事:运动、听音乐、做家务和阅读,并重点说明阅读的作用;
第三步,总结全文,表达自己对课余时间的喜爱及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take exercise锻炼身体
②keep healthy保持健康
③listen to music听音乐
④help with the housework帮忙做家务
⑤calm one’s heart down平复心情
[高分句型]
①Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②Sometimes I listen to music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, science fiction, or even a poem.(when引导的时间状语从句)
④I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom.(because引导的原因状语从句)
4.每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好, 比如看电影、 听音乐、 阅读、 唱歌、集邮、运动等。假如你是李华,请根据提示,用英语给你的朋友John写一封电子邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好——打篮球。
提示:
1. Introduce why you like playing basketball.
2. Tell your experience of playing basketball:
(1) played basketball at a young age
(2) joined the school basketball team.
3. Tell how you feel.
要求:
(1)短文须包括提示中的要点,并适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。
(3) 词数80个左右。
Dear John,
How’s everything going? It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you.
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How about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear John,
How’s everything going? It’s my pleasure to share my hobby with you. I love playing basketball. Let me tell you why I like it and some of my experiences.
I started playing basketball when I was very young. I was attracted by the excitement of the game and the feeling of teamwork. When I was in primary school, I joined the school basketball team.
Playing basketball makes me feel happy and confident. I have made many friends through basketball.
How about your hobby? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:一般现在时为主(描述爱好),一般过去时(描述经历)。
③提示:围绕打篮球展开,需包含喜欢的原因、个人经历(幼时开始打球、加入校队)及感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山点明爱好。
第二步:说明原因、经历和感受(覆盖题干3个提示点)。
第三步:自然过渡到询问对方爱好,呼应书信互动性。
[亮点词汇]
①be attracted by被……吸引
②make sb+adj使某人处于某种状态
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①When I was in primary school, I joined the school basketball team. (when引导时间状语从句)
②Playing basketball makes me feel happy and confident. (动名词短语作主语)
5.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件,想要了解你的兴趣爱好。请你用英文回复一封邮件,介绍你的一个爱好、你是如何发展它的以及从这个爱好中获得的益处等。
提示词语: play basketball, practise, club, make friends, fun
提示问题:
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop it?
3. What can you get from your hobby?
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on?
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文:
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on?
My hobby is playing basketball. I love it very much. To develop this hobby, I practise it every day after school. I also join the school basketball club. In the club, we play basketball together and learn new skills. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends in the park.
From playing basketball, I get a lot. It makes me strong and healthy. I also make many new friends in the club. We have great fun playing basketball together. It’s really enjoyable.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当增加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇问候后点明自己的爱好;
第二步,详细说明发展该爱好的具体方式;
第三步,阐述从爱好中获得的益处,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①practise练习
②club俱乐部
③make friends交朋友
④fun乐趣
[高分句型]
To develop this hobby, I practise it every day after school. (不定式作目的状语)
6.你们学校英文校刊正在开展以“My favourite sport”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你最喜欢的运动。
提示词语: running, easy, playground, at weekends, keep fit
内容提示:Why do you like it?
·When and where do you usually do the sport?
·What benefits do you get from doing the sport?
My Favourite Sport
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Sport
Among all sports, running is my favourite. It’s easy to do—you don’t need expensive equipment, just a pair of comfortable shoes.
I usually run on the school playground after class or at weekends. Sometimes I run alone, and sometimes I run with my best friend. We chat a little while running, which makes the sport more fun.
Running brings me many benefits. First, it helps me keep fit. After running, I feel energetic and my body stays strong. Second, it makes me relax. When I’m stressed about homework, a short run always makes me feel better.
I love running because it’s simple but useful. I’ll keep running to stay healthy and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明核心主题,说明喜欢跑步的首要原因;
第二步,介绍跑步的时间和地点,补充运动场景细节;
第三步,阐述跑步带来的好处,呼应“为何喜欢”的深层原因;
第四步,总结全文,强化对跑步的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②a pair of comfortable shoes一双舒适的鞋子
③at weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
①I love running because it’s simple but useful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②We chat a little while running, which makes the sport more fun. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.请根据以下要点提示,以“My hobby”为题写一篇120词左右的英语短文。
要点提示:
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3. Share the pleasure you get from your hobby. Give at least one example.
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【答案】 例文:
My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music. Though I was not good at it, I often lost myself in it. To enjoy more beautiful music, I often download new songs. I also joined a music club.
Listening to music benefits me. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.
Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try. You will find it so good.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍你的爱好是什么,你是如何培养你的爱好的并举例分享你从爱好中获得的快乐。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②be good at擅长
③calm down冷静下来
④have a try试一试
[高分句型]
①When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health. (并列句)
8.爱好是心灵的乐章,奏响生命的旋律。有益的兴趣爱好既能丰富你的业余生活,又能促进身心健康发展。请你写一篇以“My Hobby”为题的短文,分享你的兴趣爱好。
要点如下:
1. What’s your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3. What advantages can hobbies bring to you?
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要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 必须包含提示的内容,并进行相应的拓展;
3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
4. 词数:100词左右。(开头句已给出,不计入总词数)
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies.
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【答案】例文
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies. I have many hobbies, such as reading, growing vegetables and listening to music. My favourite hobby is listening to music.
When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music very much, especially classical music. Nowadays I spend most of my spare time enjoying music. I also share the music l like with my family and friends. It really brings me much pleasure. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me relaxed. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.
I hope our hobbies will make us grow as a person and help us have a better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于兴趣爱好的介绍要点,如兴趣爱好是什么、如何培养、兴趣爱好带来的好处等,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“不同人有不同爱好”来引出自己的爱好;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“我的爱好是什么、如何培养爱好、爱好带来的好处”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。总结爱好带来的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①different hobbies 不同的爱好
②such as 例如
③in trouble 处于困境中
④calm down 冷静下来
⑤be good for 对……有好处
[高分句型]
When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. / When I am very tired, it can make me relaxed.(when引导时间状语从句)
◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练
9.健康的爱好是青少年生活中不可或缺的一部分。校刊英语专栏将开展主题为“My Hobby”的英文征文活动,请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文投稿,向大家介绍你的爱好。
内容包括:
1.你的一项爱好是什么?
2.你是如何发展这项爱好的 (如何开始,……)?
3.你从中的收获是什么?
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含写作要点的所有信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4.词数80左右 (短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:be interested in对……感兴趣 develop v.培养 improve v.提高 pleasure n.快乐
My Hobby
Everyone has a hobby.
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【答案】One possible version
My Hobby
Everyone has a hobby. My hobby is reading.
I became interested in reading when I was a little kid. My mother often read bedtime stories to me, which sparked my love for books. As I grew older, I started to read on my own. I would go to the library regularly and borrow all kinds of books.
Reading has brought me a great deal of benefits. It has improved my knowledge and vocabulary. Moreover, it allows me to experience different worlds and gain wisdom. Most importantly, it gives me endless pleasure. Whenever I open a book, I can forget about all my troubles and immerse myself in the wonderful stories.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示的信息,可适当增加写作细节,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题并指出自己的爱好是什么;
第二步,详细阐述自己如何发展的这项爱好;
第三步,总结自己从这项爱好中获得的收获,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①become interested in对……感兴趣
②all kinds of各种各样的
③a great deal of大量的
[高分句型]
①As I grew older, I started to read on my own.(as引导的时间状语从句)
②My mother often read bedtime stories to me, which sparked my love for books.(which引导的定语从句)
③Whenever I open a book, I can forget about all my troubles and immerse myself in the wonderful stories.(whenever引导的时间状语从句)
10.初中生活忙碌又充实,有学习知识的快乐,也有成长的烦恼,假如你是一名初二的中学生李华,你认为丰富多彩的业余生活有利于身心健康,请以“My Spare Time”为题,写一篇短文谈谈你的业余生活。
内容要点:
1.我的业余时间充满了有趣的活动;这些活动使我放松;
2.喜欢在图书馆看各种各样的书;可以帮助我开阔视野;
3.放学后会做运动,比如跑步,打篮球;对健康有好处;
4.有时会听音乐;有时会和朋友一起跳舞;
5.在周末会做一些家务;可以发展生活技能。
注意:1.词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
提示词汇: 开阔视野: open one’s eyes
My Spare Time
I’m a middle school student.
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【答案】例文
My Spare Time I’m a middle school student. My spare time is full of fun and relaxing activities. I often go to the library in my spare time. Reading all kinds of books helps me relax and opens my eyes. After school, I like doing sports, such as running and playing basketball. They are good for my health. Sometimes I listen to music. I also dance with my friends for fun. On weekends, I do some housework. It helps me develop life skills. These activities make me happy and healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以“My Spare Time”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍自己空闲时间做什么;
第三步,书写结语感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②be good for对……有好处
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
Reading all kinds of books helps me relax and opens my eyes. (动名词作主语)
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