摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“未来梦想”主题写作,涵盖职业、居住地、业余活动及实现方法等核心要素,通过Mandy的范文分析、词汇积累(如“develop skills”“depend on”)和表格对比搭建写作支架,帮助学生掌握一般将来时记叙文的结构与表达。
其亮点在于融合语言能力(提供句式模板如“My dream is to become... in my hometown”、过渡词“First of all”)、思维品质(对比Mandy与自身梦想培养分析能力)和学习能力(思维导图辅助审题、分段落写作指导),采用范例引导与支架式教学。学生通过模板套用和逻辑梳理提升写作规范,教师可借助资料高效开展从输入到输出的写作教学。
内容正文:
1. 有价值的 be valuable 2. 接受挑战 accept the challenges
3.培养技能;提升能力 develop skills 4.躲避;逃避
run away from
5. 影响了众多科幻作家 influence many sci-fi writers 6. 依靠;依赖;取决于 depend on
7. 采取措施完善医疗体系 take steps to improve health system 8. 智能公共交通系统 a smart public transport system
9. 富有挑战性的 challenging 10.紧急情况 emergency
Unit7
When Tomorrow Comes
SectionB (3a-3c)
Writing
小红书:Christina在努力
Let’ read Mandy’s future dreams. It can help you write a passage about yours.
What might these dreams be about?
an art museum/ a gallery
countryside/a quiet place/
a natural place, ...
place to live
place to visit
/ˈɡæləri/美术馆;画廊
Read about Mandy’s dreams for the future and find out what she wants to be and how to do it.
She wants to be an artist.
She will study art in France.
will visit all the art museums
will learn about different art
will create her own art
3a
Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams and yours.
Item Mandy You
Future job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
3b
My Dreams for the Future
What will my life be like in 20 years? It's not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too.
As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying.
Item Mandy
Future job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
artist
the countryside
visit art museums
create her own art
invite friends
study hard
keep trying
Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams.
3b
小红书:Christina在努力
Complete the table about your dreams.
Item You
Future job
Place to live
Free time activity
How to make dreams come true
3b
Where will you live in 20 years?
What will you do in your free time?
How are you going to do that?
What will you be when you grow up?
请你根据以下思维导图内容提示:以“Life in 20 Years”为题写一篇文章:描述你对20年后的梦想生活与憧憬。
第一步:审题。文体:记叙文
人称 时态
第一人称
一般将来时
小试牛刀
Para 1: 1.职业和居住地+2.业余活动
1.我的梦想是回到家乡成为一名医生:那里是一个靠近山脉的宁静之地。
My dream is to become a doctor in my hometown, a peaceful place near the mountains.
2.当我有空闲时间时:我将阅读有关科学的书籍:并和家人一起打羽毛球。
In my spare(或者free) time, I will read books about science and playing badminton with my family.
提示:标红是句式 黑色部分可更换
Para 2, 如何实现梦想(3点3分)
1.为了实现我的梦想:我将努力学习:争取在所有科目中取得优异的成绩:尤其是要在生物学科上。
In order to achieve/realize my dream, I will study hard to get good grades in all subjects, especially in biology.
2.其次:我将进入一所优秀的医科大学:提升自己并学习一些技能:以便能够帮助那些需要帮助的人。
Second, I will get into a good medical university to improve myself and learn some skills to help people in need.
3.最后:我将学会耐心地照顾他人:这对于成为一名优秀的医生来说非常重要。//..., 因为善良且乐于助人的品质是医生所需要的。
Finally, I will learn to care for others patiently, which is important for a good doctor.//..., because being kind and helpful is what the real doctors need.
Para 3:呼吁+谚语
1.明日的成功取决于今日的努力。
Tomorrow’s success depends on today’s effort.
2.让我们齐心协力:共同努力:让我们的梦想成真。
Let’s work hard together to make our dreams come true.
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Life will be quite different from now in 20 years.(开头过渡)As for me, my dream is to become a writer in my hometown. In my spare(free) time, I will read books about science and enjoy traveling with my family.(职业和居住地:1分)
In order to make my dream come true, I will study hard to get good grades in all subjects, especially in Chinese.First of all(连词), I will practise writing every day to improve my writing skills.(方法一:1分)What’s more(连词),, I will share my stories with others and listen to their advice.(方法二:1分)
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Finally, I will get into a good university to improve myself and learn some writing skills .(方法三:1分)
I know becoming a good writer isn’t easy, but I will keep working hard.As the saying goes:Tomorrow’s success depends on today’s effort. If we study hard, I believe our dreams will come true one day.(呼吁:1分)
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