专项07 书面表达（期末专项训练）五年级英语上学期（北京版·新教材）

专项07 书面表达 01 解题小技巧 02【题型一】 书面表达 解题小技巧 小学英语 “书面表达” 题型（含介绍类写作、命题作文、表格信息写作）核心考查时态运用、内容完整性及语句连贯性，掌握以下技巧可快速破题： 第一步：审题立意，确定框架 · 明确写作主题（如 “动物朋友”“家人爱好”“自我介绍”），按 “开头 + 中间 + 结尾” 搭建框架。 · 开头：简洁交代写作对象或背景（如介绍动物朋友可写 “I have an animal friend. It’s a dog.”；介绍家人爱好可写 “Lucy’s family has different hobbies.”）。 · 中间：围绕主题补充 2-3 个核心信息，用 “and/also/too” 等连接词串联内容（如描述动物外貌可写 “It has big eyes and a short tail. It can run fast too.”）。 · 结尾：表达感受或总结（如 “I like my animal friend very much.”“Their hobbies make the family happy.”）。 · 锁定时态：五年级书面表达以一般现在时为主，描述客观事实（如外貌、爱好、能力），动词需匹配人称（第三人称单数用 “likes/has”，第一人称用 “like/have”）。 第二步：巧用提示，丰富内容 · 若题目给中文提示 / 关键词（如 “打篮球、擅长、每天跑步”），需全部融入文中，避免遗漏；若给表格 / 图片，按 “表格信息顺序”“图片元素” 展开，每类信息至少 1 句话（如表格含 “Name/Gender/Age”，需依次介绍 “Lucy is a girl. She is 11 years old.”）。 · 补充细节：在核心信息后加简单修饰，如 “play basketball” 可扩展为 “play basketball with his friends on weekends”；“a bird” 可扩展为 “a beautiful yellow bird”，让内容更具体。 · 第三步：检查修正，保证规范 · 语法层面：确认动词过去式正确（如 go→went，fly→flew）、人称与动词搭配合理（第三人称单数用 “does”，过去时用 “did”）。 · 语句层面：避免重复用词（如 “happy” 可替换为 “great/wonderful”），确保每句有主谓结构，无语法错误。 · 格式层面：日记需写清 “星期 / 天气，日期”（如 “Sunday, 27th October”）；命题作文需写标题，首字母大写且居中。 【题型一】书面表达 （一） 请以My favourite为题，写一篇短文，介绍自己最喜欢的学科、节日或爱好。 要求：1. 语句通顺，语法正确，不少于5句话。 2. 包含所给提示内容提示：favourite subject, festival, hobby My favourite _______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 以“My feelings in a day”为题，记录一天中不同时刻的心情变化，说明原因并写下自己的感受。 不少于 5 句。________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 情境：你的笔友来自英国，想了解中国的传统爱好。请以“A Traditional Chinese Hobby I Like”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢的一项中国传统爱好(如书法、剪纸、中国功夫等)，包括： 这项爱好是什么； 你如何练习它； 它蕴含的传统文化意义； 它给你带来的感受。 要求：不少于 5 句，语句通顺。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 以“My Favourite Traditional Story”为题，写一篇短文。 情境：班级开展 “传统故事分享会”，请介绍你最喜欢的一个中国传统故事，包括故事名称、喜欢的原因，以及故事中体现的传统美德(如勇敢、善良)。 要求：50 词左右，语句通顺。 _________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 假如你是李明，请根据思维导图的提示，以“读万卷书，行万里路”为主题制定暑假计划，完成短文写作。要求：至少写五句话。 Hello, I’m Li Ming. Summer holiday is coming. I have a reading plan. I’m going to read three books. I’m going to read for an hour every day. I’m going to read some picture books. I also have a travel plan. I’m going to_______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 中华民族传统文化博大精深，源远流长。请根据思维导图，用英语介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日，并阐述原因。 (Spring Festival,  Dragon Boat Festival,  Mid-Autumn Festival,  Double Ninth Festival... ) 要求：(1) 所写内容需包含上图所提示的信息，可适当补充。 (2) 条理清晰，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。 (3) 不少于6句话。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 请你仿照文段，介绍一下自己的假期计划。 I’m going to Hainan with my parents this winter vacation. We will go there by plane. We will stay there for two weeks. We are going to swim in the sea. We will also enjoy seafood there. I’m going to buy some gifts for my friends. We will have a lot of fun there.                                                                      My Winter Vacation ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案及解析 第 1 页 共 6 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【题型一】 （一）范文： My favourite hobby My favourite hobby is reading. I like reading all kinds of books, such as storybooks and science books. Reading makes me learn a lot of knowledge. It also helps me relax after a busy day. Every evening, I spend half an hour reading. It’s really enjoyable. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题要求以My favourite hobby为题，写一篇短文，介绍自己最喜欢的爱好。注意句子时态为一般现在时。不少于5句话。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：read阅读，storybooks故事书，science book科学书，learn学习，relax放松，enjoyable令人享受的 参考句型：My favourite hobby is…；I like…；Reading makes me…；It also helps me…；Every evening, I spend…；It’s really… （二）范文：                   My feelings in a day Today is a busy day, and my feelings change a lot. In the morning, I feel worried because I can’t find my English book. I look everywhere, but it’s not in my schoolbag. “Don’t worry. Let me help you,” says my mom. Finally, we find it under the sofa. I feel happy again! At school, our teacher tells us we will have a picnic tomorrow. Wow, I’m so excited! I can’t wait to play with my friends. In the afternoon, my best friend Lily is sad. She loses her favorite pencil. I say, “Don’t cry. Let’s look for it together.” We find it in the classroom. Lily smiles, and I feel happy too. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My feelings in a day”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述一天中不同时刻的心情变化，说明原因并写下自己的感受。注意文章主要为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：busy忙碌的，worried担心的，happy高兴的，excited兴奋的，sad伤心的 参考句型：Today is …；In the morning, I feel …；Finally, we …； Wow, I’m so …；I can’t wait to ... （三）范文： A Traditional Chinese Hobby I Like My favourite traditional Chinese hobby is calligraphy. I practice writing Chinese characters with a brush every evening. My teacher says calligraphy is an important part of Chinese culture—it shows beauty and patience. I like writing the character “福” best, because it means happiness for my family. When I write, I feel calm and happy. I am proud to learn this traditional skill! 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“A Traditional Chinese Hobby I Like”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述这项爱好是什么；你如何练习它；它蕴含的传统文化意义；它给你带来的感受。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：calligraphy书法，practice练习，Chinese characters汉字，patience耐心，happiness幸福，calm平静的，skill技能 参考句型：My favourite traditional Chinese hobby is …； My teacher says …；I like …； When I ..., I feel …；I am proud to ... （四）例文： My Favourite Traditional Story My favourite traditional story is Mulan. Mulan is brave. She takes her father’s place to fight. She is also kind, always caring for her family. I love how she shows courage and love for her family. It teaches me to be brave and responsible. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己最喜欢的一个传统故事。阐述故事名称，喜欢的原因以及故事中体现的传统美德。注意文章为一般现在时并要符合单词数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：brave勇敢的，fight战斗，kind友善的，responsible有责任的 参考句型：Mulan is…；She is…；It teaches me… （五）范文：     Hello, I’m Li Ming. Summer holiday is coming. I have a reading plan. I’m going to read three books. I’m going to read for an hour every day. I’m going to read some picture books. I also have a travel plan. I’m going to go to Shanghai. I will go there in July. I will go there by plane. I will stay there for seven days. I will visit museums. I will have a good time. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的暑假计划。阐述读书计划和旅游计划。注意文章为一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：July七月，plane飞机，museums博物馆 参考句型：I’m going to…；I will… （六）范文： 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己最喜欢的节日。具体阐述该节日的月份，吃的东西和活动。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：the Spring Festival春节；January一月；February二月；delicious美味的；relatives亲戚；dinner晚餐；lucky money压岁钱 参考句型： There are…； I like…； It is…； The weather is…； We eat/buy/visit/have…；Children can… （七）例： My Winter Vacation I’m going to Hangzhou with my parents this winter vacation. We will go there by plane. We will stay there for a week. We’ll see the West Lake. We will also drink Longjing Tea. I’m going to buy some gifts for my friends. Our trip in Hangzhou will be wonderful. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求仿照文段，介绍一下自己的假期计划。然后再阐述要去哪，和谁一起，怎么去，待多久，要做什么。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：Hangzhou杭州，by plane乘飞机，the West Lake西湖，Longjing Tea龙井茶，wonderful极好的 j参考句型：I’m going to …；We will … $