Unit 1 Past and present 说明文（城镇过去与现在的变化）（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版八年级下册

本讲义聚焦“城镇过去与现在的变化”这一核心写作知识点，系统梳理介绍类说明文的写作脉络，从话题解读明确中考定位，到审题指导构建“过去-现在”对比逻辑，再通过写作框架表格提供开头（现在完成时总述）、中间（分维度对比时态运用）、结尾（总结影响）的学习支架，辅以词汇句型模板助力学生掌握对比结构与时态准确运用。 该资料以核心素养为设计亮点，语言能力层面精选住房交通等话题词汇及对比句型，帮助学生规范表达，思维品质层面通过分维度对比培养逻辑条理，学习能力层面结合江苏中考考情分析与5道变式训练题实现迁移应用。课中辅助教师高效授课，课后学生可借助范文和训练查漏补缺，提升写作综合能力。

Unit 1 Past and present 同步写作课讲义-译林版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 1. 核心话题：介绍城镇过去与现在的变化（以Sunshine Town为例，可迁移至家乡、社区等场景） 2. 写作要求：① 能准确运用一般过去时描述城镇过去的状况，一般现在时/现在完成时描述现在的变化；② 条理清晰，可从住房、交通、人才发展等至少3个维度展开；③ 语言通顺，恰当使用连接词，逻辑连贯；④ 字数要求：80-120词（符合初中同步写作常规要求） 3. 中考定位：本话题属于“介绍类说明文”，是中考高频写作话题之一，常以“介绍家乡的变化”“我们社区的发展”等形式命题，核心考查时态运用、对比写作逻辑及话题词汇运用能力。 ( 写作任务 ) 本单元的写作任务是围绕 “城镇变化” 这一核心主题，结合 Sunshine Town 的发展实例，对比描述某一地点（城镇、家乡、社区等）过去与现在的差异，清晰呈现其发展成果，表达对变化的看法与感受。 ( 审题指导 ) 本单元主要话题是城镇变化与发展，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为 “介绍家乡的变化”“我们社区的发展”“XX 地方的今昔对比” 等。命题内容以对比描述为主，要求根据提示或自身观察，有条理地记叙地点在不同时期的状况。写作时应注意对比逻辑的连贯性、时态的准确运用以及内容的全面性。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： What were the living conditions like in the past?（过去的生活条件如何？） How did people get around many years ago?（许多年前人们的出行方式是什么？） What was the employment or talent situation back then?（过去的就业或人才情况怎样？） What are the living conditions like now?（现在的生活条件如何？） How do people travel nowadays?（现在人们的出行方式是什么？） What changes have taken place in employment or public facilities?（就业或公共设施方面发生了哪些变化？） What has led to these changes?（是什么促成了这些变化？） 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头总述，用现在完成时引出话题，说明某地点在一段时间内发生了巨大变化。 ◆ 步骤二：正文采用 “过去 — 现在” 的对比结构，用一般过去时描述过去的状况，一般现在时描述现在的情况，分维度（如住房、交通、人才等）展开，恰当使用连接词增强逻辑。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结变化带来的影响（如生活水平提升、幸福感增强等），可简要说明变化的原因，升华主题。 ( 写作框架 ) 写作目标：通过对比描述城镇过去与现在的差异，清晰呈现城镇发展变化，培养学生的逻辑思维和时态运用能力，掌握介绍类说明文的写作思路。 写作框架梳理（表格形式）： 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 引出话题，总述城镇在一段时间内发生了巨大变化 现在完成时 Over the last... years, Many changes have taken place in..., Great changes have happened in... 中间（分述） 分维度对比过去与现在：① 住房条件；② 交通方式；③ 人才流动/就业情况（可补充生活设施等其他维度） 过去状况：一般过去时；现在状况：一般现在时 In the past..., Today/Now..., Many years ago..., Now it is common to..., Back then..., However,... 结尾（总结） 总结变化带来的影响（生活条件改善、生活更幸福等），可简要说明变化原因 现在完成时/一般现在时 Thanks to..., The living conditions have improved a lot..., People are enjoying a happier life..., In short,... ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心话题词汇（住房相关）：old broken houses（破旧的老房子），modern houses（现代化的房子），flats（公寓），living conditions（生活条件） 2. 核心话题词汇（交通相关）：by bicycle（骑自行车），on foot（步行），take a bus（乘公交车），take a taxi（乘出租车），the underground（地铁），own cars（私家车），get around（出行、四处走动） 3. 核心话题词汇（人才/发展相关）：college students（大学生），knowledge and skills（知识和技能），local people（当地人），government（政府），citizens（公民），support（支持），hard work（努力） 4. 时态标志词：over the last 40 years（在过去的40年里，现完标志），in the past（在过去，一般过去时标志），many years ago（许多年前，一般过去时标志），today（现在，一般现在时标志） 5. 逻辑连接词：however（然而，表转折），moreover（此外，表递进），thanks to（由于，表原因） ( 句型积累 ) 1. 开头总述句式：① Many changes have taken place in... over the last... years. ② Great changes have happened in... during the past... years. ③ There have been great changes in... since... 2. 中间对比句式：① In the past, people lived in... Today, most people live in... ② Many years ago, people had to... Now it is common to... ③ Back then, some people... However, today many people... ④ Compared with the past, now people's life is much better in terms of... 3. 结尾总结句式：① Thanks to the support from... and the hard work of..., the living conditions in... have improved a lot. ② With these changes, people in... are enjoying a happier and more convenient life. ③ In short,... has developed rapidly, and people's lives have become better and better. ④ The changes in... not only bring... but also make... ( 谚语名句 ) 1. Change is the only constant in life.（变化是生活中唯一不变的东西。）—— 可用于开头引出变化话题 2. Development brings new hopes.（发展带来新希望。）—— 可用于结尾升华主题 ( 写作模板 ) Over the last ____ years, many changes have taken place in ____ (地点). In the past, people lived in ____ (过去的住房). They had to get around by ____ (过去的交通方式). Back then, some people ____ (过去的其他状况，如就业、生活设施等). Today, most people live in ____ (现在的住房). It is common to ____ (现在的交通方式). Moreover, ____ (现在的其他状况，如人才、设施等). However, today many ____ (对比过去的变化，如大学生回流等). Thanks to ____ (变化的原因，如政府支持、人们努力等), the living conditions in ____ (地点) have improved a lot. People are enjoying a happier life. ( 参考范文 ) Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a small town in the countryside, and it has changed a lot over the last 30 years. In the past, people lived in low and old houses with small windows. The streets were narrow and dirty, and there were few public facilities. Many years ago, people had to go to work or school by bike or on foot because there were no buses or taxis. Back then, most young people left for big cities after finishing high school to find better jobs. Today, great changes have taken place. Most families live in modern buildings with bright rooms and comfortable furniture. The streets are wide and clean, lined with green trees and beautiful flowers. Now it’s convenient to take a bus, and many families even have their own cars. Moreover, more and more college students return to our hometown after graduation. They bring new knowledge and skills to develop local industries, such as eco-tourism and fruit planting. Thanks to the government’s support and the hard work of all villagers, the living conditions in my hometown have improved greatly. People are enjoying a happier and more colorful life. I’m proud of the changes in my hometown and believe it will become more beautiful in the future. 【范文说明】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇说明文，围绕“城镇/家乡变化”主题，结合Sunshine Town的发展逻辑，描述家乡过去30年在住房、交通、人才流动等方面的变化，体现发展成果与生活改善。 2.写作指导：人称以第三人称为主；时态综合运用现在完成时（总述变化）、一般过去时（描述过去状况）和一般现在时（描述现在情况）。采用“总—分—总”三段式结构：第一步，开头总述家乡多年来发生巨大变化（第一段）；第二步，分维度对比过去与现在的住房、交通、人才情况，用连接词增强逻辑（第二段）；第三步，总结变化原因及影响，表达对家乡的自豪与期待（第三段）。写作中融入文本核心词汇与句型，符合初中同步写作要求。 ( 写作拓展 ) ( 考情分析 ) 江苏省近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2025年 苏州 介绍自制中国手工扇（含制作过程、扇面设计寓意、感受与愿望） 提示类 + 发言稿格式（给定核心要点，需补充细节） 无锡 面试发言推荐国内特色城市（面向免签政策下的外国游客，传播中华文化） 提示类 + 发言稿格式（结合流程图，任务导向明确） 2024年 南京 校园露营主题征文（需说明露营地点、携带物品及原因） 提示类 + 征文格式（杂志投稿要求，限定要点） 苏州 英文小说《Auggie’s Story》读后感（二选一标题，含指定主题方向） 提示类 + 读后感格式（限定文本背景，需结合阅读体验） 无锡 “走进社区” 志愿服务经历分享（描述过程、做法与收获） 提纲类（给定 “经历 — 做法 — 感受” 核心框架） 2023年 南京 分享一次克服困难的经历（说明应对方式与收获） 提示类 + 征文格式（校刊投稿要求，聚焦个人成长） 苏州 介绍坚持多年的兴趣爱好（说明爱好内容及带来的影响） 提示类（开放细节补充，侧重个人体验表达） 无锡 介绍班级 “同伴互助学习” 活动（如小组讨论、错题分享） 提示类 + 投稿格式（学校英语报投稿，聚焦校园实践） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 【24-25八年级下·江苏扬州·期中】假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件， 请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。 To: Liming@netease.com From: Kevin@hotmail.com Subject: changes Dear Li Ming, Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time? And the May Day holiday is coming, do you have any plans for it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly, Kevin 注意事项： 2.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息； 4.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总次数。 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—GaoYou has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming （2） 【24-25八年级下·江苏镇江·期中】四月的镇江春意正浓，你居住在美国的阿姨Lily回来踏春，她非常惊讶于镇江的变化。假如你是她的侄子李明，请根据以下表格提示内容，以“Changes”为题向你的阿姨介绍你的家乡及你自己这些年的变化。 Changes in daily life Travelling: traditional travels→online travels Living conditions: small and old houses→flats/buildings Environment: … Changes in yourself Personalities: shy→confident Study: not work hard→love reading (1-2 reasons) Solutions (解决方法): ask teachers or friends for help→get help from some AI tools like DeepSeek (your feelings) 要求： 2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，需适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 3. 词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Changes Hello, Aunt Lily! Welcome back to Zhenjiang. Our hometown has changed a lot over the years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 【24-25八年级下·江苏常州·期中】为共绘“福地金坛  逍遥江南”文旅新画卷，我校特举办“云游金坛·笔尖乡情”主题征文大赛。诚邀你以李华的身份登录校园网参加征文比赛。 征文内容： 2. 讲述金坛城市变迁，可通过住房、交通、环境等切入点，展现城市发展中的文化传承与创新活力。 3. 推荐1-2处金坛特色景点及理由(如茅山Mount Mao、东方盐湖城 Oriental Salt Lake City、茅山森林世界 Maoshan Forest World、钱资湖 Qianzi Lake 等)。 注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 4.词数100左右。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Welcome to Jintan. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 【24-25八年级下·江苏盐城·期中】党的“二十大”提出了乡村振兴的伟大战略，假设你的家乡在政府的帮助下，坚持创建美丽新农村,近几年发生了巨大变化。请以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇短文，描述你的家乡从过去到现在的变化以及你对未来的期望。 注意: 2. 词数90左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 【24-25八年级下·江苏宿迁·期中】假如你是Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1. 房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2. 人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1. 喜欢读书，每周花6个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2. 空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 …… (自由发挥) 要求： 2. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 3. 必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 4. 词数在90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Amy, I am very happy to hear from you. Now I would like to tell you the great changes in my hometown and my hobbies. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Past and present 同步写作课讲义-译林版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 1. 核心话题：介绍城镇过去与现在的变化（以Sunshine Town为例，可迁移至家乡、社区等场景） 2. 写作要求：① 能准确运用一般过去时描述城镇过去的状况，一般现在时/现在完成时描述现在的变化；② 条理清晰，可从住房、交通、人才发展等至少3个维度展开；③ 语言通顺，恰当使用连接词，逻辑连贯；④ 字数要求：80-120词（符合初中同步写作常规要求） 3. 中考定位：本话题属于“介绍类说明文”，是中考高频写作话题之一，常以“介绍家乡的变化”“我们社区的发展”等形式命题，核心考查时态运用、对比写作逻辑及话题词汇运用能力。 ( 写作任务 ) 本单元的写作任务是围绕 “城镇变化” 这一核心主题，结合 Sunshine Town 的发展实例，对比描述某一地点（城镇、家乡、社区等）过去与现在的差异，清晰呈现其发展成果，表达对变化的看法与感受。 ( 审题指导 ) 本单元主要话题是城镇变化与发展，与本单元相关的写作题目可延伸为 “介绍家乡的变化”“我们社区的发展”“XX 地方的今昔对比” 等。命题内容以对比描述为主，要求根据提示或自身观察，有条理地记叙地点在不同时期的状况。写作时应注意对比逻辑的连贯性、时态的准确运用以及内容的全面性。 内容一般从以下几方面着手： What were the living conditions like in the past?（过去的生活条件如何？） How did people get around many years ago?（许多年前人们的出行方式是什么？） What was the employment or talent situation back then?（过去的就业或人才情况怎样？） What are the living conditions like now?（现在的生活条件如何？） How do people travel nowadays?（现在人们的出行方式是什么？） What changes have taken place in employment or public facilities?（就业或公共设施方面发生了哪些变化？） What has led to these changes?（是什么促成了这些变化？） 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：开头总述，用现在完成时引出话题，说明某地点在一段时间内发生了巨大变化。 ◆ 步骤二：正文采用 “过去 — 现在” 的对比结构，用一般过去时描述过去的状况，一般现在时描述现在的情况，分维度（如住房、交通、人才等）展开，恰当使用连接词增强逻辑。 ◆ 步骤三：结尾总结变化带来的影响（如生活水平提升、幸福感增强等），可简要说明变化的原因，升华主题。 ( 写作框架 ) 写作目标：通过对比描述城镇过去与现在的差异，清晰呈现城镇发展变化，培养学生的逻辑思维和时态运用能力，掌握介绍类说明文的写作思路。 写作框架梳理（表格形式）： 写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语 开头（总起） 引出话题，总述城镇在一段时间内发生了巨大变化 现在完成时 Over the last... years, Many changes have taken place in..., Great changes have happened in... 中间（分述） 分维度对比过去与现在：① 住房条件；② 交通方式；③ 人才流动/就业情况（可补充生活设施等其他维度） 过去状况：一般过去时；现在状况：一般现在时 In the past..., Today/Now..., Many years ago..., Now it is common to..., Back then..., However,... 结尾（总结） 总结变化带来的影响（生活条件改善、生活更幸福等），可简要说明变化原因 现在完成时/一般现在时 Thanks to..., The living conditions have improved a lot..., People are enjoying a happier life..., In short,... ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心话题词汇（住房相关）：old broken houses（破旧的老房子），modern houses（现代化的房子），flats（公寓），living conditions（生活条件） 2. 核心话题词汇（交通相关）：by bicycle（骑自行车），on foot（步行），take a bus（乘公交车），take a taxi（乘出租车），the underground（地铁），own cars（私家车），get around（出行、四处走动） 3. 核心话题词汇（人才/发展相关）：college students（大学生），knowledge and skills（知识和技能），local people（当地人），government（政府），citizens（公民），support（支持），hard work（努力） 4. 时态标志词：over the last 40 years（在过去的40年里，现完标志），in the past（在过去，一般过去时标志），many years ago（许多年前，一般过去时标志），today（现在，一般现在时标志） 5. 逻辑连接词：however（然而，表转折），moreover（此外，表递进），thanks to（由于，表原因） ( 句型积累 ) 1. 开头总述句式：① Many changes have taken place in... over the last... years. ② Great changes have happened in... during the past... years. ③ There have been great changes in... since... 2. 中间对比句式：① In the past, people lived in... Today, most people live in... ② Many years ago, people had to... Now it is common to... ③ Back then, some people... However, today many people... ④ Compared with the past, now people's life is much better in terms of... 3. 结尾总结句式：① Thanks to the support from... and the hard work of..., the living conditions in... have improved a lot. ② With these changes, people in... are enjoying a happier and more convenient life. ③ In short,... has developed rapidly, and people's lives have become better and better. ④ The changes in... not only bring... but also make... ( 谚语名句 ) 1. Change is the only constant in life.（变化是生活中唯一不变的东西。）—— 可用于开头引出变化话题 2. Development brings new hopes.（发展带来新希望。）—— 可用于结尾升华主题 ( 写作模板 ) Over the last ____ years, many changes have taken place in ____ (地点). In the past, people lived in ____ (过去的住房). They had to get around by ____ (过去的交通方式). Back then, some people ____ (过去的其他状况，如就业、生活设施等). Today, most people live in ____ (现在的住房). It is common to ____ (现在的交通方式). Moreover, ____ (现在的其他状况，如人才、设施等). However, today many ____ (对比过去的变化，如大学生回流等). Thanks to ____ (变化的原因，如政府支持、人们努力等), the living conditions in ____ (地点) have improved a lot. People are enjoying a happier life. ( 参考范文 ) Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a small town in the countryside, and it has changed a lot over the last 30 years. In the past, people lived in low and old houses with small windows. The streets were narrow and dirty, and there were few public facilities. Many years ago, people had to go to work or school by bike or on foot because there were no buses or taxis. Back then, most young people left for big cities after finishing high school to find better jobs. Today, great changes have taken place. Most families live in modern buildings with bright rooms and comfortable furniture. The streets are wide and clean, lined with green trees and beautiful flowers. Now it’s convenient to take a bus, and many families even have their own cars. Moreover, more and more college students return to our hometown after graduation. They bring new knowledge and skills to develop local industries, such as eco-tourism and fruit planting. Thanks to the government’s support and the hard work of all villagers, the living conditions in my hometown have improved greatly. People are enjoying a happier and more colorful life. I’m proud of the changes in my hometown and believe it will become more beautiful in the future. 【范文说明】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇说明文，围绕“城镇/家乡变化”主题，结合Sunshine Town的发展逻辑，描述家乡过去30年在住房、交通、人才流动等方面的变化，体现发展成果与生活改善。 2.写作指导：人称以第三人称为主；时态综合运用现在完成时（总述变化）、一般过去时（描述过去状况）和一般现在时（描述现在情况）。采用“总—分—总”三段式结构：第一步，开头总述家乡多年来发生巨大变化（第一段）；第二步，分维度对比过去与现在的住房、交通、人才情况，用连接词增强逻辑（第二段）；第三步，总结变化原因及影响，表达对家乡的自豪与期待（第三段）。写作中融入文本核心词汇与句型，符合初中同步写作要求。 ( 写作拓展 ) ( 考情分析 ) 江苏省近三年考情分析 年份 地区 话题 命题形式 2025年 苏州 介绍自制中国手工扇（含制作过程、扇面设计寓意、感受与愿望） 提示类 + 发言稿格式（给定核心要点，需补充细节） 无锡 面试发言推荐国内特色城市（面向免签政策下的外国游客，传播中华文化） 提示类 + 发言稿格式（结合流程图，任务导向明确） 2024年 南京 校园露营主题征文（需说明露营地点、携带物品及原因） 提示类 + 征文格式（杂志投稿要求，限定要点） 苏州 英文小说《Auggie’s Story》读后感（二选一标题，含指定主题方向） 提示类 + 读后感格式（限定文本背景，需结合阅读体验） 无锡 “走进社区” 志愿服务经历分享（描述过程、做法与收获） 提纲类（给定 “经历 — 做法 — 感受” 核心框架） 2023年 南京 分享一次克服困难的经历（说明应对方式与收获） 提示类 + 征文格式（校刊投稿要求，聚焦个人成长） 苏州 介绍坚持多年的兴趣爱好（说明爱好内容及带来的影响） 提示类（开放细节补充，侧重个人体验表达） 无锡 介绍班级 “同伴互助学习” 活动（如小组讨论、错题分享） 提示类 + 投稿格式（学校英语报投稿，聚焦校园实践） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 【24-25八年级下·江苏扬州·期中】假如你是李明，刚收到美国叔叔Kevin的电子邮件， 请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据邮件内容回一封电子邮件。 To: Liming@netease.com From: Kevin@hotmail.com Subject: changes Dear Li Ming, Haven’t seen you for a long time since we met last time. The world is changing fast. Are there many changes in our hometown? Have you changed a lot? You told me you have a new computer. What do you usually use it for? What do you often do in your free time? And the May Day holiday is coming, do you have any plans for it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours truly, Kevin 注意事项： 2.英文回信须涉及邮件中的内容，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等信息； 4.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总次数。 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—GaoYou has changed a lot over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Kevin, I’m very glad to hear from you. Our hometown—Caoyou has changed a lot over the years. Many new parks and tall buildings have been built. The roads are wider and cleaner. I’ve changed too. I’m taller and more outgoing. I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music. In my free time, I like playing basketball with friends. For the May Day holiday, I plan to visit the new science museum in the city. I hope to meet you soon. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据对方来信总结写作要点有：家乡的变化；自己的变化、新买电脑的用途、空闲时间的活动；假期计划。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写家乡的变化； 第二步，描述自己的变化、新买电脑的用途、空闲时间的活动； 第三步，描写五一假期计划。 [亮点词汇] ①study online在网上学习 ②listen to music听音乐 ③plan to do sth计划做某事 [高分句型] I usually use my new computer to study online and listen to music.（动词不定式作状语） （2） 【24-25八年级下·江苏镇江·期中】四月的镇江春意正浓，你居住在美国的阿姨Lily回来踏春，她非常惊讶于镇江的变化。假如你是她的侄子李明，请根据以下表格提示内容，以“Changes”为题向你的阿姨介绍你的家乡及你自己这些年的变化。 Changes in daily life Travelling: traditional travels→online travels Living conditions: small and old houses→flats/buildings Environment: … Changes in yourself Personalities: shy→confident Study: not work hard→love reading (1-2 reasons) Solutions (解决方法): ask teachers or friends for help→get help from some AI tools like DeepSeek (your feelings) 要求： 2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，需适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 3. 词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 4. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Changes Hello, Aunt Lily! Welcome back to Zhenjiang. Our hometown has changed a lot over the years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Hello, Aunt Lily! Welcome back to Zhenjiang. Our hometown has changed a lot over the years. In daily life, we now travel online instead of going on traditional trips. Our living conditions have improved from small and old houses to modern flats and buildings. The environment has become cleaner and greener.   I used to be shy, but now I’m more confident. I didn’t work hard at school, but now I love reading because it helps me learn new things and understand the world better. In the past, when you encountered problems, you would seek help from your teachers or friends. Now, you can use AI tools like DeepSeek to solve your problems. These changes make our lives better and more convenient. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“现在完成时”、“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，另起一段； 第二步：从出行、居住环境以及周围环境三方面介绍日常生活的改变； 第三步：介绍自己性格和学习上的改变以及解决问题方法的改变； 第四步：介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of而不是 ②become cleaner and greener变得更清洁更环保 ③work hard努力学习 ④In the past在过去 ⑤seek help from向……寻求帮助 [高分句型] ①I didn’t work hard at school, but now I love reading because it helps me learn new things and understand the world better. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②In the past, when you encountered problems, you would seek help from your teachers or friends. (when引导的时间状语从句) （3） 【24-25八年级下·江苏常州·期中】为共绘“福地金坛  逍遥江南”文旅新画卷，我校特举办“云游金坛·笔尖乡情”主题征文大赛。诚邀你以李华的身份登录校园网参加征文比赛。 征文内容： 2. 讲述金坛城市变迁，可通过住房、交通、环境等切入点，展现城市发展中的文化传承与创新活力。 3. 推荐1-2处金坛特色景点及理由(如茅山Mount Mao、东方盐湖城 Oriental Salt Lake City、茅山森林世界 Maoshan Forest World、钱资湖 Qianzi Lake 等)。 注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 4.词数100左右。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Welcome to Jintan. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Jintan. The roads here used to be old and narrow. There was garbage everywhere here. People lived in dilapidated houses. In the past, people could only travel by walking, riding bicycles, or taking buses. But now my hometown has changed a lot. The roads are wide. There are green trees on both sides of the road. The air is fresh. Most people have moved into new flats. Nowadays, almost every family has a private car. There are also many famous scenic spots here, such as Mount Mao, Oriental Salt Lake City, Maoshan Forest World, etc. Here you can visit the original natural landscape. If you come here, you are sure to fall in love with it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，根据提示，讲述金坛城市变迁； 第二步、推荐1-2处金坛特色景点及理由。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②scenic spots景点 ③fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①If you come here, you are sure to fall in love with it.(if引导条件状语从句) （4） 【24-25八年级下·江苏盐城·期中】党的“二十大”提出了乡村振兴的伟大战略，假设你的家乡在政府的帮助下，坚持创建美丽新农村,近几年发生了巨大变化。请以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇短文，描述你的家乡从过去到现在的变化以及你对未来的期望。 注意: 2. 词数90左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years. In the past, the roads were narrow and muddy. The houses were old and small. People mainly made a living by farming, and the living standards were low. However, with the support of the government, great changes have taken place. The narrow roads have been replaced by wide and clean ones. Many new tall buildings have been built. A large number of villagers have started their own businesses, and their incomes have increased significantly. What’s more, the environment has become much better with more trees and flowers planted everywhere. I am really proud of these changes. I hope my hometown will develop more rapidly in the future, and people will live a happier life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家乡过去的情况，包括房屋和道路等情况； 第二步，介绍现在家乡的情况，包括居住环境、生活状况； 第三步，表达自己对家乡将来的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①with the support of在……的支持下 ②take place发生 ③be proud of 为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] ①A large number of villagers have started their own businesses, and their incomes have increased significantly.（and连接的句子） ②I hope my hometown will develop more rapidly in the future, and people will live a happier life.（宾语从句） （5） 【24-25八年级下·江苏宿迁·期中】假如你是Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1. 房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2. 人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1. 喜欢读书，每周花6个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2. 空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 …… (自由发挥) 要求： 2. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 3. 必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 4. 词数在90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Amy, I am very happy to hear from you. Now I would like to tell you the great changes in my hometown and my hobbies. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony 【答案】例文 Dear Amy, I am very happy to hear from you. Now I would like to tell you the great changes in my hometown and my hobbies. My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. In the past, people lived in small and old houses, and the roads were dirty and narrow. Pollution was serious, and most people traveled by bike or bus. Communication mainly depended on writing letters. But now, tall new apartments have risen everywhere like mushrooms. The environment has greatly improved—streets are clean, trees are green, and new parks let people relax. Subways make traveling faster, and the Internet has become the main way to communicate. Life is much more convenient and colorful! In my free time, I love reading. I spend about six hours a week reading books that I borrow from the library. Reading not only increases my knowledge but also opens my mind to the world. I also enjoy traveling. During trips, I taste local food and experience different cultures. This May Day, I’m planning a trip to Shanghai Disneyland, where I’ll enjoy thrilling rides and meet my favorite cartoon characters! I feel proud of my hometown’s development and enjoy my colorful life. I’m looking forward to your visit! Yours, Tony 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明邮件主题，引出家乡变化和个人爱好的介绍； 第二步，对比家乡过去与现在的变化，突出发展带来的生活改善； 第三步，介绍个人课余生活，突出阅读和旅游的爱好及意义； 第四步，表达对家乡发展的自豪和对生活的热爱，期待表妹来访。 [亮点词汇] ①not only … but also 不但……而且…… ②depend on 依靠 [高分句型] ①I spend about six hours a week reading books that I borrow from the library. (that引导的定语从句) ②Pollution was serious, and most people traveled by bike or bus. (and连接的并列句) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $