写作专练(七)(八)-【红对勾讲与练·练习手册】2026年高考英语大一轮复习全新方案通用版（北师大版）

班级： 姓名： 写作专练（七） (总分：40分) I.应用文写作（共15分） 得分 it was time for her to use her voice. (2024·福建厦门模拟) “Maggie?"”Mr Murphy smiled.“You want a turn?” 假定你是李华，你参加了外教Adam的英语戏剧 “Yes,”she said. 选修课后，发现剧本选择和时间安排存在问题。请你 The class whispered.Maggie leading a team? 给Adam写封邮件，内容包括： “Yes,”she answered again,louder this time.. 1.说明问题； Mr Murphy waved Maggie to the front,where the 2.提出建议。 other three captains-Champion of Jumping Rope, 注意： Champion of Never Misses a Shot,and Champion of 1.写作词数应为80左右； Doesn't Know How to Lose-stood,ready to choose 2.请按如下格式作答。 their teams. Dear Adam, “Maggie,you get first pick,”said Mr Murphy. "Jasmine,"announced Maggie.The class snickered.A joke?More than once,Jasmine had tried to score on the wrong basket.Eyes wide,Jasmine took her place beside Maggie.The other three captains called out familiar Yours sincerely, names-the best players on the basketball court.It was Li Hua Maggie's turn again.“I choose Frank.”Frank Ⅱ.读后续写（共25分） 得分 (Champion of the Untied Shoelace)could not throw, (2024·山东济宁模拟) or catch.He knew what it felt like to be the last pick. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续 But not today. 写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Three very talented teams took shape.And then The Champion of No Score there was Maggie's team.Maggie looked at her Maggie hated Tuesdays-Tuesdays meant gym teammates.There stood Jasmine and Frank,plus Gillian class,gym class meant picking teams and picking teams Champion of Chatter )and George (Champion meant Maggie would be picked last. of Sleepy)."I have chosen the worst team in the history As a newcomer,she'd come up with a special title for of the world,"Maggie thought to herself. each classmate to remember the other kids.There was 注意： Kevin,Champion of the Clean Desk.Lynnie,Champion of 1.续写词数应为150左右； Knowing the Answer First...Thinking hard,she finally 2.请按如下格式作答。 decided her own title:Champion of Quiet. Hand in hand,the Maggie team walked onto the court. Maggie felt blue as Tuesday fell again.Mr Murphy,the gym teacher,asked for volunteer captains to pick their own basketball teams.The usual hands shot into the air.Maggie sighed and glanced to her right.She They did lose big,but something positive began to caught the eye of Jasmine,Champion of Awkward,a unfold in them. girl who was sometimes picked last,too.Then Maggie had an idea.So when Mr Murphy asked if anyone else wanted to volunteer,Maggie felt her hand slowly rise. Looking again at Jasmine,she took a big breath.Maybe (横线下方不可作答) 435 写作专练 班级： 姓名： 写作专练（八） (总分：40分)》 I.应用文写作（共15分） 得分 arguments.So that's what he did with Devon most of the (2024·云南、吉林、黑龙江、安徽四省联考) time-just ignored him.It almost always worked. 你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线 "I don't like the way that Devon talks after 上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内 soccer,"Nicholas said.Luis looked up from his book. 容包括： They took the same bus after school. 1.音乐会的特点； “What do you mean??”he asked as Nicholas sat 2.观看感受； down. 3.意见和建议。 “He's always yelling at people and bragging(吹 注意： 嘘)about himself.”Luis nodded.That was true.“It 1.写作词数应为80左右； isn't right,"Nicholas continued."It makes soccer less 2.请按如下格式作答。 fun.I want to tell him that he can't play with us This online concert is absolutely fantastic. anymore.I already talked to all the other guys and they all agreed with me,"Nicholas said.His eyes were set in determination. The bus started to slow down for Nicholas'stop. Nicholas stood up,swinging his backpack back onto his Ⅱ.读后续写（共25分）》 得分 shoulder.Luis watched as Nicholas ran off the bus. (2025·浙南名校联盟联考) Although everyone had been getting a bit sick of Devon 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续 ruining soccer for a while,shutting him out seemed too 写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 extreme.He spent the rest of the ride trying to figure out Luis scanned the field.The soccer ball was tucked what he should do. (between his feet.He searched and searched 注意： until...there!His friend Nicholas was wide open.He 1.续写词数应为150左右； passed the ball to Nicholas.Nicholas trapped the ball 2.请按如下格式作答。 and swung his leg back,kicked,and... The next day Luis asked Devon if he could talk with GOAL!!!Luis leaped up and down,celebrating. him. Just then,Devon walked up,his face twisted in anger. Devon had started playing soccer during breaks with them a few weeks ago.He was a nice enough guy when he felt like things in the game had gone his way.But when he felt like they hadn't,watch out. Devon kept playing soccer with them for the rest of “Why didn't you pass the ball to me,Luis?” the school year. Devon shouted. "Guy,you weren't open.It's just that simple," Luis responded. "I'm fast though!"Devon protested,his voice still loud and angry. Luis ignored him.He didn't like being dragged into 红对勾·讲与练 436 高三英语BS ■写作专练（五） I.应用文写作 【范文赏读】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua,a student from Xinhua High School.Leaming from the Internet that you need volunteers for a tea culture exha即g哭acvi攻（现在分词短语作状语， that写引导宾语从句)，IT'm writing to apply for(申请)this position. In the grand event,guests from various areas will explore a range of(一系 tea cultures to promote multilateral exchanges and cooperation.I feel this position is specially tailored for(量身打 )me.To start with,I have learned a lot about tea culture,from its processing, preserving,to drinking.Additionally,I have a good command of(精通)English and know how to communicate ppropriate(特殊疑问词+todo). Your timely reply will be highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写 【范文赏读】 With these tools,Michael started to work.It was freezing cold and the wind sung(刺痛)Michacl'sace(无灵主语 )Fortunately,he didn't have to wet his hands while washing the cars（省略句)， otherwise,he wouldn't have made it in such a harsh situation.As he was spreading soap over the wheels,Greg came to help. He grabbed the towel and started to dry the cag[动作链]，which sped up the washing a lot.One car after another,Michael started to feel the warmth sweeping over his body (现在分词短语作宾补)and sweat even hung over his forehead with the last car done.Michael and Greg came back to the house and Michael counted the bills To Michael's surprise,he found he earned more money than expected.Then Greg asked,"Do you have enough for that field trip?"“Yeah.”Michael smiled and a better idea struck him(无灵主语句). Michael winked at(向…眨眼）)Greg. "I think the money is enough for both of us this year！”Greg couldn't believe his ears and opened his eyes wide[神态描 写].“You mean the two of us for the field trip?"he asked with his jaw dropping (with复合结构).“Yep!”Michacl said with a proud voice.The brothers were wild with joy（欣喜若狂)，for they could finally enjoy a field trip together,which would witness the love of the two brothers. 写作专练（六） I.应用文写作 【范文赏读】 Dear Harry. I am writing to invite you to join our school's English Club as a volunteer for our English speaking practice activities. The activity features small group discussions,role-playing,and language games to help students improve their oral English skills in a fun and interactive way (动词不定式作自的状语)：As for the qualification,we are looking for students who are fluent in(熟练掌握)English enthusiastic about对热情洋造】 helping others and willing to commit time 0(花时间做 ）the club activities (who引导定语从句). As a volunteer,the role will include leading group discussions, organizing language games and providing feedback to students.Your presence and support will greatly benefit our members, which will contribute to(有助于，促成)he success of the activities Your friendly personality will make you a perfect fit for this role.Looking forward to your positive response! Yours, Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写 【范文赏读】 At recess the next day,I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game.I hated the nickname "Germy",but seeing him isolated(动名词短语作主语）was also not what I wanted.Guilt pushed me to him.“What do you want,Gery??”Del asked,his voice sounding more hurt than an双（独立主格结构）.I uttered(说 讲)the whole thing.“T'm sorry.I wish I had never said that,I apologized. Annoyance and surprise flickered across his face.But seconds later,he lowered his head and said quietly,"It's okay.I guess I wasn't very nice to you,either."His words soothed me,but I could feel he was still sad. Now that Del had forgiven me,I decided to do more before the recess was over.I stood up and shouted to the other kids[动作链j,“Guys,come here!Lets play kickball together!"Some of them hesitated,but they eventually joined us. Del was smiling again and so were we.As we played,I realized that Del wasn't as bad as I thought he was[心理描写].He was just a normal kid who wanted to have fun and be accepted by others.From then on,whenever someone tried to start a rumor about him(让步状语从句)，i would stand up for him and tell them the truth about Del.We became good friends. -509- and I leamed an important lesson about judging people 写作专练（七） I.应用文写作 【范文赏读】 Dear Adam, Hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua,writing to share some concemns regarding our English drama elective class. It has come to my attention that the choice of scripts may not be engaging enough for all students,and the timing seems to conflict wit地与冲突) other important school activities(it作形式 主语；that从句是真正的主语，该从句中 含有and连接的两个并列句).To address these problems,it is better to hold a meeting to discuss how we can choose suitable seripts and the appropriate time (how引停宾语从句) Should it be possible（倒装句)，I truly hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写 【范文赏读】 Hand in hand,the Maggie team walked onto the court.The other teams looked at them with scornful(轻蔑的，鄙 视的)smiles,assuming(认为)that the game would be a quick and easy victory. As the game began,Maggie's team displayed a surprising lack of skill,but they played with heart and determination. Jasmine's awkward attempts at scoring drew laughter,but she persevered.Frank's untied shoelaces tripped him up repeatedly but he never gave炽[通过场景描写刻画 人物的拼搏精神].Gillian's chatter turned into encouraging shouts,and George's ee义eysi史[人物神态描写]with the excitement of the game.Hard as they tried(as引导让步状语从句引起的倒装 同)，they lost the game.. They did lose big,but something positive began to unfold in them.For the first time,they tasted the fulfillment 足感)and joy of being an integral(不可 或缺的)part of a team.They transformed from a group of individuals to a cohesive (有疑聚力的)unit,supporting and celebrating each other.As the final buzzer sounded,Maggie turned towards her team, beaming(喜笑颜开)with pride[神态描 写].“We are,indeed,the Champion of No Score！”she declared and her teammates erupted into cheers(爆发出欢 呼声).It enlightened(启迪)them that victory was not solely determined by the scoreboard,but about the journey and the spirit of teamwork(it作形式主语，that从 参考答案☑。 句是真正的主语；表语部分由not..but here are the results.According to the chart, 连接) 75.5 percent of the students do not have a 写作专练（八） clear direction for their future career, accounting for(占比)the majority of I.应用文写作 students.15 percent of students have never 【范文赏读】 considered their future career,and only This online concert is absolutely 9.5 percent of students have a clear fantastic.The performers from the two understanding of what they want to do in schools have done their best in entertaining the future(what写引导宾语从句)， the audience with one song after another Students are the future of a country. Their performances are undoubtedly of high No one will not feel heartbroken,facing 9 uality(beof+抽象名词)，which makes such a result.Everyone,including the concert almost no different from a live one(which引停非限制性定语从句)侧 teachers,parents of students,schools,and all sectors of society,should take action I enjoyed every second of the concert to(采取行动做某事)inspire students to and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing think about their future careers and have clear goals for their future.Only in this the traditional Chinese song“Liang Zhu” They performed the song in a way that way can students have motivations to learn touched my heart and gave me a feeling of and the country has hope(only位于句首 connection(that引亭定语从句，在从句中 修饰状语引起的倒装句) 作主语). Yours sincerely, Li Hua I hope there will be more Ⅱ.读后续写 opportunities in the future for us Chinese 【范文赏读】 students and our intemational friends to learn about and from each other. Just then a few young men noticed my Ⅱ.读后续写 struggle in the wheelchair and came to 【范文赏读】 help me.They carefully lifted me and my The next day Luis asked Devon if he wheelchair up the steps and onto the train.I could talk with him.Luis explained how thanked them profusely,tears of gratitude everyone enjoyed his contribution to the weig吧iyy(独立主格结构)： game,but his reactions when things didn't During the journey, I felt a mix of go his way were becoming a problem.Luis excitement and anxie女[情感描号].Ihad added,“The other guys said that i〔you never done something like this on my own before,but I was determined to reach keep yelling at them,then they want to shut you out. [语言描写]At first, home.When the train finally pulled into Devon's brows furrowed,but slowly,his my destination station,I took a deep breath expression softened[神态描写们ashe d wheeled myself off[动作链]，ead女 listened.At break that day,Luis hurried for the next part of my adventure(形容词 out onto the field,told Nicholas what he'd 短语作状语). told Devon and asked Nicholas to give When I finally arrived home,making Devon a chance. it indoors,Mum was shocked to see Devon kept playing soccer with them me.She couldn't believe that I had for the rest of the school year.He made an managed to make it home on my own.She effort to curb his temper(努力克制自己 hugged me tightly,tears streaming down 的脾气)and even started apologizing if he her face（独立主格结构).I told her about caught himself getting too aggressive( my journey and all the kind people who 现自己太咄咄逼人了).It wasn't perfect had helped me along the way.We spent a immediately,but everyone noticed the wonderful Christmas together,and I change.Gradually,Devon began to realized that even in the most difficult celebrate others'successes as much as his situations,there is always a way forward if own and his fits(一阵，突发)of anger you have the courage and determination. became rare.Luis felt proud of himself for That Christmas became a special memory, finding a way to include Devon[心理描 a reminder of my strength and the kindness ]And the games became more ftag(同位语). enjoyable for everyone involved. 写作专练（十） 写作专练（九） I.应用文写作 I.应用文写作 【范文赏读】 【范文赏读】 Should Children Be Paid Dear Ryan, to Do Housework? A survey on career planning for high Undoubtedly(毫无疑问)，this school students in China has been done and picture has reminded me of a phenomenon 2刈勾·讲与练·高三英语BS -510- that cannot be ignored(that写引导的定语从 句)：A lot of children need to be paid to do housework (作a phenomenon的间 位语). From my point of view(依我之 见)，children should not be misled to believe that everything always has a retum(不定式短语作补语，其中含有hat 引拿的宾语从句).instead,measures should be taken to encourage them to believe that housework itself can be the reward because it is not only a way to show their love to their families,but also helps them to become responsible persons in the future(不定式短语作补语，其中含 有that引导的宾语从句，该从句又含有 because引导的原因状语从句，而该原因 状语从句里含有not only..but also 结构)」 Ⅱ.读后续写 【范文赏读】 He had to make sure Mrs Smith was OK.Fern ran out of the storm cellar, ignoring the howling wind and flying debris(现在分词作状语).He ran towards Mrs Smith's house,heart pounding in his chest(独立主格结构).As he neared her home,he could see her door swinging open and a chair overtumed in the yard. With a surge of adrenaline,he pushed through the door and called out for her 作链].“MIrs Smith,are you here?”he shouted,his voice trembling(独立主格结 )The house was empty,but he spotted her in the backyard,strug毁eling to get u职 from the ground[场景描写].She had fallen and was unable to move due to her leg problems.Fern quickly ran to her side and helped her9[动作链j.“Let's go to my house,"he said,grabbing her arm and uiding her towards his backyard(现在分 词作状语). After what felt like hours,the tornado finally stopped.Fern and Mrs Smith emerged from the shelter of his backyard, blinking(眨眼)in the bright sunlight that had replaced the dark,stormy sky(现在 分词作状语，其中包括that引导的定语从 )The town of Oakville was in shambles,with trees down and houses damaged(with复合结构).But Fern felt a sense of relief and accomplishment as he looked at Mrs Smith standing beside him safe and unharmed(形容词短语作状语). He had done what he could to help his neighbor in need,and it had been worth it. He turned to Lucky,who was wagging his tail and jumping u吧and dowr(who写引拿 定语从句修饰Lucky),and gave him a big hug.“We did it,.boy,”he said, smiling.