内容正文:
班级:
姓名:
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same festive CD sound tracking our day.
(2024·山东青岛模拟)
The call came at 10 am that Friday.I was dressed
假定你是李华。外教老师Ryan正在做中美高中and packed,Christmas presents divided into carrier
生生涯规划的对比研究,你帮助他完成了你校学生未bags.I'd made sure the fridge in my shared student
来从业方向的调查(见下图)。请你给Ryan写一封邮kitchen was empty,everything eaten or chucked away,
件,内容包括:
and my live-in carer was leaving at lunchtime.
1.调查结果描述;
“We are not going to make it,”my mum said on
2.简单评论。
the phone."Ken was blanketed overnight,with up to
未来从业方向调查结果
20cm falling in three hours.We've crawled as far as
80.0%
75.5
Detling,but they've closed the motorway because it was
70.0%
60.0%
dusted in a thick layer of snow.There's no way we can
50.0%
get to you."I was stranded.
40.0%
30.0%
Alone in my student bedroom,I burst into tears.
20.0%
15%
"What am I going to do?"My life was different from that
10.0%
9.5%
0.00%
of other students.Without my carer,I had no one to help
很明确
不够明确
从未想过
me cook,wash and get into bed.My friends had already
注意:
left and the halls of residence were eerily(怪异地)quiet..
1.写作词数应为80左右;
Suddenly,a crazy idea came across my mind,
2.请按如下格式作答。
"How about going home independently using the
Dear Ryan,
wheelchair?"Anyway,I decided to have a try.After
calling multiple firms in the hope that their one
wheelchair-adapted vehicle was available,I was lucky
to get an accessible one to the train station.One hour
later,I arrived,but found myself stranded on the
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
bustling platform,feeling helplessly at the steps leading
up the train.
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注意:
(2024·广东惠州模拟)
1.续写词数应为150左右;
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续
2.请按如下格式作答
写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Just then a few young men noticed my struggle in
Stranded(困住)far from
the wheelchair and came to help me.
family,I refused to give up
The date had been circled on my calendar for
months-Friday 18 December.Mum was coming to pick
me up from university and bring me home for the
When I finally arrived home,making it indoors,
Christmas holidays.There was nothing that made me
Mum was shocked to see me.
happier than Christmas with my family.Our small
celebrations were the same every year.I could picture
it.Mum,my younger brother and I all dressed up and
opened presents on Christmas morning by the tree,the
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Fern fought panic and grabbed Lucky quickly.He
(2024·山东济宁模拟)
remembered what the TV weatherman had said:"If you
某英语网站正在开展以“Should Children Be Paid meet a tornado,head for the storm cellar(地窖)
to Do Housework?”为题的讨论。请你根据下图跟帖,
immediately.Lucky whined and struggled in Fern's
内容包括:
arms.“Steady,boy,”Fern said to Lucky.
As he reached the doorstep of the storm cellar,he
洗碗一次50元)
thought of Mrs Smith,the elderly neighbor next door.
Mrs Smith lived alone and moved slowly because of her
leg problems.Should he check on her?But what could
he do?It seemed unlikely that she could make it to the
storm cellar quickly enough.Plus,he wasn't even sure
if she wanted him around.She often scolded (
1.图片描述;
him because his dog,Lucky,would mess up her flower
2.简单评论。
gardens.But if there was a tornado,she didn't have a
注意:
basement or a storm cellar.Fern knew he couldn't just
1.写作词数应为80左右;
leave her there.
2.请按如下格式作答。
“Sorry,Lucky.”He set the shaking dog on the
Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?
steps in the storm cellar and let the door drop shut.
Lucky would be scared there by himself,but he'd be
safe.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
He had to make sure Mrs Smith was OK.
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得分
(2025·三湘名校教育联盟联考)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续
写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny afternoon in the small town of Oakville,
a young boy named Fern was playing soccer in his
backyard.His little dog,Lucky,cheerfully ran around
trying to catch the ball whenever Fern kicked it too far.
After what felt like hours,the tornado finally
The air was filled with laughter and barks,making it
stopped.
sound like a perfect day.
All of a sudden,the sky changed color,turning
dark gray.Fern noticed the wind picking up,and the
trees began to shake wildly.He looked towards the
horizon and saw a terrifying scene-a tornado
coming towards the town.
红对勾·讲与练
438
高三英语BS
■■句是真正的主语;表语部分由not..but
here are the results.According to the chart,
连接)
75.5 percent of the students do not have a
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clear direction for their future career,
accounting for(占比)the majority of
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students.15 percent of students have never
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considered their future career,and only
This online concert is absolutely
9.5 percent of students have a clear
fantastic.The performers from the two
understanding of what they want to do in
schools have done their best in entertaining
the future(what写引导宾语从句),
the audience with one song after another
Students are the future of a country.
Their performances are undoubtedly of high
No one will not feel heartbroken,facing
9 uality(beof+抽象名词),which makes
such a result.Everyone,including
the concert almost no different from a live
one(which引停非限制性定语从句)侧
teachers,parents of students,schools,and
all sectors of society,should take action
I enjoyed every second of the concert
to(采取行动做某事)inspire students to
and was particularly attracted when the
boys and girls from Britain started to sing
think about their future careers and have
clear goals for their future.Only in this
the traditional Chinese song“Liang Zhu”
They performed the song in a way that
way can students have motivations to learn
touched my heart and gave me a feeling of
and the country has hope(only位于句首
connection(that引亭定语从句,在从句中
修饰状语引起的倒装句)
作主语).
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I hope there will be more
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opportunities in the future for us Chinese
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students and our intemational friends to
learn about and from each other.
Just then a few young men noticed my
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struggle in the wheelchair and came to
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help me.They carefully lifted me and my
The next day Luis asked Devon if he
wheelchair up the steps and onto the train.I
could talk with him.Luis explained how
thanked them profusely,tears of gratitude
everyone enjoyed his contribution to the
weig吧iyy(独立主格结构):
game,but his reactions when things didn't
During the journey,
I felt a mix of
go his way were becoming a problem.Luis
excitement and anxie女[情感描号].Ihad
added,“The other guys said that i〔you
never done something like this on my own
before,but I was determined to reach
keep yelling at them,then they want to
shut you out.
[语言描写]At first,
home.When the train finally pulled into
Devon's brows furrowed,but slowly,his
my destination station,I took a deep breath
expression softened[神态描写们ashe
d wheeled myself off[动作链],ead女
listened.At break that day,Luis hurried
for the next part of my adventure(形容词
out onto the field,told Nicholas what he'd
短语作状语).
told Devon and asked Nicholas to give
When I finally arrived home,making
Devon a chance.
it indoors,Mum was shocked to see
Devon kept playing soccer with them
me.She couldn't believe that I had
for the rest of the school year.He made an
managed to make it home on my own.She
effort to curb his temper(努力克制自己
hugged me tightly,tears streaming down
的脾气)and even started apologizing if he
her face(独立主格结构).I told her about
caught himself getting too aggressive(
my journey and all the kind people who
现自己太咄咄逼人了).It wasn't perfect
had helped me along the way.We spent a
immediately,but everyone noticed the
wonderful Christmas together,and I
change.Gradually,Devon began
to
realized that even in the most difficult
celebrate others'successes as much as his
situations,there is always a way forward if
own and his fits(一阵,突发)of anger
you have the courage and determination.
became rare.Luis felt proud of himself for
That Christmas became a special memory,
finding a way to include Devon[心理描
a reminder of my strength and the kindness
]And the games became more
ftag(同位语).
enjoyable for everyone involved.
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Should Children Be Paid
Dear Ryan,
to Do Housework?
A survey on career planning for high
Undoubtedly(毫无疑问),this
school students in China has been done and picture has reminded me of a phenomenon
2刈勾·讲与练·高三英语BS
-510-
that cannot be ignored(that写引导的定语从
句):A lot of children need to be paid to
do housework
(作a phenomenon的间
位语).
From my point of view(依我之
见),children should not be misled
to believe that everything always has a
retum(不定式短语作补语,其中含有hat
引拿的宾语从句).instead,measures
should be taken to encourage them to
believe that housework itself can be the
reward because it is not only a way to
show their love to their families,but also
helps them to become responsible persons
in the future(不定式短语作补语,其中含
有that引导的宾语从句,该从句又含有
because引导的原因状语从句,而该原因
状语从句里含有not only..but also
结构)」
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He had to make sure Mrs Smith was
OK.Fern ran out of the storm cellar,
ignoring the howling wind and flying
debris(现在分词作状语).He ran towards
Mrs Smith's house,heart pounding in his
chest(独立主格结构).As he neared her
home,he could see her door swinging
open and a chair overtumed in the yard.
With a surge of adrenaline,he pushed
through the door and called out for her
作链].“MIrs Smith,are you here?”he
shouted,his voice trembling(独立主格结
)The house was empty,but he spotted
her in the backyard,strug毁eling to get u职
from the ground[场景描写].She had
fallen and was unable to move due to her
leg problems.Fern quickly ran to her side
and helped her9[动作链j.“Let's go to
my house,"he said,grabbing her arm and
uiding her towards his backyard(现在分
词作状语).
After what felt like hours,the tornado
finally stopped.Fern and Mrs Smith
emerged from the shelter of his backyard,
blinking(眨眼)in the bright sunlight that
had replaced the dark,stormy sky(现在
分词作状语,其中包括that引导的定语从
)The town of Oakville was in
shambles,with trees down and houses
damaged(with复合结构).But Fern felt a
sense of relief and accomplishment as he
looked at Mrs Smith standing beside him
safe and unharmed(形容词短语作状语).
He had done what he could to help his
neighbor in need,and it had been worth it.
He turned to Lucky,who was wagging his
tail and jumping u吧and dowr(who写引拿
定语从句修饰Lucky),and gave him a
big hug.“We did it,.boy,”he said,
smiling.