UNIT 3 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【精讲精练】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（外研版）

Section Ⅳ　Writing [对应学生用书P70] 关于发展变化的文章 关于发展变化的文章，其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。如果是记叙文，要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、过程和结局；如果是议论文，观点要明确，要分层次给出有力的论据并充分地进行论证；如果是说明文，要把现象的特征以及因果关系等描述清楚。具体写作步骤归纳如下： 1．描述已发生的变化； 2．简要分析产生变化的原因，并通过今昔对比描述这些变化带来的好处等； 3．写出对这些变化的评价与感受等。 第一部分：开门见山，引出话题。总述某处/某领域发生的变化。 ①With the widespread use of the Internet，people have a tendency to depend on it greatly. ②Thanks to the rapid development of modern science and technology，we are enjoying the convenience that/which used to be our dream. ③It is known to all that China has developed rapidly in recent decades. 第二部分：举例描述具体的变化。 ①We can have access to all the latest information with the click of a mouse. ②Because of the popularity of the new methods of online payment，there is no need for people to carry much cash with them. ③Traditional keys have brought us lots of inconvenience in daily life，while fingerprint door locks can save us the trouble of carrying keys.You only need to have your fingerprint scanned to open the door，which is quite easy，convenient and safe. ④One of the most obvious changes is the improvement of living standards. 第三部分：总结变化带来的影响或发表个人对变化的感慨或愿望。 ①All in all，the Internet gives us a platform to gain knowledge and contact others.We benefit a lot from the Internet. ②The changes，whose influence can be seen everywhere，show China is developing fast. ③In short/All in all/In brief/In conclusion/ In a word，I am quite satisfied with my life now. 假设你是红星中学学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你发邮件，想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1．居住环境的变化； 2．出行方式的变化； 3．对中国未来发展的期待。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter， I'm glad that you want to know the development in China in the recent 40 years. Yours， Li Hua [审题构思] 体裁 应用文 人称 以第一、三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主 内容 第一部分：描述已经发生的变化 第二部分：对这些变化的评价及感受 第三部分：点明人们对中国未来发展的期待，并发出邀请。 [遣词造句] 1．自从中国为国际合作创造机会，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 Since China opened the door to international cooperation，great changes have taken place in my hometown. 2．这些变化使我的家乡呈现出新的面貌。 These changes make my hometown take on a new look． 3．让我们以生活条件和交通为例。 Let's take the living conditions and transportation for example． 4．现在，人们住在配有供暖系统的大房子里。 Now，people live in large houses equipped with heating systems. 5．在这些大房子里，冬天的寒冷已成为过去。 In these large houses，the cold of winter has become a thing of the past． 6．希望有一天你能亲自来看看中国是什么样子的。 I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day. [句式升级] 7．用现在分词作状语的用法合并句1和句2 Since China opened the door to international cooperation，great changes have taken place in my hometown，making it take on a new look. 8．用定语从句的用法合并句4和句5 Now，people live in large houses equipped with heating systems，where the cold of winter has become a thing of the past. [连句成篇] One possible version： Dear Peter， I'm glad that you want to know the development in China in the recent 40 years.Since China opened the door to international cooperation，great changes have taken place in my hometown，making it take on a new look. Let's take the living conditions and transportation for example.40 years ago，most people in China lived in small houses.Now，people live in large houses equipped with heating systems，where the cold of winter has become a thing of the past.Bicycles used to be the main means of transport.Now private cars have become household items.The Chinese people enjoy the result of the latest science and technology development. I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $