Unit 3 Growing Up.（写作提升）-2024-2025学年八年级新教材英语下册基础知识专项讲练（新教材人教版）

Unit3 Growing Up. (写作提升） 写一封感谢信 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题是“写一封感谢信”，针对这一话题，我们可以围绕表达感谢的具体事件、阐述对方的帮助带来的积极影响以及抒发真挚情感展开写作。此类作文常以书信或便条的形式进行考查，文体常为应用文。人称多采用第一人称与第二人称，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，写作时应按照事情发展顺序或情感递进顺序叙述感谢的缘由与心意。本单元相关话题写作素材有： 　(1)Thank you for helping me to.谢谢你帮助我. 　(2)On that day, I..., and you helped me to ...那天,我……,你帮助我…… (3)You took the time to., although you were so busy.尽管您很忙，却仍抽出时间来.. 　(4)I couldn't. until.我无法..直到.. 　(5)I am very thankful because.我非常感激，因为. 　(6)When I..,you were there to.当我..，你在那里.. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 　(烟台中考改编)假定你是李华，在外教布朗先生的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛(English Opera Competition)中获得了一等奖。请给布朗先生写一封感谢信。主要内容包括： 　1.你面临的困难； 　2.布朗先生的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 　3.向布朗先生表示感谢。 要求： 　1.词数80左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）； 　2.应包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 　3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。 　Dear Mr Brown. ________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, 　　Li Hua ⭐思维导图⭐ ⭐范文介绍⭐ ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 ‌感谢表达‌ gratitude, appreciation, thankful, heartfelt thanks, kindness, support ‌帮助行为‌ help with, assist in, encourage, guide, teach, offer support, lend a hand ‌情感传递‌ moved, touched, impressed, grateful, unforgettable, meaningful ‌结果与影响‌ make progress, improve, regain confidence, achieve success, overcome fear 句型积累 闪亮篇首句 How time flies!时间过得真快啊！ I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。 How is your stay in...?您在······待着感觉怎么样？ I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。 I am writing to you because I want to thank you for your hospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。 I'm writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。 I am writing to you because...因为······,我给您写这封信。 I'm writing to thank you for your great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！ 出彩篇中句 Many thanks for your kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。 Thank you for your generous hospitality.多谢您的款待。 Thanks to your help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。 精彩篇尾句 I hope I can express my thanks to you in person.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。 I'm sincerely grateful for all your help.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。 Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。 Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。 I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．请你以张明的名义给英国笔友 Brian写一封感谢信。要点提示如下： 去年 你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。 在过去的一年里 Brian多次给你写信，他在信中： 鼓励你多交朋友； 告诉你学好英语的方法； 和你分享快乐。 你变得…… 最近，天津发生很大变化，你邀请他来天津游玩。 参考词汇：分享快乐 share happiness Dear Brian, How time flies! We have been friends for a year. I’m writing to thank you for your great help. Last year, _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope to see you soon! Yours, Zhang Ming 2．假设你叫Mary Brown，是一名在北京待了一年的美国交换生。现在你要回国了，请根据下面的内容要点写一封感谢信，表达你对在北京期间给过你帮助的老师、同学及朋友们的感激之情。 内容包括： 1．在老师和同学的帮助下，加入了学校社团，学到了很多东西。 2．游览了很多北京的名胜，品尝了很多美食，并了解了中国的历史和文化。 3．这是一次难忘的交流之旅。 写作要求： 1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear everyone, I really appreciate a lot what you have given me during the past year. _______________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you so much again. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Mary Brown 3．学习和生活的道路从来都不是一帆风顺的，你一定曾遇到过一些学习的问题或家人给与的压力等而感到焦虑，但幸运的是你的朋友都给与你帮助和建议，针对这些难忘的经历，请给你的朋友写一封感谢信。 要求：1．词数：80-120词左右；2．不能出现本人的真实姓名和班级等信息； 参考要点： 1．曾经的压力或焦虑(学习下降，父母争吵，人际关系差） 2．朋友给予的建议或帮助；3.感谢；4…… Dear Tom, I am so lucky to have a friend like you. _______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是外国语学校的学生李华，在外教Mr. Brown的帮助下，你的性格发生了很大变化，你变得积极开朗，并在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛 (English Opera Competition) 中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括： 1.对Mr. Brown表示感谢； 2.简述自己的变化； 3.简述Mr. Brown对你的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 4.邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求： 1.词数 100 左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3.信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．假设你叫 Tom，是一名在北京待了一年的英国交换生。现在你回国了，请根据下面的内容要点写一封感谢信，表达你对在你做交换生期间给过你帮助的老师、同学及朋友们的感激之情。 内容包括： 1.参加了学校俱乐部，学习了中国的历史和文化。 2.遇到困难时，老师和同学会来帮助你。 3.游览了北京的名胜古迹，品尝了当地美食， 4..你的感受。 要求：文章要包含以上内容，并做适当拓展。80词左右，开头结尾不算入数字。提示词：the Forbidden City (故宫). Peking Duck Dear teachers and classmates, I’m writing to express my thanks to you._____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Tom 6．假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。 你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你 父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你 你的决心 努力学习 你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐 参考词汇：感谢某人……thank sb. for ...    养育raise        做饭cook food 生病be sick            信任trust            关心care about 个人感受personal feelings    处于困难中be in trouble A Letter to My Parents Dear Mum and Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, _______________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是Linda，刚刚收到了美国朋友Tom的来信，得知他正忙于做志愿者。同时，他很想了解你的近况，请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的关心，并表达你也想当一名志愿者的愿望。 写作要点： 1. 对于他的关心表示感谢。 2. 介绍你的近况。 （1）每天在网上上课 （2）周末有时帮助父母做家务，如洗碗，扫地 （3）每天运动至少一个小时 3. 谈谈你想当一名志愿者的理由。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I’m happy to hear from you _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Linda 8．假如你是Han Meimei，请你给英国的笔友Lucy写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：四年前你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。四年中，Lucy多次给你写信鼓励你多交朋友；告诉你学好英语的方法；和你分享快乐……你变得……。近年来中国发生了很大变化，你邀请她来中国游玩。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，语言准确流畅，可适当发挥；书写规范，卷面整洁。 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 参考汇：happiness n. 快乐，幸福 Dear Lucy, How time flies! We have been friends for four years. I’m writing to thank you for your great help! Four years ago, __________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Han Meimei 9．注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名，校名，否则不得分。 假如你是李华，2025年将至，请给你的英语老师张老师写一份贺卡，祝她新年快乐、身体健康、万事如意。并感谢她对你在英语学习方面的帮助，表达你会努力学好英语的决心。 Dear Ms. Zhang, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10．假如你是Tom，进入九年级两个月以来，你觉得自己成长了许多，而这些成长和改变离不开陪伴你的老师，请给你的老师写一封信。 内容包括： 1)谈谈你在性格、学习、生活等方面的改变； 2)他/她给你的帮助； 3)表示感谢和真诚的祝福。 写作要求： 1)字数在80词左右，书写规范，卷面干净整洁； 2)包含表格中所有的要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 3)文中不得透露个人信息，不出现真实人名和校名。 Dear teacher, How time flies! It has been more than two months since I became a student in Grade 9. I have made great progress in many ways._______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit3 Growing Up. (写作提升） 写一封感谢信 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题是“写一封感谢信”，针对这一话题，我们可以围绕表达感谢的具体事件、阐述对方的帮助带来的积极影响以及抒发真挚情感展开写作。此类作文常以书信或便条的形式进行考查，文体常为应用文。人称多采用第一人称与第二人称，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，写作时应按照事情发展顺序或情感递进顺序叙述感谢的缘由与心意。本单元相关话题写作素材有： 　(1)Thank you for helping me to.谢谢你帮助我. 　(2)On that day, I..., and you helped me to ...那天,我……,你帮助我…… (3)You took the time to., although you were so busy.尽管您很忙，却仍抽出时间来.. 　(4)I couldn't. until.我无法..直到.. 　(5)I am very thankful because.我非常感激，因为. 　(6)When I..,you were there to.当我..，你在那里.. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 　(烟台中考改编)假定你是李华，在外教布朗先生的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛(English Opera Competition)中获得了一等奖。请给布朗先生写一封感谢信。主要内容包括： 　1.你面临的困难； 　2.布朗先生的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 　3.向布朗先生表示感谢。 要求： 　1.词数80左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）； 　2.应包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 　3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。 　Dear Mr Brown. ________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, 　　Li Hua ⭐思维导图⭐ ⭐范文介绍⭐ ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 ‌感谢表达‌ gratitude, appreciation, thankful, heartfelt thanks, kindness, support ‌帮助行为‌ help with, assist in, encourage, guide, teach, offer support, lend a hand ‌情感传递‌ moved, touched, impressed, grateful, unforgettable, meaningful ‌结果与影响‌ make progress, improve, regain confidence, achieve success, overcome fear 句型积累 闪亮篇首句 How time flies!时间过得真快啊！ I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。 How is your stay in...?您在······待着感觉怎么样？ I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。 I am writing to you because I want to thank you for your hospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。 I'm writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。 I am writing to you because...因为······,我给您写这封信。 I'm writing to thank you for your great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！ 出彩篇中句 Many thanks for your kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。 Thank you for your generous hospitality.多谢您的款待。 Thanks to your help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。 精彩篇尾句 I hope I can express my thanks to you in person.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。 I'm sincerely grateful for all your help.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。 Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。 Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。 I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．请你以张明的名义给英国笔友 Brian写一封感谢信。要点提示如下： 去年 你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。 在过去的一年里 Brian多次给你写信，他在信中： 鼓励你多交朋友； 告诉你学好英语的方法； 和你分享快乐。 你变得…… 最近，天津发生很大变化，你邀请他来天津游玩。 参考词汇：分享快乐 share happiness Dear Brian, How time flies! We have been friends for a year. I’m writing to thank you for your great help. Last year, _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope to see you soon! Yours, Zhang Ming 【答案】 Dear Brian, How time flies! We have been friends for a year. I’m writing to thank you for your great help. Last year, I came to a new class. Without friends, I felt very lonely. In the past year, you wrote to me many times. In your letters, you encouraged me to make more friends, told me ways to learn English well, and shared happiness with me. With your help, I’ve become outgoing and made many good friends. Recently, Tianjin has changed a lot. I sincerely invite you to visit Tianjin. Hope to see you soon! Yours, Zhang Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信类应用文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，结合“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：以“时光飞逝，致谢帮助”开篇，点明写信目的； 第二步：详细说明通过书信在各方面的帮助，以及自身由此产生的积极变化； 第三步：提及天津近期变化，发出游玩邀请，结尾表达期待相见的心情。 [亮点词汇] ①sincerely真诚地 ②outgoing外向的 ③share happiness分享快乐 [高分句型] ①How time flies! We have been friends for a year. I’m writing to thank you for your great help. (感叹句+现在完成时) ②With your help, I’ve become outgoing and made many good friends. (with one’s help短语) 2．假设你叫Mary Brown，是一名在北京待了一年的美国交换生。现在你要回国了，请根据下面的内容要点写一封感谢信，表达你对在北京期间给过你帮助的老师、同学及朋友们的感激之情。 内容包括： 1．在老师和同学的帮助下，加入了学校社团，学到了很多东西。 2．游览了很多北京的名胜，品尝了很多美食，并了解了中国的历史和文化。 3．这是一次难忘的交流之旅。 写作要求： 1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear everyone, I really appreciate a lot what you have given me during the past year. _______________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you so much again. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Mary Brown 【答案】 Dear everyone, I really appreciate a lot what you have given me during the past year. I have been here for a year. As you know, I am an exchange student. Everything is strange to me at first. Thanks to your help, I have learnt a lot. In the past year, I have been in the school club. I have learnt a lot from others like Chinese painting, Chinese kung fu and tai chi. I’m very grateful that you always came to help me when I had trouble. And I have been to many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, Tian’anmen Square and so on. Besides, I have tasted the delicious food. China is a country with a long history and rich culture, so I feel lucky to have the chance to know and learn about it. I will never forget my experiences, and I will always remember every one of you. Thank you so much again. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Mary Brown 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信； ②时态：时态是一般现在时，现在完成时以及一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接表达你对在北京期间给过你帮助的老师、同学及朋友们的感激之情。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“在老师和同学的帮助下完成的事情”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达感受，再次表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①As you know众所周知 ②at first起初 ③Thanks to多亏 ④a lot许多 ⑤places of interest风景名胜 ⑥and so on等等 ⑦have the chance to do sth有机会做某事 ⑧learn about了解 [高分句型] ①I really appreciate a lot what you have given me during the past year. (what引导的宾语从句) ②I’m very grateful that you always came to help me when I had trouble. (that引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句) ③China is a country with a long history and rich culture, so I feel lucky to have the chance to know and learn about it. (so引导的结果状语从句) ④I will never forget my experiences, and I will always remember every one of you. (并列句) 3．学习和生活的道路从来都不是一帆风顺的，你一定曾遇到过一些学习的问题或家人给与的压力等而感到焦虑，但幸运的是你的朋友都给与你帮助和建议，针对这些难忘的经历，请给你的朋友写一封感谢信。 要求：1．词数：80-120词左右；2．不能出现本人的真实姓名和班级等信息； 参考要点： 1．曾经的压力或焦虑(学习下降，父母争吵，人际关系差） 2．朋友给予的建议或帮助；3.感谢；4…… Dear Tom, I am so lucky to have a friend like you. _______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Tom,        I am so lucky to have a friend like you.      Last year was really hard for me. My grades dropped suddenly and I often argued with my parents. I even had some problems getting along with classmates. I felt so anxious that I couldn’t sleep well. But you were always there for me. You studied with me every weekend and taught me good ways to remember English words. When I fought with my parents, you suggested I should talk to them calmly. You also invited me to play basketball with other classmates, which helped me make new friends. Thanks to your help, now everything is getting better. I truly understand what real friendship means. You’re not just my friend, but like a brother to me. I will never forget your kindness. Thank you for everything! Your friend, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很幸运有一个像你这样的朋友。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——曾经的压力或焦虑、朋友的建议或帮助、感谢等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①get along with sb.与某人相处 ②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事 ③argue with sb.与某人争吵 [高分句型] ①You also invited me to play basketball with other classmates, which helped me make new friends. (定语从句） ②When I fought with my parents, you suggested I should talk to them calmly. (when引导的时间状语从句) 4．假如你是外国语学校的学生李华，在外教Mr. Brown的帮助下，你的性格发生了很大变化，你变得积极开朗，并在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛 (English Opera Competition) 中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括： 1.对Mr. Brown表示感谢； 2.简述自己的变化； 3.简述Mr. Brown对你的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 4.邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求： 1.词数 100 左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3.信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr. Brown, Firstly, thank you for your help. It’s because of your efforts that my personality have changed a lot. I have become positive and outgoing. I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school. I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. Under your guidance, my oral and performance skills have greatly improved, which has enabled me to achieve such good results. To thank you for your help, I would like to invite you to my house as a guest. If you can come, please let me know in advance. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对Mr. Brown表达感谢并阐述自己的变化； 第二步，告诉Mr. Brown在比赛中取得的成绩； 第三步，邀请Mr. Brown到家里来做客。 [亮点词汇] ①be excited to do sth.做某事很激动 ②take part in参加 ③in advance提前 [高分句型] ①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②If you can come, please let me know in advance. (if引导的条件状语从句) 5．假设你叫 Tom，是一名在北京待了一年的英国交换生。现在你回国了，请根据下面的内容要点写一封感谢信，表达你对在你做交换生期间给过你帮助的老师、同学及朋友们的感激之情。 内容包括： 1.参加了学校俱乐部，学习了中国的历史和文化。 2.遇到困难时，老师和同学会来帮助你。 3.游览了北京的名胜古迹，品尝了当地美食， 4..你的感受。 要求：文章要包含以上内容，并做适当拓展。80词左右，开头结尾不算入数字。提示词：the Forbidden City (故宫). Peking Duck Dear teachers and classmates, I’m writing to express my thanks to you.____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Tom 【答案】 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m writing to express my thanks to you. I have been here for a year, as you know, I am an exchange student. Everything is strange in the beginning. Thanks to my teachers and friends’ help. I have learnt much. In the past year, I have been in the school club. I have learnt a lot from others.When I had problems, you always came to help me. And I have been to many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, Tian’anmen Square and so on. Also, I have tasted the delicious food. China is a country with a long history, so I haven’t missed learning about Chinese history and culture. I will never forget my experiences in China, and I will always remember every one of you. Thank you so much again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的是为了感谢； 第二步，具体描写要感谢的人和事； 第三步，书写结语，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②learn about了解 [高分句型] ①When I had problems, you always came to help me.（时间状语从句） ②China is a country with a long history, so I haven’t missed learning about Chinese history and culture.（并列句） 6．假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。 你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你 父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你 你的决心 努力学习 你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐 参考词汇：感谢某人……thank sb. for ...    养育raise        做饭cook food 生病be sick            信任trust            关心care about 个人感受personal feelings    处于困难中be in trouble A Letter to My Parents Dear Mum and Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, _______________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 A Letter to My Parents Dear Mum and Dad, I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, I want to thank you for raising me. I thank you for cooking delicious food for me every day, and taking care of me when I am sick. Secondly, I am grateful to you for trusting me, caring about my personal feelings and encouraging me when I am in trouble. In order to repay you, I will study hard and not let you down. I really hope you can be healthy and happy every day. Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达对父母的感谢，介绍父母为自己做过的事情； 第二步，表达自己的决心和祝愿； 第三步，书写结语，再次感谢父母做的一切。 [亮点词汇] ① thank you for doing sth. 感谢某人做某事 ② take care of 照顾 ③ grateful 感激的 ④ encourage 鼓励 ⑤ let sb. down 使……失望 [高分句型] ① I am grateful to you for trusting me, caring about my personal feelings and encouraging me when I am in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I really hope you can be healthy and happy every day.（hope后接省略that的宾语从句） 7．假如你是Linda，刚刚收到了美国朋友Tom的来信，得知他正忙于做志愿者。同时，他很想了解你的近况，请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的关心，并表达你也想当一名志愿者的愿望。 写作要点： 1. 对于他的关心表示感谢。 2. 介绍你的近况。 （1）每天在网上上课 （2）周末有时帮助父母做家务，如洗碗，扫地 （3）每天运动至少一个小时 3. 谈谈你想当一名志愿者的理由。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I’m happy to hear from you _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Linda 【答案】 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I’m happy to hear from you. I am thankful for your concern. I have classes online every day. There are three classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon. I sometimes help my parents do housework on weekends, such as washing the dishes, sweeping the floor. I do sports at least one hour every day. I think exercising can make me happy and healthy. I like swimming best. I think it is easy and interesting. I want to be a volunteer. Because helping others in need is also helping ourselves. Doing small things may be make a difference. Best wishes! Yours, Linda 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达感谢； 第二步，介绍自己的近况； 第三步，谈谈想当志愿者的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from收到……来信 ②such as例如 ③in need在穷困中的 [高分句型] ①There are three classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon（there be句型） ②I think exercising can make me happy and healthy（动名词作主语） 8．假如你是Han Meimei，请你给英国的笔友Lucy写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：四年前你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。四年中，Lucy多次给你写信鼓励你多交朋友；告诉你学好英语的方法；和你分享快乐……你变得……。近年来中国发生了很大变化，你邀请她来中国游玩。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全，语言准确流畅，可适当发挥；书写规范，卷面整洁。 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 参考汇：happiness n. 快乐，幸福 Dear Lucy, How time flies! We have been friends for four years. I’m writing to thank you for your great help! Four years ago, __________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Han Meimei 【答案】 Dear Lucy, How time flies! We have been friends for four years. I’m writing to thank you for your great help! Four years ago, when I joined the new class, I had no friends at all. As a result, I felt greatly lonely. It was during the darkest time that you wrote to me and offered me plenty of help. In your letter, you encouraged me to make more friends and told me great ways to learn English. Meanwhile, you shared happiness with me and I became optimistic and did very well. There have been great changes in China, so why not visit China during the holidays? Hope to see you soon! Yours, Han Meimei 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍四年前Lucy帮助自己的事情； 第二步，介绍近年来中国发生了很大变化，并邀请他来中国游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①as a result因此 ②plenty of大量的 ③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] when I joined the new class, I had no friend at all. （when引导的时间状语从句） 9．注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名，校名，否则不得分。 假如你是李华，2025年将至，请给你的英语老师张老师写一份贺卡，祝她新年快乐、身体健康、万事如意。并感谢她对你在英语学习方面的帮助，表达你会努力学好英语的决心。 Dear Ms. Zhang, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Ms. Zhang, As the year 2025 approaches, I would like to send you my warmest wishes for the New Year! May you have a joyful year, good health, and success in all your endeavors. I truly appreciate your patience and guidance in helping me with my English studies. Your teaching has not only improved my language skills but also inspired me to work harder. I promise to continue putting in my best effort to learn English well. Thank you again for your support, and I wish you a wonderful year ahead! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为贺卡； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：内容要点包括新年祝福、感谢老师的帮助、表达学习决心，需注意语言礼貌、情感真挚，适当添加细节使行文流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头问候：直接表达新年祝福，使用礼貌用语； 第二步，感谢老师的帮助，具体说明其影响，并表明学习决心； 第三步，再次表达感谢和美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 ②not only...but also...不但……而且…… ③promise to do sth承诺做某事 [高分句型] ①May you have a joyful year, good health, and success in all your endeavors.（运用了祈使句表祝愿） 10．假如你是Tom，进入九年级两个月以来，你觉得自己成长了许多，而这些成长和改变离不开陪伴你的老师，请给你的老师写一封信。 内容包括： 1)谈谈你在性格、学习、生活等方面的改变； 2)他/她给你的帮助； 3)表示感谢和真诚的祝福。 写作要求： 1)字数在80词左右，书写规范，卷面干净整洁； 2)包含表格中所有的要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 3)文中不得透露个人信息，不出现真实人名和校名。 Dear teacher, How time flies! It has been more than two months since I became a student in Grade 9. I have made great progress in many ways._______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 【答案】 Dear teacher, How time flies! It has been more than two months since I became a student in Grade 9. I have made great progress in many ways. With your help, I have been not only good at English, but also confident and outgoing. I used to be afraid to speak in front of my classmates because my English pronunciation was poor and I was shy. In class, I always hid behind my books and never said anything. You taught me how to pronounce words correctly. Gradually, my pronunciation was getting better and better. Now I am no longer afraid to speak in public. Thank you very much for all that you have done for me. I hope you will always be happy. Yours, Tom 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“我”在性格、学习、生活等方面的改变； 第二步，详细介绍老师是如何让“我”在性格、学习等方面改变的； 第三步，书写结语，表达对老师的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①made great progress取得很大进步 ②used to do过去常常做某事 [高分句型] ①I used to be afraid to speak in front of my classmates because my English pronunciation was poor and I was shy. (because引导的原因状语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $