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Section Ⅳ Writing
[对应学生用书P69]
一封关于旅游的电子邮件
本单元的写作任务是写一封电子邮件,电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的重要文体,应引起我们的高度重视。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
1.描写旅游和景点的词汇
(1)scenic spots景点
(2)tourist attractions旅游景点
(3)historic sites历史遗迹
(4)places of interest名胜
(5)admission charges入场费
(6)guided bike tour有导游的自行车之旅
(7)packaged tour包办旅游
(8)a self-driving tour 自驾游
(9)pack up收拾行李
(10)set out/off出发
(11)appeal to...吸引
(12)head back to返回
(13)be listed as...被列为
(14)be struck by...被……迷住
(15)be open to 向……开放
(16)check in/out登记入住/结账离开
(17)be situated in/lie in位于
(18)take one's breath away使某人惊叹
(19)beyond description无法描述
(20)have a good view of一览无余
(21)make a trip to/take a tour to去……旅行
(22)admire/enjoy the natural scenery欣赏自然风景
2.旅行收获及感受
(1)broaden one's perspective开阔某人的视野
(2)contact with different cultures 接触不同的文化
(3)enrich one's knowledge and experience丰富某人的知识和经验
(4)experience many new things体验许多新事物
(5)be greatly impressed by the beautiful view of...
……的美丽景色给……留下了深刻的印象
(6)enjoy a pleasant journey旅途愉快
(7)strengthen the family bonds增强家庭联系
[必备句型]
1.Not only can travel get us close to nature,but it also refreshes our body and mind.
旅游不仅能让我们接近大自然,还能让我们放松身心。
2.Besides,please recommend some reasonable tour routes so that we can arrange our schedule better.
此外,请推荐一些合理的观光路线以便我们能更好地安排我们的行程。
3.A solo travel provides us with access to the local customs and lifestyle.
独自旅游能帮我们了解当地的习俗和生活方式。
4.I definitely believe this tour will promise/guarantee you an unforgettable memory.
我相信这次旅游一定会给你一段难忘的回忆。
5.You will find the travel worthwhile.
你会觉得这次旅游是值得的。
6.You'd better read the guidebook and pay close attention to changes in the weather,which will help in choosing the proper clothing for comfort.
你最好阅读旅游手册,密切注意天气变化,这会有助于挑选合适且舒适的衣服。
7.The peaceful landscape of Ireland and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
爱尔兰风光宁静秀美,郡县草木葱茏,青山连绵起伏,牛羊点缀其中,堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
假设你是李华,你的英国好友Jack了解到你在十一假期出去旅游,给你写邮件想知道你的旅途感受,请你用英文给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.旅途所见及所想;
2.邀请他来中国旅游。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:国庆假期National Day Holiday
Dear Jack,
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.我很高兴能与你分享我这次旅行的心得体会。
I'm more than delighted to share with you my thoughts and experiences over journey.
→I can share with you my thoughts and experiences over journey,which is a great delight to me.
2.毫无疑问,景点、道路,甚至公共厕所都挤满了游客。
Undoubtedly,scenic spots,roads,and even the public toilets were packed with tourists.
→There is no doubt that scenic spots,roads,and even the public toilets were packed with tourists.
3.我们几乎没大受到影响。
We were hardly affected.
4.这次旅行不仅使我们接近自然,而且也加强了家庭的联系。
The travel not only got us close to nature,but it also strengthened the family bonds.
5.沿途迷人的风景给我们留下了深刻的印象。
The fascinating landscapes along the way left a deep impression on us.
→We were deeply impressed by the fascinating landscapes along the way.
6.当你有空的时候,你想来中国看看吗?
Do you feel like paying a visit to China when you're available?
7.我迫不及待要带你到处看看,欣赏迷人的风景和多元的文化。
I can't wait to show you around to appreciate the charming scenery and diverse cultures.
第三步 词句升级
8.用原因状语从句和倒装句合并句3、4。
We were hardly affected,because not only did the travel get us close to nature,but it also strengthened the family bonds.
第四步 妙笔成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I'm more than delighted to share with you my thoughts and experiences over journey.
As for the seven-day holiday,my family scheduled a self-driving tour to Liaoning Province.Undoubtedly,scenic spots,roads,and even the public toilets were packed with tourists.However,we were hardly affected,because not only did the travel get us close to nature,but it also strengthened the family bonds.Moreover,the fascinating landscapes along the way left a deep impression on us.
Do you feel like paying a visit to China when you're available? I can't wait to show you around to appreciate the charming scenery and diverse cultures.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(2025·广东东莞阶段考)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom打算在寒假期间来中国旅游,来信让你推荐旅行地点。请你用英文写一封邮件向他推荐一座城市,内容包括:
1.推荐的城市;
2.推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm thrilled to hear about your plan to visit China during the winter break! I wholeheartedly recommend you to explore Xi'an.
Xi'an,known as the ancient capital of China,boasts the world-famous Terracotta Army,a breathtaking sight that offers a glimpse into the splendour of the Qin Dynasty.The ancient City Wall,well-preserved,allows you to walk or bike along it,immersing yourself in centuries-old architecture.Not to be missed is the Muslim Quarter,where you can enjoy authentic local cuisine and experience the lively atmosphere of a traditional Chinese market.
I'm sure Xi'an will provide you with an unforgettable cultural adventure!
Yours,
Li Hua
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