内容正文:
写作提升册
第一部分
写作六大微技能
微技能一正确使用常见标点符号和大小写
微技能二
写出正确的句子
类型1正确使用常见标点符号
技巧训练
技巧训练
l.father后加is
1.What time is it now◇
2.child改为children
2.Do you like reading booksA
3.tomato改为tomatoes
4.was改为were
3.IVm sure I saw a deer just nowA
5.aren't改为dont
4.Be careful A The road is wetA
6.sings改为sing
5.You are from China,aren Vt youA
7.She改为He或his改为her
6.Wow A What a beautiful flower it isA
&.has改为had
7.Do you want to go to the park or the cinema
g.plant改为are/were planted
8.She is a kind A hearted girl who often helps othersA
10.cat black改为black cat
9.We moved to our new house on January 2nd A 2014A
11.delicious something something delicious
10.On a sunny morningA we went to the park for a picnicA
12.real改为really
11.In the basket A there are apples A bananas A oranges A and
13.any改为some
grapes A
l4.interesting改为interested
12.Mr.Smith A a kind teacher A is loved by all his studentsA
15.to改为in
13.I stared at the math problem,thinkingA How could I solve
16.删除on
17.wait后加for
it
18.a改为an
14.After a long day at work A she finally got home A She made
19.piano前加the
a cup of tea and sat on the sofaA
20.best前加the
15.Before leaving,Mom reminded me A Don't forget to take
微技能三
如何组织段落
your umbrella A It might rain.
技巧训练
类型2正确使用大小写
Love means different things to different people.It can be
技巧训练
support,encouragement,trust or something else.In my view,
1.I can speak chinese and a little english.
love is understanding and respect.
C
E
Last summer vacation,my family talked about where to go
2.Our school trip is on friday,october 10th.
F
for our trip.I knew my parents preferred educational ones,but I
3.The sign says“no smoking”in the library.
really wanted something relaxing.After thinking twice,I said I
NS
hoped to go to the beach.To my surprise,they agreed happily
4.Have you read the book the little prince?
Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
TL P
Love is about caring about others'feelings.Just as my
5.my best friend is emma,and she is from canada.
M
E
parents understand me and respect my choice,I promise I'll do
6.We will visit the great wall during the summer holiday.
the same for them.
G W
微技能四扩写并美化句子
7.Mom said i should finish my homework before watching TV
技巧训练
8.children's day is one of the most important festivals in many
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
C
D
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
countries.
3.We should make good use of time.
9.I heard doctor lee would give us a talk about health the next
4.She makes a decision to learn dancing.
week.
5.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
10.We learned a poem called in the garden of my heart.
6.He was late for school because there was a heavy traffic jam
G
M H
on the road.
36例:
My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day.It warms my heart.(Every evening,we sit around the
table.Mom cooks delicious food like fried chicken and tomato soup.Dad tells funny work stories.Once,he told a
“silly boss'”story-一we laughed so happily!(支持细节句)
Family dinner isn't just about delicious meals and jokes-when troubles come,it becomes our "problem-solving
corner'”!(过渡句)Last week,my sadness about failing a test got fixed right here.(支持细节句)All in all,the
family dinner time is like love on a plate.I'll keep loving this warm time forever.(
⊙技巧训练
根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节句和结论句。
Love means different things to different people.It can be support,encouragement,trust or something else.
微技能四扩写并美化句子
⊙技巧1巧用高级表达
在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段常用的初阶词汇与高阶词汇转
换表。
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
give.a hand帮助…
help帮助
make a big difference to对.…产生重大影响,对.…起重要作用
hope希望
look forward to sth./doing sth.期待某物/做某事
be interested in../have a strong interest in..对.…(非常)感兴趣
like喜欢
fall in love with.爱上
remember记得
keep..in mind将.牢记在心
use使用
make good/full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分使用某物
visit参观
pay a visit to参观….
should应该
be supposed to应该
make a decision to do sth.决定做某事
decide to do sth.决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth.某人下定决心做某事
try one's best to do sth.尽某人全力做某事
try to do sth.尽力做某事
make every effort to do sth../spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
want to do sth.想要做某事
feel like doing sth./would like to do sth.想要做某事
would rather do A than do B/prefer to do A rather than do B宁愿做A也不
don't want to do sth.不想做某事
愿做B
8
①⊙技巧2巧扩要点
写作的时候,我们常遇到写完主谓宾就不知道如何往下写的情况。这时可以运用一定的方法对句子进
行扩展以表达更完整、更具体的意思。
方法
示例
Alice is a teacher.
1.添加定语对名词进行限制
→Alice is a patient teacher..(用形容词扩写)
或说明,如形容词、介词短
→Alice is a patient teacher in a junior high school..(用介词短语扩写)
语、分词短语、定语从句等
Alice who is popular among the students is a patient teacher in a junior high
school.(用定语从句扩写)
1.We should learn English well.
-We should learn English well because it is spoken widely around the world.
2.添加副词、不定式、分词、
(扩写原因)
状语从句等状语表示时2.She often listens to music.
间、地点、方式、程度、目
→She often listens to music to help her relax and forget her worries.(扩写目的)
的、原因、结果、条件等
3.You will get good grades.
You will get good grades as long as you listen to the teacher carefully and finish
your homework on time..(扩写条件)
3.添加同位语,如名词、名词I'm Li Hua.
短语等。
I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from Shijiazhuang.(添加同位语)
1.Grace has many hobbies.
4.添加例子作补充说明,如用
-Grace has many hobbies,such as painting,dancing and playing the piano.
(用such as列举)
like,such as列举事物或用
for example举例说明等。
2.Technology makes life easier.
-Technology makes life easier.For example,we can shop online without going
out.((用for example列举)
①技巧训练
1.Reading helps me learn a lot.Tip:make a big
4.She decides to learn dancing.(Tip:make a decision
difference to...)
to do sth.
2.She likes painting very much.(Tip:have a strong
5.My friend is a student.(Tip:hard-working,in our
interest in...)
school)
3.We should use time well.(Tip:make good use of)
6.He was late for school.(Tip:because)
微技能五
语言表达的丰富性
①类型1
巧用复合句
复合句
常见连接词
示例
并列复
and(并列),but(转折),or(选择),so
合句
(结果),for(原因),yet(然而,转折),
We went to the park and we played football there.
not only..but also(递进)等
9