内容正文:
类别二经历感受类
[2024,2025试卷示例(一),2021副题]
常见题目表述)
①●人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升4生活并非一成不变,总是充满了跌宕起伏。然而,他人一次
不经意的帮助可能会带给我们别样的温暖。请根据下面图示,以“A()
Moment'”为题,用英语讲
述一次你接受他人帮助的经历以及你的感受,不少于70词。
Turning point
How
Rising action
Falling action
Who
Why
Opening
When,What
Feeling
②>人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活无论是长途旅行还是郊游,每一次旅行都是珍贵的回忆。请以
“My
Tp”为题,结合下面的图示,用英语写一篇不少于70词的短文。
Where did you go
When did you go
for a trip?
for a trip?
What did you do
How did you feel
during your trip?
about the trip?
作文框架)
开头:以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历。
中间:讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果,即五个“W”(what,who,when,where,why)和一个
“H”(how)。
结尾:对上述经历进行总结,表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么或以后会怎么做。
高分模板)
One
Experience
I'm glad to share
(我的经历).
When I first went into junior high school,I
(遇到的经历)because
(原因).Iwas/felt
(感受)and didn't know what to do.
(人物)encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice.
First of all,
(我的行为①),which helped to
(这样做的结果①).Second,
(我的
行为②).n this way,I not only
but also
(这样做的结果②).Day by day,I could
(可以做的事情)andI
(现在的行为)now.
Through the experience,I have fully realized that
(感悟).
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优秀范文记背)
Passage 1
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Warm Moment
A Warm Moment
Beginning:引
Life is full of ups and downs,and
Life is full of ups and downs.Once,an act of
出话题
sometimes a small kind act can light up our kindness from a classmate gave me a truly warm moment.
day.
Last Friday,it rained cats and dogs.When
Last Friday was a rainy day.After school was over,I ran to the school gate,only to
school,I found I had left my umbrella at realize I'd left my umbrella at home.Standing there,
Body:讲述一
home.I was worried and didn't know what feeling anxious and helpless,I didn't know how to get
件你接受他
to do.Just then,my classmate Li Hua back.Just then,my classmate Li Hua noticed me.
人帮助的
came over.He had an umbrella and said,Without a second thought,he walked up to me and
经历
“Let's share it..”We walked home said gently,“Let's share it.”On the way,he kept
together.On the way home,he always tried moving the umbrella to cover me well.Even though
to keep me dry.His kindness gave me a part of his clothes got wet,he didn't care at all.His
warm feeling.
kind words and warm smile made the rainy day bright.
Ending:表达
This moment was unforgettable.It
This moment taught me the power of kindness.
自己的感受
made me want to help others in need too.
I'll surely help others just as he did.
Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Unforgettable Trip
My Unforgettable Trip
Beginning:表
School trips are always exciting!
Life is full of wonderful memories,and school trips are
明学校旅行
They bring us lots of fun memories.
always special.
是令自己难
Last Friday,our school took us
Last Friday,our school organized a trip to the Nature
忘的旅行
to the Nature Park for a trip.We went
Park,which is a place full of natural wonders.In the
there by bus in the morning.First,
moming,we took a bus,chatting and laughing all the way.
we walked along a small path.We
As we walked along the winding path,the sweet smell of
saw colorful flowers and heard birds flowers filled the air.Our science teacher,with great
Body:详细介
singing.Then,our science teacher patience,explained how plants grow,pointing at the thick
showed us some interesting plants,trunks and tiny seeds under the soil.At noon,we spread out
绍旅行的时
like tall trees and small grass.At our picnic mats on the soft grass.While sharing delicious
间、地点和活
noon,we had a picnic on the grass.
food,we talked about our favorite parts of the trip.When
动等
We shared sandwiches and fruit.
the sun started to set,we went back,but the beauty of
Everyone was happy.
nature stayed in our hearts.
This trip was really fun.It made
This trip was not only fun,but it taught me to observe
Ending:表达
me love nature more.I can't wait for
and appreciate the world carefully.I'll always remember this
自己的感受
the next school trip!
special day.
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