内容正文:
二、
A Farm Trip Made Me Happy
In order to help students know more about farms,learn about
agricultural culture,get close to nature,and experience labor prac-
tices,our school held a farm trip last month.
We had a school trip to Red Star Farm on May 9.We did a lot
of interesting things on the farm.The workers there gave us a warm
welcome and then we visited the farm.We saw many kinds of ani-
mals,like chickens,ducks,cows and so on.We picked strawberries
and planted tomatoes.We also fed chickens and rode horses.We
leamed a lot.The farm was so beautiful that we took a lot of photos.
We had a picnic by the river in the afternoon.We were so happy.
All in all,we learned a lot and had a good time on the farm.
主题2多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
一阶课本句型促写作
1.We will have a school trip to visit the science museum next month.
2.I'm sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
3.Reading aloud is one of the good ways of learning English well.
4.We are all full of excitement and thirsty for interesting stories in
the books.
5.My teacher always encourages me and helps me to become a better
person.
6.I take an active part in the school's English corner to practice
speaking.
7.If we make full use of the school library,we can read more good
books after class.
8.In order to win the basketball match,our team practices hard ev-
ery aftemoon.
9.Even though the math exam was difficult,I tried my best to finish
all the questions.
10.As long as we listen carefully in class,we can understand the
knowledge easily.
二阶典例探究明思路
Our After-class Activities
Nowadays,students have more free time to take part in after-
class activities.With no exception,there are many after-class activi-
ties in my school.We can do sports,play instruments,study Eng-
lish,and so on.I like these activities very much.
For me,English corner is my favorite activity because I can
make a lot of friends and we can talk about everything together.I try
to speak more there so that I can improve my English quickly,and
my teacher says this is a good way to learn.
In my opinion,after-class activities are very important for us
students.Firstly,we can build our bodies by taking exercise.Sec-
ondly,we can build good relationships with other students.What's
more,we can leam from each other through communication.I hope
there will be more colorful after-class activities.
三阶写作实战提能力
In the past three years,we experienced a lot and surely made pro-
gress.As for me,the most unforgettable person in my junior high life
is my English teacher,Ms.Wang.She has short curly hair and al-
ways wears a warm smile.She is warm-hearted and patient.She is al-
ways ready to help others.
What I remember most is how she helped me with my shyness.
Once,I froze when I was asked to answer a question in class.Instead
of letting me sit down,she patiently guided me with simple ques-
tions.When I finally spoke out,she cheered for me loudly.Since
then,I've become brave enough to join in English discussions.
She also taught us more than just grammar.She often
encouraged us to study English well and told us,"Language is a
bridge to the world.Now,as I look back,I realize she didn't just
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teach English-she helped me grow.I'll always remember her kind-
ness and encouragement.
二、
The School Corner and Me
Among all the corners of my school,the garden is my favorite
place.Located behind the classroom building,it has a big tree with
thick leaves,colorful flowers,and soft grass.Several wooden chairs
are placed under the tree,creating a peaceful spot for students to re-
lax
One sunny afternoon,I sat there reading a book but felt upset a-
bout my math exam.My classmate Ma Li noticed my worries and
asked if I needed help.We spent hours discussing math problems
under the tree.From that day on,the garden became our secret study
spot.We shared stories,did homework,and even laughed about silly
mistakes.Her patience and kindness turned my stress into confi-
dence.
The garden is more than just a beautiful corner.It recorded my
growth,friendships,and unforgettable moments.Every time I pass
by,I smile,remembering how the quiet place brought warmth to my
school life.This corner is not just a place,but a valuable treasure of
my growth.
主题3积极的学习体验,恰当的
学习方法,勤学善思
一阶课本句型促写作
1.You can make good use of online courses to get new knowledge.
2.Don't be afraid of asking for help when you need it.
3.The more carefully you listen in class,the more knowledge you
will get.
4.By planning time properly,we will have the ability to balance
study and rest.
5.There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our daily
lives.
6.English is so helpful that I can use it to communicate with foreign-
ers freely.
7.It's important for middle school students to keep good reading hab-
its.
三阶写作实战提能力
English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
I am Li Hua from Class 1,Grade 9.My favourite kind of English
homework is acting out a play.It can help improve my language skills
and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 8,my teacher asked us to act out the play
Romeo and Juliet in a group of six.It was a big challenge.Firstly,I
read the play with group members and we shared our understanding of
the play.Then,we chose our roles and practised the lines a lot.My
spoken English has improved greatly during the practice.In the end,
we put on a great show and won praise.Now I'm interested in acting
and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public
I hope our English homework can be more meaningful and more
creative like this.Thanks.
Reading-a Lifelong Journey
Summer vacation is coming.We should do something meaning
ful.As we know,reading plays an important role in our lives.We can
get knowledge and learn many skills by reading books.Besides,we
can develop interests through reading and make our lives colorful.
There are many kinds of books we can read,such as great books,sci-
ence books and even newspapers.Magazines about study are also
good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time,and it's a good idea to
choose a quiet place to read books,like the library.How about join-
ing the Reading Club in our school?While reading,it's necessary to
take notes and write reviews.We can certainly share them with our
friends in the club.
In my opinion,reading is a lifelong journey.We can see the
world in books.Let's read together.
主题4身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的
意识&日常体育活动,重大体育赛事,
体育精神
一阶课本句型促写作
1.Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise.
2.It is necessary for teenagers to learn to face difficulties bravely.
3.Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to students.
4.It is a good choice for us students to go to bed and get up early.
5.There is no doubt that doing sports makes our bodies strong.
6.We should be friendly to our classmates and be brave to try new
sports with them.
7.Playing ball games with friends can keep us in a good mood.
8.When we feel upset,we can spend time with our teachers or good
friends.
9.The more we take part in outdoor sports,the healthier our bodies
and minds will be.
10.We should never give up exercising because it's hard to stay
healthy both in body and mind without it.
二阶典例探究明思路
How to Improve Physical Strength
It's very important to improve middle school students'physical
strength.Good physical strength can keep us energetic and help us
enjoy life better.
First of all,playing basketball is a great choice.It not only
helps make us more active but also develops teamwork.When
playing basketball,students need to move,pass and shoot together,
which teaches them to work with others.Secondly,a balanced diet is
also very important.We should eat more fruits and vegetables.These
foods provide necessary energy for daily activities.Besides,getting
enough sleep is necessary.Having a good sleep helps our bodies
recover and grow better.
By doing these,middle school students can have stronger
bodies.In this way,we can grow up healthily and study and live
better.
三阶写作实战提能力
These days,we have more time to do sports.We experienced
more and surely made progress.As for me,I can't forget my friend
Wang Gang.
Wang Gang is good at playing basketball,but I wasn't.Wang
Gang saw this and came to help me.He showed me how to move the
ball and taught me how to pass or catch the ball.After that,he
encouraged me to play basketball with others.He had a great
influence on me.I started to play better and better.
The more I play it,the more I like it.Now we're both in the
class team.I will never forget his help and I will help others
like him!
主题5促进中学生“五育并举”的发展
&勤于动手,乐于实践,敢于创新
一阶课本句型促写作
1.It's also a great way to leam about working together through group
study.
2.Students are supposed to take part in some labor activities,like
cleaning the classroom or planting trees.
3.Taking part in volunteer activities makes us be able to care more
about others and society.
4.Learning to manage our own time and things can develop our inde-
pendence.
5.I think it is important for us students to do housework at home.
6.Students should do their part in keeping the classroom clean.
7.It's our duty to respect our teachers and help classmates in need.
8.We should try our best to create beautiful works in art classes.
9.The reason why we should take art classes seriously is that they
teach us to find beauty
10.We should try different methods when we solve math problems.
二阶典例探究明思路
Enjoy Labor,Enjoy Life
It is well-known that loving labor is a traditional Chinese virtue.
As a middle school student,I often take part in labor activities
in everyday life.For example,I clean the classroom and playground
with my classmates at school.I do some cooking,wash clothes and
tidy rooms at home.And in the community,I do volunteer work to
help the elderly and the disabled.
By doing these,I've learnt some basic life skills to take care of
myself.Besides,I have not only got a strong feeling of pride but also
become more and more independent and responsible.
All in all,I believe that labor education is important for our
development and I encourage all teenagers to actively experience
labor activities.Let's take an active part in labor activities.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
How to Become a Five-star Student
I'm Li Hua.I want to be a five-star student.Here is my report.
I have already got three stars.First,I am strict with myself and
always help others,so I have the star of morality.Second,I study
hard,read many books and get good grades,so I get the star of intel-
ligence.Third,I eat healthily and do sports every day,so I am
strong and get the star of health.
However,I still need to work hard for the stars of art and labor.I
am going to learn painting to improve my sense of beauty.I will also do
more housework at home,such as cooking and cleaning.
I will try my best to be a five-star student.
二、
The Power of Self-directed Learning
In my opinion,self-directed learning means choosing what to
learn by ourselves,rather than having someone make us learn it.It's
all about seeking knowledge according to our own interests.
I have an experience of self-directed learning.I was really inter-
ested in making model planes.Since there was no such class at
school,I decided to learn it by myself.I read lots of books about how
planes work,watched many online videos,and tried making models
time after time.During this period,I ran into many problems,but I
kept finding ways to solve them on my own.
Self-directed learning helps us become better learners and make
good preparations for future challenges.Let's start self-directed learn-
ing and find out how much we can do!
主题6自我认识,自我管理,自我提升&
职业启蒙,职业精神
一阶课本句型促写作
1.I hope to plan study time well and finish homework on time.
2.I dream of becoming/being a science teacher in the future.
3.I'm always ready to learn new skills for my photography hobby.
4.I'm popular in the school painting club because I often share
simple drawing skills.
5.She is polite to every member in the chess club.
6.I spend an hour practicing playing the violin every evening
because I want to be a violinist.
7.Working hard and never giving up will help us make our dreams
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积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法,勤学善思
·中考命题角度探究
2025试卷示例(二):写一篇关于学习英语遇到的困难并向外教求助的短文
陕西中考
2024陕西副题书面表达:介绍英语课上最喜欢的英语学习活动
中考命题
角度探究
阅读、学习的重要性/益处
全国视野
找到正确的读书、学习方法
最喜欢的科目
教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(上)U9 School subjects
九(全)Ul Learning how to study
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.Everyone is born with the ability to learn.But whether or not you can do this well depends on your
learning habits..[人教九(全)Ul]
开头句
2.English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well?Here are my suggestions.
3.Nowadays,many students can't make good use of their time,which has a bad influence on their
study.
阅读、L.Leaming is a lifelong journey because every day brings something new..[人教九(全)UI]
学习
2.Learning a new language takes time.It can be challenging,but the new language can give people more
的重
opportunities.[冀教七(下)U5]
3.Books are my best friends.Reading can bring me happiness and knowledge.
及
4.I prefer to study alone because it can help me think independently.
5.Reading can make a great difference to our life.It's important for us to keep good reading habits
学习
L.The teacher spoke so quickly that I did not understand her most of the time.[人教九(全)Ul]
8
中存
在的
2.I dare not answer questions in class because I'm afraid of making mistakes.
间
3.There is no doubt that playing video games is one of the biggest problems affecting students'study.
问题
句
l.Try to guess a word's meaning by reading the sentences before and after it.[人教九(全)Ul]
2.You can become better by reading something you enjoy every day..[人教九(全)U1]
学习
3.Good learners often connect what they need to learn with something interesting.[人教t九(全)Ul]
方法
4.If you prepare well for a test,then there's nothing to worry about![人教九(全)Ul]
与
5.The more you practice,the fewer mistakes you will make.
建议
6.I can improve my listening skills by listening to English songs.
7.The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.
8.Don't be afraid of making mistakes when you practice speaking English.
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1.
Remember,"Use it or lose it."Even if you learn something well,you will forget it unless you use it.
[人教九(全)U1]
2.Everything that you leam becomes a part of you and changes you,so learn wisely and learn well.
结尾句
九(全)U1]
3.I believe if I put my heart into learning English,I will make much progress.
4.Everyone should believe in themselves because they have the ability to do things better.
5.In a word,reading not only brings me much joy but also makes me interested in English learning.
l.Practice makes perfect..熟能生巧。[人教九(全)Ul]
俗语
2.Leam the new while reviewing the old.温故而知新。
谚语
3.
Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.读万卷书,行万里路。
⑨课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.你可以充分利用在线课程来获得新知识。(Tip:make good use of.…)
2.当你需要帮助时,不要害怕寻求帮助。(Tip:don't be afraid of.)
3.你在课堂上听讲越认真,你得到的知识就会越多。(Tip:The+比较级.,the+比较级.)
4.通过合理规划时间,我们将有能力平衡学习与休息。(Tip:have the ability to do sth.)
◆句式升格
5.Reading plays an important role in our daily lives.(Tip:there is no doubt that...)
6.English is helpful.I can use it to communicate with foreigners freely.(Tip:so...that...)
7.Middle school students should keep good reading habits.(Tip:It's+adj.+for sb.to do sth.)
二
阶典例探究明思路
英语听说能力是学好英语的关键。本周你班将召开“How to
Improve English Listening and Speaking”的主题班会,分享提高英语听说
审题四要素:
能力的方法。你将自己的方法分享给了同学们并鼓励大家采用。
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一、二人称为主
参考词汇:improve,listen to,ask..for help,watch English cartoons,..
审时态:一般现在时为主
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
审要点:分享提高英语听说能力
As we know,English listening and speaking are really important in的方法并鼓励同学们采用
learning English.How can we improve English listening and speaking
skills?
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@写作剖析
一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
Beginning-一文章
参考表达:
例:这是给你的一些建议。(翻译)
已给开头,引出
①As we know.;
主题
②Here be..
参考表达:
例:观看英语视频或听英语歌曲是有帮助的。(翻译)
①DIt is adj.to do sth.;
Body一具体阐述
②pay attention to.;
分享提高英语听
③be afraid to..;
You don't understand something.Don't be afraid
说能力的方法
④ask sb.for help;
to ask the teacher for help.(用when连接)
⑤have a conversation
with sb.;
6Practice makes perfect.
例:我们可以循序渐进地提升英语听说能力。(翻译)
Ending-一总结并鼓
参考表达:
励用这些方法来提
①by doing sth.;
高英语水平
②step by step
二、范文:分阶范文&对比赏析
初阶范文
高阶范文
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
How to Improve English Listening and Speaking
As we know,English listening and speaking
As we know,English listening and speaking are really
are really important in learning English.How can
important in learning English.How can we improve English
we improve English listening and speaking skills?
listening and speaking skills?Here is some advice for you.
Here is some advice for you.
First,it is helpful to watch English videos or listen to
First,watch English videos or listen to English
English songs often.This lets us hear how words are
songs often.You can learn how words are said.
pronounced.Second,always listen to the teacher carefully in
Second,listen to your teacher carefully in class.
class.Pay attention to his or her pronunciation.Third,don't
Notice how he or she says words.Third,ask your
be afraid to ask the teacher for help when you don't understand
teacher for help when you don't understand
something.He or she can explain it clearly.Fourth,watching
something.He or she can explain things clearly.
English cartoons can be both fun and useful.We can learn new
Fourth,watch English cartoons.It's fun and you can
words and sentences in an interesting way.Finally,try to
learn new words and sentences easily.Finally,talk
have conversations with your classmates and friends in English
with your classmates and friends in English as much
as much as possible.Practice makes perfect!
as you can.
By doing these things often,you can improve your English
Do these things often,and your English
listening and speaking abilities step by step.
listening and speaking will get better.
阅对比赏析:
1.内容维度:高阶范文内容更丰富,对每个建议的作用都有细节补充。
2.逻辑维度:除清晰序列词外,还使用一些逻辑衔接表达,让建议之间的逻辑关系更紧密。
3.亮点表达:①词汇上:“pronounced”“conversation'”等;②句式上,使用了“It is helpful to..”(it作形式主语),
“be both fun and useful”(并列结构),“Practice makes perfect”(谚语)等,让表达更地道、丰富。
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“构思”答案:Here is some advice for you.;It is helpful to watch English videos or listen to English songs.;Don't
be afraid to ask the teacher for help when you don't understand something.;We can improve our English listening
and speaking abilities step by step.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、为优化英语作业设计、切实提升学生英语学习成效,你校英语社团现张贴海报,面向全体学生征集英语作
业建议。假如你是九年级一班的李华,请根据下面海报要求,写一篇英语短文投稿。
English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
Read a book
Do exercises
Make a speech
Act out a play
*What kind of English homework do you like best?Why?
What was the most meaningful homework you've ever had?
Write and share!
Send it to happyhomework@English.com
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
I am Li Hua from Class 1,Grade 9.My favourite kind of English homework is
I hope our English homework can be more meaningful and more creative like this.Thanks.
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二、生活里没有书籍,就好像没有阳光:智慧里没有书籍,就好像鸟儿没有翅膀。书香浸润灵魂,阅读陪伴成
长。阅读是我们一生的旅程,少年正是读书时,暑假即将到来,让我们一起读书吧!请根据以下图示及要求,
以“Reading-一a Lifelong Journey”为题,用英语写一篇短文,倡导同学们读书。
How to read
·Time
Why to read
·Places
·get knowledge
What to read
Activities:join a club
·learn skills
·great books
take notes
develop interests
·science books
write reviews
·newspapers
…
Reading
Your opinion
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)》
Reading-a Lifelong Journey
Summer vacation is coming.We should do something meaningful.As we know,reading plays an important role
in our lives.
Reflecting
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How well can you do these things?
Very well
OK
Needs work
●I can keep my writing paper clean..(2分)
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.I can use correct English expressions in writing.(5)
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●I can write all the points..(5分)
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My article is clearly structured and well organized.(3)
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Self-assessment
Overall comment
Peer review
Teacher's assessment
Total score:
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