内容正文:
I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.That's what I
want to share with you
Thank you!
训练三:Learning Some Skills is Important
It's important for us to learn some skills.As for me,I always
cook for my parents when I'm free.
A year ago,my parents were often busy with work,so I decided
to cook a meal for them.First,I washed some vegetables and cut
them into pieces.And then after watching some videos on the Inter-
net,I followed the steps carefully.Finally,I did it well.My parents
were very happy.
From this experience,I knew that we should always try some-
thing new to enrich our life.
微技能四拓展写作内容
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
3.We should make good use of time.
4.They would like to watch a movie
5.You are supposed to finish your homework first.
6.She made a decision to leam dancing.
7.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
8.Technology is important.For example,it helps us study online
easily.
9.He was late for school today because there was heavy traffic on the
roads.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her mom.
11.He learns English by watching English movies.
12.I'm Lucy,a middle school student who loves painting
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
针对训练
第二部分
高频
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhe Park
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it makes me
feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to get
close to nature.
4.We can take part in many meaningful activities,such as reading
books and doing volunteer work.
5.When we take part in club activities,the most important thing is
to get along well with others.
6.When we travel with our parents,the key is to stay safe and hap-
7.During my trip to Xi'an,I visited many places of interest.
8.At the end of the winter holiday,my whole family watched a rela-
xing movie together.
9.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help them
open their minds.
10.No matter how many troubles we met on vacation,the beautiful
scenery always made us forget them.
二阶典例探究明思路
A Meaningful Vacation
The summer vacation is coming soon.How can we make it
meaningful?It is very important to make a good plan for a meaningful
vacation.
As the saying goes,"Reading makes a full man.So firstly,I plan
to do some reading after I finish my homework.Secondly,nothing is
1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs
2.I love English because it opens a window to know different cultures
around the world.
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
down.
5.There is a small garden behind the library.
6.It's important for us students to balance our studies and hobbies
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communicate
with foreigners confidently.
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
11.Not only did I get knowledge,but I also built my character dur-
ing the process.
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world widely
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
-,1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in the
park.
4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,health is
more important.
5.I started to leam painting this term.It makes me feel relaxed.
What's more,it helps me find the beauty in daily life.
二、主题1:l.because/..2.Compared with/.…
3.What's more/...4.In my opinion/...
主题2:l.First of all/..2.Then/..3.not only
4.but also 5.Finally/...6.All in all/...
主题三阶写作指导
more important than good health.I want to do more exercise,such as
running and swimming.Also,I will develop healthy eating habits.
I'll eat more fruits and vegetables.Thirdly,I will share some
housework,such as cooking and doing some cleaning.What's more.
I will try to help others and always remember to be safe in daily life.
In a word,I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful
vacation.
三阶写作实战提能力
-、Dear Peter,
I'm so glad that you and your parents will pay a visit to Shaanxi.
Anyone coming to Shaanxi is sure to have a good time.Let me share
something about traveling in Shaanxi.
Shaanxi Province lies in the northwest of China.It is a beautiful
place with a long history.Shaanxi Province is known for Chinese
ancient culture because there are many places of interest.Visitors can
enjoy themselves here.If you come to Shaanxi Province,I advise you
to go to Xi'an Bell Tower,Terracotta Warriors and Huashan Moun-
tain
Also.Shaanxi Province is famous for its delicious food like
Roujiamo,Shaanxi liangpi,Biangbiang noodles and so on.As the
saying goes,"Life is a journey to experience,to learn and to enjoy.
So come to Shaanxi Province and you'll have an unforgettable
experience.
I hope you'll love Shaanxi as much as I do.Let me know if you
need more tips.
Yours,
Li Hua
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二、
A Farm Trip Made Me Happy
In order to help students know more about farms,learn about
agricultural culture,get close to nature,and experience labor prac-
tices,our school held a farm trip last month.
We had a school trip to Red Star Farm on May 9.We did a lot
of interesting things on the farm.The workers there gave us a warm
welcome and then we visited the farm.We saw many kinds of ani-
mals,like chickens,ducks,cows and so on.We picked strawberries
and planted tomatoes.We also fed chickens and rode horses.We
leamed a lot.The farm was so beautiful that we took a lot of photos.
We had a picnic by the river in the afternoon.We were so happy.
All in all,we learned a lot and had a good time on the farm.
主题2多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
一阶课本句型促写作
1.We will have a school trip to visit the science museum next month.
2.I'm sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
3.Reading aloud is one of the good ways of learning English well.
4.We are all full of excitement and thirsty for interesting stories in
the books.
5.My teacher always encourages me and helps me to become a better
person.
6.I take an active part in the school's English corner to practice
speaking.
7.If we make full use of the school library,we can read more good
books after class.
8.In order to win the basketball match,our team practices hard ev-
ery aftemoon.
9.Even though the math exam was difficult,I tried my best to finish
all the questions.
10.As long as we listen carefully in class,we can understand the
knowledge easily.
二阶典例探究明思路
Our After-class Activities
Nowadays,students have more free time to take part in after-
class activities.With no exception,there are many after-class activi-
ties in my school.We can do sports,play instruments,study Eng-
lish,and so on.I like these activities very much.
For me,English corner is my favorite activity because I can
make a lot of friends and we can talk about everything together.I try
to speak more there so that I can improve my English quickly,and
my teacher says this is a good way to learn.
In my opinion,after-class activities are very important for us
students.Firstly,we can build our bodies by taking exercise.Sec-
ondly,we can build good relationships with other students.What's
more,we can leam from each other through communication.I hope
there will be more colorful after-class activities.
三阶写作实战提能力
In the past three years,we experienced a lot and surely made pro-
gress.As for me,the most unforgettable person in my junior high life
is my English teacher,Ms.Wang.She has short curly hair and al-
ways wears a warm smile.She is warm-hearted and patient.She is al-
ways ready to help others.
What I remember most is how she helped me with my shyness.
Once,I froze when I was asked to answer a question in class.Instead
of letting me sit down,she patiently guided me with simple ques-
tions.When I finally spoke out,she cheered for me loudly.Since
then,I've become brave enough to join in English discussions.
She also taught us more than just grammar.She often
encouraged us to study English well and told us,"Language is a
bridge to the world.Now,as I look back,I realize she didn't just
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teach English-she helped me grow.I'll always remember her kind-
ness and encouragement.
二、
The School Corner and Me
Among all the corners of my school,the garden is my favorite
place.Located behind the classroom building,it has a big tree with
thick leaves,colorful flowers,and soft grass.Several wooden chairs
are placed under the tree,creating a peaceful spot for students to re-
lax
One sunny afternoon,I sat there reading a book but felt upset a-
bout my math exam.My classmate Ma Li noticed my worries and
asked if I needed help.We spent hours discussing math problems
under the tree.From that day on,the garden became our secret study
spot.We shared stories,did homework,and even laughed about silly
mistakes.Her patience and kindness turned my stress into confi-
dence.
The garden is more than just a beautiful corner.It recorded my
growth,friendships,and unforgettable moments.Every time I pass
by,I smile,remembering how the quiet place brought warmth to my
school life.This corner is not just a place,but a valuable treasure of
my growth.
主题3积极的学习体验,恰当的
学习方法,勤学善思
一阶课本句型促写作
1.You can make good use of online courses to get new knowledge.
2.Don't be afraid of asking for help when you need it.
3.The more carefully you listen in class,the more knowledge you
will get.
4.By planning time properly,we will have the ability to balance
study and rest.
5.There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our daily
lives.
6.English is so helpful that I can use it to communicate with foreign-
ers freely.
7.It's important for middle school students to keep good reading hab-
its.
三阶写作实战提能力
English Homework Helps Me Level Up!
I am Li Hua from Class 1,Grade 9.My favourite kind of English
homework is acting out a play.It can help improve my language skills
and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 8,my teacher asked us to act out the play
Romeo and Juliet in a group of six.It was a big challenge.Firstly,I
read the play with group members and we shared our understanding of
the play.Then,we chose our roles and practised the lines a lot.My
spoken English has improved greatly during the practice.In the end,
we put on a great show and won praise.Now I'm interested in acting
and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public
I hope our English homework can be more meaningful and more
creative like this.Thanks.
Reading-a Lifelong Journey
Summer vacation is coming.We should do something meaning
ful.As we know,reading plays an important role in our lives.We can
get knowledge and learn many skills by reading books.Besides,we
can develop interests through reading and make our lives colorful.
There are many kinds of books we can read,such as great books,sci-
ence books and even newspapers.Magazines about study are also
good choices for us.
We can read books in our free time,and it's a good idea to
choose a quiet place to read books,like the library.How about join-
ing the Reading Club in our school?While reading,it's necessary to第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
·中考命题角度探究
2023陕西书面表达:介绍父亲节当天的计划
陕西中考
2021陕西书面表达:介绍自己暑假去社区参加志愿活动的计划
2025试卷示例(三):学校下周末开展郊游活动,描写你的计划和
中考命题
期待的场景
角度探究
假期旅行计划与感受
全国视野
让周末生活或者暑期生活过得更充实且有意义的建议
教材单元主题链接
人教版
七(上)U2 The family
七(下)U12 Weekend activities
七(下)U2 Daily routines
八(上)UI Holidays and vacations
七(下)U3 Transportation
八(上)U2 Free time activities
七(下)U6 Everyday activities
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课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
l.I'm having a great time visiting my aunt in Shaanxi.[人教七(下)U7改编]
2.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting..[人教七(下)UIl]
3.Last month we asked our students about their free time activities..[人教八(上)U2]
开头句
4.My holiday is very colorful.The most important thing is to learn something new and have fun.
八(上)U3改编]
5.It's necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and visit all
the places you want to see.
1.Every year,my family and I take a photo together under the big tree in our village.I like taking photos
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because they help me remember fun times with my family.[新人教七(上)U7]
常
2.I go swimming two or three times a week.Swimming is good for me because it keeps me healthy.
人教七(下)U3]
中
活
间
动3.We had a wonderful party last night and everybody had a good time.[外研七(下)Ml0]
句
4.Acting is fun and useful..You can meet lots of new people and improve your social skills..[冀教七(下)U4]
1.There are lots of ways to relax and have fun.However,the most important part of a holiday is to
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rest your mind and body.[新人教八(上)U1]
活
2.I'm going to the countryside with my dad..We are going to plant trees..[冀教七(下)U4]
动3.I think it's better to have our picnic at the top of the hill.[外研八(下)M8]
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1.No matter how many difficulties we have,I believe all problems can be solved in the end.
(全)U7]
结尾句
2.You'll make mistakes along the way,but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up.
[人教九(全)U14]
3.Although all of us felt very tired,we created the happiest memories.
1.Life is what you make it..你的生活由你创造。
俗语
2.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
谚语
3.Time flies when you''re having fun.快乐的时光,总是飞逝。
自课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.上周末,我们在滨河公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip:have a great time)
2.我喜欢在假期爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip:because;it makes sb.feel..)
3.周末和父母到乡下去亲近自然更好。(Tip:t's better to do sth.;get close to)
4.我们可以参加很多有意义的活动,比如读书和做志愿工作。(Tip:such as)
5.当我们参加社团活动时,最重要的事情是与他人友好相处。(Tip:the most important thing is to.)
6.当我们和父母一起旅行时,保持安全和开心是关键。(Tip:the key is to.…)
7.在我去西安旅行期间,我参观了很多名胜古迹。(Tip:places of interest)
8.在寒假结束时,我们全家一起看了一部令人放松的电影。(Tip:at the end of)
◆句式升格
9.Students go on a trip.The trip can help students open their minds.(Tip:It's necessary for...;so that)
10.We met many troubles on vacation.The beautiful scenery always made us forget troubles.(Tip:No matter how
many troubles...)
二阶典例探究明思路
同学们,暑假即将来临,你打算如何度过一个有意义的暑假?本次
审题四要素:
的写作任务是以“A Meaningful Vacation'”为题,写一篇英语小短文。请
你根据写作要求,简单介绍你的暑期计划,认真完成写作任务。
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称为主
study(finish your homework,do some reading,...)
审时态:一般将来时为主
.health(healthy eating habits,exercise,...)
审要点:依次从学习、健康、生活
●life(share housework,cook,.))
和其他方面谈谈自己的暑假计划
A Meaningful Vacation
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②写作剖析
一、构思:框架导图&参考表达
Beginning-一点明
参考表达:
例:为一个有意义的假期制定一份好计划是非常重要的。
①It is important to
(翻译)
主题,过一个有
意义暑假的计划
do sth.;②make a
good plan for...
参考表达:
例:俗话说,“读书使人充实。”(翻译)
Body一依次从学
①as the saying goes:
习、健康、生活
②plan to do sth.;
和其他方面谈谈
③want to do sth.;
例:我会分担一些家务,比如做饭和打扫卫生。(翻译)》
自己的暑假计划
(④such us;
⑤ry to do sth.;
6remember to do sth
参考表达:
例:总而言之,我会充分利用时间,度过一个有意义
Ending—表达你的
①in a word;
的假期。(翻译)
感想和期望
②make full use of.
二、落笔:连句成篇&独立写作
A Meaningful Vacation
“构思”答案:It is very important to make a good plan for a meaningful vacation..;As the saying goes,“Reading
makes a full man.";I will share some housework,such as cooking and doing some cleaning.;In a word,I will
make full use of time to spend a meaningful vacation.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、千年古都,常来长安。随着中国过境免签政策的实施,越来越多的外国游客想来感受西安的魅力。假如
你是李华,你收到了笔友Petr的邮件。他和他的家人想在转机回国之前,利用免签政策,在陕西游玩三天。
请你写一封邮件来给他提一些旅游建议,包含以下内容:
Place:In the northwest of China
Places of interest:Xi'an Bell
Others:..
Tower,Terracotta Warriors,
Huashan Mountain,...
Specials:Roujiamo,Shaanxi
liangpi,Biangbiang noodles,...
要求:
1.先补全邮件格式中缺少的部分,再写邮件内容:
2.邮件应包含题目要求所给关键信息,可适当发挥;
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3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4.邮件中不得出现真实的个人信息;
5.词数:不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
I'm so glad that you and your parents will pay a visit to Shaanxi.
I hope you'll love Shaanxi as much as I do.Let me know if you need more tips.
二、“近水识鱼性,近山识鸟音。”为了让学生们了解农场,学习农耕文化(agricultural culture),亲近自然,体验
劳动实践,5月9日,你校在红星农场(Red Star Farm)开展了一次农场研学活动。请你以“A Farm Trip Made
Me Happy”为题,写一篇英语短文叙述你的经历和感受,并谈谈你对此次活动的看法。
参考词汇:visit,labor劳动,all kinds of,.pick,happy,have a good time,…
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥:
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计人总词数。)
A Farm Trip Made Me Happy
In order to help students know more about farms,learn about agricultural culture,get close to nature,and
experience labor practices,our school held a farm trip last month.
Reflecting
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How well can you do these things?
Very well
OK
Needs work
·I can keep my writing paper clean..(2分)
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.I can use correct English expressions in writing.(5)
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●I can write all the points..(5分)
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My article is clearly structured and well organized.(3)
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Self-assessment
Overall comment
Peer review
Teacher's assessment
Total score:
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