内容正文:
I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.That's what I
want to share with you
Thank you!
训练三:Learning Some Skills is Important
It's important for us to learn some skills.As for me,I always
cook for my parents when I'm free.
A year ago,my parents were often busy with work,so I decided
to cook a meal for them.First,I washed some vegetables and cut
them into pieces.And then after watching some videos on the Inter-
net,I followed the steps carefully.Finally,I did it well.My parents
were very happy.
From this experience,I knew that we should always try some-
thing new to enrich our life.
微技能四拓展写作内容
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
3.We should make good use of time.
4.They would like to watch a movie
5.You are supposed to finish your homework first.
6.She made a decision to leam dancing.
7.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
8.Technology is important.For example,it helps us study online
easily.
9.He was late for school today because there was heavy traffic on the
roads.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her mom.
11.He learns English by watching English movies.
12.I'm Lucy,a middle school student who loves painting
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
针对训练
第二部分
高频
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhe Park
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it makes me
feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to get
close to nature.
4.We can take part in many meaningful activities,such as reading
books and doing volunteer work.
5.When we take part in club activities,the most important thing is
to get along well with others.
6.When we travel with our parents,the key is to stay safe and hap-
7.During my trip to Xi'an,I visited many places of interest.
8.At the end of the winter holiday,my whole family watched a rela-
xing movie together.
9.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help them
open their minds.
10.No matter how many troubles we met on vacation,the beautiful
scenery always made us forget them.
二阶典例探究明思路
A Meaningful Vacation
The summer vacation is coming soon.How can we make it
meaningful?It is very important to make a good plan for a meaningful
vacation.
As the saying goes,"Reading makes a full man.So firstly,I plan
to do some reading after I finish my homework.Secondly,nothing is
1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs
2.I love English because it opens a window to know different cultures
around the world.
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
down.
5.There is a small garden behind the library.
6.It's important for us students to balance our studies and hobbies
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communicate
with foreigners confidently.
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
11.Not only did I get knowledge,but I also built my character dur-
ing the process.
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world widely
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
-,1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in the
park.
4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,health is
more important.
5.I started to leam painting this term.It makes me feel relaxed.
What's more,it helps me find the beauty in daily life.
二、主题1:l.because/..2.Compared with/.…
3.What's more/...4.In my opinion/...
主题2:l.First of all/..2.Then/..3.not only
4.but also 5.Finally/...6.All in all/...
主题三阶写作指导
more important than good health.I want to do more exercise,such as
running and swimming.Also,I will develop healthy eating habits.
I'll eat more fruits and vegetables.Thirdly,I will share some
housework,such as cooking and doing some cleaning.What's more.
I will try to help others and always remember to be safe in daily life.
In a word,I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful
vacation.
三阶写作实战提能力
-、Dear Peter,
I'm so glad that you and your parents will pay a visit to Shaanxi.
Anyone coming to Shaanxi is sure to have a good time.Let me share
something about traveling in Shaanxi.
Shaanxi Province lies in the northwest of China.It is a beautiful
place with a long history.Shaanxi Province is known for Chinese
ancient culture because there are many places of interest.Visitors can
enjoy themselves here.If you come to Shaanxi Province,I advise you
to go to Xi'an Bell Tower,Terracotta Warriors and Huashan Moun-
tain
Also.Shaanxi Province is famous for its delicious food like
Roujiamo,Shaanxi liangpi,Biangbiang noodles and so on.As the
saying goes,"Life is a journey to experience,to learn and to enjoy.
So come to Shaanxi Province and you'll have an unforgettable
experience.
I hope you'll love Shaanxi as much as I do.Let me know if you
need more tips.
Yours,
Li Hua
27例:
My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day.It warms my heart.()Every evening,we sit around the
table.Mom cooks delicious food,like fried chicken and tomato soup.Dad tells funny work stories.Once,he told us
a story about a“silly boss"”we laughed so hard(支持细节)Family dinner isn't just about delicious meals and
jokes-一when troubles come,it becomes our“problem-solving corner'”L(过渡句)Last week,the sadness I felt from
the text disappeared right here.(支持细节)Alin.al,.family.dinner.time.is.love.on aplate.Il.keep.enjoying this
warm time.forever.(结论句)
©针对训练
根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节和结论句。
训练一:Summer holiday is coming!
训s练二:Good morning,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How to Be Happy”"
Thank you!
训练三:
Learning Some Skills Is Important
It's important for us to learn some skills.
微技能四
拓展写作内容
技巧工巧用高级表达
在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段常用的初阶词汇与高阶词汇转换表。
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
help帮助
give..a hand帮助…;make a big difference to.对.…产生重大影响,起重要作用
hope希望
look forward to sth./doing sth.期待某物/做某事
like喜欢
be interested in../have a(strong)interest in..对…(非常)感兴趣
fall in love with..爱上…
remember记得
keep..in mind将…牢记在心中
use使用
make good/full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分利用某物
visit参观
pay a visit to参观
should应该
be supposed to应该
decide to do sth.
make a decision to do sth.决定做某事
决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth..某人下定决心做某事
try to do sth
try one''s best to do sth.某人尽全力做某事
尽力做某事
make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
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续表
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
want to do sth.
feel like doing sth.would like to do sth.想要做某事
想要做某事
don't want to do sth.
would rather do A than do B/prefer to do A rather than do B宁愿做A也不愿做B
不想做某事
技巧2巧扩要点
写作的时候,我们经常遇到写完主谓宾(或主系表)就不知道如何往下写的情况。这时可以运用一定的
方法对句子进行扩展以表达更完整、更具体的意思。
方法
示例
Alice is a teacher
添加定语对名词进行限制
→Alice is a patient teacher..(用形容词扩写)】
或说明,如形容词、介词短
→Alice is a patient teacher in a junior high school.(用介词短语扩写)
语、分词短语、定语从句等
Alice is a patient teacher who is popular among the students in a junior high school.
(用定语从句扩写)
1.We should learn English well.
-We should learn English well because it is widely spoken around the world.
添加副词、不定式、分词、
写原因)
状语从句等状语表示时
2.She often listens to music.
间、地点、方式、程度、目
She often listens to music to help her relax and forget her worries.(扩写目的)
的、原因、结果等
3.
You will get good grades.
You will get good grades as long as you listen to the teacher carefully and
finish your homework on time.(扩写条件)
添加同位语,如名词、名词
I'm Li Hua.
短语等
→'m Li Hua,a middle school student from Nanning.(添加同位语)
1.Grace has many hobbies.
添加例子作补充说明,如
-Grace has many hobbies,such as painting,dancing and playing the piano.
用like,such as列举事物
such as列举)
或用for example举例说2.Technology makes life easier.
明等
-Technology makes life easier.For example,we can shop online without going
out.(用for example举例)
@针对训练
1.Reading helps me learn a lot.(Tip:make a big difference to...)
2.She likes painting very much.(Tip:have a strong interest in...)
3.We should use time wisely.(Tip:make good use of...)
4.They want to watch a movie.(Tip:would like)
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5.You should finish your homework first.(Tip:be supposed to...)
6.She decided to learn dancing.(Tip:make a decision to do sth.
7.My friend is a student.(Tip:hard-working,in our school)
8.Technology is important..(Tip:用for example补充说明)》
9.He was late for school today.(Tip:用because扩写原因)
10.She saves money every month.(Tip:扩写目的)
1l.He learns English.(Tip:用by doing sth.扩写方式)
12.m Lucy.(Tip:添加同位语)
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
技巧1巧用复合句
复合句
常见连接词
示例
and(并列),but(转折),or(选择),so(结
并列复合句
果),for(原因),yet(转折),not only.
We went to the park and played football there.
but also.(递进)等
时间状语从句:when,while,as,before,
When I wake up in the morning,I always drink a glass of
after,since,until/till,as soon as
water first.
原因状语从句:because,since,as
I love spring because everything comes back to life.
条件状语从句:if,unless,as long as
If you practice speaking English every day,your English
状语从句
will improve quickly.
I get up early every day so that I can have enough time to
目的状语从句:so that,.in order that
review my lessons.
结果状语从句:so.that,such.hat
The story is so interesting that I read it three times.
让步状语从句:although,though,even
Although the exam was difficult,I still tried my best.
though/if
that(可省略)
I believe (that)practice makes perfect.
宾语从句
if whether
I wonder if/whether the school trip will be canceled.
The teacher explained why this grammar rule is
what,which,who,when,where,why,how
important.
who,whom
The girl who sits next to me is good at drawing.
which,that
The birthday gift that my parents gave me made me cry.
定语从句
whose
That's the student whose science project won first prize.
when,where,why
Give me the reason why you're late.
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