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14.She wants to eat delicious something.
句子改错
例:My uncle is play basketball now.
play改为playing
15.She has a red beautiful dress.
1.My father a doctor in the hospital.
16.This book is real interesting.
2.I want to buy book.
17.My mom bought I a new bag.
3.There are five child in the classroom.
18.This is mine book.
4.He bought two tomato just now.
19.There are any apples on the table.
20.I'm interesting in English.
5.The girl with two cats are playing in the yard.
21.He arrived to London last night.
22.She is afraid from dogs.
6.They was late for class yesterday.
23.We'll have a party on next Friday.
7.We aren't have a meeting today.
24.I'll wait you at the bus station.
8.She can sings very well.
25.He is a honest boy.
9.She apologized for his mistake.
26.There is an university in this city
10.He has lunch at 12 o'clock yesterday.
27.He plays piano very well.
28.He is one of best students in our class.
11.The letter was wrote by my sister.
29.My birthday is on July five.
12.Many trees plant every spring.
30.Thousand of students joined the volunteer activity.
13.I have a cat black.
微技能三
如何组织段落
句子类型
位置
作用
示例
主题句→
段落开头第明确段落核心
Reading is my favorite hobby.It lets me travel around the world through
定方向
一问
内容
pages.
衔接段落内不同
Every day,I read for half an hour.I love funny storybooks,like Cat in
支持细节
过渡句→
内容,或为下段
the Hat..It makes me laugh with the cat's silly tricks.(支持细节l)
之间/段落
搭桥梁
作铺垫,让行文
Reading not only makes me laugh with funny stories,but also helps me
末尾
更流畅
solve real-life problems..(过渡句l:段落内衔接,从“阅读的快乐”转
到“阅读的实用帮助”)Once,my little sister was crying because of a
broken toy.I told her an interesting story from my book.It made her
支持细节
用例子、原因等
smile again!(支持细节2)But wait-一reading has another super
主题句之后
给支撑
充实内容
power!It even helps me face my fears bravely.Let's talk about it next.
(过渡句2:段尾为下段作铺垫,为“阅读让我变得勇敢”作铺垫)
支持细节之
增强句子连贯性
and,what's more,besides,so,therefore,in order that,however,
逻辑连接
first(ly),then,next,for example,in a word,all in all
直接总结型:n short,reading is like a magic key.It unlocks fun
stories,new knowledge,and good times with friends.I'll never stop
结论句→段落最后一
reading!
总结段落内容
收闭环
句
情感升华型:Reading isn't just a hobby-一it's my best friend!It stays
with me when I'm happy or sad,teaching me and making me laugh.It's
a friend that grows up with me!
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例:
My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day.It warms my heart.()Every evening,we sit around the
table.Mom cooks delicious food,like fried chicken and tomato soup.Dad tells funny work stories.Once,he told us
a story about a“silly boss"”we laughed so hard(支持细节)Family dinner isn't just about delicious meals and
jokes-一when troubles come,it becomes our“problem-solving corner'”L(过渡句)Last week,the sadness I felt from
the text disappeared right here.(支持细节)Alin.al,.family.dinner.time.is.love.on aplate.Il.keep.enjoying this
warm time.forever.(结论句)
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根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节和结论句。
训练一:Summer holiday is coming!
训s练二:Good morning,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How to Be Happy”"
Thank you!
训练三:
Learning Some Skills Is Important
It's important for us to learn some skills.
微技能四
拓展写作内容
技巧工巧用高级表达
在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段常用的初阶词汇与高阶词汇转换表。
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
help帮助
give..a hand帮助…;make a big difference to.对.…产生重大影响,起重要作用
hope希望
look forward to sth./doing sth.期待某物/做某事
like喜欢
be interested in../have a(strong)interest in..对…(非常)感兴趣
fall in love with..爱上…
remember记得
keep..in mind将…牢记在心中
use使用
make good/full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分利用某物
visit参观
pay a visit to参观
should应该
be supposed to应该
decide to do sth.
make a decision to do sth.决定做某事
决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth..某人下定决心做某事
try to do sth
try one''s best to do sth.某人尽全力做某事
尽力做某事
make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
76.him 7.sleepy 8.carefully 9.cold 10.better
Passage 11
Passage 10
1.has 2.decided 3.colorful 4.practice 5.seems
1.invented 2.ships 3.are 4.popular 5.pollute
6.slowly
6.smart 7.songs 8.her 9.truly 10.praised
7.harmful 8.their 9.more 10.have
主题写作培优册
第一部分
写作六大微技能
微技能一正确使用常见标点符号和单词大小写5.she likes playing basketball after school.
类型1正确使用常见标点符号
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6.my best friend is emma,and she is from canada.
M
E
1.What time is it now
7.We will visit the great wall during the summer holiday.
G W
2.Do you like reading books
8.Mom said i should finish my homework before watching TV.
I
3.Im sure I saw a deer just now
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9.children's day is one of the most important festivals in many
C
D
4.Be careful The road is wet
countries.
10.I heard doctor lee will give us a talk about health next week.
5.You are from China,arent you
11.Yesterday,uncle tom brought us some candies from london.
6.Wow What a beautiful flower it is
UT
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12.We leamed a poem called in the garden of my heart.
7.Do you want to go to the park or the cinema
MH
微技能二写出正确的句子
8.She is a kind hearted girl who often helps others
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1.father后加is2.book前加a/he3.child改为children
9.We moved to our new house on January 2nd 2024
N
4.tomato改为tomatoes5.are改为is6.was改为were
7.aren't改为dont8.sings改为sing或删掉can9.his改为
10.On a sunny morning we went to the park for a picnic
、
her或She改为Hel0.has改为had1l.wrote改为written
11.In the basket there are apples bananas oranges
l2.plant改为are planted 13.cat black改为black cat
and
14.delicious something something delicious
l5.red beautiful改为beautiful red16.real改为really17.I改
grapes
为mel8.mine改为my19.any改为some
20.interesting改为interested21.to改为in22.from改为of
12.Mr.Smith a patient teacher is loved by all his
23.删除on24.wait后加for25.a改为an
26.an改为a27.piano前加the28.best前加the
students
29.five改为fifth30.Thousand改为Thousands
微技能三如何组织段落
13.I looked at the math problem thinking How could I solve it
今
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训练-:Summer holiday is coming!I would like to make it meaning-
14.After a long day at work she finally got home She made a cup
ful and fun.
First,I plan to take part in community activities.I will volun-
of tea and sat on the sofa
teer at the local library.This will teach me responsibility and allow
me to help others.
15.Before leaving Mom reminded me
“/Don'tforget to take
Second,I want to learn a basic life skill.I'm going to learn how
your umbrella It might rain"
to cook some simple Chinese dishes from my grandma.I believe it's
important to know this skill and I can also make delicious food for my
family!
类型2正确使用单词大小写
I'm sure my summer holiday will be both colorful and meaning
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ful!
1.I can speak chinese and a little english
训练二:Good moming,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How
to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
2.Our school trip is on friday,october 12th.
First of all,we must keep healthy.Without good health,we will
F
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lose everything.So we should have good living habits and try our best
3.The sign says“no smoking”in the library
to take exercise every day.Next,we should have good hobbies.
NS
Some colorful hobbies can also bring us joy.Finally,we are sup-
4.Have you read the book the little prince?
posed to be ready to help others.When we help those in trouble,we
can get much happiness.
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I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.That's what I 1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs.
want to share with you.
2.I love English because it opens a window to know different cultures
Thank you!
around the world.
训练三:Learning Some Skills is Important
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
It's important for us to learn some skills.As for me,I always
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
cook for my parents when I'm free
down.
A year ago,my parents were often busy with work,so I decided 5.There is a small garden behind the library.
to cook a meal for them.First,I washed some vegetables and cut i6.It's important for us students to balance our studies and hobbies.
them into pieces.And then after watching some videos on the Inter-
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
net,I followed the steps carefully.Finally,I did it well.My parents
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communicate
were very happy.
with foreigners confidently.
From this experience,I knew that we should always try some-
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot.
thing new to enrich our life.
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
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11.Not only did I get knowledge,but I also built my character dur
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ing the process.
1.Reading makes a big difference to my learning.
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world widely.
2.She has a strong interest in painting
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
3.We should make good use of time.
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4.They would like to watch a movie
-1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax
5.You are supposed to finish your homework first.
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly.
6.She made a decision to leam dancing.
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in the
7.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
park.
8.Technology is important.For example,it helps us study online
i4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,health is
easily.
more important.
9.He was late for school today because there was heavy traffic on the
5.I started to leam painting this term.It makes me feel relaxed
roads.
What's more,it helps me find the beauty in daily life.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her mom.
二、主题1:l.because/..2.Compared with/.…
11.He learns English by watching English movies.
3.What's more/...4.In my opinion/...
12.I'm Lucy,a middle school student who loves painting.
主题2:l.First of all/..2.Then/..3.not only
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
4.but also 5.Finally/...6.All in all/...
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第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
more important than good health.I want to do more exercise,such as
一阶课本句型促写作
running and swimming.Also,I will develop healthy eating habits.
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhe Park.
I'll eat more fruits and vegetables.Thirdly,I will share some
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it makes me
housework,such as cooking and doing some cleaning.What's more
feel relaxed.
I will try to help others and always remember to be safe in daily life
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to get
In a word,I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful
close to nature.
vacation.
4.We can take part in many meaningful activities,such as reading
三阶写作实战提能力
books and doing volunteer work.
-、Dear Peter,
5.When we take part in club activities,the most important thing is
I'm so glad that you and your parents will pay a visit to Shaanxi.
to get along well with others.
Anyone coming to Shaanxi is sure to have a good time.Let me share
6.When we travel with our parents,the key is to stay safe and hap-
something about traveling in Shaanxi
Py.
Shaanxi Province lies in the northwest of China.It is a beautiful
7.During my trip to Xi'an,I visited many places of interest.
place with a long history.Shaanxi Province is known for Chinese
8.At the end of the winter holiday,my whole family watched a rela-
ancient culture because there are many places of interest.Visitors can
xing movie together
enjoy themselves here.If you come to Shaanxi Province,I advise you
9.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help them to go to Xi'an Bell Tower,Terracotta Warriors and Huashan Moun-
open their minds
tain
10.No matter how many troubles we met on vacation,the beautiful
Also.Shaanxi Province is famous for its delicious food like
scenery always made us forget them.
Roujiamo,Shaanxi liangpi,Biangbiang noodles and so on.As the
二阶典例探究明思路
saying goes,"Life is a journey to experience,to learn and to enjoy."
A Meaningful Vacation
So come to Shaanxi Province and you'll have an unforgettable
The summer vacation is coming soon.How can we make it i
experience.
meaningful?It is very important to make a good plan for a meaningful
I hope you'll love Shaanxi as much as I do.Let me know if you
vacation.
need more tips.
As the saying goes,"Reading makes a full man."So firstly,I plan
Yours,
to do some reading after I finish my homework.Secondly,nothing is
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