内容正文:
微技能二写出正确的句子
技巧1熟悉句子成分
成分
作用
位置
示例
动作的执行者、事物或被
主语
放在句首,动词之前
Maria and her sister go to the piano
描述的对象
class every week
对主语的行为或状态加以
They can create and play beautiful
谓语
主语后
陈述
music.
Maria's brother plays the guitar and the
宾语
动作的对象或动作承受者
动词或介词后
violin.
宾语补补充说明宾语的动作、身
宾语后
足语
份或状态等
I find this story interesting.
说明主语的性质、状态或
表语
系动词之后
She is my mother.
特征等
对名词或代词进行修饰或
一般放在所修饰词之前;不定式、
The woman with a baby in her arms is
定语
限定的词、词组或句子
短语或从句放在所修饰词之后
my mother.
位置灵活:修饰形容词或副词时,
表示动作的时间、地点、方
The result is surprisingly good.
般放在其前:修饰动词时,通常
式、原因、目的等,用于修
I love my mother deeply
状语
放在其后,如果是不及物动词,副
饰动词、形容词、副词或
Luckily,no one was hurt in the
词可放在句首或句末;若修饰整个
句子
accident.
句子,通常放在句子的开头或末尾
个名词对另一个名词或
同位语
名词或代词之后
We students should study hard.
代词进行解释或补充说明
技巧2排查常见错误
1.检查句子成分是否完整
错误原因
X
缺主语
John is my brother.Works at Ames Bank
John is my brother.He works at Ames Bank
缺谓语
Many people white cars.
Many people have white cars
缺宾语
She always carries in her pocket.
She always carries a pen in her pocket.
缺宾补
She found the room very.
She found the room very cold.
2.
检查名词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
可数名词单数形式
Jill made sandwich.
Jill made a sandwich./Jill made sandwiches.
不能单独出现
可数名词复数形式错误
I saw some sheeps.
I saw some sheep.
将不可数名词用作可数名词I will give you two advices.
I will give you two pieces of advice.
3
续表
错误原因
X
不可数名词误用不定
Sara has an information.
Sara has information.
冠词/复数形式
Sara has informations.
集合名词主谓一致错误
His family are very big.
His family is very big.
3.
检查动词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
易混动词误用
There have a book on the desk.
There is a book on the desk.
He call his parents every day.
He calls his parents every day.
主谓一致错误
There is ten people in my
There are ten people in my office.
office.
be动词形式错误
I is a student.
I am a student.
You not at school today.
You are not at school today.
否定形式错误
Ella not wrote a report for her
Ella did not write a report for her boss.
boss
情态动词使用错误
We might to play football
(情态动词后跟动词原形)
We might play football tomorrow.
tomorrow.
She tried
to avoid
to
动词搭配错误
She tried to avoid meeting him.
meet him
We call our parents yesterday.
We called our parents yesterday.
They will not came to the
They will not come to the party.
时态错误
party.
The environment in our school is becoming better
The environment in our school
and better.
is become better and better.
语态错误
The book wrote by Mo Yan.
The book was written by Mo Yan.
4.检查形容词或副词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
形容词位置错误
I have a car red.
I have a red car.
多个形容词修饰同一名词,顺
序混乱(形容词顺序一般是
I bought a wooden big table.
I bought a big wooden table.
限定词/描述类/大小√形状/新
He has a blue new car.
He has a new blue car.
旧/颜色/国籍/材料/用途)
The flower smells sweetly.
The flower smells sweet.
形容词、副词混用
She looks happily today.
She looks happy today.
She sings beautiful.
She sings beautifully.
5.检查代词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
Her and I are good friends.
She and I are good friends.
主格/宾格混淆
Mom gave he a new book.
Mom gave him a new book.
续表
错误原因
X
物主代词错用
Their classroom is big.Our is small.
Their classroom is big.Ours is small.
some/any错用
I don't have some books.
I don't have any books.
They are five people in my family.
There are five people in my family
相似词错用
Piano keys have two colors.There
Piano keys have two colors.They are black and
are black and white.
white.
6.检查介词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
I was born on 2010.
I was born in 2010.
介词错用
She is at Beijing now.
She is in Beijing now.
He is waiting on me.
He is waiting for me
介词遗漏
He is good playing basketball.
He is good at playing basketball.
介词多余
I will go to home at 5 o'clock.
will go home at 5 o'clock.
7.检查冠词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
a/an混用
I have an useful book.
I have a useful book.
(看单词首字母发音
It was raining hard,and she didn't It was raining hard,and she didn't have an
音素,不是首字母)》
have a umbrella
umbrella.
I saw elephant in the zoo.
I saw an elephant in the zoo.
冠词缺失或多余
Pass me book on the desk.
Pass me the book on the desk.
He plays the basketball well.
He plays basketball well.
8.检查数词是否正确使用
错误原因
X
序数词前忘加
She is first student to arrive.
She is the first student to arrive.
the/其他限定词
基数词当序数词用
Tomorrow is my ten birthday.
Tomorrow is my tenth birthday.
There are two thousands students in
our school
There are two thousand students in our school.
概数词是否加-s
There are
thousand of birds in
There are thousands of birds in the sky.
the sky.
9.检查是否被母语干扰出现错误
错误原因
X
I very much like English
I like English very much.
句子结构顺序颠倒
He yesterday went to the park.
He went to the park yesterday.
直译思维
Because he was ill,so he didn't go
Because he was ill,he didn't go to school./He
to school.
was ill,so he didn't go to school.
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@针对训练
14.She wants to eat delicious something.
句子改错
例:My uncle is play basketball now.
play改为playing
15.She has a red beautiful dress.
1.My father a doctor in the hospital.
16.This book is real interesting.
2.I want to buy book.
17.My mom bought I a new bag.
3.There are five child in the classroom.
18.This is mine book.
4.He bought two tomato just now.
19.There are any apples on the table.
20.I'm interesting in English.
5.The girl with two cats are playing in the yard.
21.He arrived to London last night.
22.She is afraid from dogs.
6.They was late for class yesterday.
23.We'll have a party on next Friday.
7.We aren't have a meeting today.
24.I'll wait you at the bus station.
8.She can sings very well.
25.He is a honest boy.
9.She apologized for his mistake.
26.There is an university in this city
10.He has lunch at 12 o'clock yesterday.
27.He plays piano very well.
28.He is one of best students in our class.
11.The letter was wrote by my sister.
29.My birthday is on July five.
12.Many trees plant every spring.
30.Thousand of students joined the volunteer activity.
13.I have a cat black.
微技能三
如何组织段落
句子类型
位置
作用
示例
主题句→
段落开头第明确段落核心
Reading is my favorite hobby.It lets me travel around the world through
定方向
一问
内容
pages.
衔接段落内不同
Every day,I read for half an hour.I love funny storybooks,like Cat in
支持细节
过渡句→
内容,或为下段
the Hat..It makes me laugh with the cat's silly tricks.(支持细节l)
之间/段落
搭桥梁
作铺垫,让行文
Reading not only makes me laugh with funny stories,but also helps me
末尾
更流畅
solve real-life problems..(过渡句l:段落内衔接,从“阅读的快乐”转
到“阅读的实用帮助”)Once,my little sister was crying because of a
broken toy.I told her an interesting story from my book.It made her
支持细节
用例子、原因等
smile again!(支持细节2)But wait-一reading has another super
主题句之后
给支撑
充实内容
power!It even helps me face my fears bravely.Let's talk about it next.
(过渡句2:段尾为下段作铺垫,为“阅读让我变得勇敢”作铺垫)
支持细节之
增强句子连贯性
and,what's more,besides,so,therefore,in order that,however,
逻辑连接
first(ly),then,next,for example,in a word,all in all
直接总结型:n short,reading is like a magic key.It unlocks fun
stories,new knowledge,and good times with friends.I'll never stop
结论句→段落最后一
reading!
总结段落内容
收闭环
句
情感升华型:Reading isn't just a hobby-一it's my best friend!It stays
with me when I'm happy or sad,teaching me and making me laugh.It's
a friend that grows up with me!
66.him 7.sleepy 8.carefully 9.cold 10.better
Passage 11
Passage 10
1.has 2.decided 3.colorful 4.practice 5.seems
1.invented 2.ships 3.are 4.popular 5.pollute
6.slowly
6.smart 7.songs 8.her 9.truly 10.praised
7.harmful 8.their 9.more 10.have
主题写作培优册
第一部分
写作六大微技能
微技能一正确使用常见标点符号和单词大小写5.she likes playing basketball after school.
类型1正确使用常见标点符号
针对训练
6.my best friend is emma,and she is from canada.
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1.What time is it now
7.We will visit the great wall during the summer holiday.
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2.Do you like reading books
8.Mom said i should finish my homework before watching TV.
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3.Im sure I saw a deer just now
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9.children's day is one of the most important festivals in many
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4.Be careful The road is wet
countries.
10.I heard doctor lee will give us a talk about health next week.
5.You are from China,arent you
11.Yesterday,uncle tom brought us some candies from london.
6.Wow What a beautiful flower it is
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12.We leamed a poem called in the garden of my heart.
7.Do you want to go to the park or the cinema
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微技能二写出正确的句子
8.She is a kind hearted girl who often helps others
针对训练
1.father后加is2.book前加a/he3.child改为children
9.We moved to our new house on January 2nd 2024
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4.tomato改为tomatoes5.are改为is6.was改为were
7.aren't改为dont8.sings改为sing或删掉can9.his改为
10.On a sunny morning we went to the park for a picnic
、
her或She改为Hel0.has改为had1l.wrote改为written
11.In the basket there are apples bananas oranges
l2.plant改为are planted 13.cat black改为black cat
and
14.delicious something something delicious
l5.red beautiful改为beautiful red16.real改为really17.I改
grapes
为mel8.mine改为my19.any改为some
20.interesting改为interested21.to改为in22.from改为of
12.Mr.Smith a patient teacher is loved by all his
23.删除on24.wait后加for25.a改为an
26.an改为a27.piano前加the28.best前加the
students
29.five改为fifth30.Thousand改为Thousands
微技能三如何组织段落
13.I looked at the math problem thinking How could I solve it
今
针对训练
训练-:Summer holiday is coming!I would like to make it meaning-
14.After a long day at work she finally got home She made a cup
ful and fun.
First,I plan to take part in community activities.I will volun-
of tea and sat on the sofa
teer at the local library.This will teach me responsibility and allow
me to help others.
15.Before leaving Mom reminded me
“/Don'tforget to take
Second,I want to learn a basic life skill.I'm going to learn how
your umbrella It might rain"
to cook some simple Chinese dishes from my grandma.I believe it's
important to know this skill and I can also make delicious food for my
family!
类型2正确使用单词大小写
I'm sure my summer holiday will be both colorful and meaning
针对训练
ful!
1.I can speak chinese and a little english
训练二:Good moming,everybody!Today I want to talk about“How
to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
2.Our school trip is on friday,october 12th.
First of all,we must keep healthy.Without good health,we will
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lose everything.So we should have good living habits and try our best
3.The sign says“no smoking”in the library
to take exercise every day.Next,we should have good hobbies.
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Some colorful hobbies can also bring us joy.Finally,we are sup-
4.Have you read the book the little prince?
posed to be ready to help others.When we help those in trouble,we
can get much happiness.
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