内容正文:
类别二经历感受类(2024贵州)
常见题目表述)
①人与自我:自我认识,自我管理与自我提升生活并非一成不变,总是充满了跌宕起伏。然而,他人一次
不经意的帮助,可能会带给我们别样的温暖。请根据下面图示,以“A()
Moment'”为题,用英语讲
述一次你接受他人帮助的经历以及你的感受,不少于80词。
Turning point
How
Rising action个
Falling action
Who
Why
Opening
When,What
Feeling
②人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活无论是长途旅行还是郊游,每一次旅行都是珍贵的回忆。请以
“My
Tp”为题,结合下面的图示及写作要求,用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文。
Where did you go
When did you go
for a trip?
for a trip?
What did you do
How did you feel
during your trip?
about the trip?
③人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活假设你是李华,学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你
的笔友Peter对这次活动很感兴趣。请结合以下提示,用英语给他写一封信,谈谈活动过程及你的感想。
listory Museum
◇learn about the Long March(长征)
listen to the stories of the Red Army
Folk Culture Center
Cenjoy paper-cutting art
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④人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生话4学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Delicious Memory”的
英文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你参考海报内容要点,选择一种食物,写一篇英语短文,讲述你与它之间的
故事,并分享它对你的特殊意义。
My Delicious Memory
English Club
●the special food
●your memory
about the food
●the meaning of
the delicious
memory
作文框架D
开头:以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历。
中间:讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果,即五个“W”(what,who,when,where,why)和一个
“H”(how)。
结尾:对上述经历进行总结,表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么或以后会怎么做。
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One
Experience
I'm glad to share
(我的经历).
When I first went into junior high school,I
(遇到的经历)because
(原因).Iwas/felt
(感受)and didn't know what to do.
(encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice.
First of all,
(我的行为①),which helped to
(这样做的结果①).Second,
(我的行为
2).In this way,I not only
but also
(这样做的结果②).Day by day,I could
(可
以做的事情)andI
(现在的行为)now.
Through the experience,I have fully realized that
(感悟)
优秀范文记背)
Passage 1
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Warm Moment
A Warm Moment
Beginning:引
Life is full of ups and downs,and
Life is full of ups and downs.Once,an act of
出话题
sometimes a small kind act can light up our
kindness from a classmate gave me a truly warm moment.
day.
Last Friday,it rained cats and dogs.When
Last Wednesday was a rainy day.
school was over,I dashed to the school gate,only to
After school,I found I had forgotten my realize I'd left my umbrella at home.Standing there,
Body:讲述一
umbrella at home.I was worried and didn't feeling anxious and helpless,I didn't know how to get
件你接受他
know what to do.Just then,my classmate back.Just then,my classmate Li Hua noticed me.
人帮助的Li Hua came over.He had an umbrella and
Without a second thought,he walked up and said
经历
said,“Let's share it..”We walked home
gently,"Let's share it."On the way,he kept moving
together.On the way home,he always tried
the umbrella to cover me well.Even though part of his
to keep me dry.His kindness gave me a
clothes got wet,he didn't care at all.His kind words
warm feeling.
and warm smile made the rainy day bright.
Ending:表达
This moment was unforgettable.I
This moment taught me the power of kindness.
自己的感受
made me want to help others in need too.
I'll surely help others just as he did.
Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Unforgettable Trip
My Unforgettable Trip
Beginning:表
School trips are always exciting!
Life is full of wonderful memories,and school trips are
明学校旅行
They bring us lots of fun memories.
always special.
是令自己难
Last Friday,our school took us
Last Friday,our school organized a trip to the Nature
忘的一次
to the Nature Park for a trip.We went
Park,which is a place full of natural wonders.In the
旅行
there by bus in the morning.First,
moming,we took a bus,chatting and laughing all the way.
we walked along a small path.We
As we walked along the winding path,the sweet smell of
saw colorful flowers and heard birds flowers filled the air.Our science teacher,with great
singing.Then,our science teacher patience,explained how plants grow,pointing at the thick
Body:详细介
showed us some interesting plants,trunks and tiny seeds under the soil.At noon,we spread out
绍旅行的时
like tall trees and small grass.At our picnic mats on the soft grass.While sharing delicious
间、地点和活
noon,we had a picnic on the grass.
food,we talked about our favorite parts of the trip.When
动等
We shared sandwiches and fruit.
the sun started to set,we went back,but the beauty of
Everyone was happy.
nature stayed in our hearts.
Ending:表达
This trip was really fun.It made
This trip wasn't just fun;it taught me to observe and
自己的感受
me love nature more.I can't wait for
appreciate the world carefully.I'll always remember this
the next school trip!
special day.
Passage 3
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:开
Dear Peter,
Dear Peter,
篇回应笔友
How is it going?Since you showed interest in
How is it going?I know you're
兴趣,引出介
our school's one-day practice activity last Friday,I'm
interested in our school activity last Friday,
绍实践活动
writing to share it with you in detail.
so I'm writing to tell you about it.
的意图
In the morning,we headed to the History
We had a one-day practice activity.
Museum.There,we learned about the Long March.
First,we went to the History Museum.
Body:按时间
The stories of the Red Army,full of courage and
There,we learned about the Long March and
顺序叙述当
perseverance,
touched our hearts deeply.In the
listened to the Red Army's stories.They
天的活动
afternoon,we visited the Folk Culture Center.We were
were really moving.Then,we visited the
crazy about the paper-cutting art,and amazed at how
Folk Culture Center.We enjoyed paper-
artists turned simple paper into wonderful works.
cutting art.It was amazing.
This activity was more than just a trip.It made
Ending:阐述
This activity was great.I learned a lot
me realize the value of our history and traditional
活动感想
about history and culture.I feel proud of our
culture.I have decided to explore more and pass
country's past and want to learn more.
them down.
Yours,
Yours,
Li Hua
Li Hua
Passage 4
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:表
My Delicious Memory
明能唤起特
My Delicious Memory
Food is not just about taste;it can bring back a
殊记忆的食
Food can bring back sweet memories.
special memory.Among all foods,zongzi holds the
物是什么
For me,zongzi is such a food.
most delicious memory for me.
Zongzi is a special food for the Dragon
Zongzi,a traditional treat for the Dragon Boat
Boat Festival.It has rice and red beans.
Festival,is usually made of rice and red beans.Last
Body:具体讲
Last year,my grandma made zongzi.I year,during the festival,my grandma and I had a
述你与食物
watched her and wanted to try.At first,my zongzi-making day.She taught me to fold the leaves
之间的故事
zongzi looked messy.Grandma laughed and and fill the rice carefully.Though my first try was a
helped me.When we ate it,it was really failure,grandma's patience made the process full of
delicious.It was the best zongzi I had ever joy.When we finally enjoyed the zongai,the sweet
eaten.
taste and warm feeling made me very happy.
Ending:阐述
This memory is special because I spent
This memory is special.Zongzi connects me
食物带来的
time with my grandma.Zongzi tastes good,
with grandma's deeply.Every time I see zongzi,I'm
意义
and it also means family love to me.
reminded of that happy day and the taste of love and
tradition.
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