内容正文:
第三部分写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别一写人叙事类(5年3考)
常见题目表述
①●人与自我:自我认识,自我管理与自我提升4在每个人的生活中,总会有一个值得敬佩的人,成为我们心
中的榜样。你校五四青年节将要组织一次英语演讲比赛,请你参考以下图示,以“A Hero in My Heart'”为题,
用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。
Who:
father,mother,firefighter,teacher...
Why:
1.patient and kind
2.bring hope to people
3.give people a lot of warmth
How:
1.take...as my role model
2.help those in need
②●人与自我:自我认识,自我管理与自我提升&人与社会:志愿服务4志愿服务是一种很有意义的助人方
式,能够带来积极的影响。假如你是李华,贵州志愿者之家正在招募志愿者,请认真阅读以下信件,并按要求
写一篇英语短文,应征志愿者。
Dear teenagers,
Guizhou Volunteer Center needs lots of volunteers for Old People's Home,Children's Hospital and History
Museum.Would you like to spend your weekends helping old people,cheering up sick children or explaining local
culture to visitors?If so,please write to us and let us know.
Here are some questions to help you.
Why do you want to be a volunteer?
What experience do you have?
·What is your plan?
We are looking forward to receiving your application.
Guizhou Volunteer Center
③●人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活在我们的校园生活中,老师扮演着至关重要的角色。他们不
仅传授知识,还给予我们关心和鼓励。假设你是李华,请以“The Nicest Teacher in My Heart”为题,用英语写一
篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一位老师,并分享一个你们之间的温暖小故事
Hobbies
Subject
Looks
cycling,
keeping pets,...
The Nicest
Teacher in
My Heart
Personalities(个性)
Abilities
friendly.helpful....
write articles
Dream
an example...
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④人与自我:职业启蒙,职业精神习近平总书记在2025年新年贺词中说道:“梦虽遥,追则能达:愿虽艰,
持则可圆。”校英文报现正以“Fighting for Dreams'”为题征稿,请你参考图文信息,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1.What's your dream?
Dream
2.Why do you choose it as your dream?
3.How do you achieve your dream?
4.…
〔作文框架D
开头:引入这个人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征(建议选取父母、朋友、老师等熟悉的人物)
①直接型:直接点明这个人物是谁。如:'m glad to say something about my best friend,.
②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题,再点明这个人物。如:During the process of growing up,it is very
important to have someone who knows us well.Among all the people around me,I think no one else but my father is
the special person who knows me best.
中间:你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when,where,what,how)
①建议写作角度:这个人物帮助你成长的故事;这个人物身上的闪光点:
②需要注意的点:经历类应用一般过去时。
结尾:你的感悟、感受、自己的做法、对这个人的美好祝愿
高分模板D
The Most
Person in My Heart
To be honest,
is the most
person I've ever met.She/He
(人物身份+人物外貌
特征:has a round face,a soft voice.).I think she/heis
because she/he is always
(描写人
物性格的形容词:patient,.kind,helpful.).She/He likes
(人物爱好:help others,collect stamps,
take part in volunteer activities...).
Once I
(你遇到的麻烦:be sick,fail the exam,have difficulty in+学科,can't get along well
with...),she/he told me
(人物的行为:not to give up,not to worry about,keep reading aloud,talk to,
help people in need...).Then she/he
(人物的行为:teach me how to,ask me to,encourage me to...).
In addition,she/he
(人物的行为:give me flowers or books,give me helpful suggestions,listen to me
patiently...)when I was in trouble.I became/felt
(你的改变/感受:confident,moved,independent,
happy,relaxed...)because of her/him.
As her/his
I have learned that
(你的感悟:nothing is impossible,we should help
others...).I hope I will be a person like her/him.I also hope she he will be better and better.
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优秀范文记背)
Passage 1
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:表
Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be
Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be here to give a speech.
明谁是自己
here to give a speech.Everyone has a On the joumey of life,there's always someone who shines
心目中的
hero in their heart,and mine is my like a star,and the hero in my heart is my father.
英雄
father.
What moves me most is his patience and kindness.
He is patient and kind.Every After tiring work,he still spares time to listen to my daily
evening,he listens to my daily stories stories,and his eyes are full of care.When I fell down in a
Body:介绍
after work.When I fall down,he helps race,he didn't lift me up directly but encouraged me to
他/她成为自
me stand up and says,"Try again."His stand up in a warm voice,which planted courage in my
己心目中英
big hands give me warmth.He often heart.He not only uses his warmth to comfort me but also
雄的原因
helps old people canry heavy things.
gives his kindness to others,like helping elderly neighbors
I see him as my role model.I
carry heavy things on rainy days.
will help my friends when they need
I've decided to follow his example:to offer a hand to
Ending:表达
me.My father is the best hero.
those in need,just like he does every day.
向他/她学习
Thanks for listening.
Thanks for listening.
的决心
Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Dear Guizhou Volunteer Center,
Dear Guizhou Volunteer Center,
Beginning:
I'm Li Hua,a junior high school
I'm Li Hua,a junior high school student.I'm writing to
点明自己想
student.I want to be a volunteer
apply to be a volunteer because I believe that serving
成为志愿者
because I think helping others makes
others is a meaningful way to spend my free time,and I
me happy.
really want to bring joy to people in need.
I have some experience.Last
I have some experience.During last summer holiday,I
summer,I visited an Old People's joined a volunteer group to visit the Old People's Home.We
Home with my classmates.We talked prepared simple performances for the elderly,such as
Body:介绍自
with the old people and helped them singing old songs and telling funny stories.We also helped
己志愿活动
clean their rooms.They were very them with daily chores like folding clothes.Seeing their
的经验及
happy,and I felt good too.I plan to bright smiles made me realize how valuable volunteering
计划
go to the Old People's Home on is.If I'm lucky enough to be a volunteer,I plan to go to
weekends.I'll listen to their stories the Old People's Home on weekends.I'll learn some simple
and do what I can to help them.I
traditional games to play with them,so they can have more
hope to be a good volunteer.
fun.I'm sure I can do a good job.
Ending:表达
Looking forward to your reply.
Looking forward to your reply.
期待收到
Yours,
Yours,
来信
Li Hua
Li Hua
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Passage 3
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:引
The Nicest Teacher in My Heart
The Nicest Teacher in My Heart
出谁是自己
In our school life,teachers are very
In our colorful school life,teachers play a key
心中最好的
important.They teach us knowledge and care role.They not only pass on knowledge but also give
老师
about us.My favorite teacher is Mr.Li.
us warmth and encouragement.Among all my
Mr.Li is our math teacher.He is of teachers,Mr.Li is the nicest one in my heart.
medium height and wears glasses.He can
Mr.Li,who is our math teacher,has a kind
write great articles and often shares his face and always wears a smile.He's good at turning
Body:介绍
stories with us.He is friendly and helpful.boring math into fun stories and can write excellent
他/她的长
Last term,I was really nervous about a math articles.He is patient and helpful.Last term,before
相、爱好、梦test.I studied hard but still felt worried.a math test,I was extremely nervous as I couldn't
想、能力、性
The day before the test,Mr.Li noticed my understand some difficult problems.Mr.Li noticed my
格并举例
worry.During his free time,he patiently worry.He spent his break time explaining difficult
explained difficult math problems to me problems to me step by step.Thanks to his help,I
again.With his help,I did well in the test.
got a good grade in the test.Mr.Li has hobbies like
Ending:
Mr.Li also likes cycling and reading.His cycling and reading.His dream is to make math
总结全文并
dream is to make every student love math.
interesting for every student.
表达他/她是
When I remember his kindness and
Whenever I think of his kindness and patience,
自己心中最
patience,I feel warm.He is the nicest
I feel warm.He truly is the nicest teacher in my
好的老师
teacher in my heart.
heart.
Passage 4
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:引
Fighting for Dreams
Fighting for Dreams
出话题,表明
Everyone has a dream.My dream is to
Everyone has a dream.My dream is to become a
自己的梦想
be a teacher.Last year,I had trouble with
teacher.Last year,my math teacher helped me solve
及其原因
math.My math teacher helped me a lot.She
problems patiently,and I was deeply inspired by her
was very patient when I asked her questions.
kindness.This experience makes me realize that
Her kindness made me want to be a teacher
teachers have the power to change students'lives.
too.Teachers can really help students.
To turn my dream into reality,I should study
Body:介绍为
To make my dream come true,I need
school subjects hard and explore educational books in
实现梦想所to study hard for all my lessons.In my free my free time..Besides,I've volunteered to help
作出的努力
time,I spend time reading books about classmates with their homework,which has improved
teaching.Also,I often help my classmates my communication skills and deepened my
with their homework.This makes me better understanding of teaching.
at talking with others,and I can learn more
All in all,I really believe that as long as I keep
Ending:表达
about how to teach.
studying hard,I will make my dream come true one
实现梦想的
I think if I keep working hard,my
day.As the old saying goes,"Where there is a
决心
dream will come true one day.
wi,there is a way.”
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