内容正文:
Here are my suggestions for you.First,talk with your par-
ents when you're all calm.Don't argue with your parents when
you're angry.Second,listen to your parents.Let them say their
ideas.Third,tell them your feelings softly.For example,you
can tell them you feel sad when you can't talk well.
I hope these can help.May you and your parents under-
stand each other better.
Yours,
Li Hua
主题九文化自信
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.What makes the Dragon Boat Festival special for me is the
story of Qu Yuan and the spirit of never giving up.
2.Traditional Chinese painting is one of the most important ways
to show our cultural beauty.
3.Guizhou is famous for its rich cultural treasures
4.Let's work together to pass on traditional skills and spread
Chinese stories.
5.Miao silver not only looks beautiful but also carries people's
warm wishes.
6.Miao folk songs are such beautiful melodies that they always
touch people's hearts.
三阶写作实战提能力
The Lantern Festival
The Lantern Festival is one of my favorite traditional Chi-
nese festivals.It has special meanings and falls on lunar January
15th every year
We have many fun ways to celebrate it.On the night of the
festival,streets and parks are filled with all kinds of beautiful
lanterns so that everyone can enjoy the lantern shows.The lan-
tern riddle guessing game is really popular.If you guess right,
you'll get small gifts.Another cool thing is the dragon dance.
It's a lively folk show that lets us see Chinese traditions and
makes communities closer.And we also eat tangyuan.It is not
only delicious but also stands for good luck
The Lantern Festival is not just a festival;it's a treasure of
Chinese culture.It shows our love for life and our hope for a
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bright future.Let's keep this wonderful tradition alive and share
it with the world.
主题十环境污染及
原因,环保意识和行为
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.One of the biggest problems in our school environment is that
there is lots of rubbish on the playground after breaks.
2.As is known to all students,planting more trees helps keep
the air clean.
3.Picking up rubbish in the park on weekends is good for our
environment.
4.It's of great importance to tum off the lights when leaving the
classroom.
5.Our class starts to collect old books and reuse them to reduce
waste.
6.We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
7.We pick up litter on the playground after P.E.class so that
the ground stays clean
8.We grow some plants in the school garden,which makes the
air fresher.
三阶写作实战提能力
Protect Wild Animals
The Earth is home to both humans and wild animals,but
some wild animals are in great danger today.
Why is this happening?First,people cut down too many
trees,so animals lose their homes.For example,some birds
can't find places to build nests.Second,some people kill ani-
mals for money.They take their fur or meat and sell them.
Third,dirty water and air from factories make animals sick.We
must do something to help them.The government can make
rules to stop people from cutting down trees and killing animals.
As students,we can tell our friends and family why it's impor-
tant to protect animals.We can also stop buying things made of
animals,like fur coats.
Protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves.Let's try
our best to keep them safe.人与自然
主题十环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为
①中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考:暂未考查。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①介绍环境污染问题以及环保建议:②共建绿色校园;③保护动、植物。
3.热点角度:①绿水青山就是金山银山:②绿色发展。
①主题教材链接
人教版
仁爱版
七(下)U5 Animals in the zoo
八(上)U4T1What's the strongest animal on the farm?
七(下)U7 The weather
九(上)U2 Saving the Earth
九(全)Ul3 Protecting the environment
阶
课本句型促写作
◆课本句型积累
1.As we all know,air pollution has become a serious problem.[仁爱九(上)U2]
2.Pollution is our great enemy,and we have to fight it..[外研九(上)Ml2]
3.Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the world today.[译林牛津八(下)U8]
开头句
4.The Earth is our home.Therefore,it is our duty to take action to protect it.
5.As is known to everyone,animals are our friends.However,many kinds of animals are in
danger now.So,we need to take action at once.
1.The river was dirty.Even the bottom of the river was full of rubbish..[人教九(上)U13]
2.Making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution.It not only disturbs others but also does
环境
great harm to people's hearing.[仁爱九(上)U2]
问题
3.The more cars there are in the street,the more serious air pollution is.
4.Many people can't deal with waste well and always use plastic bags,which are bad for the
environment.
1.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.Also,we can ride
中
a bike.It's good for health and it doesn't cost anything.[人教九(全)Ul3改编]
间
2.I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks when I buy takeaway food.I use the ones at home.
[人教九(全)U13]
句
3.We encourage students to collect waste paper and soft drink cans.Then we sort them so that they
保护
can be recycled..[仁爱九(上)U2]
环境
4.It's wise for people to choose public transport or ride bicycles..[译林牛津八(下)U8]
的做法
5.I've tried my best to protect the environment.I recycle.I don't throw away things if I don't want
them any more.And I turn off the lights when I leave a room.
6.We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.
7.Last but not least,it's of great importance to stop using plastic bags and chopsticks.
8.Bring your own bag when you go shopping.It's a good way to reduce packaging.
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1.If possible,we can take part in some activities to learn more about wild animals and try to protect them.
保护
2.What's more,we should advise the government to make laws so that wild animals can get
动植物
effective protection.
3.There are many things we can do to protect the environment.As students,we can plant trees.And
中
we can organize some activities to ask people to stop cutting down trees.
间
句
1.At a green school,every class collects waste which can be recycled or used again.Then the school
共建
sells the waste and uses the money to help students in poor areas.[外研九(上)Ml2]
绿色
2.Students at a green school also learn ways to save energy and recycle at home.That means less
校园
waste.[外研九(上)M12]
3.Each of us students is a cleaner.If we see garbage,we should actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
1.So together,.our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future![人教九(全)Ul3]
结尾句
2.Though pollution is heavy now,I don't think it's hopeless.If everyone starts to do something,the
(表达希
world will be saved.[外研九(上)Ml2]
望与感受)
3.We cannot hope for rapid change,but let's take these simple steps today so that we will save the
world for our grandsons and granddaughters tomorrow..[外研九(上)M12]
1.Save water;wasting it is shameful..节约用水,浪费可耻。
俗语谚语
2.Clear waters and green mountains are invaluable assets..绿水青山就是金山银山。
3.Sharing the same sky,we protect the earth together..同顶一片蓝天,共护一方水土。
Q课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
L.我们学校环境最大的问题之一就是课间休息后操场上有很多垃圾。(Tip:one of the biggest problems.)
2.正如所有学生所知,多植树有助于保持空气清洁。(Tip:as is known to sb.)
3.周末在公园捡垃圾对我们的环境有好处。(Tp:be good for..)
4.离开教室时关灯是非常重要的。(Tip:f's of great importance to do sth.)
5.我们班开始收集I旧书并重新利用,以此减少浪费。(Tp:start to do sth.)
6.购物时,我们可以用布袋代替塑料袋。(Tip:instead of)
◆句式升格
7.We pick up litter on the playground after P.E.class.The ground stays clean.(Tip:so that)
8.We grow some plants in the school garden.It makes the air fresher.(Tip:which)
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二阶典例探究明思路
地球是人类唯一的家园,面对气候变化挑战,中国承诺力争2060年之
前实现碳中和。这不仅是国家战略目标,更是全民参与的绿色行动。上
周五你和同学们参加了学校开展的环保活动。请你根据下图信息,以
审题四要素
“A(n)
Green Activity”为题写一篇短文,谈谈这次活动的过程及
审体裁:记叙文
你的感想。
审人称:第一人称为主
ENVIRONMENTAL
walked or rode
PROTECTION
save the Earth
审时态:讲述活动的过程为一般过
to school
listened to a
去时;表达感想时为一般现在时
speech
What did
What have
stop wasting
you learned?
审要点:①介绍环保活动的经历;
planted many
you do?
things
trees
②表达自己的感想。
写作要求:
1.短文需包含图示所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
A(n)
Green Activity
②写作剖析
一、构思框架
参考短语/句型:
例:Protecting the environment is very
Beginning--引出
①becauser引导的
important.It keeps our planet healthy and
话题,指出保护环
原因状语从句:
safe.(用becausei连接)
境的重要性
②take care of;
③if写引导的条件状
语从句
参考短语/句型:
例:In the morning,my classmates and I
choose to do sth.:
walked to school.We didn't choose to take
②instead of:
Body一详细介绍参
a bus or a car.(用instead of升格)
③how to do sth.:
加环保活动的经历
④Itis+ad.+todo
sth.:
⑤the importance of
参考短语/句型:
Ending一表达自己
①start with;
例:通过这次活动,我明白了保护环境
参加活动的感受
②try one's best to
可以从一些小事做起。(翻译)
do sth.
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Meaningful Green Activity
A Meaningful Green Activity
Protecting the environment is very important.It
Protecting the environment is very important because it
keeps our planet healthy and safe.We must take care
keeps our planet healthy and safe.1
of the Earth,or we will face problems.
(用if连接)
Last Friday,our school held a green activity.In
Our school had an environmental protection activity
the morning,my classmates and I walked to school.
last Friday.②
(用
We didn't choose to take a bus or a car.Then we
instead of升格)When we arrived,we listened to a
listened to a speech.The teacher told us the ways to
speech..③
(用why引
protect the Earth.He also explained the importance of
导的宾语从句及itis+ad.+to do sth.升格)After that,
taking action.After that,we planted trees.
we planted many trees.
From this activity,I learned two important things.
Through this activity,I've learned that protecting the
First,we should save the Earth by doing small things.
environment starts with small things.4
Second,we must stop wasting things.Every drop of
(用try one's best to do sth.升格)Every
water and every piece of paper is important.
small effort counts on the journey to a greener future.
答案
DIf we don't take care of the Earth,we will face problems.
2In the morning,my classmates and I walked to school instead of taking a bus or a car.
3The teacher told us how to protect the Earth and explained why it's important to take action.
4We should try our best to save the Earth by changing daily habits and stop wasting things.
三阶?写作实战提能力
随着人与自然和谐共生的理念逐渐深入人心,越来越多的人开始聚焦保护生物多样性。你们学校正在
举办“Protect Wild Animals”的主题活动,在了解相关知识后,你发现许多野生动物的生存现状非常令人担
忧。请根据以下提示,写一篇关于保护野生动物的短文,并向校园网站英语专栏投稿
Which wild animals are in danger?
.Why are wild animals endangered?
Protect Wild Animals
.Why should we protect wild animals?
How do we protect wild animals?
写作要求:
1.短文需包含图示所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Protect Wild Animals
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