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5.I spend an hour practicing playing the piano every evening
because I want to be a pianist.
6.If we work hard and don't give up,we can make our dreams
come true.
7.I hope to be allowed to make a choice of my own dream(s).
8.If we work hard,we might have a chance to achieve our goals
sooner.
9.She's interested in traditional dance,so she watches teaching
videos in her free time.
三阶写作实战提能力
Dear Mr.Wang,
I am Li Hua.I am glad to know that you need some tour
guides.I'd like to be one of them because I think I am suitable
for the job.
First of all,I am a friendly and patient student.I have
joined in many similar activities,so I am very experienced.
Besides,I am good at speaking English and I have won several
prizes in English speaking competitions.I always tell stories in
English to my friends and classmates,which enables me to
introduce local culture to others well.Most importantly,I have
visited the beautiful village many times,so I can help foreigners
have a better understanding of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
主题七良好的人际关系与人
际交往&交流与合作,团队精神
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Share your thoughts honestly so that your teammates can un-
derstand how you think
2.Showing interest in your group members'ideas during discus-
sions encourages them to speak more freely.
3.One of the most important things in team activities is to listen
carefully.
4.I realized that sharing more helps me get along better with my
classmates.
5.Although we come from different places,active communica-
tion helps us build close friendships
三阶写作实战提能力
The True Friendship
In my opinion,the true friendship is like a warm light that
helps us through hard times.It means having someone who
knows you well and grows with you.
I will never forget what happened last year when I did
poorly on a big test.I felt very sad and doubted myself.But my
best friend,Lily,stayed with me and encouraged me to keep on
studying hard.She helped me review my lessons and even
shared her notes with me.Then I did better and better in the
following tests.
To make the friendship strong,I think being honest and
communicating often are very important.We should always be
true to each other and share our thoughts openly.Also,spend-
ing time together and being thankful for each other can make the
friendship stronger.
主题八和谐家庭
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.When we meet problems,we can ask our family for help.
2.Parents are sometimes strict with us,but it helps us learn to
respect others in interpersonal relationships.
3.The more we talk with each other,the happier our family will be.
4.No matter what problems we have,our family will always help us.
5.We should listen to each other instead of only talking about
ourselves.It makes us closer.
6.There are many good memories that we share with our family.
三阶写作实战提能力
Dear Jack,
Good parent-child communication helps to create a happy
family.I know you're having trouble talking with your parents,
so I want to share my story and some simple ideas with you.
Once,I wanted to go to a friend's party on a school night.
My parents said "No"at first.I got a bit angry,but then I sat
down and listened.They were worried about my sleep and
study.After hearing that,I told them I'd finish my homework
first and be back early.Finally,they agreed.
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Here are my suggestions for you.First,talk with your par-
ents when you're all calm.Don't argue with your parents when
you're angry.Second,listen to your parents.Let them say their
ideas.Third,tell them your feelings softly.For example,you
can tell them you feel sad when you can't talk well.
I hope these can help.May you and your parents under-
stand each other better.
Yours,
Li Hua
主题九文化自信
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.What makes the Dragon Boat Festival special for me is the
story of Qu Yuan and the spirit of never giving up.
2.Traditional Chinese painting is one of the most important ways
to show our cultural beauty.
3.Guizhou is famous for its rich cultural treasures
4.Let's work together to pass on traditional skills and spread
Chinese stories.
5.Miao silver not only looks beautiful but also carries people's
warm wishes.
6.Miao folk songs are such beautiful melodies that they always
touch people's hearts.
三阶写作实战提能力
The Lantern Festival
The Lantern Festival is one of my favorite traditional Chi-
nese festivals.It has special meanings and falls on lunar January
15th every year
We have many fun ways to celebrate it.On the night of the
festival,streets and parks are filled with all kinds of beautiful
lanterns so that everyone can enjoy the lantern shows.The lan-
tern riddle guessing game is really popular.If you guess right,
you'll get small gifts.Another cool thing is the dragon dance.
It's a lively folk show that lets us see Chinese traditions and
makes communities closer.And we also eat tangyuan.It is not
only delicious but also stands for good luck
The Lantern Festival is not just a festival;it's a treasure of
Chinese culture.It shows our love for life and our hope for a
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bright future.Let's keep this wonderful tradition alive and share
it with the world.
主题十环境污染及
原因,环保意识和行为
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.One of the biggest problems in our school environment is that
there is lots of rubbish on the playground after breaks.
2.As is known to all students,planting more trees helps keep
the air clean.
3.Picking up rubbish in the park on weekends is good for our
environment.
4.It's of great importance to tum off the lights when leaving the
classroom.
5.Our class starts to collect old books and reuse them to reduce
waste.
6.We can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
7.We pick up litter on the playground after P.E.class so that
the ground stays clean
8.We grow some plants in the school garden,which makes the
air fresher.
三阶写作实战提能力
Protect Wild Animals
The Earth is home to both humans and wild animals,but
some wild animals are in great danger today.
Why is this happening?First,people cut down too many
trees,so animals lose their homes.For example,some birds
can't find places to build nests.Second,some people kill ani-
mals for money.They take their fur or meat and sell them.
Third,dirty water and air from factories make animals sick.We
must do something to help them.The government can make
rules to stop people from cutting down trees and killing animals.
As students,we can tell our friends and family why it's impor-
tant to protect animals.We can also stop buying things made of
animals,like fur coats.
Protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves.Let's try
our best to keep them safe.主题八和谐家庭(2023贵州)
⊙中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考:2023贵州要求以“My
Family Memory”为题,介绍家庭记忆及感受。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①介绍中华民族传统美德:②与家人如何相处。
⊙主题教材链接
人教版
仁爱版
七(上)U2 The family
八(下)U4 Interpersonal communication
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累)
1.Home is where the heart is.My family makes every moment filled with warmth.
开头句
2.We value the time we spend with our family and friends in our everyday lives.
1.Every year,my family and I take a photo together under the big tree in our village.I like taking
photos because they help me remember fun times with my family..[新人教七(上)U7]
2.Think about how your family and friends will feel..[外研九(下)M5]
3.My family got away for a holiday last summer and went to some famous places along the original
庭记忆
road.[北师九(全)U7]
及感受4.No matter how busy they are,my parents always find time for me..
5.The more time I spend with my family,the happier I feel.
中
6.Every weekend,we have dinner together and talk about our days.There's no better feeling than
间
being with family.
句介绍中1.Respecting the old and loving the young is a good tradition that we should follow..
2.Traditional virtues are part of our culture.That's why I think everyone must keep them alive.
传统
3.I've come to understand our family values behind this sayingto be truthful and honest.
美德
4.I've learned that respecting elders isn't just a rule-it's a way to love our family.
和家人
1.I get into trouble because my parents do not allow me to play outside.I do not understand why
they are so strict with me.[译林牛津九(上)U3]
如何
相处
2.Parents should allow children to have their own choices.
3.We should first ask parents for help because they have more experience and are always there to help us.
1.A little patience and more care can make our family full of love.
结尾句
2.As for me,I've realized that we should have a talk instead of arguing with our parents.
3.Understanding is like a bridge,which can help narrow the generation gap.
1.Blood is thicker than water.血浓于水。
俗语谚语
2.Harmony in a family makes everything successful.家和万事兴。
回课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.当我们遇到问题时,我们可以向家人寻求帮助。(Tip:ask..for help)》
2.父母有时对我们严格,但这能帮助我们学会在人际交往中尊重他人。(Tip:be strict with..)
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3.我们彼此交流得越多,我们的家庭就会越幸福。(Tip:he+比较级,the+比较级)
4.无论我们遇到什么问题,我们的家人总会帮助我们。(Tip:no matter)
5.我们应该相互倾听,而不仅仅是谈论自己。这样能让我们更加亲密。(Tip:instead of...)
◆句式升格
6.There are many good memories..And we share them with our family.(Tip:that引导的定语从句)
阶典例探究明思路
俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖
快乐、健康、智慧以及一次前进的力量。英语课上,你们班开展了一次以
审题四要素:
家庭为主题的讨论,请你参考以下信息,以“Make a(n)
Home
审体裁:说明文
为题,写一篇短文,分享自己的想法。
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时
spend more time
talk about happiness
help with
审要点:①介绍可以让家庭温暖的
with family
and problems with
housework
vour idea..
family
三个方面的建议;
②表达自己的想法。
写作要求:
1.请补全标题;
2.短文需包含图示所有信息,并适当拓展;
3.词数为80左右;
4.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Make a(n)
Home
②写作剖析
一、构思框架
Beginning-一引出话
参考短语/句型:
例:Small actions can make home full of love.
题,点明小行动能
①be)full of::
(用It's believed that.句型升格)
让家充满爱
②It's believed
that...
参考短语/句型:
例:我们可以一起吃晚餐,周末一起看电影
Body一介绍可以让
Dwatch a movie;
或者晚饭后一起去散步。(翻译)
家庭更温暖的三方
②go for a walk;
面内容
③clean the room
④wash the dishes
Ending-一分享自己
参考短语/句型:
例:一个温馨的家需要我们各尽其责并相互
对于和谐家庭的感
①need sb..todo
倾听。(翻译)
悟
sth.;②listen to
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
Make a Warm Home
Make a Warm Home
A warm home is a nice place for our hearts.
A warm home is like a safe place for the heart.1
Small actions can make it full of love.
(用It's believed that..句型升格)
First,spend more time with family.We can
First,spend more time with family.We can have dinner
have meals together.We can watch movies on together,watch movies on weekends or go for walks after
weekends,or we can walk after dinner.These supper.2
(用There is no
moments make us feel close.Second,talk about
doubt that..句型升格)Second,talk about happiness and
happiness and problems with family.When we problems with our family.When we share joys,they become
share happy feelings,they grow.When we have bigger.If we have troubles,family can give us advice and
problems,family can help and support us.Third,support.3
(用Itis+ad.
help with housework.It's not just parents'job.for sb.to do sth.It's not just parents'job.Small
Small things like cleaning rooms and washing the things like cleaning rooms and washing the dishes can show
dishes can show our care.
our care.
A warm home needs us to do our parts and
A warm home isn't just about having a big house.It's
listen to each other.These little things make us
about doing our part and listening to each other.These little
closer,and that's true warmth.
things make us closer,and that's true warmth.
率
DIt's believed that small actions can make it full of love.
2There is no doubt that these moments make us feel closer.
3Third,it is necessary for us to help with housework.
三阶写作实战提能力
良好的亲子沟通是家庭和谐的重要基石,当沟通出现阻碍时,恰当的方法往往能化解矛盾。假如你是李
华,你的朋友Jak和父母在沟通方面存在问题,请你用英语给Jak写一封电子邮件,给予他一些建议。
1.Tell your experience.
2.Give your suggestions.
3.Express your wishes.
写作要求:
1.邮件需包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Jack,
Good parent-child communication helps to create a happy family.
Yours,
Li Hua
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