内容正文:
主题二
多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活(225贵州)
⊙中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考:2025贵州要求以“A(n)
Stoy”为题,写下校园生活点滴。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①介绍学生在学校的生活:②校园活动:③校园环境与基础设施:④校园生
活的建议(如:尽快适应新学校的建议、对新生提出关于校园生活的建议等):⑤对学校的规章制度发表看法。
①主题教材链接
人教版
仁爱版
七(上)U3 Things in the classroom
七(下)U1 Joining a club
七(下)U5 Our School Life
七(下)U4 Rules
八(下)U8T1 We will have a class fashion show..
七(下)U11 School trips
九(下)U6T3 I will remember our friendship forever.
九(全)U14 School days
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.Ican't believe how fast the time went by![人教九(全)U14]
开头句
2.How time flies!We'll graduate from Beijing International School this weekend![仁爱九(下)U6]
3.I'm sure that you all have your own memories about the happiness of the last three years.
1.Today I went on a school trip.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.[
日常
七(下)U11]
活动
2.I joined many different school clubs and had a lot of fun.[人教九(全)U14]
3.In order to make our school life more colorful,all kinds of clubs have been set up
校园环
1.But my favorite place is the library.It is very quiet and I enjoy reading there.[人教七(下)U8]
境与基
2.The dining hall is across from the sports field.It's my favourite place because there are many
中础设施
kinds of food..[新人教七(上)U3]
肉
3.The place I like most is the playground where I can play happily with my classmates.
句
校园
1.You'd better take an active part in different kinds of activities and make your school life more
生活
colorful.
2.A good relationship between teachers and students can help students improve their study.
对学校
1.Parents and schools are sometimes strict,but remember,they make rules to help us.
(下)U4]
规章制
2.There are many rules in life!But they can help you to become a better person.[新人教七(下)U2]
度发表
3.Students are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school.I think this can help us better focus
看法
on learning.
1.Even though I am sad that junior high is over,I look forward to new experiences in senior high!
[人教九(全)U14]
结尾句
2.As long as you follow the advice above,I believe you will have a colorful school life.
3.If you make full use of your free time,you will have a wonderful school life and you will learn a lot.
1.No pain,no gain.一分耕耘,一分收获。
2.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成e
俗语谚语
3.It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。
4.Failure is the mother of success..失败是成功之母。
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⑨课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.我相信我能在期末考试中取得好成绩。(Tip:m sure that.)
2.在历史课上,我们都喜欢听老师讲那些有趣的故事。(Tip:enjoy doing sth.)
3.学生们可以将自己的画作张贴在教室的墙上,用于艺术展览。(Tip:be allowed to do sth.)
4.我积极参加学校的英语角来练习口语。(Tip:take an active part in..)
5.如果我们充分利用学校图书馆,课后就能读到更多好书。(Tip:Ifsb.make full use of..)
◆句式升格
6.I tried my best to finish all the questions.The math exam was difficult.(Tip:Even though)
7.We can understand the knowledge easily.We listen carefully in class.(Tip:as long as)
二阶典例探究明思路
(2025贵州)英语老师Lucy为激发同学们学习英语的兴趣,鼓励大家记录
课堂故事、班级活动、师生趣事等校园生活点滴,共同编写班级故事集Or
审题四要素:
Stories。请参考图文信息,以“A(n)》
Stoy”为题,写下你(们)的故事。
(审体裁:记叙文
审人称:第一人称为主
/hur Stories/
Our Stories
A(n)
Story
审时态:一般过去时为主
What happened?
审要点:①校园生活的
How did you feel?
具体经历;
②表达自己的收获及
感受。
@写作剖析
一、构思框架
Beginning--引出
参考短语/句型:
例:我们三年的初中生活充满了有趣的
话题
①be full of:
时刻。(翻译)
②stand out
参考短语/句型:
Body一讲述校园
例:他非常紧张,以至于说错了整句话
①try to do sth.;
生活的具体经历
(翻译)
②so..that.
③burst into
Ending-一收获与
参考短语/句型:
例:那天,我们明白了犯错也没关系
①We learn that.
(翻译)
感悟
②feel like
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Funny English Class Story
A Funny English Class Story
Our three years of junior high were full of interesting
Our three years of junior high were full of
moments,and one stands out the most.
interesting moments,and I remembered one most.
Last Friday,our English class turned unforgettable.1
Last Friday,we had an unforgettable English
(用when引导的
class.We were role-playing and Tom was a waiter.
时间状语从句并用现在分词作伴随状语升格)But his face
He tried to say,“Here's your coffee,”but he was
turned red,and the words got mixed up.2
nervous and said,“Here's your cat!”The class all
(用so..that..升
laughed.Our English teacher didn't get angry.She
)The class burst into laughter.Our English teacher didn't
joked,“Well,Tom,cats are cuter than coffee!”
get angry.③
Then she helped him correct the sentence.
(用instead增加句子的连贯性)Then she helped him correct
That day,we learned that making mistakes is
the sentence.
okay.The most important thing is to learn from
mistakes.It made English class feel like a fun
That day,we learned that making mistakes is okay.The
game.I'll never forget Tom's“cat coffee”!
most important thing is to learn from mistakes.It made English
class feel like a fun game.I'll never forget Tom's“cat coffee'”!
DWe were role-playing when Tom,acting as a waiter,tried to say "Here's your coffee.
2He was so nervous that he said,"Here's your cat!"
③nstead,she joked,“Well,Tom,cats are cuter than coffee!”
三阶写作实战提能力
(2025年贵阳市青岩贵璜中学一模改编)同学们在参与校园活动中汲取养分,于实践中茁壮成长。近
期,学校将开展以“An Unforgettable
”为题的征文活动。请任选以下一项活动(the tug of war,
drawing,play football,.play badminton)或自拟一项活动,用英语撰写一篇
文章,参与此次活动。
写作要求:
What...?
When.…
1.请补全标题;
How...?
2.短文需包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
Your feeling
3.词数为80左右;
4.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
An Unforgettable
17for us to learn a skill,like cooking.Basic life skills can devel-
op our independence.Taking up a new hobby is also a good
choice during the holiday
Let's act now and spend our free time properly Thank you
for your listening.
主题二多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.I'm sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
2.We all enjoy listening to our teacher tells those funny stories
in history class.
3.Students are allowed to put up their own drawings on the
classroom walls for the art show.
4.I take an active part in the school's English corner to practice
speaking.
5.If we make full use of the school library,we can read more
good books after class.
6.Even though the math exam was difficult,I tried my best to
finish all the questions.
7.As long as we listen carefully in class,we can understand the
knowledge easily.
三阶写作实战提能力
An Unforgettable Tug of War
There have been different kinds of school activities since I
entered the middle school.The most unforgettable one was the
tug of war last term
It was sunny and warm.On the school playground,there
were twelve teams to compete for the honor of winning.All the
students were quite excited and warmly cheered for the players
in the playground.The final round between Class 1 and our
class began at 11:00.All the members of our team tried their
best to pull together though their bodies were pulled so hard.
The other team was so strong that the game was close in the final
few minutes.Finally,our team showed great spirit and won the
game.
The activity taught us not only the importance of sports,
but also the power of our teamwork,which has encouraged us a
lot.
主题三身心健康,抗挫
能力,珍爱生命的意识
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise.
2.It is necessary for teenagers to learn to face difficulties brave-
y
3.Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to teach
students respect
4.It is a good choice for students to go to bed and get up early.
5.There is no doubt that keeping doing sports makes us strong.
6.Playing ball games with friends can keep us in a good mood.
7.We should be friendly to our classmates and be brave to try
new sports with them.
8.When we feel upset,we can spend more time with our friends.
9.The more we take part in outdoor sports,the healthier our
bodies and minds will be.
10.We should never give up exercising because it's hard to stay
healthy both in body and mind without it.
三阶写作实战提能力
Self-Protection
Good afternoon,everyone!
Recently,safety has been paid much attention to.Self-
protection is one of the most important skills for us.We can
avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to
do in different situations.
Fires are one of the most terrible accidents around us.If
our building is on fire,the most important thing is to calm down
first.Then,cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to pro-
tect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as pos-
sible.School bullying is another danger that may happen around
us.If we experience school bullying,we must tell our teachers
or parents about it.They will help us deal with it well.What's
more,it's necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.
In a word,we should learn some self-protection skills to live a
safe and happy life
Thanks for your listening!
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