内容正文:
第二部分高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题一丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
①中考主题角度
1.贵州近5年中考:暂未考查。
2.近3年全国中考写作考查角度:①假期旅行的计划与感受;②让周末生活或者暑期生活过得更充实且有意
义的建议。
○主题教材链接
人教版
仁爱版
七(下)U2 Daily routines
七(下)U3 Transportation
七(上)U4T2 Would you like to cook with us?
七(下)U6 Everyday activities
七(下)U8T2 The summer holidays are coming.
七(下)Ul2 Weekend activities
八(下)U6TlWe're going on a three-day visit to Mount Tai.
八(上)UI Holidays and vacations
八(下)U6T2 How about exploring Tian'anmen Square?
八(上)U2 Free time activities
九(全)U3 Getting around
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课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.I'n having a great time visiting my aunt in Canada.[人教七(下)U7]
2.Last month we asked our students about their free time activities.[人教八(上)U2]
开头句
3.It's necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and
see all the places you want to visit.
日
1.We had a wonderful party last night and everybody had a good time.
常
2.I always go swimming in summer because it makes me feel cool.
活
3.You can go to the park.When the weather is fine,you can fly kites and play games with your friends.
动
4.In order to have a colorful and meaningful experience,I have made a detailed plan for the coming life.
1.There are lots of ways to relax and have fun.However,the most important part of a holiday is
to rest your mind and body..[新人教八(上)Ul]
中
2.I plan to go to Australia.The weather there is cool.I wish to travel around the country and take
间
some pictures.[仁爱七(下)U8]
可
假
3.My grandparents miss me very much.I hope to get together with them.[仁爱七(下)U8】
期
4.When you plan to take a trip on your holiday,you should prepare well for it.[仁爱七(下)U8]
活
5.It will take us a few days to get there by bike.[仁爱八(下)U6]
动
6.I think it's better to have our picnic at the top of the hill.[外a研八(下)U8]
7.You can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos.
8.During the following days,we visited many places of interest,which all made a deep
impression on me.
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1.My holiday is very colorful.The most important thing is to learn something new and have fun.
[人教八(上)U3]
2.No matter how many difficulties we have,I believe all problems can be solved in the end.
(全)U7]
结尾句
3.You'll make mistakes along the way,but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give
p.[人教九(全)U14]
4.Although all of us felt very tired,we had the happiest memory.
5.All in all,I'm looking forward to spending a pleasant vacation.
1.Life is what you make it.你的生活由你创造。
2.Well begun is half done..好的开始是成功的一半。
俗语谚语
3.Big dreams are the key to everything.远大的理想是开启万物的钥匙。
4.Time flies when you're having fun.快乐的时光总是飞逝。
⑨课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.周末,我们在滨海公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip:have a great time doing sth.)
2.假期里,我喜欢爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip:because;it makes sb.feel)
3.当你有时间的时候,最好和父母到乡下去接近自然。(Tip:If's better to do sth..;get close to)
4.让我们今年暑假一起去乡下探索吧!(Tip:get together)
5.参加社团活动时,最重要的是与他人友好相处。(Tip:the most important thing is to.…)
6.当我们旅行时,关键在于保持安全并且玩得开心。(Tip:he key is to.)
7.在我去贵州旅行期间,我参观了很多风景名胜。(Tip:places of interest)
◆句式升格
8.Students go on a trip.Trips can help students open up their minds.(Tip:It's necessary for...;so that)
9.We meet many troubles on vacation.The beautiful scenery always makes us forget troubles.(Tip:No matter
how...)
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二阶
典例探究明思路
快节奏的数字生活容易让人迷失方向,而沉淀心灵、拓宽视野的真
实体验正成为当代青少年成长的关键密码。学校英语社推出“探索世
界,成长自我”主题征文活动,请参考图文信息,以“A()
Travel Experience'”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
审题四要素:
审体裁:记叙文
What did you do?
审人称:第一人称为主
What do you think is the
Where did you go?
most important activity?
审时态:一般过去时为主
审要点:①旅行的地点;
Where
Who
What
How
②和谁一起去旅行的;
Who did you go with?
How did you feel?
③旅行中做的事情及认为最重要
写作要求:
的活动;
1.请补全标题;
④感悟或收获。
2.记录真实故事,表达个人情感:
3.词数为80左右:
4.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
A(n)
Travel Experience
②写作剖析
、构思框架
Beginning-一点明
例:They sang happily and their voices filled
主题,介绍旅行
参考短语/句型:
①It's a beautiful
the whole village when they danced for us.
的基本情况:地
点、人物、风景
city with...;
(用so.that.连接)
名胜、美食等
②so.that.
参考短语/句型:
Body一旅行中做
①the most imp
例:我们总是把垃圾扔进垃圾桶,这已经
的事情以及认为
ortant thing is
成为我们的一个好习惯。(翻译)
最重要的活动:
to.;②It has
保护环境、随手
become a great
捡起垃圾等
habit of...;
③feel proud to.
参考短语/句型:
例:Travelling is for having fun.Travelling is
Ending一你的感
Dnot only...but
for protecting the environment.not only..
悟或收获
also...;
but also.连接)
②hope that从句
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Wonderful Travel Experience
A Wonderful Travel Experience
My most unforgettable trip happened last
My most unforgettable travel experience was when I visited
summer.I went to Guiyang with my family.It's a Guiyang with my family last summer.It's a beautiful city with
beautiful city.It has amazing mountains and lovely
amazing mountains and lovely villages.We visited the Miao
villages.We visited the Miao village.The houses village.The houses there were built on hills,and the people
there were built on hills,and the people wore wore colorful clothes.1
(用so.that..升格)
colorful clothes.They sang happily and their voices
During the trip,I thought the most important thing was to
filled the whole village when they danced for us.
protect the environment.2
During the trip,we always put rubbish in It has become a great habit of...)I felt proud to help
bins.It's a good habit.
keep the environment clean.
Travelling is for having fun and for protecting
This trip made me know that 3
the environment.I hope more people will love
(用not only..but also..升格)I hope that more people will love
Guizhou too.
Guizhou when travelling.
答案
DThey sang so happily that their voices filled the whole village when they danced for us.
2It has become a great habit of ours to always put our rubbish in bins.
3travelling is not only for having fun but also for protecting the environment
三阶了写作实战提能力
目前,很多学生不知如何合理安排空余时间。学校英语角将举办题为“How to Spend Free Time Properly”
的演讲比赛,请你参考以下信息,用
Relaxing
英语写一篇演讲稿,给同学们提出
activities
listen to music...
合理建议。
Parent-child
communicate with:
写作要求:
How to Spend
relationship
share the housework...
Free Time
1.短文需包含图中所有信息,并适
Properly
Volunteer work
clean up parks...
当拓展;
2.词数为80左右;
Self-improvement
learn a skill...
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校
名称。
How to Spend Free Time Properly
14Last summer vacation,my family talked about where to go
around the world.
for our trip.I knew my parents preferred educational ones,but I
3.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
really wanted something relaxing.After thinking twice,I said I
down.
hoped to go to the beach.To my surprise,they agreed happily.
4.It's important for us to balance our study and hobbies
Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
5.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
Love is about caring about others'feelings.Just as my
6.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communi-
parents understand me and respect my choice,I promise Ill do
cate with foreigners smoothly.
the same for them.
7.What a wonderful joumey growing up is!
微技能四
扩写并美化句子
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my leaming.
I.1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
2.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in
3.We should make good use of time.
the park.
4.She makes a decision to learn dancing.
3.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,
5.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
health is also important.
6.He was late for school because there was a heavy traffic jam
Ⅱ。
主题1
on the road.
1.because
2.Compared with
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
3.For example
4.In my opinion/view
针对训练
主题2
1.We not only have classes but also join clubs.
1.first of all
2.Then
3.not only
2.I love English because it opens a window to different cultures
4.but also
5.Finally
6.In a word
第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
主题一
丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
9.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the beau-
一阶课本句型促写作
tiful scenery always makes us forget them.
课本句型变式练
三阶写作实战提能力
1.On weekends,we have a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
How to Spend Free Time Properly
2.I love climbing mountains during vacations because it makes
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know
me feel relaxed.
how to spend their free time properly.Today I'd like to share
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents to get close to
some ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
nature when you have time
First,relaxation is necessary for us.We can listen to
4.Let's get together to explore the countryside this summer vaca-
music and hang out with friends on weekends.Or we can also
tion!
read interesting books.Second,improving parent-child
5.When joining in club activities,the most important thing is to
relationships is important.We should communicate with
get along well with others.
parents,and it's our duty to share the housework.We can take
6.When we travel,the key is to stay safe and have fun.
a walk after dinner together.What's more,volunteer work is
7.During my trip to Guizhou,I visited many places of interest.
meaningful.We can clean up parks with friends and help the
8.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help
people in need.Besides,we can give away old books to the
them open up their minds.
poor.Finally,self-improvement is always with us.It's useful
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for us to learn a skill,like cooking.Basic life skills can devel-
主题三身心健康,抗挫
op our independence.Taking up a new hobby is also a good
能力,珍爱生命的意识
choice during the holiday.
一阶课本句型促写作
Let's act now and spend our free time properly Thank you
课本句型变式练
for your listening.
1.Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise.
主题二多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
2.It is necessary for teenagers to learn to face difficulties brave-
一阶课本句型促写作
y
课本句型变式练
3.Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to teach
1.I'm sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
students respect
2.We all enjoy listening to our teacher tells those funny stories
4.It is a good choice for students to go to bed and get up early.
in history class.
5.There is no doubt that keeping doing sports makes us strong.
3.Students are allowed to put up their own drawings on the
6.Playing ball games with friends can keep us in a good mood.
classroom walls for the art show.
7.We should be friendly to our classmates and be brave to try
4.I take an active part in the school's English corner to practice
new sports with them.
speaking
8.When we feel upset,we can spend more time with our friends.
5.If we make full use of the school library,we can read more
9.The more we take part in outdoor sports,the healthier our
good books after class.
bodies and minds will be.
6.Even though the math exam was difficult,I tried my best to
10.We should never give up exercising because it's hard to stay
finish all the questions.
healthy both in body and mind without it.
7.As long as we listen carefully in class,we can understand the
三阶写作实战提能力
knowledge easily.
三阶写作实战提能力
Self-Protection
An Unforgettable Tug of War
Good afternoon,everyone!
There have been different kinds of school activities since I
Recently,safety has been paid much attention to.Self-
entered the middle school.The most unforgettable one was the
protection is one of the most important skills for us.We can
tug of war last term
avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to
It was sunny and warm.On the school playground,there
do in different situations.
were twelve teams to compete for the honor of winning.All the
Fires are one of the most terrible accidents around us.If
students were quite excited and warmly cheered for the players
our building is on fire,the most important thing is to calm down
in the playground.The final round between Class 1 and our
first.Then,cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to pro-
class began at 11:00.All the members of our team tried their
tect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as pos-
best to pull together though their bodies were pulled so hard.
sible.School bullying is another danger that may happen around
The other team was so strong that the game was close in the final us.If we experience school bullying,we must tell our teachers
few minutes.Finally,our team showed great spirit and won the
or parents about it.They will help us deal with it well.What's
game.
more,it's necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.
The activity taught us not only the importance of sports,
In a word,we should learn some self-protection skills to live a
but also the power of our teamwork,which has encouraged us a
safe and happy life.
lot.
Thanks for your listening!
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