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技巧2巧扩要点
写作的时候,我们常遇到写完主谓宾就不知道如何往下写的情况。这时可以运用一定的方法对句子进
行扩展以表达更完整、更具体的意思。
方法
示例
Alice is a teacher.
1.添加定语对名词进行限制
→Alice is a patient teacher.(用形容词扩写)
或说明,如形容词、介词短
→Alice is a patient teacher in a junior high school..(用介词短语扩写)】
语、分词短语、定语从句等
Alice who is popular among the students is a patient teacher in a junior high
school..(用定语从句扩写)
1.We should leam English well.
>We should learn English well because it is spoken widely around the world.
2.添加副词、不定式、分词
(扩写原因)
状语从句等状语表示时
2.She often listens to music.
间、地点、方式、程度、目
→She often listens to music to help her relax and forget her worries..(扩写目的)
的、原因、结果、条件等
3.You will get good grades.
You will get good grades as long as you listen to the teacher carefully and finish
your homework on time.(扩写条件)
3.添加同位语,如名词、名词
I'm Li Hua.
短语等
I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from Shijiazhuang.(添加同位语)
1.Grace has many hobbies.
4.添加例子作补充说明,如用
-Grace has many hobbies,such as painting,dancing and playing the piano.
(用such as列举)
Iike,such as列举事物或用
2.Technology makes life easier.
for example举例说明等
-Technology makes life easier.For example,we can shop online without going
out.(用for example列举)
@针对训练
1.Reading helps me learn a lot.Tip:make a big
4.She decides to learn dancing.Tip:make a decision
difference to...)
to do sth.
2.She likes painting very much.Tip:have a strong
5.My friend is a student.(Tip:hard-working,in our
interest in...)
school)
3.We should use time well.(Tip:make good use of)
6.He was late for school.(Tip:because)
微技能五
语言表达的丰富性
技巧)巧用复合句
复合句
常见连接词
示例
并列复
and(并列),but(转折),or(选择),so
合句
(结果),for(原因),yet(然而,转折),
We went to the park and we played football there.
not only.but also(递进)等
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续表
复合句
常见连接词
示例
时间状语从句:when,while,as,before,
When I wake up in the momning,I always drink a glass of water
after,since,until/till,as soon as
first.
原因状语从句:because,since,as
I love spring because everything comes back to life.
条件状语从句:if,unless,as long as
If you practice speaking every day,your spoken English will
状语
improve quickly.
从句
目的状语从句:so that,in order that
I get up early every day so that I can have enough time to
review my lessons.
结果状语从句:so..that,such.that
The story is so interesting that I have read it three times.
让步状语从句:although,though,even
Although the exam was difficult,I still tried my best and
though,even if
passed it.
that(可省略)
I believe (that)practice makes perfect.
宾语
if/whether
从句
I wonder if/whether the school trip will be canceled.
what,which,who,when,where,why,how
The teacher explained why this grammar rule is important.
who,whom
The girl who sits next to me is good at drawing.
定语
which,that
The birthday gift that my parents gave me made me cry.
从句
whose
That's the student whose science project won first prize.
when,where,why
I don't know the reason why she was absent from class yesterday.
技巧2增加句式多样性
句式
示例
感叹句
How exciting the basketball game was!
祈使句
Let's work hard and never give up!
There be句型
There is a new book on my desk.
It is important for us to keep a healthy lifestyle.(作形式主语)
it的特殊句型
I find it interesting to learn about different cultures.(作形式宾语)
It was yesterday afternoon that I saw John in the street..(强调句型)
倒装句
Not only does he like English,but he also speaks it well.
@针对训练
1.We have classes.We join clubs.(Tip:not only...but
It's+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.
also...)
5.The task is hard.I will try my best to complete it.
2.I love English.It opens a window to different cultures
(Tip:although)
around the world.(Tip:because)
6.I practice speaking English every day.I want to
communicate with foreigners smoothly.(Tip:so that)
3.The girl sits next to me.She always encourages me
when I feel down.(Tip:who)
7.Growing up is a wonderful journey.(Tip:What
的感叹句)
4.To balance our study and hobbies is important.(Tip:
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微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
灵活运用关联词(组)/结构可以使文章条理清楚、语言连贯通顺。写作中常用的关联词(组)/结构有:
类别
关联词(组)/结构
顺序
first(ly)/at first/first of all/to begin with/above all,second (ly)/then/after that/next,third (ly),
finally/in the end/at last/last but not least
并列
and,both...and...,or,either...or...,not only...but also...,neither...nor...,on the one hand...on the
other hand,along together with
递进
also(),besides,moreover,in addition,what's more,what's worse
转折
but,however,yet,while,instead,otherwise
让步
although/though,even if/though
比较
like,unlike,similarly,different from,compared with,than,as...as...
原因
because,because of,since,as,for,thanks to,for this reason
结果
so,therefore,as a result,so...that...,such...that...
条件
if,unless,once,as/so long as
时间
when,while,after,before,until,as soon as,later,soon,lately,recently,since,from then on,at the
same time,at the moment,at present,in a few minutes/hours/days,meanwhile
举例
for example,such as,take...for example/as an example
观点
in my opinion/as for me,personally,to be honest,as far as I am concerned
解释
in other words,in fact/actually/as a matter of fact,to tell the truth
总结
in a word/in short/all in all/in general,generally speaking,in conclusion,as a result
@针对训练
I.汉译英
(原因)it's a time for family reunions..
1.在我看来,阅读是放松的最好方式之一。(Tip:in
2.
(比较)other festivals,it has rich traditions
my opinion)
and is full of happy moments.3.
(举例),we
always make dumplings together and watch the Spring
Festival Gala.4.
(观点),it's the most
2.多亏了天气好,我们在公园里进行了一次美好的野
important festival that carries our cultural values.
餐。(Tip:thanks to)
主题2:yDay
In the morning,1.
(顺序1),I wake up
at 6:30 a.m.and do morning exercises.2.
3.一方面,学习很重要。另一方面,健康也很重要。
(顺序2),after having breakfast,I go to school.At
(Tip:on the one hand...on the other hand)
school,I 3.
(并列1)attend classes4.
(2)discuss projects with my classmates.In the
afternoon,after finishing my homework,I play basketball
Ⅱ.段落创作:用关联词(组)/结构串写内容。
with my friends.5.(顺序3),at7:00p.m.,1
主题l:My Favorite Festival
have dinner with my family.6.
(总结),my
The Spring Festival is my favorite festival.That's day is busy but meaningful.
10Last summer vacation,my family talked about where to go
around the world.
for our trip.I knew my parents preferred educational ones,but I
3.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
really wanted something relaxing.After thinking twice,I said I
down.
hoped to go to the beach.To my surprise,they agreed happily.
4.It's important for us to balance our study and hobbies
Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
5.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
Love is about caring about others'feelings.Just as my
6.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communi-
parents understand me and respect my choice,I promise Ill do
cate with foreigners smoothly.
the same for them.
7.What a wonderful joumey growing up is!
微技能四
扩写并美化句子
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my leaming.
I.1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
2.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in
3.We should make good use of time.
the park.
4.She makes a decision to learn dancing.
3.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,
5.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
health is also important.
6.He was late for school because there was a heavy traffic jam
Ⅱ。
主题1
on the road.
1.because
2.Compared with
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
3.For example
4.In my opinion/view
针对训练
主题2
1.We not only have classes but also join clubs.
1.first of all
2.Then
3.not only
2.I love English because it opens a window to different cultures
4.but also
5.Finally
6.In a word
第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
主题一
丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
9.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the beau-
一阶课本句型促写作
tiful scenery always makes us forget them.
课本句型变式练
三阶写作实战提能力
1.On weekends,we have a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
How to Spend Free Time Properly
2.I love climbing mountains during vacations because it makes
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know
me feel relaxed.
how to spend their free time properly.Today I'd like to share
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents to get close to
some ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
nature when you have time
First,relaxation is necessary for us.We can listen to
4.Let's get together to explore the countryside this summer vaca-
music and hang out with friends on weekends.Or we can also
tion!
read interesting books.Second,improving parent-child
5.When joining in club activities,the most important thing is to
relationships is important.We should communicate with
get along well with others.
parents,and it's our duty to share the housework.We can take
6.When we travel,the key is to stay safe and have fun.
a walk after dinner together.What's more,volunteer work is
7.During my trip to Guizhou,I visited many places of interest.
meaningful.We can clean up parks with friends and help the
8.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help
people in need.Besides,we can give away old books to the
them open up their minds.
poor.Finally,self-improvement is always with us.It's useful
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