内容正文:
例:
My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day.It warms my heart.()Every evening,we sit around the
table.Mom cooks delicious food like fried chicken and tomato soup.Dad tells funny work stories.Once,he told a
“silly boss'”story-一we laughed so happily!(支持细节句)
Family dinner isn't just about delicious meals and jokes-when troubles come,it becomes our"problem-solving
corner'”!(过渡句)Last week,my sadness about failing a test got better right here.(支持细节句)All in all,the
family dinner time is like love on a plate.I'll keep loving this warm time forever.(
©针对训练
根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节句和结论句。
Love means different things to different people.It can be support,encouragement,trust or something else.
微技能四扩写并美化句子
技巧工巧用高级表达
在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段常用的初阶词汇与高阶词汇转
换表。
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
give..a hand帮助…
help帮助
make a big difference to对.…产生重大影响,对…起重要作用
hope希望
look forward to sth../doing sth..期待某物/做某事
like喜欢
be interested in./have a strong interest in.对…(非常)感兴趣
fall in love with..爱上…
remember记得
keep..in mind将..牢记在心
use使用
make good/full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分使用某物
visit参观
pay a visit to参观.…
should应该
be supposed to应该
decide to do sth.决定做某事
make a decision to do sth.决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth.某人下定决心做某事
try one's best to do sth.尽某人全力做某事
try to do sth.尽力做某事
make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
want to do sth.想要做某事
feel like doing sth./would like to do sth.想要做某事
would rather do A than do B/prefer to do A rather than do B宁愿做A也不
don't want to do sth.不想做某事
愿做B
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技巧2巧扩要点
写作的时候,我们常遇到写完主谓宾就不知道如何往下写的情况。这时可以运用一定的方法对句子进
行扩展以表达更完整、更具体的意思。
方法
示例
Alice is a teacher.
1.添加定语对名词进行限制
→Alice is a patient teacher.(用形容词扩写)
或说明,如形容词、介词短
→Alice is a patient teacher in a junior high school..(用介词短语扩写)】
语、分词短语、定语从句等
Alice who is popular among the students is a patient teacher in a junior high
school..(用定语从句扩写)
1.We should leam English well.
>We should learn English well because it is spoken widely around the world.
2.添加副词、不定式、分词
(扩写原因)
状语从句等状语表示时
2.She often listens to music.
间、地点、方式、程度、目
→She often listens to music to help her relax and forget her worries..(扩写目的)
的、原因、结果、条件等
3.You will get good grades.
You will get good grades as long as you listen to the teacher carefully and finish
your homework on time.(扩写条件)
3.添加同位语,如名词、名词
I'm Li Hua.
短语等
I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from Shijiazhuang.(添加同位语)
1.Grace has many hobbies.
4.添加例子作补充说明,如用
-Grace has many hobbies,such as painting,dancing and playing the piano.
(用such as列举)
Iike,such as列举事物或用
2.Technology makes life easier.
for example举例说明等
-Technology makes life easier.For example,we can shop online without going
out.(用for example列举)
@针对训练
1.Reading helps me learn a lot.Tip:make a big
4.She decides to learn dancing.Tip:make a decision
difference to...)
to do sth.
2.She likes painting very much.Tip:have a strong
5.My friend is a student.(Tip:hard-working,in our
interest in...)
school)
3.We should use time well.(Tip:make good use of)
6.He was late for school.(Tip:because)
微技能五
语言表达的丰富性
技巧)巧用复合句
复合句
常见连接词
示例
并列复
and(并列),but(转折),or(选择),so
合句
(结果),for(原因),yet(然而,转折),
We went to the park and we played football there.
not only.but also(递进)等
8Last summer vacation,my family talked about where to go
around the world.
for our trip.I knew my parents preferred educational ones,but I
3.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
really wanted something relaxing.After thinking twice,I said I
down.
hoped to go to the beach.To my surprise,they agreed happily.
4.It's important for us to balance our study and hobbies
Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
5.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
Love is about caring about others'feelings.Just as my
6.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communi-
parents understand me and respect my choice,I promise Ill do
cate with foreigners smoothly.
the same for them.
7.What a wonderful joumey growing up is!
微技能四
扩写并美化句子
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my leaming.
I.1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
2.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in
3.We should make good use of time.
the park.
4.She makes a decision to learn dancing.
3.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,
5.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
health is also important.
6.He was late for school because there was a heavy traffic jam
Ⅱ。
主题1
on the road.
1.because
2.Compared with
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
3.For example
4.In my opinion/view
针对训练
主题2
1.We not only have classes but also join clubs.
1.first of all
2.Then
3.not only
2.I love English because it opens a window to different cultures
4.but also
5.Finally
6.In a word
第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
主题一
丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
9.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the beau-
一阶课本句型促写作
tiful scenery always makes us forget them.
课本句型变式练
三阶写作实战提能力
1.On weekends,we have a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
How to Spend Free Time Properly
2.I love climbing mountains during vacations because it makes
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know
me feel relaxed.
how to spend their free time properly.Today I'd like to share
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents to get close to
some ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
nature when you have time
First,relaxation is necessary for us.We can listen to
4.Let's get together to explore the countryside this summer vaca-
music and hang out with friends on weekends.Or we can also
tion!
read interesting books.Second,improving parent-child
5.When joining in club activities,the most important thing is to
relationships is important.We should communicate with
get along well with others.
parents,and it's our duty to share the housework.We can take
6.When we travel,the key is to stay safe and have fun.
a walk after dinner together.What's more,volunteer work is
7.During my trip to Guizhou,I visited many places of interest.
meaningful.We can clean up parks with friends and help the
8.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help
people in need.Besides,we can give away old books to the
them open up their minds.
poor.Finally,self-improvement is always with us.It's useful
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