内容正文:
@针对训练
给下列句子改错。
例:My uncle is play basketball now.
1.My father a doctor in the hospital.
2.There are five child in the classroom.
3.He bought two tomato just now.
4.They was late for class yesterday.
5.We aren't have a meeting today.
6.She can sings very well.
7.She apologized for his mistake.
8.He has lunch at 12 o'clock yesterday
9.Many trees plant in spring.
10.I have a cat black.
句子类型
位置
主题句定方向段落开头第一句
支持细节句之
过渡句→搭桥梁
间/段落末尾
支持细节句→给
主题句之后
支撑
逻辑连接
支持细节句之间
结论句→收闭环段落最后一句
6
play改为playing
11.She wants to eat delicious something.
12.This book is real interesting.
13.There are any apples on the table.
14.I'm interesting in English.
15.He arrived to London last night.
16.We'll have a party on next Friday.
17.I'll wait you at the station.
18.He is a honest boy.
19.He plays piano very well.
20.He is one of best students in our class.
微技能三
如何组织段落
作用
示例
Reading is my favorite hobby.It allows me to travel around
明确段落核心
the world through pages.
衔接段落内不
Every day,I read for half an hour.I love funny storybooks,
like Cat in the Hat.It makes me laugh with the cat's silly
同内容,或为
下段作铺垫,
tricks.(支持细节l)Reading not only makes me laugh with
让行文更流畅
funny stories,but also helps me solve real-life problems.
渡句1:段落内衔接,从“阅读的快乐”转到“阅读的实际
用处”)Once,my little sister was crying because of a broken
toy.I told her a touching story from my book.It made her
用例子、原因
smile again!(支持细节2)But wait-一reading has another
等充实内容
super power!It helps me face my fears.Let's talk about it
next.(过渡句2:段尾铺垫下段,为“阅读让我变勇敢”作
铺垫)
and,what's more,besides,so,therefore,in order to,
增强句子连
however,first(ly )then,next,for example,in a word,all
贯性
in all等
直接总结型:In short,.reading is like a magic key.It unlocks
fun stories,new knowledge,and good times with friends.I'll
never stop reading!
总结段落内容
情感升华型:Reading isn't just a hobby-一it's my best friend!
It stays with me when I'm happy or sad,teaching me and
making me laugh.It's a friend that grows with me!
例:
My Loving Family Time
Family dinner time is the best part of my day.It warms my heart.()Every evening,we sit around the
table.Mom cooks delicious food like fried chicken and tomato soup.Dad tells funny work stories.Once,he told a
“silly boss'”story-一we laughed so happily!(支持细节句)
Family dinner isn't just about delicious meals and jokes-when troubles come,it becomes our"problem-solving
corner'”!(过渡句)Last week,my sadness about failing a test got better right here.(支持细节句)All in all,the
family dinner time is like love on a plate.I'll keep loving this warm time forever.(
©针对训练
根据所给的主题句,写出过渡句、支持细节句和结论句。
Love means different things to different people.It can be support,encouragement,trust or something else.
微技能四扩写并美化句子
技巧1巧用高级表达
在确保正确的前提下,使用高级词汇可以提升作文档次,以下为初中阶段常用的初阶词汇与高阶词汇转
换表。
初阶词汇
高阶词汇
give..a hand帮助…
help帮助
make a big difference to对.…产生重大影响,对…起重要作用
hope希望
look forward to sth../doing sth..期待某物/做某事
be interested in./have a strong interest in.对…(非常)感兴趣
like喜欢
fall in love with..爱上…
remember记得
keep..in mind将..牢记在心
use使用
make good/full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分使用某物
visit参观
pay a visit to参观.…
should应该
be supposed to应该
make a decision to do sth.决定做某事
decide to do sth.决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth.某人下定决心做某事
try one's best to do sth.尽某人全力做某事
try to do sth.尽力做某事
make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
want to do sth.想要做某事
feel like doing sth./would like to do sth.想要做某事
would rather do A than do B/prefer to do A rather than do B宁愿做A也不
don't want to do sth.不想做某事
愿做B主题写作指导册
第一部分写作六大微技能
微技能一正确使用常见标点符号和大小写&.children's day is one of the most important festivals in many
C
D
类型1正确使用常见标点符号
countries.
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9.I heard doctor lee would give us a talk about health the next
l.What time is it now今
D
L
week.
2.Do you like reading books A
10.We learned a poem called in the garden of my heart.
3.IVm sure I saw a deer just now A
G
MH
4.Be careful A The road is wetA
微技能二
写出正确的句子
5.You are from China,aren Vt youA
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6.WowA What a beautiful flower it isA
1.father后加is
7.Do you want to go to the park or the cinema
2.child改为children
8.She is a kind A hearted girl who often helps othersA
3.tomato改为tomatoes
9.We moved to our new house on January 2ndA 2014A
4.was改为were
10.On a sunny morningA we went to the park for a picnic A
5.aren't改为dont
11.In the basket A there are apples A bananas A oranges and
6.sings改为sing
grapesA
7.She改为He或his改为her
12.Mr.Smith Aa kind teacherA is loved by all his studentsA
8.has改为had
13.I stared at the math problem,thinking A How could I solve
g.plant改为are/were planted
it
10.cat black改为black cat
14.After a long day at work A she finally got home AShe made
11.delicious something something delicious
a cup of tea and sat on the sofaA
12.eal改为really
15.Before leaving,Mom reminded me A V Don't forget to take
13.any改为some
your umbrella A It might rain.
l4.interesting改为interested
类型2正确使用大小写
15.to改为in
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16.删除on
1.I can speak chinese and a little english.
17.wait后加for
2.Our school trip is on friday,october 10th.
18.a改为an
3.The sign says“no smoking”in the library.
19.piano前加the
NS
20.best前加the
4.Have you read the book the little prince?
TL P
微技能三
如何组织段落
5.my best friend is emma,and she is from canada.
M
E
C
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6.We will visit the great wall during the summer holiday.
Love means different things to different people.It can be
G W
support,encouragement,trust or something else.In my view,
7.Mom said i should finish my homework before watching TV.
love is understanding and respect.
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Last summer vacation,my family talked about where to go
around the world.
for our trip.I knew my parents preferred educational ones,but I
3.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
really wanted something relaxing.After thinking twice,I said I
down.
hoped to go to the beach.To my surprise,they agreed happily.
4.It's important for us to balance our study and hobbies
Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
5.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
Love is about caring about others'feelings.Just as my
6.I practice speaking English every day so that I can communi-
parents understand me and respect my choice,I promise Ill do
cate with foreigners smoothly.
the same for them.
7.What a wonderful joumey growing up is!
微技能四
扩写并美化句子
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
针对训练
1.Reading makes a big difference to my leaming.
I.1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax.
2.She has a strong interest in painting.
2.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in
3.We should make good use of time.
the park.
4.She makes a decision to learn dancing.
3.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,
5.My friend is a hard-working student in our school.
health is also important.
6.He was late for school because there was a heavy traffic jam
Ⅱ。
主题1
on the road.
1.because
2.Compared with
微技能五语言表达的丰富性
3.For example
4.In my opinion/view
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主题2
1.We not only have classes but also join clubs.
1.first of all
2.Then
3.not only
2.I love English because it opens a window to different cultures
4.but also
5.Finally
6.In a word
第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
主题一
丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
9.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the beau-
一阶课本句型促写作
tiful scenery always makes us forget them.
课本句型变式练
三阶写作实战提能力
1.On weekends,we have a great time flying kites in Binhai Park.
How to Spend Free Time Properly
2.I love climbing mountains during vacations because it makes
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know
me feel relaxed.
how to spend their free time properly.Today I'd like to share
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents to get close to
some ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
nature when you have time
First,relaxation is necessary for us.We can listen to
4.Let's get together to explore the countryside this summer vaca-
music and hang out with friends on weekends.Or we can also
tion!
read interesting books.Second,improving parent-child
5.When joining in club activities,the most important thing is to
relationships is important.We should communicate with
get along well with others.
parents,and it's our duty to share the housework.We can take
6.When we travel,the key is to stay safe and have fun.
a walk after dinner together.What's more,volunteer work is
7.During my trip to Guizhou,I visited many places of interest.
meaningful.We can clean up parks with friends and help the
8.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help
people in need.Besides,we can give away old books to the
them open up their minds.
poor.Finally,self-improvement is always with us.It's useful
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