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专题03 文段表达 话题1 太空 话题4 旅程 （常考点） 话题2 讲述一则故事 话题5 一次发现的经历（常考点） 话题3 介绍自己的榜样（常考点） 话题6 环境保护（常考点） 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 太空 常见的写作话题有: ①给自己最喜欢的宇航员写一封信; ②介绍未来的太空生活 ③校园航天日。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以记叙文、说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 中国航天日(Space Day of China),是为纪念中国航天事业取得的成就、向宇航员致敬的日子。你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动,假如你是李华,请你用英文写一篇不少于50词的短文投稿,说明写信的原因,询问太空站的生活如何,并说明自己对太空的看法。 提示词语:admiration, space station 内容提示: ·Why do you write the letter? ·What questions do you want to ask astronauts? ·What are your ideas about space? Dear astronauts, 　　I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Beijing.　 Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear astronauts, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Beijing. With Space Day of China coming up, I'm writing to express my sincere respect and admiration for you. Your heroic deeds in space have always inspired me.I'm really curious about your life on the space station. How did you sleep and eat there? Was it very different from life on Earth? As for space, I think it is a mysterious and boundless place. It holds countless secrets waiting to be discovered. I will study hard so that I could explore it like you one day. Thank you again for your contributions. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 [高分句型] （1）make attempts to do sth.尝试做某事 （2）pay off成功;奏效   （3）thanks to由于 （4）take action采取行动 （5）inspire sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 （6）take over接替 （7）make up one's mind to do sth.下定决心做某事 （8）put forward提出 （9）put sth. into practice将某事付诸实践　 （10）have a hard time doing sth.做某事有困难    （11）carry out执行 （12）come up即将到来　 （13）heroic deeds英勇事迹     （14）be curious about...对……感到好奇 （15）as for至于;关于　 （16）one day有朝一日　 （17）thank sb. for... 因……感谢某人 （18）There is no doubt that space exploration has produced many benefits for humanity, with significant contributions to the fields of science and technology.毫无疑问,太空探索为人类带来了许多好处,对科学和技术领域做出了重大贡献。 （19）It's hard to balance one's studies and personal interests, but they have found a way to do it.在学业和个人兴趣之间找到平衡是很困难的,但他们找到了办法。 （20）With Space Day of China coming up, I'm writing to express my sincere respect and admiration for you.中国航天日即将到来,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的尊重和钦佩。 （21）It holds countless secrets waiting to be discovered.它隐藏着无数等待被发现的秘密。 Writing 2 假如你是李华，你的笔友Nick看了“神舟十七号”的成功发射后对宇航员充满了好奇，他给你发邮件询问宇航员将在太空中做什么以及如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 What will astronauts do in space? 1. do scientific experiments (科学实验) 2. take exercise to keep fit 3. Sometimes walk in space 4. … How to get a healthy body like astronauts? 1. Eating habits: … 2. Living habits: … Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. In space, astronauts will do scientific experiments, take exercise to keep fit, and sometimes walk in space. They also need to observe many unknown planets carefully. To have a healthy body like astronauts, you should have good eating habits, such as eating more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food. Also, maintain good living habits, like getting enough sleep and exercising regularly. I hope this helps! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍宇航员将在太空中做什么； 第二步，介绍如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。 [亮点词汇] ①observe观察 ②junk food垃圾食品 ③maintain保持 [高分句型] To have a healthy body like astronauts, you should have good eating habits, such as eating more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food.（不定式表目的） Writing 3 　　随着我国航天技术的发展和进步,实行太空移民可能不再是梦。请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈对未来太空生活的畅想。不少于50词。 　　提示词语:robot, spaceship, solar power 　　内容提示:What will life be like in space? Space life in the future I would like to introduce the space life in the future. Space life in the future I would like to introduce the space life in the future. In the future, the clothes we wear can detect our physical health so that we can know our health at any time. Our homes will change a lot too. We'll live in smart houses where robots will do all the housework. Therefore, we'll have much more free time to do what we love. When it comes to traveling in space, we'll fly solar-powered spaceships which are environmentally-friendly. At last, there will be much better living environment. I think this kind of life is very wonderful. I'm looking forward to it. Writing 4 随着天宫空间站的建设，在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站的旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Journey to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意：1、短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3、词数80～100。 My Journey to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Journey to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. After I get onto the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. Then I’m going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I’m going to visit the space station and take videos of the astronauts’ life on the space station. All in all, I believe it will be a wonderful trip. I can’t wait to start my trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般将来时； ③提示：根据提示内容并发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己的太空站之旅； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①come true实现 ②all in all总的来说 ③can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 [高分句型] ①Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②After I get onto the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. (after引导的时间状语从句) Writing 5 2024年4月24日是第九个“中国航天日”。假如你是李华，你的学校在那天举办了校园航天系列活动，请你用英文给你的笔友Tony写信，根据海报信息向他介绍本次活动，并分享你的收获及感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含海报中的信息，可适当发挥，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Tony, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you that our school has just had an interesting School Space Day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you agree with me?   Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tony, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you that our school has just had an interesting School Space Day. It was held in the school hall on April 24th, 2024. We had the chance to try on spacesuits and talked to the astronauts face to face online. Also, we watched videos about Tiangong Class, which helped us learn about the mystery of space. Then, to step further into the field of rocket making, we made rocket models together. I had great fun and learned much from the activity. I think it’s our duty to work harder and make contributions to developing the space industry in China. Do you agree with me? Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动背景，说明学校举办了航天日活动； 第二步，详细描述活动内容，如试穿宇航服、观看视频、制造模型等； 第三步，分享个人感受和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①face to face面对面 ②make contributions to为……做出贡献 ③space industry航天工业 [高分句型] ①Also, we watched videos about Tiangong Class, which helped us learn about the mystery of space.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I think it’s our duty to work harder and make contributions to developing the space industry in China.（宾语从句；it作形式主语） 话题2 讲述一则故事 以“讲述一则故事”为话题，故事应分为“开端”“发展”“高潮”和“结局”等几部分。故事中还应包含人物、事件、时间、地点等因素。在表达上注意次序合理，叙述完整。 【写作技巧】 故事类作文以图画作文的形式呈现。命题者选择一幅或者几幅图片，针对图片所反映的中心内容设计试题，要求根据图片所提供的必要信息和内容进行写作。此类题目通过图画的形式来考察考生的观察能力、思考能力和写作能力。 写图画作文时应注意以下几点： 1 认真审题，弄清大意； 2 理出要点，拟定提纲； 3 紧扣要点，扩展成文； 4 通读短文，修正错误。 Writing 1 上周日在河边发生了张明救落水小男孩儿的事情，请你根据四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。 注意：①文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； ②语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； ③词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Brave Young Man It was a nice day last Sunday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 【写作模板】 步骤 构思 列纲 1 介绍事件的开端 Zhang Ming was fishing by the river when a little boy went to play nearby. 2 介绍事件的过程 Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard... He looked around and found... Zhang Ming jumped into the river... 3 介绍事件的结局 Finally, the boy was saved and he was grateful. 【经典范文】 A Brave Young Man It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the river when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy fell into the river. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help.Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him. Writing 2 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tom近期参加了学校举办的中国文化节，期间对“愚公移山”的故事产生了浓厚兴趣。他希望深入了解这个故事的内容及意义。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。 1. 愚公家附近有两座大山，生活不便，遂率领全家搬山； 2. 别人笑他年老无力，愚公却说子孙无穷，山不会长； 3. 天帝被愚公打动，派山神搬走两山； 4. 意义：（请补充完整） 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当补充细节； 2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名； 4. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, Knowing that you’re interested in the story about Yu Gong Moves the Mountains, I’d like to share it with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Tom, Knowing that you’re interested in the story about Yu Gong Moves the Mountains, I’d like to share it with you. Long ago, there were two huge mountains near Yu Gong’s house, which made life difficult. So he decided to move them with his family. Though others laughed at him for being old and weak, Yu Gong said, “My descendants are endless, but the mountains will never grow taller—we’ll finish the task sooner or later.” Moved by his perseverance, the Heavenly Emperor sent mountain gods to remove the two mountains. This story teaches us that with strong will and persistence, nothing is impossible. Hope you enjoy the story! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、根据提示，介绍“愚公移山”的故事； 第三步、介绍这个故事的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②laughed at嘲笑 ③sooner or later迟早 [高分句型] Long ago, there were two huge mountains near Yu Gong’s house, which made life difficult.(which引导非限制性定语从句) Writing 3 下个月初，法国交流学生将到访我校。恰逢校园文化节系列活动“用英语讲好中国故事”，你计划参与活动，向外国友人讲述中国传统故事。请你从下面两个传统故事中选择一个，根据思维导图写一个演讲稿。 注意： 1.演讲稿需包含所选所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello everyone! Today, I’d like to share a traditional Chinese story called______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello everyone! Today, I’d like to share a traditional Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Yu Gong Moves a Mountain has been popular for thousands of years. It’s about a high and big mountain that blocked the way. Yu Gong decided to move it. He kept on digging day after day until two gods helped him. He believed that nothing could stop him if he never gave up. Two gods were moved by his spirit and took the mountains away. This story has taught me that with strong will and perseverance, we can overcome difficulties. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”；适当使用“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，描述故事历史悠久的特点，再简述故事情节； 第三步，揭示所学到的道理，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to so sth决定做某事 ②give up放弃 [高分句型] ①He kept on digging day after day until two gods helped him. （动名词作宾语） ②This story has taught me that with strong will and perseverance, we can overcome difficulties.（宾语从句） 话题3 介绍自己的榜样 常见的写作话题有: ①谈谈谁是你心中的榜样,为什么你选择他/她作为你的榜样,以及你能从他/她身上学到了什么; ②你们班准备开展“榜样的力量”分享会,请你给交换生写一封电子邮件,告诉他分享会的内容、目的、时间和地点。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、写演讲稿等。 Writing 1 在我们的身边,总有一些平凡的英雄。正是他们让我们明白责任与担当,教会我们如何面对困难,如何帮助他人。某英文网站正在开展以“身边的英雄”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你心中的英雄是谁,对其做简要介绍,他/她都做了什么让你印象深刻的事,以及你的收获。不少于50词。 提示词语:tall, helpful, offer, kindness 提示问题: ·Who is the everyday hero in your life? Please describe him/her. ·What did he/she do? ·What have you learned from him/her? 【答案】 Everyday heroes can be anyone around us. As for me, my everyday hero is my best friend, Lily. She is tall with a round face. She is really helpful. 　　I still remember when I was new in junior high school, I was too shy to speak with others. Lily noticed that and she offered to help me a lot. She invited me to join the reading club with her. Once I had a problem, she was always there for me. From her, I have learned that kindness plays an important part in our daily lives. We should always help those in need. 审题指导 1.体裁:说明文    2.时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主     3.人称:以第一人称为主 4.必备词句: ①as for sb.就某人而言　 ②too...to...太……而不能……　 ③offer to do sth.主动提出做某事　 ④invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事　 ⑤be there for sb.随时乐于帮助某人 ⑥play an important part in...在……中发挥重要作用　 ⑦help those in need帮助那些需要帮助的人 ⑧I still remember when I was new in junior high school, I was too shy to speak with others.我还记得当我刚上初中的时候,我太害羞了,不敢和别人说话。 5. 谋篇布局 Writing 2 某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明家，他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。字数120字左右。 提示词：scientist, invent, great, teach 提示问题： 1. Who is your favourite inventor? 2. Why is he/she your favourite inventor? 3. What did you learn from him/her?   There are many famous inventors. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文：   There are many famous inventors. My favourite one is Thomas Edison. He was a great American scientist who invented over 1,000 things, including the light bulb.​​   ​He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. His famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration,” has taught me a lot. It shows that hard work is the key to success, not just talent.​​ ​  From him, I learned that we should never give up easily when facing difficulties. His spirit encourages me to keep trying in my own study and life. He is truly a great person to learn from.​ 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步：开篇点明最喜欢的发明家是托马斯·爱迪生，并简要介绍其身份和代表性发明； 第二步：从发明成就和个人态度两个维度阐述喜欢原因，重点引用其名言说明成功真谛； 第三步：总结从爱迪生身上学到的道理，说明其精神对个人的积极影响。 ［亮点词汇］ ①brilliant杰出的 ②positive积极的 ③not only ... but also...不但……而且…… ［高分句型］ ①He was a great American scientist who invented over 1,000 things, including the light bulb. (运用who引导定语从句) ②He is my favourite inventor not only because of his brilliant inventions, but also because of his positive attitude. (运用not only ... but also...并列连词结构) Writing 3 Write a short passage about “I’d like to learn from…”. (以“我想向……学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) a. Who would you like to learn from, a model student, a famous person or someone else? b. What do you know about him or her? c. How will you change yourself to learn from him or her? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’d like to learn from Zhao Liying As is well-known to us, Zhao Liying is one of the most famous actresses in China. And she is also the very person that I’d like to learn from. As far as I know, before she became popular across the country, she played many unimportant roles in many soap operas and films. What’s more, many people said that she could never play a leading role because of her round face. However, she never gave up. She kept learning and tried to improve her acting skills. Finally, she succeeded. Sometimes, it is easy for me to give up whenever I am in trouble. From her, I have learned that I can never achieve my dream in this way. From now on, I will try to solve problems bravely no matter how big or how small they are. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，针对内容提示的问题展开文章。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己想要向谁学习； 第二步，介绍关于他或她，自己了解什么； 第三步，介绍将如何改变自己，去向他或她学习。 [亮点词汇] ①as far as I know就我所知 ②across from the country全国各地 ③what’s more此外 ④give up放弃 [高分句型] ①As is well-known to us, Zhao Liying is one of the most famous actresses in China.（as引导的定语从句） ②As far as I know, before she became popular across the country, she played many unimportant roles in many soap operas and films. (before引导的时间状语从句) Writing 4 在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点： 1. Who is your role model? 2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb. When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was rejected to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most. When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样； 第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大； 第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①kept on doing sth继续做某事 ②give up放弃 ③think of想起 ④go ahead前进 [高分句型] ①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句) 话题4 旅程 分享你曾经经历过的一次旅行,使用形容词来描述你在旅途中看到的东西。常见的写作话题有: ①介绍一次令自己印象深刻的旅行经历以及这次旅行带给你的收获或感悟; ②根据提示信息,介绍某个外出活动的地点、过程以及收获; ③推荐一个景点,介绍在这个景点可以看到什么、做些什么以及需要做哪些准备。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以记叙文、说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有写一封电子邮件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 俗话说“读万卷书,不如行万里路”。为了让各位同学有机会交流自己对于旅行的感受，现你校英语社团正在开展主题为“My Wonderful Journey”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你去过哪儿、在那里做了什么以及这次旅行给你带来的感悟。不少于50词。 提示词语:school trip, excellent, expand, fascinating, pleasant 内容提示: ·Where did you go? ·What did you do during the journey? ·What have you learned from it? My Wonderful Journey 【答案】例文 My Wonderful Journey I firmly believe that a school trip serves as an excellent opportunity for students to experience the richness of life and expand their knowledge. At the same time, it can also improve students' team spirit. Last Wednesday, we went on a school trip to Yixing, a modern, tidy and extremely charming city with many fascinating places of interest. It was a fine and warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian, who was friendly and patient. It was a pleasant experience for us to practice speaking English with him. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the mysterious underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. 　　It was truly an unforgettable day. I hope that our school will organize more school trips like this. 【审题指导】 1.体裁:记叙文    2.时态:以一般过去时为主    3.人称:以第一人称为主 4.必备词句: ①serve as用作,充当　 ②expand the knowledge拓展知识　 ③improve students' team spirit提升学生的团队精神 ④row boats划船 ⑤It was a pleasant experience for us to practice speaking English with him.对我们来说,和他一起练习说英语是一次愉快的经历。 Writing 2 某英文网站正在开展以“难忘的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈让你难忘的一次旅行经历。主要内容包括：你去了哪里，什么时候去的，做了什么，为什么是一次难忘的旅行。标题自拟。 提示词语: famous places, take photos, present, unforgettable trip 提示问题： ●When and where did you go? ●What did you do there? ●Why was the trip unforgettable? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Trip Last summer, my family and I took a trip to Guilin, a famous city in southern China known for its amazing natural scenery. We went there in early July, when the weather was warm and the mountains were covered in fresh green. Our first day was spent on a boat along the Li River. As the boat glided slowly, I was shocked by the tall, strange-shaped mountains reflecting in the clear water—they looked like giant pieces of art! I took lots of photos because every view was more beautiful than a postcard. In the evening, we visited Yangshuo Ancient Town. The streets were full of interesting shops, and I bought some special presents for my friends, like hand-painted fans and small bamboo carvings. The next day, we visited a village near the river. The villagers were very friendly, and they invited us to eat homemade rice noodles and watch their traditional dances. This trip is unforgettable because of the beautiful nature and the warm people. Spending time with my family in such a peaceful place made me realize how important it is to enjoy simple moments together. This is a trip I will never forget. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍难忘的旅行是去桂林，以及时间，地点等基本信息； 第二步，介绍旅行途中的活动； 第三步，分享这次旅行难忘的原因，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①known for以……闻名 ②lots of很多 [高分句型] ①I took lots of photos because every view was more beautiful than a postcard.（原因状语从句） ②Spending time with my family in such a peaceful place made me realize how important it is to enjoy simple moments together.（动名词作主语） Writing 3 假如你是李华，你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访，届时举办一次“漫步中轴线”（Walking along the Beijing Central Axis）主题研学活动（study tour）。活动可以包括漫步永定门公园，参观钟鼓楼、什刹海及周边的胡同，了解中轴文化带的历史，欣赏自然景色和传统建筑等。请你给英语社团公众号留言，推荐一些活动景点并说明理由。 提示词语：Drum and Bell Towers, the Palace Museum, watch Beijing Opera, learn about history, culture 提示问题： What places do you suggest for the activity? Why do you suggest going there? I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. 【答案】Possible versions: I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. For the activity, I suggest visiting the Drum and Bell Towers, Shichahai, and nearby Hutongs. These places show Beijing’s rich history and traditional culture. Students can enjoy scenic views, learn about the Central Axis, and explore the local lifestyle. Watching Beijing Opera could add a cultural highlight to the tour. I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息、你建议举办什么交流活动，引出下文；（开头已给出） 第二步，具体介绍参观景点并说明理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达希望方案能被考虑。（结尾已给出） [亮点词汇] ①suggest doing sth.建议做某事 ②traditional culture传统文化 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①For the activity, I suggest visiting the Drum and Bell Towers, Shichahai, and nearby Hutongs.（动名词短语作宾语） ②Watching Beijing Opera could add a cultural highlight to the tour.（动名词短语作主语） Writing 4 进入初中以来，你的学校一定组织过很多有意义的外出研学活动，让你和同学们开阔了眼界，体验了快乐，增进了友谊。新学期你的学校现正举办 “My Study Tour ”征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题，向大家介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动， 说一说你去了哪，做了什么，以及你的收获。 提示词语：historical sites, museums, experience, fantastic, exciting 提示问题： 1.Where did you go on the study tour? 2.What did you do on the tour? 3.What have you learnt from the study tour? My Study Tour ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Study Tour Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates to Xi’an. We first went to visit Emperor Qin Shi Huang’s Mausoleum Site Museum, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. In the afternoon, we went to watch some shadow plays, an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. The following day, we climbed the famous Great Wild Goose Pagoda. Standing on the top of it, we had a great view of the city. After that, we tasted some delicious local food. We also had lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and sharing the study tour report. The trip was both pleasant and educational.     I feel lucky to have such a lovely tour in Xian. It was an excellent opportunity to experience the local culture and gain a deeper appreciation of Chinese history. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动； 第二步，具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写你去了哪，做了什么； 第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己参加了此次外出研学活动的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in 参加，加入 ②had a great view of 对……看得很清楚 ③such as例如 ④lots of 许多 [高分句型] ①We first went to visit Emperor Qinshihuang’s Mausoleum Site Museum, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. （where引导的定语从句） ② It was an excellent opportunity to experience the local culture and gain a deeper appreciation of Chinese history.（it作形式主语的强调句） Writing 5 旅行在意的是途中的人和事，还有那些美好的记忆和景色。要么读书，要么旅行，灵魂和身体必须有一个在路上。某英文网站正在开展以“旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。主要内容包括:你去了哪儿，什么时候去的，做了什么以及当时的感受。 提示词语：see, take photos, wonderful, happy 提示问题： ● When and where did you go? ● What did you do there? ● How did you feel? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Beihai Park is one of the most popular places to visit in Beijing. I went there with my classmates this May and we had a great time. We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercises and dancing. We also took lots of pictures of the beautiful flowers in the gardens. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. It was a wonderful trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I’m looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in Beijing. 【详解】1.题干解读：根据提示写写自己的旅行经历，途中的人和事，还有那些美好的记忆和景色。 2.例文点评：例文分为三个自然段，第一段点明自己和同学去北海公园，第二自然段讲述了在北海公园的所见所闻，第三自然段表达自己的感受。三个自然段衔接自然，内容充实，其中使用了一些短语和句型，让文章看起来更丰富。 3.高分亮点： 短语：one of……之一，have a great time玩得高兴，take pictures of给……拍照，look forward to doing sth.盼望做某事。 句型：as引导的时间状语从句，it's+形容词+to do sth.做某事是怎样的。 话题5 一次发现的经历 写出你的发现或经历,它如何改变了你的生活或你从中学到了什么。常见的写作话题有: ①分享一次劳动实践和感受; ②描述你的一次经历,谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以记叙文、说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件向你的笔友Tom分享栽培植物的经历和感受。不少于50词。 　　提示词语:grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), fun, learn 内容提示:·What was your labor homework? ·How did you complete it? ·What have you learned from it? Hi Tom, How's it going? I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you. Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply. Li Bin 【答案】例文： Hi Tom, How's it going? I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you. This term, my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes. I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put it into a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it. The interesting experience taught me patience and helped me realize the beauty of nature. I hope you try this too! Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply. Li Bin 【审题指导】 1.体裁:应用文    2.时态:以一般过去时为主    3.人称:以第一人称为主 4.必备词句: ①assign sb. sth.给某人布置……　 ②name sb./sth.sth.给……取名为…… ③a feeling of satisfaction满足感　 ④teach sb. sth.教某人…… ⑤the beauty of nature自然之美 ⑥It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger.看到它慢慢长得更高更强壮,真是令人着迷。 Writing 2 某英文网站正在开展以“用心沟通，让问题迎刃而解”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中一次与他人沟通的经历，以及你的收获。 提示词语：listen to, understand, respect 提示问题： ●What happened to you? ● How did you communicate with others? ● What have you learned from the experience? Good communication helps solve problems                                  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Good communication helps solve problems Last month, I had a disagreement with my best friend because she thought I broke her favorite pen. In fact, it was someone else. At first, we were both angry and didn’t talk to each other.   Later, I decided to communicate with her. I listened to her feelings patiently and explained everything calmly. We both realized it was a misunderstanding. After that, we apologized and made up.   From this experience, I have learned that listening, understanding and respect are the keys to good communication. It helps us rebuild our friendship. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：围绕“沟通”展开，结合自身经历写清楚事件发生的背景、沟通过程及收获。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出事件，说明发生了什么误会或问题； 第二步，叙述自己是如何通过沟通解决问题的，包括倾听、理解与尊重等方式； 第三步，总结自己从这次经历中学到的沟通技巧与感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① have a disagreement with与……闹矛盾 ② communicate with与……交流 ③ at last最后 ④ make up和好 [高分句型] ① I had a disagreement with my best friend because she thought I broke her favorite pen. （because引导的原因状语从句） ② I have learned that listening, understanding and respect are the keys to good communication.（宾语从句） Writing 3 某英文网站正在开展“运动北京”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇英文短文投稿，讲述你一次难忘的运动经历，以及感受。 提示词语：marathon (马拉松)， give up， cheer， proud 提示问题： ·Describe one of your unforgettable experiences of doing sports. ·Share your feelings. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last autumn, I ran in the Beijing Marathon with my best friend. It was my first time and it was a challenge that I will never forget. At first, I was very excited. After running for about an hour, my legs felt heavy and sweat made my eyes hurt. I was thinking about giving up. When an old runner who was wearing a red T-shirt with “Never Give Up” ran pass me, he cheered for me. He told me to keep going. I was encouraged and decided to keep running. When I finally crossed the finish line, people I didn’t know gave me high-fives. My legs were tired for days, but I felt really happy and proud of myself. I love running even more. I have learned that marathons aren’t about winning against others, but about trying your best. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：围绕首次参加北京马拉松的经历，包含赛前状态、中途挑战、他人鼓励及赛后感悟等要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇介绍事件背景，表达挑战难忘； 第二步，描述跑步过程中的困难，通过老跑者的鼓励展现转折； 第三步，讲述冲过终点线的感受，最后升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①challenge挑战 ②cheer for为……加油 ③encouraged受鼓舞的 ④proud of为……自豪   [高分句型] ①When an old runner who was wearing a red T-shirt with “Never Give Up” ran past me, he cheered for me. (when引导的时间状语从句，who引导的定语从句) ②I have learned that marathons aren’t about winning against others, but about trying your best. (that引导的宾语从句) Writing 4 在每个人的成长过程中，都难免经历失败 (failure)。只有在失败中不断反思和成长，才能取得成功。某英语报社正在举办以“Learn from Failure”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 你的一次失败经历： 2. 从中得到的收获与感悟。 注意： 1. 词数100词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Learn from Failure ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Learn from Failure Failure is a stepping stone on the path to success, and I have one unforgettable experience. Last term, I aimed for the top 5 in the mid-term exams. I studied hard, but during the English test, I got so nervous that I made many careless mistakes. The result was far from my expectation. I was really frustrated. However, I didn’t let this failure beat me. I carefully went through my test paper, finding that my poor time management and weak grammar knowledge were to blame. From this, I learned to stay calm under pressure and realized the importance of solid knowledge. Now, I practice time-management skills and review grammar regularly. I believe failures can be turned into valuable lessons as long as we learn from them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为介绍个人经历； ②时态：“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，考生应结合自身从失败中获得经验的经历来进行写作，写作中应突出描写从此次失败中获得的经验和教训，以及这些教训对现在的影响。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明意图。点明文章主题； 第二步，具体讲述自身经历。描述失败经历（考试失利），并且进行失败原因分析； 第三步，书写结语。点明从这次失败中获得的经验以及教训，介绍失败后自己现在是如何做的，最后再次点明主题，做到首尾呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①stepping stone垫脚石 ②frustrated沮丧的 ③solid knowledge扎实的知识 [高分句型] ①Failure is a stepping stone on the path to success.（采用比喻的修辞手法） ②I carefully went through my test paper, finding that my poor time management and weak grammar knowledge were to blame.（动名词“finding”做伴随状语，that引导宾语从句） 话题6 环境保护 写出自己已经做了什么或将要做什么来帮助拯救地球。常见的写作话题有: ①介绍环境保护的重要性,并提出几点关于如何保护环境的建议; ②谈谈日常生活中你践行绿色生活的具体做法、感受及建议,呼吁大家保护环境; ③学校将开展“保护环境”宣传活动,请写信告诉交换生活动的时间、地点以及需要做什么准备。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以说明文、议论文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活,从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对绿色生活的看法,简单描述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法,并提出对如何践行绿色生活的建议。不少于50词。 提示词语:important, protect the environment, divide the waste, save, recycle 提示问题: ·What do you think of a green life? ·What do you do to have a green life? ·What's your advice on having a green life? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Green lifestyle is very important because it can help us protect our environment. For me, I often ride a bike to school because it gives me a chance to do some exercise and it produces no pollution. Besides, I always turn off lights when I leave the room. I think everyone should take action to live a green life. For example, we can use both sides of paper to save it. What's more, we can recycle old books and give them to the children in need. I hope that we remember three words “reduce, reuse, recycle” every day. If we do so, we'll make our world better. 【审题指导】 1.体裁:议论文    2.时态:以一般现在时为主    3.人称:以第一人称为主 4.必备词句: ①give sb. a chance to do sth.给某人一个做某事的机会　 ②do some exercise做一些运动　 ③turn off lights关灯 ④take action采取行动　 ⑤live a green life过绿色生活 ⑥For me, I often ride a bike to school because it gives me a chance to do some exercise and it produces no pollution.对我来说,我经常骑自行车上学,因为它让我有机会做一些运动,而且它不会产生污染。 Writing 2 人类只有一个可生息的村庄——地球，保护环境是每个地球村民的责任。 某英文网站正在开展以“保护环境”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在日常生活中是如何做的，以及你的感受。 提示词语：protect, rubbish, plastic bag, meaningful, duty 提示问题： ● What do you do to protect the environment in your daily life? ● How do you feel by doing so? We have only one earth, so we must do something for it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： We have only one earth, so we must do something for it. It is important for us to take action in protecting the environment. In daily life, a student should always care for the details in the environment around him or her. What I usually do is taking the bus and subway instead of going to school in a car. I often turn off the lights and computers when I don’t need them. Whenever I see rubbish on the ground, I will pick it up and throw it into dustbins. I always use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping . I think all I do is very meaningful, because even the simplest activities can make a real difference.    It’s our duty to make our home better. Let’s change from ourselves. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，谈论如何保护环境。写作时要注意：1.通篇以一般现在时为主，2.要点要齐全，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅衔接自然。 2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。 3.高分亮点： 短语：take action；care for the details；taking the bus and subway；instead of；turn off；pick it up；change from ourselves。 句型：①形式主语 It is important for us to take action in protecting the environment.                  It’s our duty to make our home better. ②时间状语从句 I often turn off the lights and computers when I don’t need them. ③原因状语从句 I think all I do is very meaningful, because even the simplest activities can make a real difference.   Writing 3 垃圾分类，人人有责。 假如你是李华，你受学生会的委托，向在校交换生发出参与垃圾分类的倡议。请你以"Waste Sorting-A Must for Everyone"为题，用英文写一封倡议书，谈谈垃圾分类的意义，以及我们能做什么。 提示词语:waste sorting(垃圾分类), litter, recycle, protect, environment 提示问题: 1. Why is waste sorting important? 2. What can we do to help with waste sorting? Waste Sorting-A Must for Everyone Dear students, Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Council 【答案】Dear fellow students, Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country. I hope all of us can get involved in this meaningful activity. It is important because it can not only reduce the land pollution but also raise our awareness to protect the environment. As students, we can do a lot for waste sorting.First of all, we should learn how to sort the waste online. Secondly, we can sort the waste by preparing some bins in different colors at home. Last but not least, it’s also a good choice to put up posters to call on more people to join us. In a word, even a small action can make a big difference to our environment. Let’s pull together to start sorting the waste right now! Thank you! Student Council 【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要以“Waste Sorting-A Must for Everyone”为主题展开描述。主要写出垃圾分类的重要性，要从“我”做起，以及一些具体的做法要写清楚，可以使用First of all，Secondly等词描写具体的方法，这样会使得文章比较有层次感。 2. 例文点评：文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题指出垃圾分类的重要性；第二段指出具体的做法有哪些；第三段总结小小的行动会对环境产生很大的影响；第四段号召大家进行垃圾分类。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，层次分明，意思明确易懂。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：not only …but also；first of all；last but not least；put up；call on；in a word。 句型：because引导的原因状语从句；Let’s+祈使句；I hope+宾语从句；疑问词+to do sth。 Writing 4 假如你是李华，你们校学生会号召全体同学为建设绿色家园贡献自己的力量。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈环境保护的重要性，日常生活中你为保护环境都做了什么，以及你做完后的感受。 提示词语：water the trees and flowers, collect the waste, happy, proud 提示问题： ● What do you think of protecting the environment? ● What do you do in your everyday life to protect the environment? ● How do you feel about what you have done? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 At my school, we held a practical activity about how to make a green school last week. In the activity, I watered the trees and flowers. And I collected waste which can be recycled or used again. I also learnt ways to save energy. Though I was tired, I was very happy. 　　I think it’ s important to keep the environment clean. I believe if everyone pays attention to our environment protection, my school will be more beautiful and comfortable to study in. 【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，就“建设绿色校园”为主题的社会实践活动开展大讨论。谈谈环境保护的重要性。 【详解】动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，重点从三个方面去写作： 1.你认为保护环境怎么样？ 2.你在活动中做了什么？ 3.你感觉怎么样？ 结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，运用一般过去时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 $专题03 文段表达 话题1 太空 话题4 旅程 （常考点） 话题2 讲述一则故事 话题5 一次发现的经历（常考点） 话题3 介绍自己的榜样（常考点） 话题6 环境保护（常考点） 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 太空 常见的写作话题有: ①给自己最喜欢的宇航员写一封信; ②介绍未来的太空生活 ③校园航天日。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以记叙文、说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 中国航天日(Space Day of China),是为纪念中国航天事业取得的成就、向宇航员致敬的日子。你校英文报社开展了主题为“A Letter to Astronauts”的征文活动,假如你是李华,请你用英文写一篇不少于50词的短文投稿,说明写信的原因,询问太空站的生活如何,并说明自己对太空的看法。 提示词语:admiration, space station 内容提示: ·Why do you write the letter? ·What questions do you want to ask astronauts? ·What are your ideas about space? Dear astronauts, 　　I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Beijing.　 Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 假如你是李华，你的笔友Nick看了“神舟十七号”的成功发射后对宇航员充满了好奇，他给你发邮件询问宇航员将在太空中做什么以及如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 What will astronauts do in space? 1. do scientific experiments (科学实验) 2. take exercise to keep fit 3. Sometimes walk in space 4. … How to get a healthy body like astronauts? 1. Eating habits: … 2. Living habits: … Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 3 　　随着我国航天技术的发展和进步,实行太空移民可能不再是梦。请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈对未来太空生活的畅想。不少于50词。 　　提示词语:robot, spaceship, solar power 　　内容提示:What will life be like in space? Space life in the future I would like to introduce the space life in the future. Writing 4 随着天宫空间站的建设，在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站的旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Journey to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意：1、短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3、词数80～100。 My Journey to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 5 2024年4月24日是第九个“中国航天日”。假如你是李华，你的学校在那天举办了校园航天系列活动，请你用英文给你的笔友Tony写信，根据海报信息向他介绍本次活动，并分享你的收获及感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含海报中的信息，可适当发挥，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Tony, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you that our school has just had an interesting School Space Day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you agree with me?   Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 话题2 讲述一则故事 以“讲述一则故事”为话题，故事应分为“开端”“发展”“高潮”和“结局”等几部分。故事中还应包含人物、事件、时间、地点等因素。在表达上注意次序合理，叙述完整。 【写作技巧】 故事类作文以图画作文的形式呈现。命题者选择一幅或者几幅图片，针对图片所反映的中心内容设计试题，要求根据图片所提供的必要信息和内容进行写作。此类题目通过图画的形式来考察考生的观察能力、思考能力和写作能力。 写图画作文时应注意以下几点： 1 认真审题，弄清大意； 2 理出要点，拟定提纲； 3 紧扣要点，扩展成文； 4 通读短文，修正错误。 Writing 1 上周日在河边发生了张明救落水小男孩儿的事情，请你根据四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。 注意：①文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； ②语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； ③词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Brave Young Man It was a nice day last Sunday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 2 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tom近期参加了学校举办的中国文化节，期间对“愚公移山”的故事产生了浓厚兴趣。他希望深入了解这个故事的内容及意义。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。 1. 愚公家附近有两座大山，生活不便，遂率领全家搬山； 2. 别人笑他年老无力，愚公却说子孙无穷，山不会长； 3. 天帝被愚公打动，派山神搬走两山； 4. 意义：（请补充完整） 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当补充细节； 2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名； 4. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, Knowing that you’re interested in the story about Yu Gong Moves the Mountains, I’d like to share it with you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 3 下个月初，法国交流学生将到访我校。恰逢校园文化节系列活动“用英语讲好中国故事”，你计划参与活动，向外国友人讲述中国传统故事。请你从下面两个传统故事中选择一个，根据思维导图写一个演讲稿。 注意： 1.演讲稿需包含所选所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello everyone! Today, I’d like to share a traditional Chinese story called______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题3 介绍自己的榜样 常见的写作话题有: ①谈谈谁是你心中的榜样,为什么你选择他/她作为你的榜样,以及你能从他/她身上学到了什么; ②你们班准备开展“榜样的力量”分享会,请你给交换生写一封电子邮件,告诉他分享会的内容、目的、时间和地点。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、写演讲稿等。 Writing 1 在我们的身边,总有一些平凡的英雄。正是他们让我们明白责任与担当,教会我们如何面对困难,如何帮助他人。某英文网站正在开展以“身边的英雄”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你心中的英雄是谁,对其做简要介绍,他/她都做了什么让你印象深刻的事,以及你的收获。不少于50词。 提示词语:tall, helpful, offer, kindness 提示问题: ·Who is the everyday hero in your life? Please describe him/her. ·What did he/she do? ·What have you learned from him/her? Writing 2 某英文网站正在开展以“致敬伟大发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的发明家，他/她为什么是你最喜欢的发明家以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。字数120字左右。 提示词：scientist, invent, great, teach 提示问题： 1. Who is your favourite inventor? 2. Why is he/she your favourite inventor? 3. What did you learn from him/her?   There are many famous inventors. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 3 Write a short passage about “I’d like to learn from…”. (以“我想向……学习”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文) a. Who would you like to learn from, a model student, a famous person or someone else? b. What do you know about him or her? c. How will you change yourself to learn from him or her? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 4 在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点： 1. Who is your role model? 2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥； 3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题4 旅程 分享你曾经经历过的一次旅行,使用形容词来描述你在旅途中看到的东西。常见的写作话题有: ①介绍一次令自己印象深刻的旅行经历以及这次旅行带给你的收获或感悟; ②根据提示信息,介绍某个外出活动的地点、过程以及收获; ③推荐一个景点,介绍在这个景点可以看到什么、做些什么以及需要做哪些准备。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以记叙文、说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有写一封电子邮件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 俗话说“读万卷书,不如行万里路”。为了让各位同学有机会交流自己对于旅行的感受，现你校英语社团正在开展主题为“My Wonderful Journey”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你去过哪儿、在那里做了什么以及这次旅行给你带来的感悟。不少于50词。 提示词语:school trip, excellent, expand, fascinating, pleasant 内容提示: ·Where did you go? ·What did you do during the journey? ·What have you learned from it? My Wonderful Journey Writing 2 某英文网站正在开展以“难忘的旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈让你难忘的一次旅行经历。主要内容包括：你去了哪里，什么时候去的，做了什么，为什么是一次难忘的旅行。标题自拟。 提示词语: famous places, take photos, present, unforgettable trip 提示问题： ●When and where did you go? ●What did you do there? ●Why was the trip unforgettable? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 3 假如你是李华，你校英语社团将接待国外学生代表团来访，届时举办一次“漫步中轴线”（Walking along the Beijing Central Axis）主题研学活动（study tour）。活动可以包括漫步永定门公园，参观钟鼓楼、什刹海及周边的胡同，了解中轴文化带的历史，欣赏自然景色和传统建筑等。请你给英语社团公众号留言，推荐一些活动景点并说明理由。 提示词语：Drum and Bell Towers, the Palace Museum, watch Beijing Opera, learn about history, culture 提示问题： What places do you suggest for the activity? Why do you suggest going there? I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks. Writing 4 进入初中以来，你的学校一定组织过很多有意义的外出研学活动，让你和同学们开阔了眼界，体验了快乐，增进了友谊。新学期你的学校现正举办 “My Study Tour ”征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题，向大家介绍一次你所参加的外出研学活动， 说一说你去了哪，做了什么，以及你的收获。 提示词语：historical sites, museums, experience, fantastic, exciting 提示问题： 1.Where did you go on the study tour? 2.What did you do on the tour? 3.What have you learnt from the study tour? My Study Tour ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 5 旅行在意的是途中的人和事，还有那些美好的记忆和景色。要么读书，要么旅行，灵魂和身体必须有一个在路上。某英文网站正在开展以“旅行”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一次旅行经历。主要内容包括:你去了哪儿，什么时候去的，做了什么以及当时的感受。 提示词语：see, take photos, wonderful, happy 提示问题： ● When and where did you go? ● What did you do there? ● How did you feel? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题5 一次发现的经历 写出你的发现或经历,它如何改变了你的生活或你从中学到了什么。常见的写作话题有: ①分享一次劳动实践和感受; ②描述你的一次经历,谈谈这次经历带给你的收获。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以记叙文、说明文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 假如你是李斌,开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业,内容是栽培一种植物(绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等),观察并记录它(们)的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣,打算写一封邮件向你的笔友Tom分享栽培植物的经历和感受。不少于50词。 　　提示词语:grow, look after, watch, record (v.记录), fun, learn 内容提示: ·What was your labor homework? ·How did you complete it? ·What have you learned from it? Hi Tom, How's it going? I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you. Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply. Li Bin Writing 2 某英文网站正在开展以“用心沟通，让问题迎刃而解”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中一次与他人沟通的经历，以及你的收获。 提示词语：listen to, understand, respect 提示问题： ●What happened to you? ● How did you communicate with others? ● What have you learned from the experience? Good communication helps solve problems                                  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 3 某英文网站正在开展“运动北京”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇英文短文投稿，讲述你一次难忘的运动经历，以及感受。 提示词语：marathon (马拉松)， give up， cheer， proud 提示问题： ·Describe one of your unforgettable experiences of doing sports. ·Share your feelings. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 4 在每个人的成长过程中，都难免经历失败 (failure)。只有在失败中不断反思和成长，才能取得成功。某英语报社正在举办以“Learn from Failure”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 你的一次失败经历： 2. 从中得到的收获与感悟。 注意： 1. 词数100词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Learn from Failure ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题6 环境保护 写出自己已经做了什么或将要做什么来帮助拯救地球。常见的写作话题有: ①介绍环境保护的重要性,并提出几点关于如何保护环境的建议; ②谈谈日常生活中你践行绿色生活的具体做法、感受及建议,呼吁大家保护环境; ③学校将开展“保护环境”宣传活动,请写信告诉交换生活动的时间、地点以及需要做什么准备。 中考文段表达中和该话题有关的命题形式有很多,通常以说明文、议论文或应用文的形式出现,常见的应用文种类有回复邮件或信件、给校报投稿等。 Writing 1 某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活,从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对绿色生活的看法,简单描述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法,并提出对如何践行绿色生活的建议。不少于50词。 提示词语:important, protect the environment, divide the waste, save, recycle 提示问题: ·What do you think of a green life? ·What do you do to have a green life? ·What's your advice on having a green life? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 2 人类只有一个可生息的村庄——地球，保护环境是每个地球村民的责任。 某英文网站正在开展以“保护环境”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在日常生活中是如何做的，以及你的感受。 提示词语：protect, rubbish, plastic bag, meaningful, duty 提示问题： ● What do you do to protect the environment in your daily life? ● How do you feel by doing so? We have only one earth, so we must do something for it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 3 垃圾分类，人人有责。 假如你是李华，你受学生会的委托，向在校交换生发出参与垃圾分类的倡议。请你以"Waste Sorting-A Must for Everyone"为题，用英文写一封倡议书，谈谈垃圾分类的意义，以及我们能做什么。 提示词语:waste sorting(垃圾分类), litter, recycle, protect, environment 提示问题: 1. Why is waste sorting important? 2. What can we do to help with waste sorting? Waste Sorting-A Must for Everyone Dear students, Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Council Writing 4 假如你是李华，你们校学生会号召全体同学为建设绿色家园贡献自己的力量。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈环境保护的重要性，日常生活中你为保护环境都做了什么，以及你做完后的感受。 提示词语：water the trees and flowers, collect the waste, happy, proud 提示问题： ● What do you think of protecting the environment? ● What do you do in your everyday life to protect the environment? ● How do you feel about what you have done? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $