Unit 7 单元话题写作-【精品课】2025-2026学年八年级英语上册同步精品课件（人教版2024）

该初中英语课件围绕“未来的梦想”主题，聚焦“20年后生活预测”的写作任务，通过分享活动、阅读Mandy的范文导入，以表格对比（职业、居住地等）搭建学习支架，引导学生梳理内容，衔接写作指导与实践。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过范文结构分析（如段落布局）和时态指导提升表达能力，借助自评互评清单发展批判性思维。提供写作提纲和范文示例，帮助学生掌握方法，既提升学生写作能力，也为教师提供系统教学支持。

Unit7 When Tomorrow Comes 单元话题写作讲练 本单元教材写作情境为“写出你 20年后的生活”,属于“人与社会”主题范 畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁,历史 的发展,对未来的畅想”。常见的写作任务是预测自己或他人未来的理想生活。 体裁多为说明文。 输入您的标题 2 Let’s share Last class, we made an interview about how the future life would be different. Today could you share us how your future life will be like? What’s your dream job? What will you do to make it happen? Lead in Let’ read Mandy’s future dreams. It can help you write a passage about yours. What might these dreams be about? an art museum/ a gallary countryside / a quiet place / a natural place, ... place to live place to visit Read about Mandy’s dreams for the future and find out what she wants to be. She wants to be an artist. will study art in France will visit all the art museums will learn about different art will create her own art 3a Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams and yours. Item Mandy You Future job Place to live Free time activity How to make dreams come true 3b Let’s check Mandy’s dreams first! My Dreams for the Future What will my life be like in 20 years? It's not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too. As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying. Item Mandy Future job Place to live Free time activity How to make dreams come true Artist Countryside in France Visit museums, create art, invite friends Study hard and keep trying Complete the table about Mandy’s dreams. 3b 小红书：Christina在努力 Complete the table about your dreams. Item You Future job Place to live Free time activity How to make dreams come true 3b Where will you live in 20 years? What will you do in your free time? How are you going to do that? What will you be when you grow up? My Dreams for the Future What will my life be like in 20 years? It's not an easy question, but here are a few of my predictions. I love art, so I think I will become an artist. I want to study art in France, and then I will visit all the famous art museums. I will learn a lot about different artists and their works of art, and I will create my own too. As an artist, I will live in the countryside and stay close to nature. There will be flowers and plants around my home. Life there will give me good ideas for making art. At the weekend, I will invite friends to come over and have fun together. I believe these dreams will come true as long as I study hard and keep on trying. Beginning Body Ending Introduce topic My dream job Study activities Life activities Conclusion Let’s analyze 4 Post-reading(Writing) Part 1. What will your life be like in 20 years? Write a short passage about your dreams for the future. Use your notes in 3b. 3c 写作指导 文本体裁 话题分析 要求想想自己20年后的生活将会是什么样，然后写一篇关于对未来梦想的短文。 本文根据3a与3b提示的内容，可知是描述未来情况的文章，因此偏记叙文。 人称时态 以第一人称为主；以一般现在时与一般将来时为主。 861b240d-cd4e-4b4b-87c2-161e8c2fa4ea.source.default.zh-Hans 11 (1) How many paragraphs are there in the article? (2) What is the content of this article? two Observe and think Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 future job place to live (3) How does the first paragraph narrate(叙述)? First sentence: Question Third sentence: interest+future job Second sentence: feeling about the question Fourth and fifth sentences: expectations (activities) (use the simple future tense) (4) How about paragraph 2? First sentence: place to live Third sentence: combine the job content Second sentence: environmental description Fourth sentence: expected activity Fifth sentence: How to make dreams come true use the simple future tense 教材写作品读 Life in 20 Years My life in 20 years will be very different from what it is now. Here are some of my predictions. I think I will be a teacher. In the classroom,①there will be more new teaching tools. 教材原句 ①【Section B 1b】 However,there will be more challenging jobs in the future,such as space pilots and AI experts.（there be句型的一 般将来时） 输入您的标题 15 I’ll learn ②how to use them to make my classes more interesting. At home,there will be a robot to help with housework.③ It’s really great for me to have more free time to read books. ②【Section A 2a】Machines will tell us how to solve small health problems before they become bigger. （how to do结构） 续表 输入您的标题 16 My neighbourhood will be greener and more beautiful. It’s easy for people to live there comfortably. Whether my dreams can come true ④depends on whether I work hard now. ③【Section B 2b】It is important for young students to develop skills that will be valuable in the future. （it is+adj.+for sb.to do sth. 句型） 续表 输入您的标题 17 All in all,the future is full of hope. We never know what will happen in the future,but I’ll keep trying my best. ④【Section B 2c】It depends on how we choose to improve and use AI to meet future challenges.（“depend on+宾语 从句”结构） 续表 输入您的标题 18 开头句 每个人都对他们的未来生活有一个预测。 翻译: ___________________________________________ Everyone has a prediction for their future lives. 中间句 1.There will be more new teaching tools. 仿写:道路上将会有更少的汽车，因为它们（汽车）将会在空中飞行。 ________________________________________________________________ 加后置定语和伴随状语升格:将会有更多的汽车在空中飞行，载着我们去任何有趣的地方。 There will be fewer cars on the roads because they will fly in the sky. There will be more cars flying in the sky,taking us anywhere interesting. 输入您的标题 19 2.机器人将在我们的生活中发挥作用。 翻译: _________________________________ Robots will play a part in our lives. 3.It is important for young students to develop skills that will be valuable in the future.（教材Section B 2b） 仿写:人们可能会拥有更多的空闲时间来放松。 ___________________________________________________ It’s possible for people to have more free time to relax. 结尾句 我认为未来将会越来越好,人们将过着更加美满的生活。（比较级+and+比较级） 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ ___________ I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life. 输入您的标题 20 【名言积累】 1.The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.未 来属于那些相信自己梦想之美的人。 2.The best way to predict your future is to create it.预测未来的最好方法 就是创造未来。 输入您的标题 21 在科技迅速发展的今天,人们的生活发生了很多变化,未来也一定会有新 的变化。假定你是李华,你将参加你校英文广播站举办的以“Life in the Future”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 输入您的标题 22 审题指导 1.文体: ________ 2.人称: ____________________ 3.时态: ____________ 说明文 第一人称和第三人称 一般将来时 4.写作要点: ① __________; ② __________; ③ __________________; ④ __________ 交通方面 住房方面 机器人的使用方面 我的感受 输入您的标题 23 思路点拨 （温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲） No one knows what the future will be like. Everyone has a prediction for their future lives. flying cars under the sea on other planets help do easy jobs My feelings 输入您的标题 24 小试身手 Life in the Future _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Although no one knows what the future will be like,everyone has a prediction for their future lives. As far as I know,the future life must be very different from now. To begin with,we will find the footprints of humans anywhere,under the sea or on other planets. Also,there will be more cars flying in the sky,taking us anywhere interesting. More importantly,robots will play a part in our lives 输入您的标题 25 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ and help with some simple and boring jobs. Last but not least,it’s possible for people to have more free time to relax. I think the future will be better and better and people will live a happier life. 输入您的标题 Write your article according to the information mentioned above. Pay attention to your spelling and structure. Be careful! Beginning Body Ending Introduction (Topic) What will ... be like in ...?/Here are a few of my predictions/I always imagine what life will be like in ... Content (Job&Place&Activity) Job: I love... , so I think I will become.../I think I will work as .../I will be ... and I will be known for ... Place: I want to study ... in .../I will live in .../There will be .../I will live in ...where people are ... Activity: I will visit .../I will learn a lot about .../I will invite friends to... /In my free time, I will .../Life there will give me ... for ... Summary (Resolution&Feeling) I believe these dreams will come ture as long as I.../That’s what I think about .../ How interesting my life will be .../I’m sure I’ll have a/an ... life in the future. How do you make dreams for the future? Let’s summarize Now, you can exchange your writings with your partners to check each other’s writing. Checklist Self-evaluation Peer-evaluation Teacher-evaluation Clear structure Topic sentence More relative information Right linking words Right grammar Right spelling Good handwriting Great Good Try harder What will my life be like in 20 years? I often think about it. I love helping others, so I hope to be a doctor. I plan to study medicine in a top-notch medical school. After that, I'll work in a big hospital, saving patients' lives and relieving their pains. As a doctor, I'll live in a modern city. There, I can meet various patients and learn from different medical cases. In my free time, I'll take part in medical volunteer activities, going to poor areas to offer free medical care. I believe my dream will come true as long as I study hard now and keep improving my medical skills. For example-1 In 20 years, what will my life be like? Well, I'm really into technology, so I want to be a software engineer. I'll study computer science at a famous university first. Then, I'll work in a high-tech company, creating useful apps and software to make people's lives easier. I'll live in a smart city, where everything is connected by advanced technology. During my free time, I'll join programming competitions and share my knowledge with other tech lovers. To make this dream a reality, I'll practice coding every day and keep up with the latest tech trends. For example-2 Checklist Point(s) Content Future dreams (job, place, activities) (6 points) How to achieve the dreams (2 points) Explains why (2 points) Other (1 point) Structure Beginning Body Ending (3 points) Expressions Good expressions (2 points) No mistakes (grammar, tense, spelling) (2 points) Handwriting clean&tidy (2 point) What will my life be like in 20 years? It's difficult to answer, but here are a few of my predictions. I love helping others, so I think I will become a doctor. I want to study at a medical school. Then I'll use my skills to save people's lives. There will be a robot in my house, and it will help with housework like cooking and cleaning. People will plant more trees. The world will be a cleaner, greener, and more comfortable place to live in. I'll also take up a hobby like playing the piano when possible. All in all, the future is full of hope. We can never know what will happen in the future, but we can try our best to make our dreams come true. $