专题04 写作 （期末复习讲义）高二英语上学期北师大版

该高中英语写作复习讲义通过思维导图系统梳理写作知识体系，按选择性必修一/二高频话题（人际关系、成功与成长等）分节，每节以“话题语法清单→句式模板→真题范文片段→变式仿写”的闭环结构呈现，用表格归纳核心语法与适配句式，清晰展现语法知识与话题写作的内在联系及重难点分布。 讲义亮点在于“语法赋能写作”的分层设计，通过话题专项仿写（如用“A good friend is someone who...”练定语从句）和语法纠错升格（如修改时态不一致错误并添加非谓语优化），强化语言准确性与表达生动性，培养语言能力和思维品质。模块3的期末模拟题（如科技节口号征集、演讲稿写作）覆盖高频题型，基础薄弱学生可通过模板掌握规范表达，优秀学生能实现句式升格，教师可依托系统训练实施精准复习教学。

专题04 写作 思维导图 模块 1：话题专项写作（按选择性必修一 / 二高频话题分节） 核心目标 以选择性必修一 / 二期末高频写作话题为载体，聚焦 “语法赋能写作提分”，通过 “话题语法清单→句式模板→真题借鉴→仿写落地” 的闭环训练，结合 “错误纠错→表达升格” 强化，帮助学生在写作中精准运用语法、优化句式，实现 “语法正确、表达生动、得分点突出”。 第一节：人际关系类写作（选择性必修一高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单（高频好用 + 提分关键） 定语从句：who（指代人）、which（指代事件 / 关系）、where（指代交往场景） 状语从句：when（描述交往时间）、because/since（说明关系原因）、though（转折关系） 非谓语动词：doing（表伴随交往动作）、done（表被动感受，如 “impressed by”） 情态动词：can/could（表建议 / 能力）、should（表交往建议） 名词性从句：What makes a good friend is that...（强调人际关系核心） 二、语法句式模板（可直接套用 + 话题适配） 语法类型 句式模板（结合人际关系话题） 定语从句（指代人） A good friend is someone who is willing to listen to you when you are in trouble and offer practical help. 状语从句（原因） Since we come from different cultural backgrounds, we need to respect each other’s customs to maintain a harmonious relationship. 非谓语动词（done） Impressed by his kindness and sincerity, I decided to build a deep friendship with him. 情态动词（建议） We should communicate openly with our parents, which can help avoid misunderstandings. 名词性从句 What makes teacher-student relationships precious is that teachers not only teach knowledge but also guide us to grow. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2023 年新课标 I 卷写作范文） In interpersonal communication, mutual respect and understanding are essential. A true friend is someone who stands by you through joys and sorrows（定语从句）, and this is a belief shared by people from all cultural backgrounds. When we interact with others（时间状语从句）, we should listen patiently and express our opinions politely. Though there may be cultural differences（让步状语从句）, as long as we are willing to learn from each other, we can build strong and lasting relationships. Influenced by my parents’ friendly attitude towards others（过去分词作状语）, I have always valued the importance of treating people with sincerity. 四、变式仿写（聚焦语法运用 + 落地训练） 写作提纲：描述你与一位朋友的珍贵友谊，说明你们维持友谊的关键 关键词提示：sincere communication（真诚沟通）、support each other（互相支持）、overcome difficulties（克服困难）、trust（信任） 仿写要求： 用 “A good friend is someone who...” 写 1 句定义 用 “Though...，we...” 写 1 句描述友谊中的挑战与坚持 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第二节：成功与成长类写作（选择性必修一高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单 时态：一般过去时（描述成长经历）、现在完成时（强调成长影响） 状语从句：if（成功条件）、because（成长原因）、so that（成长目的） 强调句：It was...that...（强调成功 / 成长的关键因素） 非谓语动词：doing（表成长过程中的动作）、to do（表成功目标） 定语从句：that/which（指代成长事件 / 成功经历） 二、语法句式模板 语法类型 句式模板（结合成功与成长话题） 时态结合 I struggled with English learning for two years, and this experience has taught me that perseverance is the key to success. 强调句 It was the encouragement from my teacher that gave me the courage to keep trying and finally achieve my goal. 条件状语从句 If we set clear goals and work hard step by step, we will surely make progress in our personal growth. 现在分词作伴随 Facing numerous challenges in the competition, I learned to stay calm and find solutions actively, which accelerated my growth. 不定式作目标 Many people strive to achieve success not only for personal fulfillment but also to make contributions to society. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2022 年全国乙卷写作范文） Success means different things to different people, and my understanding of it has changed with personal growth. When I was in middle school（时间状语从句）, I thought success was getting high scores in exams. However, after participating in a volunteer activity（介词短语 + 动名词作状语）, I realized that helping others can also bring a strong sense of achievement. It was this experience that made me understand（强调句） that success is not just about personal gains but also about making a positive impact on those around us. To pursue true success（不定式作目的状语）, we should set meaningful goals and stick to them, even when we encounter difficulties. 四、变式仿写 写作提纲：谈谈你对成功的定义，结合一次个人成长经历说明如何追求成功 关键词提示：perseverance（坚持）、overcome failures（克服失败）、personal fulfillment（个人成就感）、set goals（设定目标） 仿写要求： 用 “It was...that...” 强调成长中的关键因素 用 “If we...，we will...” 给出追求成功的建议 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第三节：幽默类写作（选择性必修二高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单 定语从句：which（指代幽默事件 / 笑话）、who（指代幽默的人） 状语从句：when（幽默发生的场景）、because（幽默的原因）、while（对比不同文化的幽默） 名词性从句：What makes something humorous is that...（定义幽默）、I think that...（表达对幽默的看法） 非谓语动词：doing（表幽默带来的结果，如 “making people laugh”）、to do（表幽默的目的） 被动语态：be regarded as（表幽默被视为...）、be appreciated by（表幽默被... 欣赏） 二、语法句式模板 语法类型 句式模板（结合幽默话题） 名词性从句（定义） What makes a joke humorous is that it often plays with words or unexpected situations. 定语从句（事件） A humorous story which reflects daily life can easily resonate with people from different backgrounds. 状语从句（对比） While humor in Western cultures often involves direct jokes, humor in Eastern cultures tends to be more subtle. 非谓语动词（结果） He told a funny story about his travel experience, making everyone in the room laugh out loud. 被动语态 Humor is widely regarded as a bridge to strengthen interpersonal relationships, as it can ease tension and bring people closer. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2024 年新课标 II 卷写作范文） Humor is an important part of human life, bringing joy and warmth to our daily interactions. What makes humor special（主语从句） is that it can 化解 conflicts without hurting others’ feelings. In different cultures（介词短语作状语）, humor takes various forms. For example, jokes that rely on wordplay（定语从句） are popular in English-speaking countries, while stories that reflect cultural customs（定语从句） are more common in Chinese humor. Appreciated by people of all ages（过去分词作状语）, humor helps us relieve stress and maintain a positive attitude towards life. When we face difficulties（时间状语从句）, a sense of humor can give us the courage to keep going. 四、变式仿写 写作提纲：介绍幽默在生活中的作用，对比中西方幽默的一个差异 关键词提示：ease tension（缓解紧张）、subtle（含蓄的）、direct（直接的）、strengthen bonds（增进感情） 仿写要求： 用 “What makes humor important is that...” 说明幽默的作用 用 “While...，...” 对比中西方幽默差异 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第四节：教育类写作（选择性必修二高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单 状语从句：if（教育方法的条件）、because（教育重要性的原因）、as（随着教育发展） 定语从句：that/which（指代教育方法 / 理念）、where（指代教育场景，如学校） 非谓语动词：to do（表教育目的）、doing（表教育带来的影响） 情态动词：should/must（表教育建议 / 必要性）、can（表教育的作用） 虚拟语气：If we adopted better educational methods, students would...（表教育方法的假设） 二、语法句式模板 语法类型 句式模板（结合教育话题） 状语从句（原因） Education is crucial for personal development because it equips us with knowledge and skills to face challenges. 定语从句（方法） Project-based learning is an effective educational method that encourages students to learn through practice and cooperation. 非谓语动词（目的） Schools should organize various activities to foster students’ creativity and critical thinking skills. 情态动词（建议） Teachers should not only impart knowledge but also guide students to develop good moral values. 虚拟语气 If we paid more attention to students’ individual needs in education, they would develop more comprehensively. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2023 年全国甲卷写作范文） Education plays a vital role in shaping individuals and promoting social progress. As society develops rapidly（时间状语从句）, the demand for quality education is increasing. An ideal educational system should focus not only on academic performance but also on students’ all-round development（情态动词 + 并列结构）. Teachers who are patient and knowledgeable（定语从句） can inspire students’ enthusiasm for learning. To achieve this goal（不定式作目的状语）, schools should adopt diverse teaching methods, such as group discussions and hands-on experiments. If parents and schools work together（条件状语从句）, they can create a positive learning environment for children, helping them grow into responsible and capable adults. 四、变式仿写 写作提纲：谈谈教育的意义，给学校提出一条改进教育方法的建议 关键词提示：all-round development（全面发展）、critical thinking（批判性思维）、diverse teaching methods（多样化教学方法）、inspire enthusiasm（激发热情） 仿写要求： 用 “Education is important because...” 说明教育意义 用 “Schools should...，which can...” 提出建议并说明作用 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 模块 2：语法纠错与升格（聚焦写作高频语法错误） 核心目标 识别写作中高频语法错误（时态、从句、非谓语、句式结构等），通过 “错误分析→升格示范→针对性训练”，强化语法准确性，同时实现句式优化。 第一节：高频语法错误分类与升格 一、时态不一致（写作最易失分点） 错误示例 I meet my best friend in primary school and we are good friends ever since. 错误原因分析 时态混淆：“in primary school” 用过去时，“ever since” 用现在完成时 I met my best friend in primary school and we have been good friends ever since. As long as we study hard, we will achieve success in the future. 时态正确，但可优化：用现在进行时表持续努力，更生动 As long as we are studying hard and persisting in our goals, we will achieve success in the future. He learns English for 6 years and now he can communicate with foreigners fluently. 时态搭配错误：“for 6 years” 用现在完成时，learn→has learned He has learned English for 6 years and now he can communicate with foreigners fluently. 二、从句连词误用 / 句式混乱 错误示例 A good teacher is someone who not only teaches knowledge, but also he cares about students. 错误原因分析 从句冗余：定语从句中主语重复，去掉 he A good teacher is someone who not only teaches knowledge but also cares about students. I don’t agree with the idea that education only means getting high scores. 语法正确，可升格：用同位语从句 + 非谓语优化 I don’t agree with the idea that education only means getting high scores, which ignores students’ all-round development. The reason why I love humorous people is because they can bring joy to others. 冗余错误：“the reason why...is that...” 为固定结构，because→that The reason why I love humorous people is that they can bring joy to others and ease tense situations. 三、非谓语动词形式错误 错误示例 We should try our best to help others, make the world a better place. 错误原因分析 逗号连接两个谓语，make→making（现在分词作结果状语） We should try our best to help others, making the world a better place. Inspired by his humorous story, tears came to my eyes. 逻辑主语错误：inspired 的逻辑主语应为 I，而非 tears Inspired by his humorous story, I couldn’t help crying with joy. The purpose of education is cultivate students’ comprehensive abilities. 不定式作表语：be 动词后需用 to do，cultivate→to cultivate The purpose of education is to cultivate students’ comprehensive abilities rather than just impart knowledge. 四、主谓不一致 / 词形错误 错误示例 Good interpersonal relationship are the foundation of a happy life. 错误原因分析 主谓不一致：relationship→relationships（复数） Good interpersonal relationships are the foundation of a happy life and career success. The number of students who enjoy humorous stories are increasing. 主谓不一致：the number 作主语，谓语用单数，are→is The number of students who enjoy humorous stories is increasing, as humor helps relieve study pressure. Teachers should use diversify teaching methods to attract students’ attention. 词形错误：diversify→diverse（形容词修饰名词） Teachers should use diverse teaching methods such as games and discussions to attract students’ attention. 第二节：变式训练（纠错 + 升格实战） 训练 1：单句纠错与升格 题目：找出下列句子中的语法错误，修改并升格（可添加从句 / 非谓语优化句式） 错误句 1：I think humor is important, it can help us make more friends. ____________________________________________________________________________________ 错误句 2：He success because he is hard-working and has good interpersonal skills. ____________________________________________________________________________________ 错误句 3：The education system in our country need to be improved. ____________________________________________________________________________________ 模块 3：实战写作达标训练（期末模拟演练） 一、书面表达 1．假如你是某国际学校学生李华，你校校报正在为12月即将举办的科技节征集英文口号，要求主题积极向上，不超过10个英文单词。请你根据该要求投稿，内容包括： 1.介绍你的口号； 2.预祝活动成功。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 二、书信写作 2．你校将组织一次主题为“红色教育资源”的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇演讲稿，内容 包括： 1. 红色教育资源对青少年成长的重要性; 2. 如何更好地利用这些资源。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, Today, I’d like to talk about the significance of the resources of education on the history of revolution. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 3．英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是学生会主席李华， 下周五你校将组织一场“中国文化节”活动，请你代表学生会邀请同学们积极参加，内容包括： 1.描述活动时间、地点和内容； 2.表达诚挚邀请。 注意：1.写作词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear classmates, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是李华，为了激发学生的英文阅读热情，你校英语俱乐部将举行“英文读书月(English Reading Month) ”活动，现面向全校学生征求活动建议。请你写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 描述活动内容和推荐理由； 3.表达期望。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 Dear English Club, I’m Li Hua, from or Class 1, Senior 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 6．假设你是李津，作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫 Chinese Workshop 的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。请描述这项活动的意义，并申请参加此次活动，阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。 注意：1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题04 写作 思维导图 模块 1：话题专项写作（按选择性必修一 / 二高频话题分节） 核心目标 以选择性必修一 / 二期末高频写作话题为载体，聚焦 “语法赋能写作提分”，通过 “话题语法清单→句式模板→真题借鉴→仿写落地” 的闭环训练，结合 “错误纠错→表达升格” 强化，帮助学生在写作中精准运用语法、优化句式，实现 “语法正确、表达生动、得分点突出”。 第一节：人际关系类写作（选择性必修一高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单（高频好用 + 提分关键） 定语从句：who（指代人）、which（指代事件 / 关系）、where（指代交往场景） 状语从句：when（描述交往时间）、because/since（说明关系原因）、though（转折关系） 非谓语动词：doing（表伴随交往动作）、done（表被动感受，如 “impressed by”） 情态动词：can/could（表建议 / 能力）、should（表交往建议） 名词性从句：What makes a good friend is that...（强调人际关系核心） 二、语法句式模板（可直接套用 + 话题适配） 语法类型 句式模板（结合人际关系话题） 定语从句（指代人） A good friend is someone who is willing to listen to you when you are in trouble and offer practical help. 状语从句（原因） Since we come from different cultural backgrounds, we need to respect each other’s customs to maintain a harmonious relationship. 非谓语动词（done） Impressed by his kindness and sincerity, I decided to build a deep friendship with him. 情态动词（建议） We should communicate openly with our parents, which can help avoid misunderstandings. 名词性从句 What makes teacher-student relationships precious is that teachers not only teach knowledge but also guide us to grow. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2023 年新课标 I 卷写作范文） In interpersonal communication, mutual respect and understanding are essential. A true friend is someone who stands by you through joys and sorrows（定语从句）, and this is a belief shared by people from all cultural backgrounds. When we interact with others（时间状语从句）, we should listen patiently and express our opinions politely. Though there may be cultural differences（让步状语从句）, as long as we are willing to learn from each other, we can build strong and lasting relationships. Influenced by my parents’ friendly attitude towards others（过去分词作状语）, I have always valued the importance of treating people with sincerity. 四、变式仿写（聚焦语法运用 + 落地训练） 写作提纲：描述你与一位朋友的珍贵友谊，说明你们维持友谊的关键 关键词提示：sincere communication（真诚沟通）、support each other（互相支持）、overcome difficulties（克服困难）、trust（信任） 仿写要求： 用 “A good friend is someone who...” 写 1 句定义 用 “Though...，we...” 写 1 句描述友谊中的挑战与坚持 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考示例： A good friend is someone who always supports you when you face setbacks and shares your happiness as well as sorrows. Though we once had a misunderstanding due to a lack of communication, we talked openly and trusted each other, which made our friendship stronger. 第二节：成功与成长类写作（选择性必修一高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单 时态：一般过去时（描述成长经历）、现在完成时（强调成长影响） 状语从句：if（成功条件）、because（成长原因）、so that（成长目的） 强调句：It was...that...（强调成功 / 成长的关键因素） 非谓语动词：doing（表成长过程中的动作）、to do（表成功目标） 定语从句：that/which（指代成长事件 / 成功经历） 二、语法句式模板 语法类型 句式模板（结合成功与成长话题） 时态结合 I struggled with English learning for two years, and this experience has taught me that perseverance is the key to success. 强调句 It was the encouragement from my teacher that gave me the courage to keep trying and finally achieve my goal. 条件状语从句 If we set clear goals and work hard step by step, we will surely make progress in our personal growth. 现在分词作伴随 Facing numerous challenges in the competition, I learned to stay calm and find solutions actively, which accelerated my growth. 不定式作目标 Many people strive to achieve success not only for personal fulfillment but also to make contributions to society. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2022 年全国乙卷写作范文） Success means different things to different people, and my understanding of it has changed with personal growth. When I was in middle school（时间状语从句）, I thought success was getting high scores in exams. However, after participating in a volunteer activity（介词短语 + 动名词作状语）, I realized that helping others can also bring a strong sense of achievement. It was this experience that made me understand（强调句） that success is not just about personal gains but also about making a positive impact on those around us. To pursue true success（不定式作目的状语）, we should set meaningful goals and stick to them, even when we encounter difficulties. 四、变式仿写 写作提纲：谈谈你对成功的定义，结合一次个人成长经历说明如何追求成功 关键词提示：perseverance（坚持）、overcome failures（克服失败）、personal fulfillment（个人成就感）、set goals（设定目标） 仿写要求： 用 “It was...that...” 强调成长中的关键因素 用 “If we...，we will...” 给出追求成功的建议 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考示例： It was the experience of overcoming failures in the science experiment that made me realize perseverance is more important than temporary success. If we set practical goals and learn from our mistakes, we will not only achieve personal growth but also move closer to true success. 第三节：幽默类写作（选择性必修二高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单 定语从句：which（指代幽默事件 / 笑话）、who（指代幽默的人） 状语从句：when（幽默发生的场景）、because（幽默的原因）、while（对比不同文化的幽默） 名词性从句：What makes something humorous is that...（定义幽默）、I think that...（表达对幽默的看法） 非谓语动词：doing（表幽默带来的结果，如 “making people laugh”）、to do（表幽默的目的） 被动语态：be regarded as（表幽默被视为...）、be appreciated by（表幽默被... 欣赏） 二、语法句式模板 语法类型 句式模板（结合幽默话题） 名词性从句（定义） What makes a joke humorous is that it often plays with words or unexpected situations. 定语从句（事件） A humorous story which reflects daily life can easily resonate with people from different backgrounds. 状语从句（对比） While humor in Western cultures often involves direct jokes, humor in Eastern cultures tends to be more subtle. 非谓语动词（结果） He told a funny story about his travel experience, making everyone in the room laugh out loud. 被动语态 Humor is widely regarded as a bridge to strengthen interpersonal relationships, as it can ease tension and bring people closer. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2024 年新课标 II 卷写作范文） Humor is an important part of human life, bringing joy and warmth to our daily interactions. What makes humor special（主语从句） is that it can 化解 conflicts without hurting others’ feelings. In different cultures（介词短语作状语）, humor takes various forms. For example, jokes that rely on wordplay（定语从句） are popular in English-speaking countries, while stories that reflect cultural customs（定语从句） are more common in Chinese humor. Appreciated by people of all ages（过去分词作状语）, humor helps us relieve stress and maintain a positive attitude towards life. When we face difficulties（时间状语从句）, a sense of humor can give us the courage to keep going. 四、变式仿写 写作提纲：介绍幽默在生活中的作用，对比中西方幽默的一个差异 关键词提示：ease tension（缓解紧张）、subtle（含蓄的）、direct（直接的）、strengthen bonds（增进感情） 仿写要求： 用 “What makes humor important is that...” 说明幽默的作用 用 “While...，...” 对比中西方幽默差异 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考示例： What makes humor important is that it can ease tension in communication and strengthen emotional bonds between people. While Western humor is often direct and focuses on personal anecdotes, Chinese humor tends to be more subtle and closely related to cultural traditions. 第四节：教育类写作（选择性必修二高频话题） 一、话题核心语法清单 状语从句：if（教育方法的条件）、because（教育重要性的原因）、as（随着教育发展） 定语从句：that/which（指代教育方法 / 理念）、where（指代教育场景，如学校） 非谓语动词：to do（表教育目的）、doing（表教育带来的影响） 情态动词：should/must（表教育建议 / 必要性）、can（表教育的作用） 虚拟语气：If we adopted better educational methods, students would...（表教育方法的假设） 二、语法句式模板 语法类型 句式模板（结合教育话题） 状语从句（原因） Education is crucial for personal development because it equips us with knowledge and skills to face challenges. 定语从句（方法） Project-based learning is an effective educational method that encourages students to learn through practice and cooperation. 非谓语动词（目的） Schools should organize various activities to foster students’ creativity and critical thinking skills. 情态动词（建议） Teachers should not only impart knowledge but also guide students to develop good moral values. 虚拟语气 If we paid more attention to students’ individual needs in education, they would develop more comprehensively. 三、高考真题范文片段（改编自 2023 年全国甲卷写作范文） Education plays a vital role in shaping individuals and promoting social progress. As society develops rapidly（时间状语从句）, the demand for quality education is increasing. An ideal educational system should focus not only on academic performance but also on students’ all-round development（情态动词 + 并列结构）. Teachers who are patient and knowledgeable（定语从句） can inspire students’ enthusiasm for learning. To achieve this goal（不定式作目的状语）, schools should adopt diverse teaching methods, such as group discussions and hands-on experiments. If parents and schools work together（条件状语从句）, they can create a positive learning environment for children, helping them grow into responsible and capable adults. 四、变式仿写 写作提纲：谈谈教育的意义，给学校提出一条改进教育方法的建议 关键词提示：all-round development（全面发展）、critical thinking（批判性思维）、diverse teaching methods（多样化教学方法）、inspire enthusiasm（激发热情） 仿写要求： 用 “Education is important because...” 说明教育意义 用 “Schools should...，which can...” 提出建议并说明作用 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考示例： Education is important because it not only provides us with professional knowledge but also helps us develop critical thinking and social skills for future life. Schools should increase practical courses such as science experiments and community service, which can inspire students’ learning enthusiasm and promote their all-round development. 模块 2：语法纠错与升格（聚焦写作高频语法错误） 核心目标 识别写作中高频语法错误（时态、从句、非谓语、句式结构等），通过 “错误分析→升格示范→针对性训练”，强化语法准确性，同时实现句式优化。 第一节：高频语法错误分类与升格 一、时态不一致（写作最易失分点） 错误示例 I meet my best friend in primary school and we are good friends ever since. 错误原因分析 时态混淆：“in primary school” 用过去时，“ever since” 用现在完成时 I met my best friend in primary school and we have been good friends ever since. As long as we study hard, we will achieve success in the future. 时态正确，但可优化：用现在进行时表持续努力，更生动 As long as we are studying hard and persisting in our goals, we will achieve success in the future. He learns English for 6 years and now he can communicate with foreigners fluently. 时态搭配错误：“for 6 years” 用现在完成时，learn→has learned He has learned English for 6 years and now he can communicate with foreigners fluently. 二、从句连词误用 / 句式混乱 错误示例 A good teacher is someone who not only teaches knowledge, but also he cares about students. 错误原因分析 从句冗余：定语从句中主语重复，去掉 he A good teacher is someone who not only teaches knowledge but also cares about students. I don’t agree with the idea that education only means getting high scores. 语法正确，可升格：用同位语从句 + 非谓语优化 I don’t agree with the idea that education only means getting high scores, which ignores students’ all-round development. The reason why I love humorous people is because they can bring joy to others. 冗余错误：“the reason why...is that...” 为固定结构，because→that The reason why I love humorous people is that they can bring joy to others and ease tense situations. 三、非谓语动词形式错误 错误示例 We should try our best to help others, make the world a better place. 错误原因分析 逗号连接两个谓语，make→making（现在分词作结果状语） We should try our best to help others, making the world a better place. Inspired by his humorous story, tears came to my eyes. 逻辑主语错误：inspired 的逻辑主语应为 I，而非 tears Inspired by his humorous story, I couldn’t help crying with joy. The purpose of education is cultivate students’ comprehensive abilities. 不定式作表语：be 动词后需用 to do，cultivate→to cultivate The purpose of education is to cultivate students’ comprehensive abilities rather than just impart knowledge. 四、主谓不一致 / 词形错误 错误示例 Good interpersonal relationship are the foundation of a happy life. 错误原因分析 主谓不一致：relationship→relationships（复数） Good interpersonal relationships are the foundation of a happy life and career success. The number of students who enjoy humorous stories are increasing. 主谓不一致：the number 作主语，谓语用单数，are→is The number of students who enjoy humorous stories is increasing, as humor helps relieve study pressure. Teachers should use diversify teaching methods to attract students’ attention. 词形错误：diversify→diverse（形容词修饰名词） Teachers should use diverse teaching methods such as games and discussions to attract students’ attention. 第二节：变式训练（纠错 + 升格实战） 训练 1：单句纠错与升格 题目：找出下列句子中的语法错误，修改并升格（可添加从句 / 非谓语优化句式） 错误句 1：I think humor is important, it can help us make more friends. ____________________________________________________________________________________ 错误句 2：He success because he is hard-working and has good interpersonal skills. ____________________________________________________________________________________ 错误句 3：The education system in our country need to be improved. ____________________________________________________________________________________ 参考修改： 原句 1：逗号粘连 → 升格：I think humor is important because it can help us break the ice in communication and make more friends.（原因状语从句 + 并列结构） 原句 2：词性错误（success→succeeds） → 升格：He succeeds not only because he is hard-working but also because he has good interpersonal skills that help him get support from others.（主谓一致 + 定语从句） 原句3：主谓不一致(need→needs) → 升格: It is the education system in our country that needs to be improved. (主谓一致+强调句型） 模块 3：实战写作达标训练（期末模拟演练） 一、书面表达 1．假如你是某国际学校学生李华，你校校报正在为12月即将举办的科技节征集英文口号，要求主题积极向上，不超过10个英文单词。请你根据该要求投稿，内容包括： 1.介绍你的口号； 2.预祝活动成功。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear editor, Knowing that our school newspaper is collecting English slogans for the Science&Technology Festival to be held in December, I’m writing to recommend mine, which I believe can fully reveal the theme. “Science and technology brightens our life” is the one I choose since technological advances have brought us tremendous benefits. For instance, we’re now living comfortably and conveniently in houses equipped with various intelligent home appliances. Besides, our working efficiency has been dramatically increased with the help of the Internet. I would appreciate it if you can take my slogan into account. Wish this festival a huge success! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生想出一个12月即将举办的科技节的英文口号，内容包括：1.介绍口号；2.预祝活动成功。 【详解】1.词汇积累 举办：hold→host 完全：fully→completely 选择：choose→select 另外：besides→moreover 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For instance, we’re now living comfortably and conveniently in houses equipped with various intelligent home appliances. 拓展句：For instance, we’re now living comfortably and conveniently in houses which are equipped with various intelligent home appliances. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that our school newspaper is collecting English slogans for the Science&Technology Festival to be held in December, I’m writing to recommend mine, which I believe can fully reveal the theme. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] “Science and technology brightens our life” is the one I choose since technological advances have brought us tremendous benefits. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that和since引导的原因状语从句) 二、书信写作 2．你校将组织一次主题为“红色教育资源”的英语演讲比赛。请你准备一篇演讲稿，内容 包括： 1. 红色教育资源对青少年成长的重要性; 2. 如何更好地利用这些资源。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, Today, I’d like to talk about the significance of the resources of education on the history of revolution. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】Dear fellow students, Today, I’d like to talk about the significance of the resources of education on the history of revolution. The resources of education on the history of revolution are like precious treasures. They help us understand the hardships and struggles of our ancestors. They inspire us to be brave and persistent when we face difficulties. To make better use of these resources, we should actively participate in related activities, read more books and share what we’ve learned with others. Let’s dig deep into these resources and grow into responsible and patriotic young adults. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在学校将组织一次主题为“红色教育资源”的英语演讲比赛。请考生准备一篇演讲稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：help→assist 鼓励：inspire→motivate 参加：participate in→take part in 利用：make use of→take advantage of 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The resources of education on the history of revolution are like precious treasures. They help us understand the hardships and struggles of our ancestors. 拓展句：The resources of education on the history of revolution are like precious treasures, which help us understand the hardships and struggles of our ancestors. 【点睛】[高分句型1] They inspire us to be brave and persistent when we face difficulties. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2] To make better use of these resources, we should actively participate in related activities, read more books and share what we’ve learned with others. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语，what引导宾语从句) 3．英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling. Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility. In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 【详解】1.词汇激活 提供：offer→provide 极大地：dramatically→tremendously 减少：reduce→decrease 总之：in short→in a nutshell 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. 拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 4．假设你是学生会主席李华， 下周五你校将组织一场“中国文化节”活动，请你代表学生会邀请同学们积极参加，内容包括： 1.描述活动时间、地点和内容； 2.表达诚挚邀请。 注意：1.写作词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear classmates, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear classmates, I am thrilled to invite you all to our Chinese Culture Festival, which will take place at the school auditorium next Friday. The festival will commence at 2 p.m., featuring exciting activities like traditional Chinese dance performances, calligraphy workshops, and food tasting stalls. It will be a fantastic opportunity to immerse ourselves in the vibrant culture of China and learn something new. Your participation will undoubtedly make the event more memorable. We look forward to seeing you there! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。下周五学校将组织一场“中国文化节”活动，要求考生代表学生会邀请同学们积极参加。 【详解】1.词汇积累 兴奋的：thrilled → excited 极好的：fantastic → wonderful 机会：opportunity → chance 埋头于，沉浸于：immerse oneself in → bury oneself in 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Your participation will undoubtedly make the event more memorable. 拓展句：It is your participation that will undoubtedly make the event more memorable. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to invite you all to our Chinese Culture Festival, which will take place at the school auditorium next Friday.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】The festival will commence at 2 p.m., featuring exciting activities like traditional Chinese dance performances, calligraphy workshops, and food tasting stalls.（运用了现在分词featuring作状语） 5．假如你是李华，为了激发学生的英文阅读热情，你校英语俱乐部将举行“英文读书月(English Reading Month) ”活动，现面向全校学生征求活动建议。请你写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 描述活动内容和推荐理由； 3.表达期望。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 Dear English Club, I’m Li Hua, from or Class 1, Senior 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear English Club, I’m Li Hua, from or Class 1, Senior 3. Knowing that the English Club of our school will hold an activity of “English Reading Month”, I am writing to express my ideas. During the activity, we should agree on a time, then recommend books to each other and exchange opinions and thoughts. I recommend reading Helen Keller’s books, which can help us improve our English and inspire us to work hard. I hope all members can actively take part in the activity and get both knowledge and fun from reading. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，为学校英语俱乐部将举行的“英文读书月”活动提供建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express→convey 相互：each other→one another 希望：hope→wish 参加：take part in→participate in 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Knowing that the English Club of our school will hold an activity of “English Reading Month”, I am writing to express my ideas. 拓展句：Because I know that the English Club of our school will hold an activity of “English Reading Month”, I am writing to express my ideas. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that the English Club of our school will hold an activity of “English Reading Month”, I am writing to express my ideas. (运用了非谓语现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】I recommend reading Helen Keller’s books, which can help us improve our English and inspire us to work hard. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 6．假设你是李津，作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫 Chinese Workshop 的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。请描述这项活动的意义，并申请参加此次活动，阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。 注意：1. 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity. The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, and Chinese calligraphy. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example, dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine. I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“促进中英文化交流的活动”为主题，写一封申请信。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参加：take part in → participate in 重要的：significant → meaningful 对……有热情：have a passion for → be enthusiastic about 促进：promote → enhance 2. 句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity. 拓展句：Since I know that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity. 【点睛】【高分句型1】So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine. (not only开头的倒装句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $