内容正文:
第二部分
高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
中考主题角度
1.广西近6年中考:暂未考查
2.全国视野&近三年全国考查角度:①假期旅行计划与感受:②让周末生活或者暑期生活过得更充实且有
意义的建议
主题教材链接
版本
单元主题
版本
单元主题
七(上)U2 The family
七(下)U1 Dream homes
七(下)U3 Transportation
七(下)U3 Welcome to Sunshine Town!
七(下)U6 Everyday activities
译林
七(下)U4 Finding your way
人教版
七(下)UI2 Weekend activities
牛津
七(下)U5 Amazing things
八(上)UI Holidays and vacations
版
八(上)U3 A day out
八(上)U2 Free time activities
八(下)U1 Past and present
八(下)U2 Travelling
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
开头句
1.'m having a great time visiting my aunt in Guangxi..[人教七(下)U7改编]
2.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.[人教七(下)Ull]
3.It's necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and visit all the
places you want to see.
中间句
角度1日常活动
1.We had a wonderful party last night and everybody had a good time.[外研七(下)M10]
2.Every year,my family and I take a photo together under the big tree in our village.I like taking photos because
they help me remember fun times with my family..[新人教七(上)U7]
3.I go swimming two or three times a week.Swimming is good for me because it keeps me healthy.
(下)U3]
角度2假期活动
l.I think it's better to have our picnic at the top of the hill in Beihai Park.[外研八(下)U8]
2.We went camping last month.It was very interesting.[译林牛津七(下)U6]
3.At the end of the day,we watched the fireworks in front of Sleeping Beauty Castle..[译林牛津八(下)U2]
4.There are lots of ways to relax and have fun.However,the most important part of a holiday is to rest your
mind and body.[新人教八(上)U1]
结尾句
1.My holiday is very colourful.The most important thing is to learn something and have fun.[人教八(上)U3]
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2.You'll make mistakes along the way,but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up.
(全)U14]
3.No matter how many difficulties we have,I believe all problems can be solved in the end.[人教九(全)U7]
4.Although all of us felt very tired,we got the happiest memory.
俗语谚语
l.Life is what you make it.你的生活由你创造。
2.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
3.Time flies when you're having fun.快乐的时光,总是飞逝。
回课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
1.上周末,我们在滨海公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip:have a great time)
2.我喜欢在假期爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip:because;it makes sb.feel.)
3.周末最好和父母到乡下去接近自然。(Tip:If's better to do sth..;get close to)
4.我们可以参加很多有意义的活动,比如读书和做志愿工作。(Tip:such as)
5.参加社团活动时,最重要的事情是与他人友好相处。(Tip:the most important thing is to.)
6.当我们和父母一起旅行时,保持安全和开心是关键。(Tip:the key is to..)
7.在我去桂林旅行期间,我参观了很多名胜古迹。(Tip:places of interest)
8.寒假的最后,我们全家一起看了一部令人放松的电影。(Tip:at the end of)
◆句式升格
9.Students go on a trip.The trip can help students open their minds.(Tip:It's necessary for...;so that)
10.We meet many troubles on vacation.The beautiful scenery always makes us forget troubles.(Tip:No matter how
many troubles...)
二阶典例探究明思路
快节奏的数字生活易让人迷失方向,而沉淀心灵,拓宽视野的真实
体验正成为当代青少年成长的关键密码。学校英语社推出“探索世
审题四要素:
界,成长自我”主题征文活动,请你以“An Unforgettable Travel
审体裁:记叙文
Experience”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍令你难忘的一次旅行经
审人称:第一人称为主
历。内容包括:
审时态:一般过去时为主
1.介绍旅行目的地的基本情况(地点、风景名胜、美食等):
审要点:旅行目的地的基本情况,
2.你认为旅行中最有意义的活动(保护环境等):
ec.........
旅行中最有意义的活动,感悟或
3.你的感悟或收获。
收获
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
My most unforgettable travel experience was
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②写作剖析
一、构思框架
Beginning-一点明
主题,介绍旅行
参考句型:①It's
例:The water was so clear.We could see fish swimming.(用so.
目的地的基本情
a beautiful city
that.连接)
况:地点、风景
with.;②so..
名胜、美食等
that...
参考句型:①the
例:我们总是把垃圾扔进垃圾桶,这已经成为我们的一个好
Body一旅行中最
most meaningful
习惯。(翻译)
有意义的活动:
thing is to.…;②lt
保护环境、随手
has become a good
捡起垃圾等
habit of..;③feel
proud to...
参考句型:①not
Travelling is for having fun.Travelling is for protecting the
Ending-一你的感
悟或收获
only...but alo...;
environment..(用not only.but also.连接)
②hope+that从句
二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
My most unforgettable travel experience
My most unforgettable travel experience was last summer,when I
was last summer.I went to Guilin with my
visited Guilin with my family.It's a beautiful city with green mountains
family.It's a beautiful city with green
and clear rivers.We took a bamboo boat along the Li River and
mountains and clear rivers.We took a
enjoyed the amazing views.
bamboo boat along the Li River and saw nice
(用so.that..).We also tried local food like
views.The water was clear,and we could
Guilin rice noodles.They tasted really delicious!
see fish swimming.
We also ate Guilin rice
During the trip,I thought the most meaningful thing was to protect
noodles-they were delicious!
the environment.
During the trip,we always put rubbish
It has become a good habit of...).I felt proud to help
in bins.It's a good habit.
keep the environment clean.
This trip was fun,and I learned to
This trip made me know that
protect the environment.I hope more people
not only...but also...).I hope that
will love Guilin too.
more people will love this place when travelling.
写作剖析答案:The water was so clear that we could see fish swimming;It has become a good habit of ours to
always put our rubbish in bins;travelling is not only for having fun but also for protecting the environment
三阶写作实战提能力
一、秀甲天下,壮美广西。随着中国过境免签政策的推行,越来越多的外国人来到中国,感受东方之旅的独特
魅力。学校英文报正在以“Most Beautiful Under Heaven,.Grand Guangxi'”为主题进行征文活动,请你用英语写
一篇短文投稿,介绍广西的秀美风光和人文特色,为家乡的旅游做宣传。内容包括:
1.概况:地理位置(位于祖国南部,历史悠久等);
2.著名旅游景点以及特色美食(桂林山水,北海涠洲岛,螺蛳粉,桂林米粉等):
3.表示欢迎。
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注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
4.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Most Beautiful Under Heaven,Grand Guangxi
二、目前,很多学生不知道如何明智地安排空余时间。学校英语角将举办主题为“How to Spend Free Time
Wisely”的征稿活动,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,给同学们提出合理的建议。内容包括:
1.放松的方式(听音乐等);
2.家庭陪伴(多交流、分担家务等);
3.志愿活动(清理公园垃圾等);
4.自我提升(学习一项技能等)。
注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Spend Free Time Wisely
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know how to spend their free time wisely.Today I'd like to
share some ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
Reflecting
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●I can write all the points..(5分)
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Self-assessment
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Total score:
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15第二部分高频
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in Binhai
Park
2.I love climbing mountains during the holidays because it
makes me feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends
to get close to nature.
4.We can take part in many meaningful activities,such as
reading books and doing volunteer work.
5.When taking part in club activities,the most important thing
is to get along well with others.
6.When we travel with our parents,the key is to stay safe and
happy.
7.During my trip to Guilin,I visited many places of interest.
8.At the end of the winter holiday,my whole family watched a
relaxing movie together.
9.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help
them open their minds.
10.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the
beautiful scenery always makes us forget them.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
Most Beautiful Under Heaven,Grand Guangxi
Guangxi lies in southern China and has a long history with
rich cultural traditions.It's well-known for its fantastic natural
views.Guilin's scenery is famous all over the world-clear Li
River winds around special mountains,just like a living paint-
ing.Weizhou Island in Beihai is another great place,where you
can walk on soft white beaches and enjoy the blue sea.
When it comes to local food,don't miss Liuzhou luosifen,
which tastes delicious,and Guilin rice noodles with fresh food
materials.Many local people and visitors all like them.
Welcome to Guangxi!You're sure to have an unforgettable
trip here.
二、
How to Spend Free Time Wisely
Hello,everyone!Nowadays,many students don't know
how to spend their free time wisely.Today I'd like to share some
ideas about how to make good use of our free time.
First,relaxation is necessary for us.We can listen to
music and hang out with friends on weekends.Sometimes,we
can read interesting books.Second,improving the parent-child
relationship is important.We should communicate with our par-
ents often,and it's our duty to do housework.We can also take
a walk after dinner together.What's more,volunteer work is
meaningful.We can clean up parks with friends and help the
people in need.Besides,we can give away old books to others.
Finally,self-improvement is always with us.Learning a skill
like cooking is useful to us,and we must develop our independ
ence.We can also take up a new hobby during the holiday.
Let's act now and live wisely!
主题2多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.We will have a school trip to visit the science museum next
主题三阶写作指导
month
2.I'm sure that I can get good grades in the final exam.
3.Reading aloud is one of the good ways of learning English
well.
4.We were all full of excitement and thirsty for interesting sto-
ries in the books.
5.My teacher always encourages me and helps me to become a
better person.
6.I take an active part in the school's English corner to practice
speaking.
7.If we make full use of the school library,we can read more
good books after class.
8.In order to win the basketball match,our team practices hard
every afternoon.
9.Even though the math exam was difficult,I tried my best to
finish all the questions
10.As long as we listen carefully in class,we can understand
the knowledge easily.
三阶写作实战提能力
一、
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library.Our school
library is on the second floor of the teaching building.It is
bright and quiet,with shelves full of different kinds of books,
such as storybooks,science books,and magazines.
The library has helped me a lot.I often read there after
class,which improves my reading skills and broadens my
knowledge.It is also a perfect place to study and do homework.
To give it back,I want to volunteer in the library,helping to
organize books and keep it clean.I also plan to give away some
interesting books to share with others.
I love our school library and hope it becomes even better!
二、
A Sweet Moment with My Classmates
One of my sweetest memories with my classmates was dur-
ing our school's Sports Day last year.We took part in a relay
race together.Though we weren't the fastest team,we encour-
aged each other,laughing and cheering until the very end.
What made the moment special was the teamwork and the
support we showed.When one of us met trouble,others imme-
diately helped him or her out.Even though we didn't win,we
felt proud of our effort and team spirit.
This experience taught me the value of friendship and
cooperation.It reminded me that success isn't just about win-
ning but also about enjoying the journey with others.I'll always
value this warm memory with my classmates.
主题3身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的意识
&日常体育活动,重大体育赛事,体育精神
一阶课本句型促写作
课本句型变式练
1.Students should pay much more attention to daily exercise
2.It is necessary for teenagers to learn to face difficulties bravely.
3.Teamwork in sports activities is of great importance to
students.
4.It is a good choice for us students to go to bed and get up
early.
5.There is no doubt that doing sports makes our bodies strong.
27主题一,丰富充实、积极向上的生活。一。I'm lee. This summer, I would like to visit shanghai lake with my father. Shanghai lake is in the northeast of shang high province. IT is the largest lake in china. It's about four thousand five hundred square kilometers in size. It's also one of the fight most beautiful lakes in china. The best time to visit shanghai lake is in july and August. During this time, there are thousands of birds flying around shanghai lake. Tourists can also see many colorful flowers. Shing high lake is really a perfect place to visit in summer. I can't wait to go there. I'm lee. This summer, I would like to visit shanghai lake with my father. Shanghai lake is in the northeast of shanghai province. IT is the largest lake in china. It's about four thousand, five hundred square kilometers in size. It's also one of the fight most beautiful lakes in china. The best time to visit shanghai lake is in july and August. During this time, there are thousands of birds flying around shanghai lake. Tourists can also see many colorful flowers shine. High lake is really a perfect place to visit in summer. I can't wait to go there. I'm lei. This summer, I would like to visit shanghai lake with my father. Shanghai lake is in the northeast of shanghai province. IT is the largest lake in china. It's about four thousand, five hundred square kilometers in size. It's also one of the five most beautiful lakes in china. The best time to visit shanghai lake is in july and August. During this time, there are thousands of birds flying around shanghai lake. Tourists can also see many colorful flowers. Shing high lake is really a perfect place to visit in summer. I can't wait to go there.