内容正文:
类别二
经历感受类
常见题目表述)
①人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升生活并非一成不变,总是充满了跌宕起伏。然而,他人一次
不经意的帮助,可能会带给我们别样的温暖。请你以“A()
Moment'”为题,用英语讲述一件你接
受他人帮助的往事以及你的感受。内容包括:
1.他人对你提供帮助的经历(时间,地点,人物等);
2.你接受帮助后的感受。
②●人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活无论是长途旅行还是郊游,每一次旅行都是珍贵的回忆。你校
英文报正在以“My Meaningful Trip”为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你暑假去了什么地方;
2.你在假期做了什么:
3.你的假期感受。
③●人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活你们学校正在开展“健康用网周”活动,你参与了其中的一项
挑战:在刚过去的24小时内不使用任何电子设备(手机、电脑、平板等)。请你用英文记录你的经历、感受和
收获。内容包括:
1.介绍你此次活动的经历:
2.你的感觉如何;
3.在这次经历中你的收获。
④●人与自我:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活4学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Delicious Memory”的
英文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你选择一种食物,写一篇英语短文,讲述你与它之间的故事,并分享它对你
的特殊意义。内容包括:
1.特殊的食物(粽子,饺子,月饼等):
2.你关于这个食物的记忆;
3.这份美味的记忆对你的意义。
作文框架)
开头:以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历。
中间:讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果,即五个“W”(when,where,who,why,what)和一个
“H”(how)。
结尾:对上述经历进行总结,表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么或以后会怎么做。
高分模板)
One
Experience
I'm glad to share
(我的经历).
When I first went into junior high school,I
(遇到的经历)because
(原因).Iwas/felt
(感受)and didn't know what to do.
()encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice.
First of all,
(我的行为①),which helped to
(这样做的结果①).Second,
(我的行为
2).In this way,I not only
but also
(这样做的结果②).Day by day,I could
(可以做的事情)andI(现在的行为)now.
Through the experience,I have deeply realized that
(感悟)
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优秀范文记背
Passage 1
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Warm Moment
Beginning:引
A Warm Moment
Life is full of ups and downs.Once,an act of
出话题
Life is full of ups and downs,and
kindness from a classmate gave me a truly warm
sometimes a small help can light up moment.
our day.
Last Friday,it rained cats and dogs.When
Body:讲述一
Last Wednesday was a rainy day.school was over,I rushed to the school gate,only to
件你接受他
After school,I found I had forgotten to take realize I'd left my umbrella at home.Standing there,
人帮助的
my umbrella.I was worried and didn't feeling anxious and helpless,I didn't know how to get
经历
know what to do.Just then,my classmate back.Just then,my classmate Li Hua noticed me.
Li Hua came over.He had an umbrella and Without a second thought,he walked up and said
said,“Let's share it..”We walked home gently,“Let's share my umbrella..”On the way,he
together.On the way,he always tried to kept moving the umbrella to cover me well.Even
keep me dry.His kindness gave me a warm though part of his clothes got wet,he didn't care at all.
feeling.
His kind words and warm smile made the rainy day
Ending:表达
This moment is unforgettable.It bright.
自己的感受
makes me want to help others in need too.
This moment taught me the power of kindness.
I'll surely help others like he did.
Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Meaningful Trip
My Meaningful Trip
Beginning:表
Life is full of wonderful memories,and school trips are
School trips are always exciting!
明学校旅行
always special.
是令自己难
They bring us lots of fun memories.
Last Friday,our school organized a trip to the Nature
Last Friday,our school took us
忘的一次
Park,which is a place full of natural wonders.In the
to the Nature Park for a trip.We went
旅行
moming,we took a bus,chatting and laughing all the way.
there by bus in the morning.First,
As we walked along the winding path,the sweet smell of
we walked along a small path.We
flowers filled the air.We stopped to watch butterflies dancing
saw colorful flowers and heard birds
around colorful blossoms.Our science teacher,with great
singing.Then,our science teacher
Body:详细介
patience,explained how plants grow,pointing at the thick
showed us some interesting plants,
绍旅行的时
trunks and tiny seeds under the soil.At noon,we spread out
间、地点和活
like tall trees and small grass.At
our picnic mats on the soft grass.While sharing delicious
动等
noon,we had a picnic on the grass.
food,we talked about our favorite parts of the trip.When
We shared sandwiches and fruits.
the sun started to set,we headed back,but the beauty of
Everyone was happy.
nature stayed in our hearts.
This trip was really fun.It made
This trip wasn't just fun,and it also taught me to notice
me love nature more.I can't wait for
Ending:表达
things carefully and be grateful for the world.I'll always
the next school trip!
自己的感受
remember this special day.
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Passage 3
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Screen-Free Weekend Experience
Beginning:点
My Screen-Free Weekend
Last weekend,I took part in a school activity
明参与的活
Last weekend,I joined a school
called "Screen-Free Weekend".Let me tell you what
动“无屏幕周
“Screen-Free Weekend”activity.Let me
I did without screens.
末”,引出
tell you what I did without screens.
To be honest,I felt bored at first.So,I went to
下文
At first,I felt bored.So I went to the
the library with my friend on Saturday.We spent the
library with a friend on Saturday.We read
whole morning reading our favorite books there.It
Boy:分述周
our favorite books all morning.It was fun.
was quite enjoyable.On Sunday,my parents and I
末两天的
On Sunday,I visited my grandparents in the
visited my grandparents in the countryside.We ate a
活动
countryside with my parents.We had a big
big lunch together.The most exciting thing was that
lunch.I even learned to make zongzi with
I leamed to make zongzi with my grandma's help.
my grandma.
This experience taught me something valuable.I
Ending:总结
This experience was really good.I felt
got a strong feeling of warmth and happiness when I
这次经历的
warm and happy with my family and friends.
was with my family and friends.I will use screens
收获,以及今
I'll use screens less and spend more time
more wisely and spend more time with my family and
后会怎么做
with them.
friends.
Passage 4
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Delicious Memory
Beginning:表
My Delicious Memory
Food is not just about taste;it can bring back a
明能唤起你
Food can bring back sweet memories.
特殊记忆的
For me,zongzi is such a food.
special memory.Among all foods,zongzi holds the
食物
Zongzi is a special food for the Dragon
most delicious memory for me.
Boat Festival.It has rice and red beans.
Zongzi,a traditional treat for the Dragon Boat
Festival,is made of rice and red beans.Last year,
Last year,my grandma made zongzi.I
watched her and wanted to try.At first,my
during the festival,my grandma and I had a zongzi-
making day.She taught me to fold the leaves and fill
Body:具体讲
zongzi looked messy,but Grandma laughed
them with the rice carefully.Though my first try was
述你与此食and helped me..When we ate them,hey
a failure,Grandma's patience made the process full of
物之间的
were really delicious.It was the best zongzi I
joy.When we finally enjoyed the zongzi,the sweet
故事
had ever eaten.
taste and warm feeling made me very happy.
This memory is special because I spent
This memory is special.Zongzi connects me
Ending:阐述
time with my grandma.Zongzi tastes good,
with Grandma's love.Every time I see zongzi,I'm
此食物带来
and it also means family love to me.
reminded of that happy day-a taste of love and
的意义
tradition.
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