内容正文:
第三部分写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背
类别一写人叙事类
常见题目表述)
①人与自我:自我认识,自我管理,自我提升4《周易·益·象辞下》中写道:“君子以见善则迁。”在每个人
的生活中,总会有一个值得敬佩的人,成为我们心中的榜样。你校将以“A Hero in My Heart”为题组织一次英
语演讲比赛,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1.你敬佩的人是谁(父母,老师,消防员等):
2.你为什么敬佩他/她(耐心,善良,带给人们希望等);
3.你准备如何做。
②人与自我:职业启蒙,职业精神4梦想就像我们人生的航标,可以照亮我们的前程,也给予我们无穷的动
力。学校英语俱乐部准备举办主题为“My Dream”的演讲比赛,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1.你的梦想是什么:
2.你为什么会有这样的梦想;
3.你将如何实现自己的梦想。
③人与自我:多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活4在我们的校园生活中,老师扮演着至关重要的角色。他们不
仅传授知识,还给予我们关心和鼓励。假设你是李华,请以“The Nicest Teacher in My Heart”为题,用英语写一
篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一位老师,并分享一个你们之间的温暖小故事。内容包括:
1.什么科目的老师;
2.老师的性格(友好,乐于助人等):
3.老师让你佩服的能力(写文章,讲课好等)。
④人与社会:良好的人际关系与人际交往汪曾祺说:“家人闲坐,灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的
事。假如你是李辉,你们班正在举行一个名为“Family Memories'”的英文主题班会,请你回忆发生在你家里的
一件有意义的事情,写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。内容包括:
1.描述回忆(发生的事情,时间,人物等);
2.你的感受与想法。
⑤人与社会:传统文化之讲好中国故事“用英语讲故事”有助于开阔国际视野,培养家国情怀、增强文化
自信。为鼓励更多中学生学好英语,你校英文社正在举办以“My Favorite Story”为主题的征文活动,请你用英
语写一篇短文投稿。(以下图片仅供参考)
Tell Chinese Stories in English
Journey to the West
Yu Gong Moves the Mountains
Mulan
内容包括:
1.讲述你最喜欢的一个故事(名称、人物、情节等);
2.分享你对这个故事的看法和感受。
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作文框架D
开头:引入这个人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征(建议选取父母、朋友、老师等熟悉的人物)
①直接型:直接点明这个人物是谁。如:'m glad to say something about my best friend.
②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题,再点明这个人物。如:During the process of growing up,it is very
important to have someone who knows us.Among all the people around me,I think no one else but my father is the
special person who knows me best.
中间:你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when,where,what,how)
①建议写作角度:这个人物帮助你成长的故事:这个人物身上的闪光点。
②需要注意的点:经历类应用一般过去时。
结尾:你的感悟、感受、做法、对这个人的美好祝愿
高分模板)
The Most
Person in My Heart
To be honest,
is the most
person I've ever met.She/He
(人物身份+人物外貌
特征:a round face,a soft voice.).I think she/heis
because she/he is always
(描写人物性
格的形容词:patient,kind,helpful..).She/He likes
(人物的爱好:help others,collect stamps,take
part in volunteer activities...).
Once I
(你遇到的麻烦:be sick,fail the exam,have difficulty with+学科,can't get along well with
..),she/he told me
(人物的建议:not to give up,not to worry about,keep reading aloud,talk to,help
people in need..).Then she/he_(人物的行为:teach me how to,ask me to,encourage me to..).In
addition,she/he
(人物的行为:give me flowers or books,give me helpful suggestions,listen to me
patiently...)when I was in trouble.I became/felt
(你的改变/感受:confident,moved,independent,
happy,relaxed...)because of her/him.
As her/his
I have learned that
(你的感悟:nothing is impossible,we should help others
...)I hope I will be a person like her/him.I also hope she/he will be better and better.
优秀范文记背)
Passage 1
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Hero in My Heart
A Hero in My Heart
Beginning:表
Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be
明谁是自己
Hello,everyone.I'm glad to be here to give a speech.
here to give a speech.Everyone has a
心中的英雄
In the journey of life,there's always someone who shines like
hero in their heart,and mine is my
a star,and that hero in my heart is my father
father.
What moves me most is his consistent patience and
He is patient and kind.Every
kindness.After tiring work,he still spares time to listen to
Body:介绍
evening,he listens to my stories after
他/她成为自
work.When I fall down,he helps me
my daily stories,and his eyes are full of care.When I fell
己心目中英
down in a race,he didn't lift me up directly but
stand up and says,“Try again.”His
雄的原因
encouraged me to stand with a warm voice,which planted
big hands give me warmth.He often
courage in my heart.His warmth not only holds my small
helps old people carry heavy things.
hands but also leads him to help neighbors carry heavy
I want to take him as my role
things on rainy days.
Ending:表达
model.I will help my friends when
向他/她学习
I've decided to follow his example:to offer a hand to
they need me.My father is the best
的决心
those in need,just like he does every day.
hero.
Thanks for listening.
Thanks for listening.
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Passage 2
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
Beginning:引
The Nicest Teacher in My Heart
The Nicest Teacher in My Heart
出自己心中
In our school life,teachers are very
In our colorful school life,teachers play a key
最好的老师
important.They teach us knowledge and care
role.They not only pass on knowledge to us but
about us.My favorite teacher is Mr.Li.
also give us warmth and encouragement.Among all
Mr.Li is my math teacher.He is of
my teachers,Mr.Li is the nicest one in my heart.
medium height and wears glasses.He can
Mr.Li,who is my math teacher,has a kind
Body:write great articles and often shares his stories
face and always wears a smile.He's good at turning
他/她的长
with us.He is friendly and helpful.Last boring math into fun stories and can write excellent
相、爱好、梦
term,I was really nervous about a math test.
articles.He is patient and helpful.Last term,before
想、能力、性I studied hard but still felt worried.The day a math test,I was extremely nervous as I couldn't
格并举例
before the test,Mr.Li noticed my worry.solve some hard problems.Mr.Li found my worry.
During his free time,he patiently explained He spent his break time explaining difficult
difficult problems to me again.With his help,problems to me step by step.Thanks to his help,I
I did well in the test.Mr.Li also likes got a good grade in the test.Mr.Li has hobbies like
cycling and reading.His dream is to make
cycling and reading.His dream is to make math
every student love math.
interesting for every student.
Ending:总结
When I remember his kindness and
Whenever I think of his kindness and
全文并表达patience,Ifeel warm.He is the nicest teacher
patience,I feel warm.He truly is the nicest teacher
自己的感受
in my heart.
in my heart.
Passage 3
写作脉络
初阶范文
高阶范文
A Good Friend in My Mind
A Good Friend in My Mind
Beginning:表
In our school,some students show wonderful
In our daily life,there are always
明自己要推
qualities,and my friend Li Hua stands out.I'm
classmates showing excellence through actions
荐的人
glad to recommend him.
Today,Id like to recommend my friend
Li Hua is of medium height with a warm
Li Hua.
Body:介绍
smile.His eyes are full of care.He's not only
Li Hua is of medium height and has a pair
他/她的长
friendly but also patient.When we have difficulty
of bright eyes.He's very friendly and always
相、性格、爱
in studying,he explains things slowly,making
ready to help others.Whenever classmates have
好以及梦想
sure we really understand.He has a strong love
study problems,he'll patiently offer advice.He
for science.In his free time,he often does small
loves science very much.In his free time,he
experiments,like growing plants or testing simple
often does small experiments.His dream is to
physics rules.His dream is to become a
be a scientist.He wants to solve difficult
scientist,using knowledge to solve hard
problems and make our life better.
Ending:总结
problems and make our life better.
Li Hua's kindness makes him a great
并表达他/她
Li Hua's kindness makes him a great
example.I think he is a perfect one for this
可以得到此
example.I strongly believe he should get this
honor.
荣誉
honor.
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