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读后续写话题练（一）　家庭亲情 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　（2024·威海模拟）I didn’t realize that a truly profound moment was heading my way one humid day in July when my car broke down in St.Joseph， Michigan. 　　At that minute， in the parking lot of the motel， I wanted to cry.I wanted to scream.That’s when I started talking to an older woman who sat a few chairs away from me. 　　“So you’re having some repairs done？” she asked with concern in her voice.I guessed she could see the frustration on my face. 　　“Yes，” I said with a sigh.“My car wouldn’t start.I have no idea what happened.” 　　It began normally as this kind lady and I started to talk.She asked me to tell her about what happened to my car.I did， and then we settled into comfortable， casual conversation.We talked about my trip， her home， her husband retiring， my parents retiring. 　　“Your car is ready， ma’am，” said the service manager to the older woman. 　　“Oh， thank you，” she said. 　　She stood up and I smiled at her.She wished me luck as she gathered her purse and car keys from the seat next to her.But then as she was about to walk away， she hesitated and then turned back to me. 　　“You know， I have to tell you something，” she said， and I could see a serious expression on her face.“My daughter died a few years ago.It’s so hard even now to do just the simple things.” She swallowed hard， exhaled deeply and went on， “But every now and then I meet someone who reminds me of my daughter， and today， you reminded me so much of her.” She smiled with tears in her eyes and went on.“I believe that sometimes people come to my life to remind me of her and to show me that my daughter is still with me and that I can get through this.I’ve so enjoyed talking to you today.” A genuine smile covered her face.“When you get home I want you to hug your parents.They are very lucky to have you.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 　　I felt tears of my own welling up in my eyes.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　A few hours later， I pulled into the driveway at my parents’ house.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： 　　I felt tears of my own welling up in my eyes.I didn’t know how to respond and all I managed to say was，“Oh， thank you.I will.” I felt so moved by what she said and so touched by her love for her daughter.I’m a person who normally hides my emotions， but that day I stood up and hugged her and said，“I enjoyed talking to you too.You can take me as your daughter.” 　　A few hours later， I pulled into the driveway at my parents’ house.I was home in the end.Both my mother and father came outside with their usual broad， inviting smile.I ran to my mother and hugged her tightly with all my might.Then I did the same to my father.Delighted and surprised， they held my hands firmly， with tears rolling down their cheeks.It was at that moment that I realized how fortunate I was.From that day on I learned to value whatever I have before I lose it. 2 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $