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第一部分 主题写作分类诵读
三、写作范文分类诵读
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主题7 和谐家庭与社区生活[2023;2018]
1. Family—the Thing I Value the Most
There are many things we should value in our lives. ① The most precious
thing to me, of course, is my family. The reasons and my acts are as
follows.
To begin with, ② my family offers me warmth, which encourages me
to go on whenever I meet problems. What's more, they teach me a lot and
help me build correct values. All these help me become a better person.
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③ In my daily life, I always put myself in my family members' shoes.
For instance, I always take care of their feelings, like listening patiently
when chatting with them. Also, I do housework with my parents whenever
I have time. This not only helps create sweet memories for us, but also
reduces their stress.
All in all, I really value my family, and I love each member in my
family deeply.#1.1.3
| 范文赏析
①通过插入语of course直抒胸臆,强调自己最珍贵的东西是家人。
②which引导非限制性定语从句,具象化了家庭给予“我”的温暖。
③地道习语put oneself in one's shoes(设身处地地为某人着想)生动地诠释
了作者在乎家人的感受。
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| 亮点词句
precious adj. 珍贵的
build correct values 建立正确的价值观
for instance 例如
chat with 和……聊天
reduce stress 减轻压力
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2. My Family Rules
① As the saying goes, “As a country has its laws, a family also needs
rules.” The following are my family rules.
To begin with, not only do I have to be honest and friendly, but I
also have to show my respect to others. Besides, it's my duty to share
some housework and keep good communication with my parents. Both
of them are very important to help build a loving family environment. What's
more, I'm supposed to exercise for half an hour every day to keep fit.
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② Though my family rules seem to be strict, I'm allowed to arrange my
time by myself on weekends. Therefore, I can play with my friends or
hang out to breathe fresh air outside on weekends.
In my opinion, family rules should be passed down from generation
to generation because they can carry the family's spirit and wisdom to
the young. All in all, my family rules are great and they make it possible
for me to live in such a wonderful family.#3.1.2
| 范文赏析
①通过引用古谚语,自然引入家规主题,充分凸显了作者深厚的文化底蕴。
②Though引导让步状语从句,彰显规则的弹性,体现家庭教育的智慧。
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| 亮点词句
keep good communication with 与……保持良好的沟通
seem to do sth. 似乎/好像做某事
arrange time 安排时间
breathe fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气
pass down from generation to generation 代代相传
It's one's duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的责任。
make it+adj.+for sb. to do sth. 使做某事对某人来说是……的
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3. Harmonious Neighborhood Relationships
① Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood is one of our traditional
virtues. ② It cannot be denied that my neighbor has truly put this into
practice through her own actions.
My neighbor was a teacher who was warm-hearted. On a windy
afternoon, I came back home and knocked at the door many times, but
no one answered. After hearing my knock, she asked me what happened
and I told her my problem. She lent her phone to me to give my mother
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a call, from which we knew that my mother was ill in hospital and I
needed to look after myself for several days because my father was away
on business. ③ As soon as my neighbor heard the news, she offered to
take care of me.
When you give a rose, you leave fragrance in your hand. I will also
show kindness to people around me just like my neighbor.#5.1.2
| 范文赏析
①动名词短语作主语,将抽象美德转化为具体行动,呼应标题,奠定温暖
基调。
②使用It cannot be denied that…句型,表示“不可否认,……”,强调了邻
居对美德的践行,说服力强。
③As soon as引导时间状语从句,凸显提供帮助的及时性,使人物形象立
体化。
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| 亮点词句
harmonious neighborhood 和谐邻里,和谐社区
traditional virtues 传统美德
put…into practice 将……付诸实践
be away on business 出差
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