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第一部分 主题写作分类诵读
三、写作范文分类诵读
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主题2 身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命[2020]
1. How to Keep Healthy
①As we all know, it is better to be poor and healthy than to be rich
and sick. We all know the importance of keeping healthy, but what can
we do to achieve it?
First of all, we should have a balanced diet. ②Healthy food not only
provides us with necessary nutrients and energy, but also maintains the
normal function of our bodies. For example, I stick to having a good
breakfast before going to school every day. Secondly, it is necessary to
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do regular exercise. ③Although exercise may bring some challenges, remember
that challenges often lead to personal growth. We can choose the sports
we enjoy, such as running, swimming or playing basketball. Moreover, it
is important to get enough sleep and avoid staying up late. Good sleeping
habits are essential for energy recovery and can improve our attention and
efficiency in our daily life.
In brief, there is no doubt that happiness lies firstly in health.
Therefore, it's high time that we should take steps!#1.1.2
范文赏析
①用比较级结构it is better to…than to…作对比,突出健康的重要性,引出话
题。
②巧用not only…but also…并列结构,清晰说明健康饮食的双重作用,逻辑
严谨。
③Although引导让步状语从句+that引导宾语从句,辩证分析运动的价值,
句式高级。#2.1.3
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亮点词句
nutrient n.营养
have a balanced diet 均衡饮食
maintain the normal function of 维持……的正常功能
stick to doing sth. 坚持做某事
in brief 简言之
There is no doubt that… 毫无疑问,……
It's high time that we should… 是我们应该……的时候了。#2.2.6
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2. How to Overcome Test Anxiety
Dear Amy,
Test anxiety can be a real problem if you can't beat it. Try to do
the following things and then you'll feel better.
First of all, it's necessary to go over the main points carefully and
correct the mistakes you once made a few days before the exam. ①When
you come across questions that are too difficult for you to solve, never
be afraid of asking your teachers and classmates for help. Besides, you're
supposed to take more exercise so that you will be healthier and your
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brain will become more active. On the night before the test, get relaxed
by listening to your favorite songs and go to bed early. ②You can also
drink a bottle of hot milk before going to bed, which can help you sleep
better. When the exam begins, don't be too nervous. Instead, ③you should
be confident in yourself since you've made full preparations for it.
Everything takes time and practice, and learning to beat test anxiety
is the same.
Yours,
Eric#3.1.5
范文赏析
①that引导定语从句+too…to…固定结构,强调了问题的难度,逻辑清晰。
②which引导非限制性定语从句,补充说明了热牛奶的作用,衔接自然。
③since引导原因状语从句,阐明了自信的依据,有效增强了说服力。#4.1.3
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亮点词句
test anxiety 考试焦虑
go over 复习
come across questions 遇到问题
be afraid of doing sth. 害怕做某事
be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
be confident in sb. 对某人有信心
make full preparations for 为……做好充分准备#4.2.7
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3. How to Protect Ourselves
①It is widely known that everyone has only one life, so we should
value our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
For one thing, we should be aware of the importance of safety and
know what to do in our daily lives. Firstly, when we go out, we must
follow traffic rules. Secondly, ②we are supposed to be careful when making
friends online, which may bring unnecessary trouble. What's more, when
we play sports or games, be careful not to hurt ourselves. In addition,
remember not to go swimming in the river or lake alone to avoid putting
ourselves in dangerous situations.
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For another, it is equally important to know how to protect ourselves
in case of unexpected emergencies. ③In case of a fire, the most important
thing is to stay calm and remember to call 119 for help so that more
people can be prevented from being hurt.
In short, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our
lives.#5.1.3
范文赏析
①巧用It is widely known that…句型引出主题, widely known短语提升说
服力。
②运用be supposed to…句式提出建议,搭配非限制性定语从句解释原因,
句式丰富,表意严谨。
③so that引导目的状语从句+含情态动词的被动语态,专业表述火灾应对
方法。#6.1.3
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亮点词句
be aware of 注意到
put…in dangerous situations 把……置于危险境地
equally important 同样重要的
in case of unexpected emergencies 万一发生意外紧急情况
prevent sb./sth. from doing sth. 阻止某人/某物做某事
For one thing… For another… 一方面……另一方面……#6.2.6
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