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第一部分 主题写作分类诵读
三、写作范文分类诵读
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主题1 多彩、有意义的学校生活[2022]
1. Activities During the 15-minute Break
At our school, we often have fun with different activities during the
15-minute break. ①Some students enjoy skipping rope, while others prefer
kicking shuttlecock. You can also find students playing badminton or
table tennis. For a bit of fun, a few even play with hula hoops. All these
activities help us relax, relieve stress, and keep us healthy and strong.
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My favorite activity, without doubt, is skipping rope. Why? ②Not
only is it fun and a little bit challenging, but it also makes me stronger.
Every time I skip rope, I feel energetic and happy inside. Best of all, it
helps me forget my worries for a while.
In short, these break-time activities are truly good for us. They help
us stay in a good mood and get ready for the next class. ③I really
hope every student can find an activity they enjoy and make the most
of this short break to relax and feel refreshed.#4
范文赏析
①巧用对比连接词 while,清晰对比两类活动偏好,避免简单句堆砌。
②Not only…but also…递进句型突出跳绳的两大优势,逻辑性强且富有说
服力。
③通过I really hope+宾语从句,强烈地传递期望;运用地道表达make the
most of提出倡议,搭配目的状语to relax…,建议具体且有感染力。#9
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亮点词句
skip rope 跳绳
kick shuttlecock 踢毽子
relieve stress 缓解压力
stay in a good mood 保持好心情
get ready for 为……做好准备
make the most of 充分利用
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2. Colorful School Activities
During my junior high school life, I had the chance to participate
in a variety of school activities, such as singing competitions and art
festivals. ①However, one event that truly left a lasting impression on
me was the yearly sports meeting.
The sports meeting was an exciting event, with various competitions
taking place. Our class participated in the relay race. With the efforts of
the four runners, we managed to win the championship in the race. Through
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this sports meeting, I not only learned valuable lessons but also gained
lots of joy. ②I firmly believe that such a sports meeting is highly meaningful
because it reminds us of the importance of teamwork and the spirit of
pulling together to fight for goals.
In conclusion, the sports meeting was one of the highlights of my
school life. ③I'm looking forward to participating in more activities in the
future, which will offer new chances for learning and personal development.#20
范文赏析
①However表转折,引出令自己印象深刻的运动会,衔接连贯;that引导定
语从句,修饰event。
②because引导原因状语从句,将体育竞技升华为团队精神教育,立意升
华。
③结尾用which引导非限制性定语从句,展望未来。#25
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亮点词句
highlight n.最精彩的部分
participate in 参与
a variety of 各种各样的
leave a lasting impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻的印象
win the championship 赢得冠军
remind sb. of sth. 使某人想起某事
in conclusion 最后,总而言之
I firmly believe that… 我坚信……#34
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3. 给学弟学妹的一封信
Dear 8th-graders,
①How excited I feel to share my school life with you! ②Though busy
and stressful, I still find the Junior Three life colorful and meaningful.
There is no denying that we have more homework to do every day.
However, I always take part in various activities to enrich my life and
improve my skills. In addition, the more challenging schoolwork has
made me a better learner.
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To help you do well in Junior Three, I'd like to give you a few
suggestions. First of all, ③remember to wear a smile because this can help
you feel better about yourself. What's more, never put off what you should
do today until tomorrow. Finish your tasks on time and prepare everything
well according to schedule. Lastly, try to kick off your bad habits, such
as staying up late to play games and paying little attention to the basic
knowledge of every subject.
Wish you all the best.
Li Hui#40
范文赏析
①用感叹句开篇,易引发读者共鸣。
②Though引导让步状语从句,展示初三生活既有忙碌和压力,也是多彩和
有意义的。
③because引导原因状语从句,直观揭示了微笑的心理价值,增强了建议的
合理性。#45
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亮点词句
in addition 此外
according to schedule 依照计划时间
kick off one's bad habits 改掉某人的坏习惯
pay attention to 注意
There is no denying that… 不可否认的是……#51
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4. A Course that I Want My School to Offer
I'm glad that our school will have more after-school classes which
can be helpful in making students interested in study and making our
school life colorful. For me, I want the school to start a class named
Computer Programming.
By learning programming, we can explore the mystery of some apps
with people who share the common interests with us. ①Through this class,
I wish to know about computer programming ahead of time as it's my
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dream major at university. In addition, I hope to learn how to make easy
mini programs to make our life easier.
And I have two suggestions that I would like to give to my teachers.
To begin with, ②I hope teachers can use some simple examples to make
it easier for us to understand what we are going to learn. Besides, I
believe it must be a good idea to hold programming competitions now
and then. In this way, we can be encouraged to practice the knowledge
we have learned in real life.#55
范文赏析
①as引导原因状语从句,简洁点明个人规划与课程的关联,增强说服力。
②巧妙运用了make it+adj.(+for sb.)+to do sth.句型与what引导的宾语从句,
可见作者扎实的语言基本功。#59
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亮点词句
computer programming 计算机编程
explore the mystery of 探索……的奥秘
ahead of time 提前
dream major 梦想专业
would like to do sth. 想要做某事
to begin with 首先,第一
I believe it must be a good idea to… 我认为……一定是个好主意。#67
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