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12月第三次月考复习之应用文写作10篇
(必修一Unit4-5)
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下每单元依次对应5篇单元话题专题训练
单元
单元话题
Unit 4 Natural Disasters
自然灾害
Unit5 Languages Around the World语言
1.假如你是李华,上周五你校邀请英国专家George开展一场关于自然灾害的云讲座(cloud lecture)。
请你用英文为学校微信公众号写一篇报道,介绍该活动。
内容包括:
1.活动目的:
2.活动过程;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
A Cloud Lecture on Natural Disasters
2.假设你是李华,你班计划举办一场“灾难应对知识分享会”,想邀请外教Peter先生参加。请你根据
以下要点写一封邀请信:
邀请目的:分享灾难应对知识,提高同学们的安全意识:
活动时间:下周五下午4:00-5:30:
活动地点:高二(3)班教室:
活动内容:观看短视频、小组讨论、分享经验:
期待回复。
注意:
词数80-100左右;
可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Peter,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.假定你是李华,上周你参加了大化高中开展的“发生水灾时如何保护自己”的主题活动,请你以
“Flood Safety Tips'”为题为校英文报写一篇文章,内容包括:
1.活动背景:
2.学到的生存技巧:
21水灾来临前…(事前准备:食物、急救包…)
22水灾来临时应…(如尽量待在高处;万一被困,应…)
23水灾来临时禁止…(如靠近电箱,乱喝水等)
3.参与活动后的感受。
参考词汇:take part in,.survival skills,first of a/secondly /what's more..
写作词数应为80左右。
4.假如你是李华,你校英文报正在开展以“What to Do During an Earthquake?”为题的征文活动,请
你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.在教室时怎样做;
2.在家时怎样更安全;
3在街上时,要注意什么。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What to Do During an Earthquake?
5.假定你是李华,你的外国好友Eic的家乡发生了严重的台风灾害,请给他写一封邮件表示慰问。内容
包括:
1.询问Eric及家人的情况:
2.台风造成的严重后果:
3.尽力提供帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
6.你是高一学生李华,英语学习上遇到了困难,写信向Miss Wang寻求建议,要求包含以下内容:
1.单词多,很难记住:
2.课文太长,难以背诵(recite):
3.写作有困难:
4.听说能力低;
5.向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。
要求:不要逐字逐条翻译,可以适当增加细节,词数100左右。
Dear Miss Wang,
Yours,
LiHua
7.假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Tom对学写中国汉字很感兴趣,但是发现很难。请你写信鼓励他并给他
一些书写汉字的建议。
注意:词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:中国汉字:Chinese character字帖:copybook
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
8.假定你是李华,你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。
请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1、提出建议:
2、表达祝愿。
注意:1、词数80左右;2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David
How is everything going?
Yours,
LiHua
9.假设你是李华,你的笔友Mk©是一名高一新生。他在邮件中提到,进入高中后他在英语学习上遇到
了困难,尽管付出了努力,但成绩仍不理想,感到十分焦虑。请你给他写一封建议信,帮助他调整学习
方法,增强信心。内容要点如下:
1.对Mike的感受表示理解,并给予鼓励:
2提出具体的高中英语学习的建议(至少两条);
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
LiHua
l0.假定你是李华,你校英文周刊准备增加一个关于英语学习的专栏。外教Miss Lori提出“Fun English
Words'”和“Misunderstandings in English”两个主题供大家选择。请你给Miss Lori写封信,内容包括:
1.你的建议:
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Lori,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our School English Weekly.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
12月第三次月考复习之应用文写作10篇
(必修一Unit 4-5)
本资料共10篇专题训练,从上到下每单元依次对应5篇单元话题专题训练
单元
单元话题
Unit 4 Natural Disasters
自然灾害
Unit 5 Languages Around the World
语言
1.假如你是李华,上周五你校邀请英国专家George开展一场关于自然灾害的云讲座(cloud lecture)。请你用英文为学校微信公众号写一篇报道,介绍该活动。
内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
A Cloud Lecture on Natural Disasters
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【答案】One possible version:
A Cloud Lecture on Natural Disasters
Last Friday, our school invited British expert George to deliver an insightful cloud lecture on natural disasters, with the aim of raising students’ awareness of disaster prevention and enhancing their scientific literacy.
The lecture, which lasted for 90 minutes, covered topics such as earthquakes, tsunamis, and climate change. George used vivid videos and real-life cases to explain how these disasters form and how we can respond effectively. Students actively participated in the Q&A session, where they discussed sustainable solutions to mitigate environmental risks.
The event was highly praised. Many said it deepened their understanding of global challenges, while teachers emphasized its educational value. This innovative approach to learning has set a benchmark for future activities.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,为学校微信公众号写一篇有关自然灾害云讲座的英文报道,应介绍举办该讲座的目的,分享具体的活动过程,最后描述活动的反响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
解释:explain→elucidate, clarify
讨论:discuss→talk about, speak about
赞扬:praise→commend, applaud, compliment
强调:emphasize→highlight, spotlight, stress
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Friday, our school invited British expert George to deliver an insightful cloud lecture on natural disasters, with the aim of raising students’ awareness of disaster prevention and enhancing their scientific literacy.
拓展句:Last Friday, our school invited British expert George to deliver an insightful cloud lecture on natural disasters, whose aim was to raise students’ awareness of disaster prevention and enhance their scientific literacy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The lecture, which lasted for 90 minutes, covered topics such as earthquakes, tsunamis, and climate change. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] George used vivid videos and real-life cases to explain how these disasters form and how we can respond effectively. (运用了两个how分别引导宾语从句)
2.假设你是李华,你班计划举办一场“灾难应对知识分享会”,想邀请外教Peter先生参加。请你根据以下要点写一封邀请信:
邀请目的:分享灾难应对知识,提高同学们的安全意识;
活动时间:下周五下午4:00-5:30;
活动地点:高二(3)班教室;
活动内容:观看短视频、小组讨论、分享经验;
期待回复。
注意:
词数80-100左右;
可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Peter,
I’m writing on behalf of our class to invite you to our “Disaster Preparedness Knowledge Sharing Session.” The event will be held next Friday from 4:00 to 5:30 p.m. in Class 3, Grade 11.
The purpose is to share practical knowledge about responding to natural disasters and emergencies, and to raise our classmates’ safety awareness. We’ll start with a short educational video, followed by group discussions and a sharing session where students — and hopefully you — can exchange real-life experiences or useful tips.
Your participation would not only encourage us but also bring an international perspective to the topic. Please let us know if you’re available. We’re looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的邀请信。要求以李华的身份邀请外教Peter参加班级组织的“灾难应对知识分享会”,需涵盖活动目的、时间、地点、内容及期待回复。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提高:raise→ enhance
安全:safety → security
鼓励:encourage → inspire
回复:reply → response
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Your participation would not only encourage us but also bring an international perspective to the topic.
拓展句:Not only would your participation encourage us but also it would bring an international perspective to the topic.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The purpose is to share practical knowledge about responding to natural disasters and emergencies, and to raise our classmates’ safety awareness.(运用了不定式短语作表语)
【高分句型2】Please let us know if you’re available. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
3.假定你是李华,上周你参加了大化高中开展的“发生水灾时如何保护自己”的主题活动,请你以“Flood Safety Tips”为题为校英文报写一篇文章,内容包括:
1. 活动背景;
2. 学到的生存技巧:
2.1 水灾来临前…… (事前准备:食物、急救包……)
2.2 水灾来临时应……(如尽量待在高处;万一被困,应……)
2.3 水灾来临时禁止……(如靠近电箱,乱喝水等)
3.参与活动后的感受。
参考词汇:take part in, survival skills, first of all /secondly /what’s more...
写作词数应为80左右。
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【答案】
Last week, I took part in my school activity about How to Protect Yourself during a Flood. Now, I want to share some flood safety tips with you.
First of all, before a flood, we need to listen to the weather forecast. Then we can prepare some food and drinking water and a first aid kit. Secondly, during a flood, try to grab a wood block or something useful for you if you are in water. And remember to move to a higher place if you can. Thirdly, don’t drink the tap water otherwise you will be really sick. Our lives are the most important, so don’t take too many personal belongings with you. What’s more, keep positive and never give up.
This activity let me learn so many useful flood safety tips. I’m very grateful.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Flood Safety Tips”为题为校英文报写一篇文章。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参见:take part in → participate in
建议:tip → suggestion
重要的:important → significant
放弃:give up → quit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last week, I took part in my school activity about How to Protect Yourself during a Flood.
拓展句:Last week, I took part in my school activity which/that focused on how to protect yourself during a flood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, during a flood, try to grab a wood block or something useful for you if you are in water.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】And remember to move to a higher place if you can.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4.假如你是李华,你校英文报正在开展以“What to Do During an Earthquake?”为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.在教室时怎样做;
2.在家时怎样更安全;
3.在街上时,要注意什么。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What to Do During an Earthquake?
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【答案】What to Do During an Earthquake?
Earthquakes happen suddenly. Knowing what to do can save lives. In the classroom: Stay calm. Drop under your desk, cover your head and neck with your arms, and hold on to the desk leg. Stay away from windows. At home: If you are inside, drop, cover, and hold on near a strong piece of furniture, like a table. Do not run outside immediately. Stay away from windows, mirrors, and heavy objects that might fall. On the street: Move to an open area away from buildings, trees, streetlights, and overhead wires. Do not stand near walls or under bridges. Once in the open, drop down and protect your head. Staying calm and remembering these actions is key to safety.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,参加学校英文报正在开展的以“What to Do During an Earthquake?”为题的征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
保持:stay→keep
强壮的:strong→sturdy
立刻:immediately→at once
最重要的:key→the most important
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Knowing what to do can save lives.
拓展句:Knowing what we should do can save lives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing what to do can save lives. (运用了动名词作主语以及疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】If you are inside, drop, cover, and hold on near a strong piece of furniture, like a table. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
5.假定你是李华,你的外国好友Eric的家乡发生了严重的台风灾害,请给他写一封邮件表示慰问。内容包括:
1.询问Eric及家人的情况;
2.台风造成的严重后果;
3.尽力提供帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Eric,
How are you doing? Learning that a terrible typhoon hit your hometown, I was really concerned about you and your family.
As reported, the disaster caused significant damage to your hometown with more than twenty people losing their lives and many others injured. Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless.
I am deeply saddened by this disaster. But please don’t be worried, everything will gradually return to normal. If there is anything I can do to support you, please do not hesitate to reach out.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给家乡发生了严重台风灾害的好友Eric写一封邮件,向他表示慰问。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可怕的:terrible→horrible
侵袭:hit→strike
无数的:numerous→countless
此外:additionally→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless.
拓展句:Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, which left thousands of people homeless.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that a terrible typhoon hit your hometown, I was really concerned about you and your family. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If there is anything I can do to support you, please do not hesitate to reach out. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和省略that的定语从句)
6.你是高一学生李华,英语学习上遇到了困难,写信向Miss Wang寻求建议,要求包含以下内容:
1. 单词多,很难记住;
2. 课文太长,难以背诵 (recite);
3. 写作有困难;
4. 听说能力低;
5. 向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。
要求:不要逐字逐条翻译,可以适当增加细节,词数100左右。
Dear Miss Wang,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Miss Wang,
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some advice on English learning.
I have met with many difficulties in learning English since I entered senior high school. First of all, I find our textbook full of new words which are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, I have great difficulty in writing and always make many mistakes in grammar. Last but not least, my listening and speaking ability is weak, making me do badly in listening and speaking exams. I don’t know what to do now. Would you like to give me some advice so that I can learn English more easily?
I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高一学生李华的身份向Miss Wang倾诉英语学习中遇到的单词记忆、课文背诵、写作及听说能力等困难,并诚恳地寻求实用的学习方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻求:ask for →seek
遇到:meet →come across/encounter
困难:difficult →tough
记住:remember →keep in mind
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:What’s more, I have great difficulty in writing and always make many mistakes in grammar.
拓展句:What’s more, not only do I have great difficulty in writing, but also I always make many mistakes in grammar.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, I find our English textbook full of new words, which are very difficult for me to remember. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, my listening and speaking ability is weak, making me do badly in listening and speaking exams. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
7.假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Tom对学写中国汉字很感兴趣,但是发现很难。请你写信鼓励他并给他一些书写汉字的建议。
注意:词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:中国汉字:Chinese character 字帖:copybook
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese characters but sorry to learn that you have difficulty in writing them. It is true that Chinese characters are difficult to write, especially for foreigners, but don’t worry. I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions.
First of all, practice with patience and you will make progress in time. Furthermore, as proper guidance can help you learn more easily, it’s a good idea to learn some basic writing skills either from a Chinese teacher or from teaching videos on the Internet. What’s more, I strongly suggest you use copybooks as we Chinese do at our beginning stage.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给觉得汉字很难写的Tom写一封信,鼓励他并提供一些书写汉字的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased/overjoyed
适当的:proper→appropriate
技能:skill→technique
实用的:practical→workable/feasible
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:What’s more, I strongly suggest you use copybooks as we Chinese do at our beginning stage.
拓展句:What’s more, it is strongly suggested that you use copybooks as we Chinese do at our beginning stage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, as proper guidance can help you learn more easily, it’s a good idea to learn some basic writing skills either from a Chinese teacher or from teaching videos on the Internet.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, I strongly suggest you use copybooks as we Chinese do at our beginning stage.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和as引导的方式状语从句)
8.假定你是李华,你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。
请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1、提出建议;
2、表达祝愿。
注意:1、词数80左右;2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Version One
Dear David,
How is everything going? I am more than delighted to learn that you have chosen the Chinese course. Many people find it not easy to learn Chinese in the beginning. But don’t worry. I will give you some practical suggestions.
To begin with, remember to practice a little every day. You can use simple apps or watch Chinese videos online. Also, try speaking with friends who know Chinese, as this makes learning fun. Most importantly, don’t be afraid of making mistakes because they are part of improving.
Remember you can always write to me. I’m here to help! Keep practicing, and I’m sure you’ll improve before you know it.
Yours,
Li HuaVersion Two
Dear David,
How is everything going? I am more than delighted to learn that you have chosen Chinese as your selective course. And in response to your earnest inquiry, I am writing to give you my advice on Chinese learning.
It takes both effort and wisdom to get a good command of Chinese. To begin with, you are advised to commit yourself to substantial reading, by which you will cultivate a good sense of Chinese language. Besides, it is recommended that you watch Chinese films, listening to the pronunciation of words. Above all, it is practice that makes perfect. Only when you start to apply the idioms and phrases to daily uses will you experience the unique charm of Chinese in person.
With great efforts and wise approaches, you are bound to make huge progress in Chinese learning. If there are any more questions, please feel free to write to me. Wish you all the best in your study and life.
Yours,
Li HuaVersion Three
Dear David,
How is everything going? I am more than delighted to know that you have taken Chinese as an extracurricular course. In response to your request, I’m writing to offer my suggestions.
It’s widely known that learning Chinese is a tough job, which makes it vital to put in constant effort.To begin with, it’s advisable to expose yourself to it frequently by listening to Chinese broadcast or reading short stories in Chinese. Besides, you’re suggested to acquire knowledge concerning Chinese history and culture. In this way, you’re bound to capture the essence of this beautiful language and therefore persist on studying it. Last but not least, it’s always crucial to follow your teachers’ instructions. After all, they are professional and experienced.
I sincerely hope that you can make huge progress in learning Chinese. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友David写一封回信,给他一些学好中文的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→thrilled
切实可行的:practical→feasible
害怕: be afraid of→ be scared of
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Many people find it not easy to learn Chinese in the beginning.
拓展句:Many people find that it is not easy to learn Chinese in the beginning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am more than delighted to learn that you have chosen Chinese course. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Also, try speaking with friends who know Chinese, as this makes learning fun. (运用了who引导的定语从句和as引导的原因状语从句)
9.假设你是李华,你的笔友Mike是一名高一新生。他在邮件中提到,进入高中后他在英语学习上遇到了困难,尽管付出了努力,但成绩仍不理想,感到十分焦虑。请你给他写一封建议信,帮助他调整学习方法,增强信心。内容要点如下:
1.对Mike的感受表示理解,并给予鼓励;
2.提出具体的高中英语学习的建议(至少两条);
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文:
Dear Mike.
I’m sorry to hear about your English struggles in high school. It’s normal to feel anxious when efforts don’t show in results. And I’m writing to give you some advice on English learning.
First, why not try learning 5-8 new words every day with flashcards? They’re super easy to use and will help you keep words in mind. Second, it is advisable to try annotating key phrases and analyzing long sentences while reading, which improves your comprehension. (When it comes to improving speaking, try to participate actively in class and seek teacher feedback, because this method ensures that you can get targeted guidance to boost your speaking ability.)
Reach out for more help if needed. Wish you steady progress and confidence!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给笔友Mike写一封信,就他遇到的问题给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
焦虑的:anxious→restless
帮助:help→assist
提高:improve→enhance
稳定的:steady→stable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Second, it is advisable to try annotating key phrases and analyzing long sentences while reading, which improves your comprehension.
拓展句:Second, it is advisable that you try annotating key phrases and analyzing long sentences while reading, which improves your comprehension.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Second, it is advisable to try annotating key phrases and analyzing long sentences while reading, which improves your comprehension.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语,while引导的状语从句的省略,which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
It’s normal to feel anxious when efforts don’t show in results.(运用了it作形式主语,不定式作真正的主语以及when引导时间状语从句)
10.假定你是李华,你校英文周刊准备增加一个关于英语学习的专栏。外教Miss Lori提出“Fun English Words”和“Misunderstandings in English”两个主题供大家选择。请你给Miss Lori写封信,内容包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Lori,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our School English Weekly.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Miss Lori,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our School English Weekly. I strongly suggest choosing “Fun English Words” as the theme.
The main reason is that it can make learning English more enjoyable. As we all know, many students find memorizing English words a tough task. But if we introduce words in a fun way, like through interesting stories or funny examples, students will be more willing to learn. What’s more, this column, which can provide a platform for students to share their own discoveries about fun words, will enhance our learning enthusiasm.
I believe it will bring a lot of benefits to our English learning.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Miss Lori写信,就英文周刊新增英语学习专栏的主题提出建议并阐述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强烈地:strongly → firmly
建议:suggest → propose
主要的:main → primary
愉快的:enjoyable → pleasant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I strongly suggest choosing “Fun English Words” as the theme.
拓展句:I strongly suggest that we choose “Fun English Words” as the theme.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The main reason is that it can make learning English more enjoyable.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, this column, which can provide a platform for students to share their own discoveries about fun words, will enhance our learning enthusiasm.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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