内容正文:
第二部分高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活(2024省卷)
①中考话题角度解读
1.甘肃近6年中考:2024省卷一写出自己的假期计划
2.全国视野:①假期旅行计划与感受:②让周末生活或者暑期生活过得更充实且有意义的建议
①教材单元链接
七(下)Unit2日常事务
七(下)Unit6日常活动
七(下)Unit12周末活动
人教
八(上)Unit1假期
八(上)Unit2闲暇活动
七(上)Unit6出发!
七(上)Unit7日和月
冀教
七(下)Unit4课外活动
七(下)Unit8暑假到了!
阶
课本句型促写作
©课本句型积累
1.I'm having a great time visiting my aunt in Canada.
我在加拿大看望姑姑(阿姨),玩得非常开心。[人教七(下)U7]
2.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.
我们参观了科学博物馆,那里真的很有趣。[人教七(下)U11]
开头句
3.Last month we asked our students about their free time activities.
上个月我们向学生们询问了他们的业余活动情况。[人教八(上)U2]
4.It's necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and
see all the places you want to visit.你有必要仔细规划这次旅行,这样才能充分利用时间,游览
所有你想去的地方。
1.We had a wonderful party last night and everybody had a good time
昨晚我们举办了一场精彩的派对,每个人都玩得很开心。[外研七(下)M10]
2.I always go swimming in summer because it makes me feel cool.
我总是夏天去游泳,因为这让我感觉很凉爽。[人教七(下)U2
角度1
日常
3.You can go to the park.When the weather is fine,you can fly kites and play games with your friends.
你可以去公园。天气好的时候,你可以与朋友们一起放风筝和做游戏。[人教七(下)U12]
中
活动
4.Every year,my family and I take a photo together under the big tree in our village.I like taking
间
photos because they help me remember fun times with my family.每年,我和家人都会在村
句
里的那棵大树下一起拍张照片。我喜欢拍照,因为它们(照片)能帮我记住和家人在一起的
欢乐时光。[新人教七(上)U7]
1.I'm going to the countryside with my dad.We are going to plant trees
角度2
我要和爸爸一起去乡下。我们打算去种树。[冀教七(下)U4]
假期
活动
2.I think it's better to have our picnic at the top of the hill in Beihai Park.
我觉得我们在北海公园的山顶上进行野餐会更好。
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续表
3.You can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos
中
假
你可以参观一些名胜古迹,拍下美丽的照片。
期
4.We went camping last month.It was very interesting..上个月我们去露营了。它非常有趣。
间
句
活
5.There are lots of ways to relax and have fun.However,the most important part of a holiday is
动
to rest your mind and body..放松和娱乐的方式有很多。不过,假期最重要的部分是让身心得
到休息。[新人教八(上)U1]
1.My holiday is very colourful.The most important thing is to learn something and have fun.
我的假期非常丰富多彩。最重要的是能学到一些东西,还能玩得开心。[人教八(上)U3]
2.No matter how many difficulties we have,I believe all problems can be solved in the end.
结尾句
无论我们遇到多少困难,我相信所有问题最终都能得到解决。[人教九(全)U7]
3.Although all of us felt very tired,we got the happiest memory.
虽然我们所有人都感到非常疲惫,但我们收获了最幸福的回忆。
1.Time flies when you're having fun..快乐的时光总是飞逝。
俗语/谚语
2.Life is what you make it.你的生活由你创造。
3.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
Q课本句型变式练
◆句子翻译
L.上周末,我们在人民公园放风筝,玩得非常开心。(Tip:have a great time)
2.假期里,我喜欢爬山,因为这让我感到放松。(Tip:because;it makes sb.feel)
3.周末和父母一起去乡村接近自然会更好。(Tip:It's better to do sth.;get close to)
4.去年暑假,我和家人去了甘肃,参观了那里的许多名胜古迹。(Tip:places of interest)
5.参加社团活动时,最重要的是与他人友好相处。(Tip:the most important thing is to.…)
6.寒假最后一天,我看了一部令人放松的电影。(Tip:At the end of)
◆句式升格
7.Students go on a trip.The trip can help students open their minds.(Tip:It's necessary for...;so that)
8.We meet many troubles on vacation.The beautiful scenery always makes us forget troubles.(Tip:No matter how
many troubles...)
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二阶典例探究明思路
(2024甘肃省卷)假期对学生来说是一段放松自己关心家人、充实自我的时
间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?根据以下思维导图提示,以“M
审题四要素:
Holiday Plans'”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的假期计划。
审体裁:记叙文
审人称:第一人称为主
Ending:
What are my hopes?
审时态:一般现在时为主
Body:
Will I get what holiday could
审要点:
What are my plans?
bring me?
How do my plans help
①假期的含义以及对于学
Beginning:
me be better?
生的意义;
What's holiday?
What's holiday for students?
My...Holiday Plans
②我的假期计划以及它们
如何使我变得更好;
③我的希望以及我在假期
的收获。
要求:1.补全题目;
2.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
My
Holiday Plans
空处应填形容词,如:
interesting,relaxing,wonderful,
exciting,...
②写作剖析
一、构思框架
引出主题一
1.A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from school and relax
Beginning
暑假的含义及
意义
(用“It's a chance to do sth..句型”写出假期带给学生的意义)
2.During my holiday,I plan to spend wonderful time with my family
(用“by doing sth.结构”写出我与家人之间的具体活动)
Body
介绍具体的
3.I also want to show my care for my parents by helping with household chores,
计划及好处
(用“such as'”列举出我所做的具体的家务活)
4.Additionally,I want to do much reading.
(用一句谚语或名言补充说明读书的好处)
5.I want to create lasting memories with my family.
Ending
总结假期
的收获
(用动词短语代替want进行表述)
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二、分阶范文
初阶范文
高阶范文
My Wonderful Holiday Plans
My Wonderful Holiday Plans
A holiday is a special time for
A holiday is a special time for students to take a break from
students to take a break.Students can
school and relax.It's a chance to enjoy some free time after working
enjoy free time on holidays.
hard in classes.
During my holiday,I plan to spend
During my holiday,I plan to spend wonderful time with my
wonderful time with my family.I also want
family by having picnics in the park,playing board games together
to show my care for my parents by helping
and cooking meals with my parents.I also want to show my care for my
with household chores.Additionally,I
parents by helping with household chores,such as washing dishes or
want to do much reading.Besides,
tidying up the house.Additionally,I want to do much reading.
travelling is another good choice for such Reading makes a full man.Besides,travelling is another good
a long holiday.If I have time,I also want choice for such a long holiday.If I have time,I also want to volunteer
to volunteer in our neighborhood.
in our neighborhood.
I want to stay with my family,
I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family,
reading more,learning new things,and reading more,learning new things,and showing more love to the
showing more love to the world during this
world during this holiday.By completing these plans with joy,I'm
holiday.I'm sure I'll feel happy this
sure I'll return feeling happy,connected,and ready for new
holiday.
experiences.
三阶,写作实战提能力
快节奏的数字生活易让人迷失方向,而沉淀心灵拓宽视野的真实体验正成为当代青少年成长的关键密
码。学校英语社团推出“探索世界,成长自我”的主题征文活动,请参考图文信息,以“A()
Travel
Experience”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1.短文应包括下图提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息;
4.词数:80左右。
What did you do?
Where did you go?
What do you think is the most important thing?
Where
Who
How
Who did you go with?
How did you feel?
A(n)
Travel Experience
168.Technology is important.For example,it lets us study online
easily.
9.He was late for school because there was a heavy traffic jam
on the road.
10.She saves money every month to buy a special gift for her
mom's birthday.
11.He learns English by watching English movies.
12.I'm Lucy,a primary school student who loves painting.
微技能五语言的丰富性
针对训练
1.We not only have classes but also take part in clubs.
2.I love English because it opens a window to different cultures
around the world.
3.I believe that hard work leads to success in the coming exam.
4.The girl who sits next to me always encourages me when I feel
down.
5.There is a small garden behind the library.
6.It's important for us to balance study and hobbies
7.Although the task is hard,I will try my best to complete it.
8.I practice speaking English every day so that I can
communicate with foreigners confidently.
9.The summer camp that I joined last year changed me a lot.
10.How wonderful the journey of growing up is!
11.It's no use arguing about these things all day.
12.I wonder how we can spread Chinese culture to the world
第二部分
高频
人与自我
主题1丰富、充实、积极向上的生活
一阶课本句型促写作
1.Last weekend,we had a great time flying kites in People's Park.
2.I love climbing mountains during the vacation because it
makes me feel relaxed.
3.It's better to go to the countryside with parents on weekends to
get close to nature.
4.Last summer vacation,I went to Gansu with my family and
visited many places of interest there.
5.When joining in club activities,the most important thing is to
get along well with others.
6.At the end of the winter holiday,I watched a relaxing movie.
7.It's necessary for students to go on a trip so that it can help
them open their minds.
8.No matter how many troubles we meet on vacation,the
beautiful scenery always makes us forget them.
二阶典例探究明思路
1.It's a chance to enjoy some free time after working hard in classes.
2.by having picnics in the park,playing board games together,
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effectively.
13.She has such a good memory that she can remember the
names of all the students in the school.
14.If you don't know the word,you can look it up in the
dictionary.
15.As soon as the rain stopped,they went to the playground.
16.It's believed that the more a person exercise,the healthier
he will be.
17.My friend asked me whether I would go to Beijing for my
holiday.
微技能六语言表达的逻辑性
针对训练
I.1.In my opinion,reading is one of the best ways to relax.
2.I didn't understand the problem until he explained it clearly.
3.Thanks to the good weather,we had a wonderful picnic in
the park.
4.On the one hand,study is important.On the other hand,
health is more important.
5.I started to learn painting this term.It makes me feel
relaxed.What's more,it helps me see the beauty in daily
life.
Ⅱ.主题1:l.first of all2.Then3.not only4.but also
5.Finally 6.In a word
主题2:l.because2.Compared with other festivals
3.For example 4.As far as I am concerned
主题三阶写作指导
and cooking meals with my parents
3.such as washing dishes or tidying up the house
4.Reading makes a full man
5.I look forward to creating lasting memories with my family
三阶写作实战提能力
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
Last summer,I had my most unforgettable travel
experience when I visited Guizhou with my family.It's a
beautiful city with amazing mountains and lovely village.We
visited the Miao village.The houses there were built on hills,
and the people wore colorful clothes.They sang so happily that
their voices filled the whole village when they danced for us.
During the trip,I thought the most important thing is to
protect the environment.It has become a great habit of ours to
always put our rubbish into bins instead of throwing it
everywhere.I felt proud to help keep the environment clean.
This trip made me know that travelling is not only for
having fun but also for protecting the environment.I hope that
more people will love this place when travelling.