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专题08 应用文写作
征文投稿
(23-24高三上·广东深圳宝安区·期末)你校英语报正在进行题为“My Greatest Happiness”的英语征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你最大的快乐;
2.你快乐的源泉。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Greatest Happiness
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【答案】参考范文
My Greatest Happiness
I love spending time with my family because it brings us closer together. I find I develop greater love for them as the years pass, despite our differences or disagreements. I can always depend upon them in times of difficulty. I love family dinners, which have always been the greatest happiness in my life. I love how everyone gets together and we talk over the meal. The conversation doesn’t have to be relevantly important; mostly we talk about our day and each other. Lots of laughter is involved and everyone feels loved and included. That’s what makes us so happy. Family is constant, and so is my happiness.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语报正在进行题为“My Greatest Happiness”的英语征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
依赖:depend upon→rely on
尽管:despite→in spite of
重要的:important→vital
快乐:happy→pleased
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I find I develop greater love for them as the years pass, despite our differences or disagreements.
拓展句:Although we sometimes disagree with each other, I find I develop greater love for them as the years pass.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I love spending time with my family because it brings us closer together. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] That’s what makes us so happy. (运用了what引导表语从句)
道歉信
(22-23高三上·广东深圳罗湖区·期末)假定你是李华, 你和你的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天展”, 但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件, 内容包括:
1.表示歉意:
2.解释原因:
3.你的期待。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I’m writing to tell you I cannot attend the China Space Exhibition to be held next Saturday with you. I am so sorry about my absence of the visit. Please excuse me for the inconvenience caused by me.
I was really excited when I got two tickets for the wonderful exhibition. I’ve already searched much information about this show to equip myself as a guide to you. Unfortunately, yesterday my English teacher invited me to take part in a Speech contest to be held next Saturday.
To make your trip there more fulfilled, I will recommend you several documentaries to help you learn more about China space industry. I hope you enjoy the trip yourself.
Apologize for my absence again!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华, 你和你的外国朋友Caroline约好了周六一起参加市里举办的“中国航天展”, 但因故不能赴约。请给她写封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
不幸:unfortunately→unluckily
充实的:fulfilled→contented
了解:learn about→know about
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make your trip there more fulfilled, I will recommend you several documentaries to help you learn more about China space industry.
拓展句:I will recommend you several documentaries to help you learn more about China space industry so that your trip can more fulfilled.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to tell you I cannot attend the China Space Exhibition to be held next Saturday with you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I was really excited when I got two tickets for the wonderful exhibition. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
发言稿
(一)
(24-25高三上·广东深圳宝安区·期末)你校将举办题为“My Reading Life”的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 阅读的重要性;
2. 你的阅读经历。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Reading Life
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】参考范文:
My Reading Life
Dear fellow students,
I am more than delighted to deliver a speech here. Reading is not just a pastime, but it’s also a gateway to knowledge and a bridge to empathy. It enriches our minds, broadens our perspectives, and fosters creativity. For me, reading has been a lifelong journey that began with fairy tales and has evolved into a passion for a wide diversity of literature. From the magic of Harry Potter to the wisdom of historical biographies, each book has been a stepping stone in my personal development.
Reading is a vital part of my life. It has taught me to dream, to question, and to understand the world beyond my immediate surroundings. It has been, and will continue to be, a cornerstone of my life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为“My Reading Life”的英语演讲比赛写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
演讲:speech→lecture
重要的:vital→essential
培养:foster→develop
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Reading is a vital part of my life. It has taught me to dream, to question, and to understand the world beyond my immediate surroundings.
拓展句:Reading is a vital part of my life because it has taught me to dream, to question, and to understand the world beyond my immediate surroundings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For me, reading has been a lifelong journey that began with fairy tales and has evolved into a passion for a wide diversity of literature. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Reading is not just a pastime, but it’s also a gateway to knowledge and a bridge to empathy. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
(二)
(24-25高三上·广东深圳罗湖区·期末)你校将组织一场主题为“沉默是否是金(Is Silence Golden?)”的英文辩论赛。请你写一篇辩论发言稿,内容包括:
1.你的观点;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Is Silence Golden?
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【答案】
Is Silence Golden?
Good morning, everyone!
I firmly believe that silence is golden. To begin with, silence allows us to listen actively and understand others better. Effective communication isn’t only about speaking, but also about listening attentively. What’s more, silence can prevent unnecessary conflicts. Sometimes, words spoken in haste can lead to misunderstandings or arguments. Lastly, silence provides us with moments of introspection, helping us think deeply and make wiser decisions. Last but not least, silence is indeed a valuable virtue worth embracing.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇关于“沉默是否是金”的辩论发言稿,陈述自己的观点与理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
允许:allow → permit
理解:understand → comprehend
提供:provide → offer
深思:introspection → reflection
2.句式拓展
变强调句型
原句:To begin with, silence allows us to listen actively and understand others better.
拓展句:To begin with, it is silence that allows us to listen actively and understand others better.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Effective communication isn’t only about speaking, but also about listening attentively. (运用了not only... but also... 连接并列结构)
[高分句型2] Sometimes, words spoken in haste can lead to misunderstandings or arguments. (运用了过去分词短语spoken in haste作定语)
(三)
(24-25高三上·广东深圳·期末)你班外教Peter课堂上让你们讨论“最有效的学习方法”。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 方法介绍;
2. 你的评价。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates,
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Thank you!
【答案】Dear Peter and classmates,
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method. While listening in class, we write down key points, important formulas and explanations. It helps us focus and review later. It enables us to have a clear record of what we’ve learned and easily review the details again.
I feel this method is like building a knowledge warehouse. It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to. It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge. It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿,介绍最有效的学习方法以及评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有效的:effective→efficient
专注:focus→concentrate
重要:important→vital
成就:accomplishment→achievement
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:It helps us focus and review later. It enables us to have a clear record of what we’ve learned and easily review the details again.
拓展句:Not only does it help us focus and review later, but also it enables us to have a clear record of what we’ve learned and easily review the details again.
【点睛】[高分句型1] While listening in class, we write down key points, important formulas and explanations. (运用了状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2] It enables us to have a clear record of what we’ve learned and easily review the details again. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
新闻报道
(24-25高三上·广东揭阳·期末)假设你是李华,上周五你校组织了一次关于“智能生活与人际交往”的主题沙龙活动。请给学校英语俱乐部公众号写一篇推文。内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Salon: Smart Living and Interpersonal Communication
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【答案】Salon: Smart Living and Interpersonal Communication
Last Friday witnessed a fascinating salon held by our school in the Lecture Hall, whose theme was “Smart Living and Interpersonal Communication”.
The event started with a lecture by a guest speaker on how technology impacts our social lives, from communication apps to virtual reality devices. We then discussed the pros and cons of social media, the significance of face-to-face interactions, and how technology can help us connect better. A highlight was the hands-on session where we experienced what it’s like to interact in a fully digital world.
In conclusion, the salon was a resounding success, leaving us with a deeper appreciation for the role of technology in our lives. Let’s continue this dialogue and apply what we’ve learned to enrich our daily interactions.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇推文,报道上周五学校组织的一次关于“智能生活与人际交往”的主题沙龙活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响:impact→influence
重要性:significance→importance
联系:connect→communicate
总之:in conclusion→in a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In conclusion, the salon was a resounding success, leaving us with a deeper appreciation for the role of technology in our lives.
拓展句:In conclusion, the salon was a resounding success, which left us with a deeper appreciation for the role of technology in our lives.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Friday witnessed a fascinating salon held by our school in the Lecture Hall, whose theme was “Smart Living and Interpersonal Communication”. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] A highlight was the hands-on session where we experienced what it’s like to interact in a fully digital world. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
征文投稿
(一)
(23-24高三上·广东江门·期末)你校英文报正在组织题为“My Understanding of Space Exploration”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括:
1. 太空探索的重要性;
2. 你的理由;
3. 举例说明。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Understanding of Space Exploration
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【答案】参考范文:
My Understanding of Space Exploration
In my opinion, space exploration is crucial for the progress and development of mankind. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, it expands our understanding of the universe and its origin, contributing to advancements in astronomy. In addition, it drives technological innovation and improves our everyday lives. Technologies like satellite communication and weather forecast have developed from space programs. Lastly, space exploration presents opportunities for future resource utilization.
We often benefit from space exploration. For example, when we go to an unfamiliar place, we always turn to GPS for help, and that is one of the achievements of space exploration. In a word, by investing in space exploration, we pave the way for a better future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在学校的校英文报正在组织题为“My Understanding of Space Exploration”的征文活动。请考生用英语写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:improve→promote
机会:chance→opportunity
进步:progress→advance
重要的:crucial→vital
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:At 4:00 on Monday afternoon, all of us set out for the school farm by bus to grow vegetables. Besides, we planted different kinds of trees in and around our school on Wednesday afternoon.
拓展句:At 4:00 on Monday afternoon, all of us set out for the school farm by bus to grow vegetables, after which we planted different kinds of trees in and around our school on Wednesday afternoon.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, it expands our understanding of the universe and its origin, contributing to advancements in astronomy.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】For example, when we go to an unfamiliar place, we always turn to GPS for help, and that is one of the achievements of space exploration.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
(二)
(24-25高三·广东清远清新区四校·期末)你校将举办英语征文比赛。请你以“The impact of technology on our lives”为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 分析利弊;
2. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The impact of technology on our lives
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【答案】The impact of technology on our lives is profound, with both benefits and drawbacks. Technology has greatly improved our efficiency, allowed for global communication, and enhanced our entertainment options. It has revolutionized the way we communicate, learn, work, and entertain ourselves. However, it has also led to issues such as eye strain, addiction, and privacy concerns. Balanced use is crucial to maximize its benefits as well as minimize its negative impacts. We must prioritize real-world interactions, protect our privacy, and ensure that technology does not overshadow our daily lives.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办英语征文比赛。要求考生以“The impact of technology on our lives”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响:impact → influence
选择:option → choice
至关重要的:crucial → essential/critical
确保:ensure → guarantee
2.句式拓展
原句:The impact of technology on our lives is profound, with both benefits and drawbacks.
拓展句:The impact of technology on our lives is profound, including both the numerous benefits it brings and the significant drawbacks it causes.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It has revolutionized the way we communicate, learn, work, and entertain ourselves.(运用了省略关系词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] We must prioritize real-world interactions, protect our privacy, and ensure that technology does not overshadow our daily lives.(运用了连接词that引导宾语从句)
(三)
邀请信
(23-24高三上·广东东莞·期末)假定你是李华,你校将举办主题为“科技改变生活”的科技节。你想邀请英国交换生朋友Peter来体验本次活动,请给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.活动内容安排。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How is everything going? The annual Science and Technology Festival with the theme of “Technology Changes Life” will be held in our school, and I’m writing to invite you to enjoy it with us.
As scheduled, the festival will be held next Friday afternoon in our school gymnasium. During the event, you will have access to a wide range of technology-related activities. An exhibition of students’ scientific works and a lecture on how technology changes our life will be the important parts of this event. Meanwhile, the interactive workshops will provide us with a unique chance to experience some latest inventions.
I assure you that the festival will impress you deeply. I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办主题为“科技改变生活”的科技节。就此考生邀请英国交换生朋友Peter来体验本次活动,由此要求考生写一封邮件发出邀请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
活动:event→ activity
同时:meanwhile→ at the same time
提供:provide sb with sth→ offer sb sth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the event, you will have access to a wide range of technology-related activities.
拓展句:During the event, you will have access to a wide range of technology-related activities, which are greatly meaningful and entertaining.
【点睛】【高分句型1】An exhibition of students’ scientific works and a lecture on how technology changes our life will be the important parts of this event.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I assure you that the festival will impress you deeply. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及一般将来时结构)
(四)
(23-24高三上·广东深圳龙岗区·期末)假如你是李华,学校计划每周利用一节体育课为学生开设烹饪等与生活技能相关的课程,校英文报正在征求学生意见。请给该报投稿,内容包括:
1.表达观点;
2.陈述理由;
3.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 9.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 9. I think it’s a good idea for our school to introduce cooking and life skills classes during one PE class per week. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, by learning basic life skills like cooking, we students can learn how to take care of ourselves and live independently, which are crucial for our future development. Besides, learning cooking and other life skills will encourage us to explore and experiment with different ingredients and techniques, allowing us to express ourselves and work together effectively.
My suggestion is that the school can make use of the after-school activities to make up for the reduced PE class. By offering more sports and exercise options during this time, students can still engage in physical activities and maintain a balanced lifestyle.
Hopefully, my suggestion will be taken into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生向校英文报投稿,就学校计划每周利用一节体育课为学生开设烹饪等与生活技能相关的课程给出自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:to begin with→ first of all
照顾:take care of→ look after
至关重要的:crucial→ critical
此外:besides→ what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, learning cooking and other life skills will encourage us to explore and experiment with different ingredients and techniques, allowing us to express ourselves and work together effectively.
拓展句:Besides, learning cooking and other life skills will encourage us to explore and experiment with different ingredients and techniques, which will allow us to express ourselves and work together effectively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, by learning basic life skills like cooking, we students can learn how to take care of ourselves and live independently, which are crucial for our future development.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】My suggestion is that the school can make use of the after-school activities to make up for the reduced PE class.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
(五)
(23-24高三上·广东·期末)假如你校英文报正在开展“More Housework, Less Pressure”主题征文活动,鼓励同学们参加家务劳动。请你写一篇征文。内容包括:
1. 陈述观点;
2. 分享经验;
3. 提出倡议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
More Housework, Less Pressure
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【答案】One possible version:
More Housework, Less Pressure
Undoubtedly, participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students. Firstly, it helps cultivate a sense of responsibility and independence. By taking care of our living environment, we learn to appreciate the efforts that it takes to maintain a clean and tidy home. Additionally, balancing academic responsibilities with household chores teaches us how to prioritize tasks and manage our time effectively.
I regularly assist my parents with tasks such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry. It allows me to develop practical life skills. Moreover, contributing to the household responsibilities reduces the burden on my parents and creates a harmonious atmosphere at home.
Let’s take the initiative to help our families and create a more harmonious living environment. Remember, by doing so, we can live a more balanced and fulfilling life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生写一篇短文,参加学校英文报开展的“More Housework, Less Pressure”主题征文活动,需陈述自己对于参加家务劳动的观点,分享自己做家务劳动的经验,并向同学们发出倡议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
许多:numerous→innumerable
培养:cultivate→develop/nurture
让某人可以做某事:allow sb. to do sth.→enable sb. to do sth.
减少:reduce→decrease
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students.
拓展句:There is no doubt that participating in housework can bring numerous benefits to students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] By taking care of our living environment, we learn to appreciate the efforts that it takes to maintain a clean and tidy home. (运用了动名词作宾语,that引导限制性定语从句,不定式作真正的主语)
[高分句型2] Additionally, balancing academic responsibilities with household chores teaches us how to prioritize tasks and manage our time effectively. (运用了动名词短语balancing…作主语)
求助信
(23-24高三上·广东深圳罗湖区·期末)假定你是李华。外教Hans要求你班同学做一个主题为“The story of an inspiring person”的小组项目。作为组长, 请你给Hans写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 项目设想;
2. 恳请指导。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
I am Li Hua, a student from class 5.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I’m Li Hua, a student from class 5. I am in charge of the group project titled “The Story of an Inspiring Person.” I’m writing to share our initial ideas and seek your invaluable guidance.
We aim to explore the story of an inspiring person, the obstacles they faced, and how they became a lighthouse of inspiration. For our presentation, we’re thinking of combining various elements like short videos, interactive timelines, and possibly a small drama piece, which are intended to make the presentation more engaging. Your knowledge in storytelling and understanding of different cultures is widely recognized, so we would greatly appreciate your guidance in choosing the right individual for our project, structuring our presentation to be both informative and attractive.
Thank you for considering our request. We eagerly waiting for your response and any suggestions you might have.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。外教Hans要求你班同学做一个主题为“The story of an inspiring person”的小组项目。作为组长, 请你给Hans写一封邮件, 内容包括:1. 项目设想;2. 恳请指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻求:seek→ask for
吸引人的:engaging→attractive
认可:recognize→acknowledge
考虑:consider→take into…account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am in charge of the group project titled “The Story of an Inspiring Person.”
拓展句:I am in charge of the group project which is titled “The Story of an Inspiring Person.”
【点睛】【高分句型1】We aim to explore the story of an inspiring person, the obstacles they faced, and how they became a lighthouse of inspiration.(运用了不定式作宾语,省略了引导词的定语从句和how引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】For our presentation, we’re thinking of combining various elements like short videos, interactive timelines, and possibly a small drama piece, which are intended to make the presentation more engaging.(运用了动名词短语作宾语,which引导非限制性定语从句)
告知分享信
(一)
(24-25高三上·广东汕头·期末)假定你是李华,上周参加了学校组织的“潮汕文化之旅”研学活动,请你写一封email给你的笔友Tom,分享此次活动,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.收获与感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Last week I went on an educational trip, Chaoshan Culture Tour, organized by our school.
The trip, aimed at helping students have a better understanding of Chaoshan Culture, involved a wide variety of activities, ranging from visiting the Chaoshan Historical Culture Expo Center and some historical and cultural sites to watching traditional folk performances like Yingge Dance and Dragon Dance. What impressed me most was that we made Hongtaoguos in person and enjoyed the “fruits” of our labours.
From this experience, I gained insight into the charm of Chaoshan Culture with growing affection for it.
Yous,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周参加了学校组织的“潮汕文化之旅”研学活动这一情况,写一封email给你的笔友Tom,分享此次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在做某事:aimed at doing→ intended to do
各种各样的:a variety of → all kinds of
获得:gained→ obtained
享受:enjoyed→ feasted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last week I went on an educational trip, Chaoshan Culture Tour, organized by our school.
拓展句:Last week I went on an educational trip, Chaoshan Culture Tour, which was organized by our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The trip, aimed at helping students have a better understanding of Chaoshan Culture, involved a wide variety of activities, ranging from visiting the Chaoshan Historical Culture Expo Center and some historical and cultural sites to watching traditional folk performances like Yingge Dance and Dragon Dance.(运用了分词作状语)
【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that we made Hongtaoguos in person and enjoyed the “fruits” of our labours.(运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句)
(二)
(24-25高三上·广东执信中学·期末)假如你是李华。近日,你所在的学习小组参加学校“走进中国传统文化”视频作品评选活动,获得一等奖。你的英国朋友Robert来信向你表示祝贺,并想了解你们小组的视频制作过程。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 小组制作视频作品的过程;
2. 你参加活动的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Robert,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version:
Dear Robert,
Thank you for your congratulations on our first prize in the “Exploring Traditional Chinese Culture” video competition. I’m thrilled to share with you the process behind creating our award-winning video.
To begin with, we carefully selected the topic of traditional Chinese calligraphy, after which we assigned specific tasks among our group members. Two of us focused on extensive research and script writing, while the rest took charge of capturing captivating footage and skillfully editing the video. Throughout the entire process, we maintained close collaboration and provided valuable feedback to one another.
From this experience, not only have I gained a more profound insight into traditional culture, but we also have showcased our creativity and outstanding teamwork skills. We are immensely grateful that our efforts eventually paid off. We hope to share our video with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Robert写一封回信,说明小组制作视频作品的过程以及参加活动的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动:thrilled→excited
比赛:competition→contest
首先:to begin with→first of all
优秀:outstanding→brilliant
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:We are immensely grateful that our efforts eventually paid off. We hope to share our video with you soon.
拓展句:Not only are we immensely grateful that our efforts eventually paid off, but also we hope to share our video with you soon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, we carefully selected the topic of traditional Chinese calligraphy, after which we assigned specific tasks among our group members. (运用了介词+关系代词结构引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] We are immensely grateful that our efforts eventually paid off. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(三)
(24-25高三上·广东深圳龙岗区·期末)假定你是李华,上周你班在郊区的金田村进行了两天劳动实践。请你给英国朋友Sam写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.你学到的技能;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sam,
Last week, my class had a two-day labor practice in Jin Tian Village in the suburbs.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
Last week, my class had a two-day labor practice in Jin Tian Village in the suburbs.
During the practice, we learned various skills such as planting vegetables, harvesting crops, and feeding livestock. It was a fulfilling experience that allowed us to better understand the hard work of farmers. Through this activity, I realized the importance of labor in our lives and developed a greater respect for those who work tirelessly to provide for us.
I feel both grateful and inspired to cherish the fruits of others’ labor.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。上周你班在郊区的金田村进行了两天劳动实践,要求考生给英国朋友Sam写一封邮件分享这次经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
学习:learn → acquire
活动:activity → event
重要性:importance → significance
尊重:respect → admiration
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I feel both grateful and inspired to cherish the fruits of others’ labor.
拓展句:I feel both grateful and inspired, which motivates me to value and appreciate the fruits of others’ hard work.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It was a fulfilling experience that allowed us to better understand the hard work of farmers.(it was+强调部分+that+剩余部分的强调句型)
[高分句型2]Through this activity, I realized the importance of labor in our lives and developed a greater respect for those who work tirelessly to provide for us.(who引导的定语从句)
(四)
(24-25高三上·广东华附实广雅深中四校·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jasper对你在“Guangzhou International Marathon”活动中担任志愿者的经历很感兴趣,希望了解更多。请你写一封邮件回复,内容包括:
1. 描述主要职责;
2. 分享活动收获。
注 意 :
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jasper,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jasper,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in my experience as a volunteer at the Guangzhou International Marathon. My main responsibility was to assist runners by providing water and guidance at various checkpoints.
It was a fulfilling experience that allowed me to meet many enthusiastic participants and learn about the importance of teamwork and dedication. I also gained valuable insights into event management and the spirit of sportsmanship. I improved my spoken English and made friends from various countries.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jasper回复一封邮件,讲述在“Guangzhou International Marathon”活动中担任志愿者的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→have an interest in
各种各样的:various→a variety of
重要性:importance→significance
宝贵的:valuable→precious
2.句式拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句:I improved my spoken English and made friends from various countries.
拓展句:Not only did I improve my spoken English but also made friends from various countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in my experience as a volunteer at the Guangzhou International Marathon.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It was a fulfilling experience that allowed me to meet many enthusiastic participants and learn about the importance of teamwork and dedication.(运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句)
建议信
(一)
(23-24高三上·广东梅州·期末)假定你是李华,你的外教Novak精通小提琴,而你擅长琵琶(Chinese lute),你想跟他互相学习。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.钦佩他的演奏;
2.提出互相学习。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Novak,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Novak,
I know you are good at playing the violin, and I was deeply impressed by your performance at the school evening party last time. I admire your playing skills very much. If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to learn to play the violin from you. I hear that you are also interested in Chinese musical instruments. It happens that I am good at Chinese lute. In return, I can share my playing skills with you. I hope you will consider my advice, which will be a win-win one.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Novak精通小提琴,而考生擅长琵琶,考生想跟他互相学习。请考生给他写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
擅长:be good at→ be skilled in
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ go in for
分享:share→ have a share in
建议:advice→ proposal
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to learn to play the violin from you.
拓展句:If convenient for you, I’d like to learn to play the violin from you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If it’s convenient for you, I’d like to learn to play the violin from you.(运用了If 引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I hear that you are also interested in Chinese musical instruments.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(二)
(23-24高三上·广东揭阳汕尾·期末)假定你是李华,你参加的选修课近期将组织一次校外实地考察,现就“A Field Trip to the City Museum or the Nature Park”在同学们中征求意见,请你给负责该课程的外教Brian写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的意向和理由;
2. 对活动的期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增添细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Brian,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文1:
Dear Brian,
As for the upcoming field trip organized for our elective course, visiting the City Museum would be a fantastic choice in my opinion.
Firstly, the City Museum offers a rich cultural experience, allowing us to appreciate the local culture and traditions. Moreover, with a wide range of artworks, and interactive displays, the museum provrides a unique learning opportunity for us. Furthermore, the trip would be enjoyable, which will create lasting fond memories.
I am eagerly looking forward to this field trip and believe that visiting the City Museum will greatly enrich our understanding of our city.
Best regards,
Li Hua
参考范文2
Dear Brian,
I’m writing to share my preference for the upcoming field trip organized for our elective course. Personally, I would love to visit the Nature Park.
Firstly, the Nature Park provides a peaceful environment where we can connect with nature and appreciate its beauty. Moreover, with various outdoor activities such as hiking trails and bird watching, it would be a wonderful chance for us to learn more about different wildlife. Finally, enjoying the fresh air and scenic views together with our classmates would be both relaxing and entertaining.
I am really excited about this field trip to the Nature Park. It would be a great way to appreciate the wonders of nature and bond with our classmates. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Best regards ,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华,你参加的选修课近期将组织一次校外实地考察,现就“A Field Trip to the City Museum or the Nature Park”在同学们中征求意见,请你给负责该课程的外教Brian写一封邮件,内容包括:1. 你的意向和理由;2. 对活动的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来:in my opinion→as fas as I’m concerned
极好的:fantastic→excellent
此外:Moreover→In addition
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As for the upcoming field trip organized for our elective course, visiting the City Museum would be a fantastic choice in my opinion.
拓展句:As for the upcoming field trip which will be organized for our elective course, visiting the City Museum would be a fantastic choice in my opinion.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, the trip would be enjoyable, which will create lasting fond memories.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I am eagerly looking forward to this field trip and believe that visiting the City Museum will greatly enrich our understanding of our city. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(三)
(23-24高三上·广东汕头·期末)假定你是李华,新的一年到了,你的英国好友Jim来信说他去年的新年计划未能落实,感到苦恼,向你询问按时实施计划的方法。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3. 参考词汇:新年计划 New Year resolution
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
In your last letter, you said that you failed to achieve your New Year resolutions and you felt upset. I understand your feelings as it’s not uncommon that people get stuck into such situation. However, with right approaches, you’re likely to succeed.
First, you should break your goals into smaller, manageable tasks and set realistic deadlines. Also, stay motivated by reminding yourself of the long-term benefits and keeping a positive mindset. Lastly, don’t be too hard on yourself and celebrate small wins.
If you follow those tips, I’m sure you’ll realize your next New Year resolutions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Jim写一封回信,对他去年的新年计划未能落实表示理解,并提出你的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
沮丧的:upset→depressed
不常有的:uncommon→unusual
陷入:get stuck into→get trapped into
对……严厉:be hard on→be strict with
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为强调句
原句:However, with right approaches, you’re likely to succeed.
拓展句:However, if you adopt right approaches, you’re likely to succeed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand your feelings as it’s not uncommon that people get stuck into such situation. (运用了as引导原因状语从句、it作形式主语以及that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】If you follow those tips, I’m sure you’ll realize your next New Year resolutions.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句以及省略连接词that的宾语从句)
道歉信
(23-24高三上·广东华南师范大学附属中学、实验中学、广雅中学、深圳高级中学四校·期末)假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩,你因故无法前往,请你回信表达歉意,内容包括:
1. 谢绝的理由;
2. 提议暑假去拜访他。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jerry,
Thanks for inviting me to London in the coming winter holiday. I’d love to visit you, but I’m sorry that I really cannot make it.
As you know, I am in Senior Three this year, which means I am in the middle of preparing for the college entrance examination to be held in the coming June. Therefore, I’m determined to make the best use of every minute I have, the holiday included, to improve my academic performance.
Additionally, the winter holiday lasts only for two weeks, a bit short for a trip abroad, so I’m considering rescheduling the trip for the coming summer holiday. What do you think of this plan?
Once again, I’d like to express my sincere apology. Looking forward to meeting you in London!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩,你因故无法前往给他回信表达歉意并说明自己的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此:therefore → hence
另外:additionally → in addition/besides
考虑:consider → think about
衷心的:sincere → heartfelt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What do you think of this plan?
拓展句:What do you think of the plan I put forward?
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, I am in Senior Three this year, which means I am in the middle of preparing for the college entrance examination to be held in the coming June.(运用了关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句和关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Therefore, I’m determined to make the best use of every minute I have, the holiday included, to improve my academic performance. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
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