专题03 写作通用表达（期末复习知识清单）九年级英语上学期仁爱科普版

专题03 写作通用表达 写作通用表达&范文背诵 话题一：成长与变化 从全国真题来看，该话题属于高频话题。其主要命题角度有：①介绍自身的成长变化；②他人的成长变化，包括家庭成员。 品德修养： 1. quality品质；人品 2. spirit精神 3. honesty诚实 4. kindness善良 5. admire钦佩 6. independent独立的 7. positive积极的 8. moral道德的 9. grateful感激的 10. behave politely举止文明 　　　　　 11. respect each other相互尊重 12. keep promises信守承诺 　　　　　 13. strong will坚强的意志 14. be friendly to对……友好 　　　　　 15. be responsible for对……负责 16. be patient with对……有耐心 　　　 17. be thankful to others感恩他人 18. be ready to help others乐于助人 　　　 19. never give up永不放弃 自我认识与提升： 1. influence影响 2. experience经验；经历 3. dare敢于 4. require需要 5. fail失败 6. silent不说话的；沉默的 7. helpful有帮助的 8. valuable宝贵的 9. seldom很少 10. deal with应对；处理 11. in public公开地 12. in person亲身；亲自 13. take pride in为……感到自豪 　　　14. be proud of为……骄傲 15. make plans制订计划 　　　　　 16. manage time管理时间 17. overcome challenges克服挑战 　　18. stick to doing sth.坚持做某事 19. achieve the goal实现目标 　　　　20. take… seriously认真对待…… 21. as long as只要 　　　　　 22. learn from mistakes从错误中学习 23. make progress取得进步 【佳句积累】 自我认识与提升 1. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school.为了赶上我的同学，我开始每天放学后练习跑步。 2. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to stick to exercising.无论我遇到了什么困难，我都竭尽全力坚持锻炼。 3. I find it important to keep a positive attitude when we're in trouble.我发现当我们遇到麻烦时，保持积极的态度很重要。 4. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.然而，我认为它是一个挑战，也是一个提高我的英语水平的好机会。 个人成长 5. I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public.我过去很害羞，不敢在公共场合表达自己。 6. But with the encouragement of my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.但是在老师的鼓励下，我不仅变得更加外向，而且与周围的人相处得很好。 7. Making and keeping promises plays an important role in our lives.许下承诺并信守承诺在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 8. Don't spend too much time on hard thinking because only action leads you to success.不要花太多时间苦思冥想，因为只有行动才能带你走向成功。 经典佳句 1.Along with our journey of life, we'll make plenty of personal changes. 伴随着我们的生活旅程，我们将会发生许多个人变化。 2.Instead of giving up, I chose to change.我没有放弃，而是选择了改变。 3.All in all, the biggest personal change I've made is the most valuable treasure in my life.总之，在我身上发生的最大的变化是我一生最珍贵的财富。 4.What really matters is that I have the courage to change and improve myself.真正重要的是我有了改变、完善自我的勇气。 习语和谚语 1.Nothing is impossible.一切皆有可能。 2.Learn to walk before you run.循序渐进。 3.Never underestimate your power to change yourself！永远不要低估你改变自我的能力！ 4. Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于空谈。 5. Bad luck often brings good luck.塞翁失马，安知非福。 6. A journey of a thousand li begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 生活中总有一些事在不经意间带给我们启迪，促使我们成长，改变了我们的行为处事方式，改变了我们对世界的认知，让我们受益良深。校刊以“One thing that changed my life”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1)哪件事改变了你； 2)它是如何改变你的； 3)你的感悟。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审作文 列提纲 写篇章 One thing that changed my life After our school had a policy of reducing the burden of the students and their family, my life changed a lot. In the past, I still had too much homework to do after school. Even worse, I had to stay at home to study at weekends. And I didn't have time to get some exercise and I couldn't do my favourite things. But now, I live a different life. I can finish my homework at school and I can join my favourite club. In my free time, I often do exercise with my friends. We usually play football or tennis together. I think the changes in our life are very good. I'm sure we will have a happy life in the future. 话题链接： 1．成长过程中，每个人都会发生变化。正如我们在Unit4中所认识的李文，他从一个问题学生变成了父母的骄傲。请你结合自身实际，谈谈自己过去和现在在性格、爱好、生活或学习方法等方面的变化，并分享你的感受。 写作要点： Useful expressions: 1. What did you use to be like? In the past, I used to be ... 2. How have you changed over the years? I have changed a lot. I ..., and I still ... 3. Your opinions about the changes. In my opinion, … 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实学校和人名； 3. 不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Everyone changes as they grow up, and so do I. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone changes as they grow up, and so do I. I’ve also experienced many changes. I want to share them with you. In the past, I used to be a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public and didn’t have many friends. I also didn’t like studying very much and often got low grades. But over the years, I have changed a lot. Now, I’m more outgoing. I enjoy talking with my classmates and taking part in school activities. As for my study, I’ve developed better learning methods. I can listen carefully in class and do my homework on time. I still like reading books, which helps me a lot. In my opinion, these changes are really good for me. They make me a better person. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题，简述过去的状态； 第二步、对比描述现在的变化，强调成长与进步； 第三步、表达对变化的看法和感受，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be曾经是 ②take part in参加 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] I still like reading books, which helps me a lot.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2．习总书记告诫青年人“艰难困苦，玉汝于成”。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。“精感石没羽，岂云惮险艰”，初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难的经历吗？请以“The harder, The better”为题，写一篇书面表达讲述你的一次经历和感悟。要求： （1）确定主题； （2）围绕主题，表达内容积极向上，有具体生动的事件； （3）词数80-100； （4）作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 提示问题：What was the difficulty? What did you do to get over the difficulty? What have you learned from it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The harder, The better During my second year of junior high, I struggled with math. Low scores made me anxious, but I refused to give up. Every day after school, I reviewed problems, asked my teacher for help, and practiced until midnight. There were moments of frustration, but I kept telling myself: “The harder it is, the stronger I’ll become.” Finally, my efforts paid off. In the final exam, my math score improved significantly! This experience taught me that difficulties are like sharpening stones—the more we push through, the brighter we shine. Now I truly understand: “The harder the challenge, the better we growth.” 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己遇到的问题； 第二步，具体阐述如何解决问题； 第三步，总结自己在这次经历中学到什么。 [亮点词汇] ①give up放弃 ②pay off得到回报 ③ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助 [高分句型] ①The harder it is, the stronger I’ll become. (the+比较级，the+比较级) ②This experience taught me that difficulties are like sharpening stones-the more we push through, the brighter we shine. (that引导的宾语从句) 3．艰难困苦，玉汝于成。每个人的成长都是种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。 “精感石没羽，岂云惮险艰”，初中以来你有过逆势前行、克服困难的经历吗？请以“How to get over difficulty”为题写一篇英语短文，讲述你的一次经历和感悟，写一篇不少于80字的短文。 内容提示： 1. What was your difficulty? 2. How did you get over (克服)it? 3. What have you learned from it? 写作要求： 1.短文需包含所有内容提示，可适当发挥； 2.结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难的； 3.文中不得出现个人真实信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to get over difficulty In junior high school, I once faced a big difficulty in learning English grammar. I just couldn’t understand those complex rules, and my grades in English tests kept dropping. To get over this difficulty, I first turned to my English teacher. She was very patient and explained the grammar rules to me in a more understandable way. Besides, I bought a grammar book and did exercises regularly. Every time I encountered a difficult problem, I would write it down and seek help from my teacher or classmates. Through these efforts, I gradually mastered the grammar knowledge. From this experience, I’ve learned that when facing difficulties, we should first have the courage to ask for help. Also, consistent efforts and a positive attitude are crucial. Only in this way can we overcome difficulties and make progress. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：这是一篇命题式记叙文，围绕“How to get over difficulty”这一主题，结合自身经历进行写作，属于个人成长感悟类文体。 时态：描述过去遇到的困难及克服过程用一般过去时；阐述从经历中得到的感悟用一般现在时。 提示：需涵盖遇到的困难、克服困难的方法、从中获得的感悟三方面内容，要点齐全，可适当发挥，同时注意词数和避免出现个人真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步、表明写作意图：题目已给定，直接进入主题阐述。 第二步、具体阐述写作内容：通过描述具体的困难，为了解决困难找到了解决的问题办法，并从中获得感悟。 第三步、书写结语：自然收尾，强调克服困难取得进步的要点。 [亮点词汇] face面对 complex复杂的 turn to求助于 consistent持续的 [高分句型] I just couldn’t understand those complex rules, and my grades in English tests kept dropping. (并列句) Only in this way can we overcome difficulties and make progress. (倒装句) 4．成长伴随我们一生，无论是在容貌、习惯、爱好、个性还是学业方面，每个人都在不断变化着。在这过程中，我们一直在体验成长和自我完善。请你围绕上述内容简要描述一下自己进入初三以来的一些变化，包含自我感悟或收获，以“I Have Changed”为题写一篇英语作文。(80词左右，文中不得出现与考生相关的姓名、校名等信息) I Have Changed Everyone goes through different changes over time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Have Changed Everyone goes through different changes over time. Since I entered Grade 9, I have noticed many changes in myself. I used to be a short and shy boy, but now I’m much taller and more outgoing than before. I like doing exercise very much and I used to play soccer with my classmates after class. However, I’m so busy with my homework now that I can just play it on weekends. I also have great changes in my study habits. Because of my poor preparation, I always got unsatisfactory grades which lowered my confidence. However, I realized that these habits needed changing if I wanted to succeed. I started organizing my schedule well and arranging specific time for each subject. Gradually, my grades improved, and I became more confident in my abilities. These experiences taught me the value of discipline and time management, allowing me to become a better student. I now believe that these changes can lead to great achievements in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时和一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题； 第二步，具体从外貌、生活习惯、学习等方面阐述自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语，谈谈对未来的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do过去常常做 ②because of因为 ③the value of……的价值 ④in the future在未来 [高分句型] ①I’m so busy with my homework now that I can just play it on weekends. (so…that引导的结果状语从句) ②I always got unsatisfactory grades which lowered my confidence. (which引导的定语从句) ③I realized that these habits needed changing if I wanted to succeed. (that引导的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句) 5．青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。 要求： （1）短文必须包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Appearance: thin and short Personality: a little bit shy Hobby: … Ability: … Appearance: strong and tall Personality: more outgoing Hobby: … Ability: … How I’ve Changed! In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot both physically and mentally. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I’ve Changed! In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot both physically and mentally. I used to be thin and short. But now I’m tall and strong. And I’m a brave and outgoing student. However, I was a little bit shy before. My hobby has changed, too. I used to play computer games on weekends. But now I spend much time playing basketball with my friends. Besides, my English has improved a lot. I used to be afraid of speaking English. Later I tried to listen more and speak more. Now I even dare to make speeches in public in English. The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. What’s more, reading makes me happy and relaxed. What great changes! And I hope I can become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍过去到现在自己在外貌、个性、爱好和能力方面的变化； 第二步，介绍最重要的一个变化，并谈谈这个变化给自己的启发； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ① used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ② spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事 ③ be afraid of 害怕 ④ in English 用英语 [高分句型] ① I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books.（so ... that引导的结果状语从句） ② It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading.（because引导的原因状语从句） 话题二：居住环境 ★话题命题角度 “居住环境”类书面表达从全国真题来看，该话题属于高频话题。该话题可从以下角度进行命题：1.介绍自己的居住环境，如乡村、城市环境等；2.居住地过去和现在的环境对比 ★话题佳句记背 家乡位置环境 1.My hometown stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. 我的家乡坐落在一条宽阔的河边，盛产鱼和大米。 2.Our city is beautiful and is famous for many places of interest. 我们的城市很漂亮，并以许多名胜古迹而闻名。 3.This is a city with a long history， and it attracts plenty of tourists every year. 这是一座历史悠久的城市，每年吸引大量游客。 4.Compared with the country， I prefer to live in the city because the city has beautiful scenery and convenient traffic. 比起乡村，我更喜欢住在城市，因为城市风景优美，交通便利。 过去现在环境对比 1.In the past， there were only narrow and dirty streets in the village. But now the streets are becoming wider， cleaner and tidier. 过去，村子街道狭窄、肮脏。但现在街道变得更宽阔、更干净、更整洁。 2.Another great change is that there are more high buildings on both sides of the streets in the town. 另一个巨大变化是城镇的街道两旁有更多的高楼大厦。 3.There used to be a dirty river where people threw rubbish. The government has taken action to deal with water pollution. 过去河水很脏，人们总往河里扔垃圾。政府已经采取行动治理水污染。 4.Thanks to the government， the sky is becoming bluer and the water is becoming clearer than before. 多亏了政府，天空变得更蓝了，水变得比以前更清澈了。 看法建议重要性 1.I’m very glad to see the amazing changes in my town. 我很高兴看到家乡这些惊人的变化。 2.To cut down air pollution， we should take the bus or subway instead of driving. 为了减少空气污染，我们应该乘公交或地铁而不是开车。 3.It’s time for us to understand the importance of protecting the environment and do something for it. 我们是时候了解保护环境的重要性并为之做些什么了。 4.We can turn off the lights when we are not using them. 当我们不用灯的时候，我们可以关掉它们。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1.Luoyang is the place where I was born and grew up. 洛阳是我出生和长大的地方。 2.The places of interest like the Longmen Grottoes and Baiyun Mountain are well worth visiting. 像龙门石窟和白云山这样的名胜很值得一游。 3.If you expect to have a taste of delicious food， it is really a good place that you can’t miss. 如果你想品尝美味的食物，它真的是一个你不能错过的好地方。 4.One reason I like living here is that there is not much traffic here. 我喜欢住在这里的一个原因就是这里的车不多。 5.The thing touches me most is that the environment here has improved greatly. 最触动我的一件事就是这里的环境得到了很大的改善。 中间段 In the past， the river here was dirty and the sky was gray. But now， the living conditions have improved a lot. The roads are wider and the trees are greener. Tall buildings can be seen here and there and people now live a better life. 过去， 这里河水很脏， 天空也是灰暗的。但是现在， 生活条件改善了很多。道路变得更宽阔了，树木也变得更绿了。高楼大厦随处可见， 人们的生活更好了。 结尾段 1.If everyone makes an effort， the environment will become better and it will become a more comfortable place to live. 如果每个人都能做出贡献，环境会变得更好，这里也会变成一个更舒服的居住地。 2.I hope more trees will be planted here and we will live a greener life. 我希望这里能种植更多的树，我们可以过更加环保的生活。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.East or west， home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自己的草窝。 2.Home is where the heart is. 家是心之所在。 3.A good neighbor is better than a brother far off. 远亲不如近邻。 4.A man’s home is his castle. 一个人的家就是他的城堡。 5.Clear waters and green mountains are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver. 绿水青山就是金山银山。 6.Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.保护环境就是保护我们自己。 7.Prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。 　　每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下写作要点和写作要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。 1.写作要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境； 2）你喜欢这个环境的什么； 3）你对这个环境有何期望。 2.写作要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 What I like about where I live ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：我生活的环境，我喜欢的原因，我对它的期望等； 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称； 3.时态：讲述现在的环境及喜欢的原因，用一般现在时；如果涉及讲述过去的环境及条件，用一般过去时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 What I like about where I live I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from 　(亮点点评：形容词短语作状语)　other cities， it has no much tall buildings or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for 　(亮点点评：be late for短语)　their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.　(亮点点评：what引导的表语从句)　 However， my city has her problems. She has no high－speed rail station. I hope she will soon have one so that 　(亮点点评：I hope...和so that...句型)　I can travel to other cities more easily！ 话题链接： 1．安静的居住环境有助于提升人们的生活质量，促进身心健康。为了给大家创设一个更好的居住氛围，请你以社区志愿者的身份，结合下面图示信息，根据写作要求，用英语写一封倡议信，向社区报刊的英文栏目投稿。 要求： 1）文中须包含下图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：residents居民，noise-proof windows隔音玻璃 Dear residents, To create a quiet living environment for everyone, I would like to share some suggestions here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s join hands to build a better living place for all of us. Best regards, A Volunteer 【答案】例文 Dear residents, To create a quiet living environment for everyone, I would like to share some suggestions here. Firstly, installing noise-proof windows can significantly reduce external noise, making our homes more peaceful. Secondly, we should be mindful of the volume of our music and TV, especially during late hours, to avoid disturbing our neighbors. Additionally, volunteering in community activities can help foster a sense of unity and cooperation among residents. Lastly, establishing and adhering to community rules regarding noise levels will ensure a harmonious living environment for all. Let’s join hands to build a better living place for all of us. Best regards, A Volunteer 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍建议； 第二步，为了给大家创设一个更好的居住氛围，具体介绍建议的相关内容； 第三步，发出呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①be mindful of注意 ②avoid避免 ③adhering to遵守 [高分句型] Additionally, volunteering in community activities can help foster a sense of unity and cooperation among residents.（动名词作主语） 2．未来有无限种可能，科技正在改变一切。你认为人类未来的生活会是怎么样的呢？请你以“The future life”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文，畅想一下人类未来的生活。 要点： 1）人类未来的生活、工作情况； 2）人类未来的居住环境和交通方式等； 3）你对人类未来生活的看法。 要求： 1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 The future life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The future life With the development of technology, our life in the future will be quite different from what it is like now. As far as I can imagine, there will be a robot in every family. This kind of robot will be so smart that it can do everything from housework to all kinds of activities. In the future, we will be able to travel around the world. The moon will become one of the best places that we will visit. Because of the fast development of our society, many work can be done by computers or even robots. Lots of things are fully automated. Humans just need to give some simple instructions to complete complicated tasks. We will build our houses in the sea so that we can plant more trees on the surface of the earth and the environment will be greatly improved. As for transportation, we will see a kind of environmentally friendly car. It will be powered by some clean energy instead of gas, and it can run by itself without any driver. What an enjoyable life! I hope the day will come soon. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍未来的生活和现在会有很大的不同； 第二步，具体介绍人类未来的生活、工作情况、居住环境和交通方式等； 第三步，介绍自己对人类未来生活的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of…随着……的发展 ②be different from…和……不同 ③as far as就……而言 ④as for至于 ⑤environmentally friendly环保的 [高分句型] ①As far as I can imagine, there will be a robot in every family. （there be句型） ②We will build our houses in the sea so that we can plant more trees on the surface of the earth and the environment will be greatly improved. （so that引导状语从句） 3．近些年，在党和国家惠民政策的帮助下，广元发生了翻天覆地的变化。 请以 “Great Changes in My Hometown”为题，结合以下要点写一篇英语短文。 写作要点：1. 生活水平（穿着和日常饮食）； 2. 居住环境（住房及配套设施）； 3. 公共交通（道路和出行方式）。 写作要求：1. 短文须包含以上要点，可适当增加内容，不得出现真实姓名和地名； 2. 卷面整洁，书写工整，语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯； 3. 字数不少于80词。标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown with the help of the government. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown with the help of the government. First of all, people live a better life. People start to care about their clothes. When they work, they often wear smart clothes. But in their free time, they wear the clothes they like. As for the food, people prefer vegetables and fruits. They hope to live healthier lives. Secondly, the environment becomes more and more beautiful. Tall buildings can be seen everywhere and many people build their own new houses in the countryside. There are fewer factories and less pollution. The sky is bluer, the water is clearer, and the trees are greener. The roads are wider and the public transport has become more convenient. There are airports, highways and high-speed railway stations in my hometown. Every year, thousands of people from China or other countries come to visit my hometown, Guangyuan. I am proud of our hometown. I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主。 ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，写作时一定要包含所给出的三个写作要点，条理要清晰，语句要通顺、正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍生活水平的变化，必须包括穿着和日常饮食两方面； 第二步，介绍居住环境的变化，必须包括住房和配套设施两方面； 第三步，介绍公共交通的变化，必须包括道路和出行方式两方面； 第四步，发表感想或表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① first of all 首先 ② in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间 ③ more and more beautiful 越来越漂亮 ④ be proud of 为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] ① When they work, they often wear smart clothes.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② Tall buildings can be seen everywhere and many people build their own new houses in the countryside.（and并列句） 4．假如你是李华，最近你所在小区附近一处堆满了垃圾，人们随意将垃圾扔到那里，严重污染了环境。请你以“Have a better living environment”为题，用英语写一篇短文，呼吁人们立即行动起来，爱护社区居住环境。 内容包括： ●The bad environment in the neighborhood ●Take action to have a better living environment 要求：1.词数不少于 80词； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Have a better living environment _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Have a better living environment Recently I’ve found lots of rubbish in our neighborhood. The rubbish smells so bad that I want to leave the place as quickly as possible. In the past, there were trees and flowers on this piece of land. But now the environment is polluted. It has a terrible effect on people’s life. In my opinion, the government should clear out the rubbish as soon as possible. The rubbish pollutes the air. It’s bad for people’s health. Plants such as grass and flowers should be grown on the open ground. Everyone that lives there should throw rubbish in the right place, so that we can be in good health and have a better living environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍附近的恶劣环境； 第二步，介绍如何采取行动，创造更好的生活环境； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of rubbish很多垃圾 ②clear out清理 ③as soon as possible尽快 ④be bad for有害 [高分句型] ①The rubbish smells so bad that I want to leave the place as quickly as possible.（so…that句型） ②Everyone that lives there should throw rubbish in the right place, so that we can be in good health and have a better living environment.（so that句型） 5．假如你是七年级学生Bill，请根据提示，以“My Living Environment”为标题，根据要点，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的居住环境，内容可适当发挥。 要点： 1. 住在市中心的一个公寓套房里，家里有四个房间，最喜欢的房间是书房； 2. 公寓楼对面有银行、饭馆和商店； 3. 学校离你家大约三公里，乘坐公交车去学校。 My Living Environment ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Living Environment Hello, I am Bill. I live in an apartment. It is in the center of the city, but it’s not noisy. I like living there. My home is on the third floor of the building. There are four rooms in my home. I like the study best. My sister and I usually enjoy reading books and watch movies there. Life is easy here. There is a bank, a restaurant and some shops across from my apartment building. How far is it from my home to school? It’s about three kilometers. There is a bus stop near my home, so I usually take a bus to school. I have an easy life here! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文。 ②时态：一般现在时态。 ③提示：作文要点已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，将要点中的汉语翻译成英文，注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，不能逐词翻译。 第二步，适当的添加一些词汇、短语和句型，使句子连贯。比如解释一下为什么最喜欢的是书房，这样会使文章内容更加丰富、完整。 第三步，添加适当的开头和结尾，比如表达出对于居住环境的满意。 [亮点词汇] ① in the center of  在……中心 ② on the third floor 在三楼 ③ across from 在……对面 [高分句型] ①There are four rooms in my home. （“There be句型”表示“某地有某物”） ②How far is it from my home to school?（“How far”对距离提问） ③There is a bus stop near my home, so I usually take a bus to school.（“take a bus to...”表示“坐公交车去……”） 话题三：环境保护 【词汇积累】 自然生态 1. nature自然 2. mountain高山 3. island岛 4. desert沙漠 5. season季节 6. climate气候 7. weather天气 8. animal动物 9. plant植物 10. endangered濒危的 11. wild野生的 12. ecosystem 生态系统 13. natural wonder自然奇观 14. food chain食物链 15. live on以……为食 环境问题 1. environment环境 2. energy能源 3. rubbish/litter/waste垃圾 4. pollution污染 5. cause造成 6. destroy破坏 7. influence影响 8. plastic塑料的 9. serious严重的 10. climate change气候变化 　　　　　　　11. greenhouse effect温室效应 12. global warming 全球变暖 13. air/water/soil/noise pollution空气/水/土壤/噪音污染 14. cut down砍伐 　　　　　　　 15. lead to导致 16. die out灭绝 　　　　　　　 17. be harmful to对……有害 环保措施 1. environmental friendly环保的 2. measure措施 3. protect保护 4. reuse重复使用 5. recycle回收利用 6. reduce减少 7. waste sorting垃圾分类 8. turn off关掉 9. call on号召；呼吁 10. put sth. to good use好好利用某物 　　　　　 11. make a difference有影响 12. take an active part in积极参与 　　　　　　　13. take action采取行动 14. try one's best尽某人最大努力 　　　　　　　15. play a role/part in 参与；发挥作用 常用好句 环境问题 1. Nowadays, our environment is becoming worse and worse.如今，我们的环境越来越糟糕。 2. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.空气污染非常严重，因为现在路上有更多汽车。 3. Even the bottom of the river was full of rubbish, and there were no more fish for fishermen to catch.就连河底也满是垃圾，渔民再也捕不到鱼了。 4. People often use things once and then throw them away, or leave them on the ground as litter. This causes mountains of rubbish and pollutes our land and seas.人们经常用一次东西就把它们扔掉，或者把它们当作垃圾扔在地上。这导致了堆积如山的垃圾，污染了我们的陆地和海洋。 环保措施 5. To cut down air pollution, we are supposed to take the bus or subway instead of driving.为了减轻空气污染，我们应该坐公共汽车或地铁而不是开车。 6. You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.你可以在离开房间时关灯来省电。 7. Recycling is a good way to help reduce pollution.回收利用是帮助减轻污染的好方法。 号召大家采取行动 8. Everyone in this town should play a part in cleaning it up！这个镇上的每个人都应该参与清理工作！ 9. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future！ 我们齐心协力就能带来变化，创造更加美好的未来！ 10. In a word, we should take action to make our school greener and cleaner.总之，我们应该采取行动让我们的学校更环保、更干净。 11. Only by working together, can we make the earth a better place.只有我们共同努力，才能让地球变得更美好。 俗语谚语 1. Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于空谈。 2. One more green, one more healthy.多一份绿色，多一份健康。 3. Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.绿水青山就是金山银山。 4. Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.保护环境就是保护我们自己。 “绿色”不仅仅是一种颜色，也意味着一种低碳环保的生活方式。请你以“My greener life”为题，根据写作要求为学校的公众号写一篇英语短文分享你的绿色生活。 写作要求：1)介绍你是如何践行绿色生活方式的，并简单谈谈你的感悟与收获； 2)你未来还打算做些什么； 3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My greener life Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【成文】 My greener life Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. ①It's necessary for us to have a greener life. ②To live a greener life, I often ride bicycles to school instead of taking a car. I turn off the lights when I leave rooms. I never throw away the rubbish everywhere. Thanks to the lifestyle, I have learned the importance of environment protection. It helps save energy, reduce pollution and waste. Besides, I've also got a lot of knowledge about it such as how to sort litter, how to keep a greener diet and so on. ③What's more, it makes me healthier and happier than before. In the future, I will call on more people to have a greener life. ④Only in these ways, can we build a greener society. 加分亮点 ①句使用“It's ＋adj. ＋ for sb. to do sth.”句型阐述践行绿色生活方式的必要性，增加文章句型多样性； ②句使用动词不定式作目的状语，进而描述自己践行绿色生活方式的做法，行文自然流畅； ③整段使用besides, what's more等连接，使语篇内容更具整体性、逻辑更连贯； ④句使用倒装句强调践行绿色生活方式的重要性，使文章表达更为出彩。 话题链接： 1．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下如何才能创建绿色城市，并谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1.骑车或坐公交车出行，减少空气污染： 2.垃圾入箱，保持城市清洁； 3.多种树木，保护自然环境： 4.不用纸巾和塑料袋，减少白色污染； 5.你的看法。 注意事项： 1.短文词数：80左右，短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数； 2.短文必须包含以上提示内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 参考词汇：paper napkin纸巾 plastic塑料 The Green City, the Healthy Life As a citizen (公民) of Liaocheng, it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Green City, the Healthy Life As a citizen of Liaocheng, it’s our duty to build a green city and live a healthy life. First, we can ride bikes or take buses instead of driving to reduce air pollution. Second, always throw rubbish into bins to keep the city clean. Third, plant more trees to protect the natural environment. Also, avoid using paper napkins and plastic bags to reduce white pollution. In my opinion, everyone’s small actions matter. By working together, we can create a greener and healthier city for all. Let’s take steps today and make a difference tomorrow 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍创建绿色城市的具体措施，并谈谈你的看法。。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①ride bikes骑自行车 ②instead of 代替…… ③take steps采取措施 ④make a difference起作用、有影响 [高分句型] ①Also, avoid using paper napkins and plastic bags to reduce white pollution. (动词不定式做目的状语) ②Let’s take steps today and make a difference tomorrow (Let’s开头的祈使句) 2．近年来，我国日益重视环境保护，积极践行“青山绿水就是金山银山”的环保新理念。4月22日是世界环境日，你们志愿社团想借此契机，加强学生的环保意识。假如你是付兴，请你写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们参与周末的“Volunteer to Clean in the Neighborhoods”活动。 请包括以下要点： （1）环境保护的重要性； （2）活动的具体内容； （3）号召参与。 要求：字数80-100；语言准确，逻辑清晰，行文流畅。 Dear students, I’m Fu Xing, a member of the school’s volunteer club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 【答案】例文 Dear students, I’m Fu Xing, a member of the school’s volunteer club. As World Environment Day approaches, I want to talk about why protecting our planet matters. Clean air, fresh water and green spaces are treasures we must protect for future generations. This Saturday, our “Volunteer to Clean in the Neighborhoods” activity will start at 9 a.m. at the school gate. We’ll pick up litter, sort recyclables, and plant flowers in public areas. Gloves and tools will be provided. Remember: Small actions create big changes! By working together, we can make our community greener. Let’s take action this weekend! Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干的要点，说明环境保护的重要性，介绍周末环保活动的具体内容； 第三步，号召大家积极参与，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up捡起 ②want to do想要做某事 [高分句型] ①As World Environment Day approaches, I want to talk about why protecting our planet matters.（宾语从句） ②Let’s take action this weekend! （祈使句） 3．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，你校开展了以“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点。 现状 ◆空气污染严重 ◆树木砍伐严重 …… 建议 ◆骑车出行，减少空气污染 ◆垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁 ◆多种树木，保护自然环境 …… 要求：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思连贯，语句通顺； 2．词数80—120词之间；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. Now the air pollution on earth is very serious, and a lot of trees are being cut down. As a citizen, it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment. In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍环境现状； 第二步，说明我们从哪些方面建设绿色城市； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①reduce air pollution减少污染 ②keep our city clean保持城市干净 ③turn off the lights关灯 ④In my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. (so that引导目的状语从句) ②Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. (when引导时间状语从句) 4．6月5日（June 5）是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment?”为题写一篇短文。 提示：存在问题： 1. 水污染越来越严重； 2. 砍伐森林严重； 3. 大气污染严重； 4. 白色垃圾等。 写作要求：①词数：80词左右； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 How to protect our environment? As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Water pollution is becoming worse and worse and people are cutting down trees every day. In some places, we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Plastic products seriously pollute the environment. What’s worse, the air pollution is more and more serious. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do to protect our environment? We should protect water resources and forests. What’s more, we can go to school on foot or by bike. We can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping as well. Besides, we can use both sides of the paper when we write. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. We only have one earth. I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“如何保护环境”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述环境问题及保护措施； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①worse and worse越来越差 ②in a word总之 ③pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①We can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping as well.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope everyone will protect our environment well. （宾语从句） 5．日本政府于日前表示将逐步把数吨经过处理的福岛第一核电站废水排放到海洋中受到多方谴责。保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。 假如你是李华，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。 提示词语：reduce, reuse, recycle, energy, plant, happy 环境问题 不关灯、不关水龙头、资源浪费、乱扔垃圾、森林砍伐严重、工厂排污水、污气、汽车尾气…… 采取措施 节约水电、绿色出行、绿色购物、回收利用…… 感想 自己的感受——责任、必要、自豪，以及对世界的巨大影响…… 要求： 1. 必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数90左右，短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. Some people waste water, food, and other things. As a student, I always remember these three words: reduce, reuse, recycle. For example, I turn off the lights when I leave the room and I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. I don’t use paper cups in my daily life. We often collect plastic bottles in our classroom. What’s more, I always take a bus to school instead of asking my parents to drive me. I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，写作时可直接写环境问题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“你周边的环境问题”、“采取措施”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，写自己的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①pay attention to关注 ②For example例如 ③turn off关闭 ④brush one’s teeth刷牙 ⑤What’s more更多的是 ⑥make a difference to对……有影响 [高分句型] ①For example, I turn off the lights when I leave the room and I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. (when引导时间状语从句) ②I feel happy to do these things, because I believe if everyone of us does a little, we will make a difference to our environment. (because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句) 话题四：语言学习 【词汇积累】 学习方面的困难 1. challenge挑战 2. grammar语法 3. understand理解 4. fail失败；未能(做到) 5. hard/difficult困难的 6. upset苦恼的 7. reading speed阅读速度 　　　　8. be poor at/weak in不擅长…… 9. be/get stressed out心力交瘁 　　10. be afraid of害怕…… 11. make mistakes犯错误 　　　　12. have trouble/problems doing sth.做某事有困难 学习方法与策略 1. method方法 2. skill技能；技巧 3. suggestion建议 4. prepare准备 5. discuss讨论 6. repeat重复 7. review复习 8. practice练习 9. mind map思维导图 10. take notes做笔记 　　　　 11. make a plan制订计划 12. the secret to ……的秘诀 　　　　 13. write down写下；记下 14. look up查阅 　　　　 15. take part in/join in参加 16. be helpful to对……有用 　　　　 17. follow one's advice采纳某人的建议 18. ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 　 19. pay attention to注意 感悟与收获 1. exam考试 2. ability 能力 3. grade年级；成绩等级 4. experience经历；经验 5. memorize/remember记住 6. pass通过 7. improve改进；提高 8. confident自信的 9. successfully成功地 10. have a better understanding of对……有更好的理解 　　11. be good at擅长 12. develop the good habit of养成……的好习惯 　　　　　13. make progress取得进步 【佳句积累】 学习方面的困难 1. I find it difficult to get the meaning while listening to the dialogue. 我发现自己在听对话的时候很难理解意思。 2. I was afraid to ask questions because of my poor pronunciation. 因为我的发音不好，所以我不敢提问。【RJ九全U1】 3. My handwriting is so bad that I never get high grades in writing. 我的字写得不好看，以至于我从来没有在写作上得过高分。 学习方法与策略 4. The more you speak English, the better your spoken English will be. 你英语说得越多，你的英语口语就会越好。 5. You should take notes so that you can review what you have learned in class. 你应该记笔记，这样你就可以复习你在课堂上学到的东西。 6. It's useful to review words and articles by listening to a tape and repeating out loud. 通过听录音带和大声复述来复习单词和文章是很有用的。 7. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot.我认为独自学习确实是一个很好的方式，它会使我受益匪浅。 感悟与收获 8. With the help of John, I have made great progress in playing ping­pong. 在约翰的帮助下，我在打乒乓球上有了很大的进步。 9. One of the most important things I have learned is how to make better use of the computer.我学到的最重要的事情之一就是如何更好地利用电脑。 10. These ways can not only improve my listening and speaking skills, but also develop my reading ability. 这些方法不仅可以提高我的听说技能，还可以培养我的阅读能力。 11. I learned a lesson that team work plays an important role in achieving success. 我吸取了一个教训，即团队合作在取得成功中起着重要的作用。 在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group？”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Studying alone Studying with a group ◇solve problems on my own ◇get help from others ◇keep my mind on schoolwork ◇share ideas with group members 　　写作要求：1. 文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.___________ ____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【成文】 Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. ①As for me, I like studying alone better. ②Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. ③Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. ④In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life. 加分亮点 ①句以as for me作为开头，自然而然地引出作者所喜欢的学习方式，逻辑流畅合理； ②句使用动名词作主语，说明作者喜欢独自学习的第一个理由，使文章表达更为丰富； ③句使用when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句，具体说明独自学习的其他益处，使文章内容具体充实； ④句以介词短语in this way作为开头，展望独自学习会给作者带来的影响，使文章逻辑更为严密完整。 话题链接： 1．学好英语的条件之一是科学的方法。请你以“The Change(s) in My English Learning Way(s)”为主题，写一篇短文向英语杂志社投稿。 内容： 1. 你英语学习方法有什么变化； 2. 学习方法的改变给你带来的影响。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 The Changes in My English Learning Ways In the past, I just memorized words and grammar rules, which made English learning boring and inefficient. However, I have made some changes recently. Now, I learn English by watching English movies, listening to English songs, and practicing speaking with friends. These methods help me remember words better. The changes have brought me great benefits. My English has improved a lot, and I find learning English more enjoyable. I am also more confident in speaking English. I believe that using scientific methods is the key to learning English well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、描述过去的低效方法； 第二步、介绍近期的方法改变，列举具体新方式，体现“科学方法”的主题； 第三步、阐述变化带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①grammar rules语法规则 ②practicing speaking练习口语 ③scientific methods科学方法 [高分句型] In the past, I just memorized words and grammar rules, which made English learning boring and inefficient.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 2．英语学习之路总在不断变化与成长。请结合自身经历以“My Changes in Learning English”为题写一篇短文，描述你英语学习中的今昔变化；回忆过去学习的困扰，分享自己有效的学习方法，学习能力的转变以及取得的进步，最后谈谈你从这段成长中获得的感悟。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80词； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Changes in Learning English I used to find English very difficult. I always forgot new words and felt nervous when speaking. But now, I have made great progress. To improve my English, I started to read short stories and watch English cartoons every day. I also tried to talk with my classmates in English. These methods helped me a lot. Now, I can remember words more easily and speak confidently. From this experience, I learned that practice makes perfect. If we keep trying, we will surely succeed. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍英语学习中的今昔变化； 第二步，分享自己有效的学习方法； 第三步，谈谈自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①made great progress取得了很大的进步 ②started to do sth开始做某事 ③talk with sb与某人交谈 [高分句型] ①From this experience, I learned that practice makes perfect. (that引导的宾语从句) ②If we keep trying, we will surely succeed. (if引导的条件状语从句) 3．假设你叫李浩，你的英国朋友Tim来信告知，他这个学期选修了汉语，但是学习起来倍感吃力，如听不懂中文授课，记不住汉语语法，口头表达时紧张，写作时没有章法等。请你根据思维导图提示，用英文给他写一封回信。 要求：(1)80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息。 Dear Tim, It’s great to learn that you have been learning Chinese and it’s normal for you to have met some difficulties. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hao 【答案】例文 Dear Tim, It’s great to learn that you have been learning Chinese and it’s normal for you to have met some difficulties. Here are some tips to help you. For listening, you can listen to Chinese tapes regularly and try to catch the key words. This will help you understand Chinese lectures better. Regarding grammar, it’s helpful to discover grammar rules by yourself through reading and practicing. You can also take notes of important grammar points. When it comes to speaking, just relax yourself. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can practice speaking with your classmates. For writing, remember to write an outline first. It can make your writing more organized. Also, reading more Chinese articles can improve your writing skills. I hope these suggestions will be useful for you. Keep practicing and you will make progress. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hao 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封书信； ②时态：主要为一般现在时； ③提示：写作需要围绕“如何学好汉语”展开，涵盖听力、语法、口语、写作四个方面的建议，需结合思维导图信息进行写作，确保不遗漏要点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。以“得知你学汉语遇到困难很正常”开篇，引出下文针对各方面困难的建议； 第二步，具体阐述各方面的学习建议。分别从听力、语法、口语、写作四个维度，结合思维导图中的提示给出具体方法； 第三步，书写结语。表达对对方的鼓励，希望建议有用并期待其进步。 ［亮点词汇］ ①regularly定期地 ②catch the key words抓住关键词 ③grammar points语法点 ④relax yourself放松自己 ⑤make mistakes犯错误 ⑥write an outline写提纲 ⑦organized有条理的 ⑧make progress取得进步 ［高分句型］ ①Regarding grammar, it’s helpful to discover grammar rules by yourself through reading and practicing.（it的固定句型） ②Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.（祈使句的否定形式） 4．假如你是王华，周末班上要举行学习方法交流会，你将作发言。在学习过程中，你有自己的学习方法，它有效地帮助你提高了学习成绩，让学习成为了一种享受。请按以下的提示和要求写一篇英语短文，和同学们分享一下你的学习方法： 注意：1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： As we all know, study methods are very important. One thing that helps me a lot is taking notes. I didn’t have the habit of taking notes in class before. So I always forgot what the teacher said and couldn’t finish the homework on time. Then I tried to take notes in class. I didn’t write down every word. Instead, I wrote down the important points. After class, I reviewed those notes. By taking notes, my grades improved a lot and I became more and more interested in studying. Studying with a good method can help us make progress. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，辅以一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先点明学习方法的重要性，并引出对自己帮助极大的方法——记笔记； 第二步，描述过去没有记笔记的问题，然后说明自己记笔记的具体做法； 第三步，阐述记笔记带来的成效，并总结良好学习方法的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①study method学习方法 ②take notes记笔记 ③on time按时 ④make progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①One thing that helps me a lot is taking notes.（that引导定语从句，修饰先行词one thing，点明核心学习方法） ②By taking notes, my grades improved a lot and I became more and more interested in studying.（by + 动名词短语作方式状语，明确成绩提升的原因） 5．同学们已经进入初中学习生活的最后阶段，每位同学都有自己的学习方法与习惯。请围绕下面的思维导图写一篇短文，和你的同学们分享一下你的学习英语的经验和建议。 要求： 1. 80-120词。 2. 包含思维导图中的所有信息。 3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。 参考信息 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文   Everyone has his own learning ways and habits. I want to share my experience of learning English with you.   I sometimes find English challenging, especially with vocabulary and grammar. When I face problems, I like to talk to my English teacher or classmates. They often give useful advice and encourage me. To study English well, I often read English stories, watch English cartoons, and try to speak with friends in English. It’s also helpful to keep a notebook for new words.     Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Review often, and have fun while learning. I hope these tips will help you. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作时注意包含思维导图中的所有信息，分享自己学习英语的经验和建议，可适当增加细节，使行文更连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示每个人都有自己的学习方式和习惯，并点明要分享自己学习英语的经验； 第二步，介绍自己遇到的问题，倾诉的对象以及处理办法； 第三步，提出建议，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① share…with…和……分享…… ② give useful advice给出有用的建议 ③ try to do设法去做 ④ be afraid of害怕 [高分句型] ① When I face problems, I like to talk to my English teacher or classmates. (时间状语从句) ② To study English well, I often read English stories, watch English cartoons, and try to speak with friends in English. (动词不定式作目的状语) 话题五：事物介绍 ★话题命题角度 “介绍事物”作为命题素材，要求考生描写自己熟悉的生活学习环境及对自己有意义的物品等。此类话题作文体裁以说明文为主，偶尔涉及议论文或者应用文，如写信向笔友或媒体介绍相关事物等。 ＞话题佳句记背 事物特征作用 1.What he needs is the shirt of a happy person to wear. 他需要穿一件快乐的人的衬衫。 2.The electronic dictionary is silver and it is small enough to be put into my pocket. 这个电子词典是银色的，而且很小，可以放到我的口袋里。 3.When I meet new words， I can look them up in it. 我碰到新词时，可以在里面查。 4.It is a book with a fantastic sunrise on its cover. 这本书的封面上有美丽的日出。 喜欢的原因 1.Lucky makes a big difference to my life. “幸运儿”对我的生活影响很大。 2.Reading a good book is like talking with a wise man. 读一本好书就像与智者交谈。 3.Every morning， the clock wakes me up at the time I set for on the night before. 每天早上，闹钟都会在我前一天晚上设定的时间叫醒我。 想法感受 1.From learning how to ride the bike， I learn that I should never give up when I meet difficulties. 通过学习如何骑自行车，我明白在遇到困难时应永不言弃。 2.Every day the clock reminds me that I should be on time in order to be a responsible person. 每天，闹钟都会提醒我要守时，做一个有责任感的人。 3.Besides， it never stops working and also teaches me that I should never waste time. 此外，它从不停止工作，也教会我不应该浪费时间。 4.I will cherish it because it can not only build up my body， but also teach me how to face the difficulties bravely. 我会珍惜它，因为它不仅使我更加强壮，而且教导我如何勇敢面对困难。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1.I want to have a magic eraser that/which can sweep away the bad memories. 我想要一块有魔力的橡皮，它可以消除不好的记忆。 2. It seems that many people all over the world drink Chinese tea. 似乎全世界有很多人喝中国茶。 3. Among all the books I have， I like Harry Potter best. 在我所拥有的书里， 我最喜欢的是《哈利·波特》。 4.There is a beautiful alarm on my desk. Behind it is a moving story between my best friend and me. 我的桌上有一个漂亮的闹钟。它的背后是一个我和我最好的朋友间的感人故事。 中间段 I got the pen at my ninth birthday. I remember that one month before my birthday， my uncle， then in Shanghai， asked what present I wanted. I thought for a while and said， I wanted a pen to write with， because we can write with a pen from Grade 3. Then on my birthday， Uncle gave the pen to me. It was a purple pen with beautiful flowers on it. I liked it very much and began to learn to write with it. 这支笔是我九岁生日时得到的。我记得在我生日的前一个月，我的叔叔，他当时在上海，问我想要什么礼物。我想了一会儿说，我想要一支钢笔用来写字，因为从三年级开始我们就可以用钢笔写字了。然后在我生日的时候，叔叔把笔给了我。那是一支紫色的笔，上面画着美丽的花朵。我非常喜欢它并开始学习用它写字。 结尾段 1.It always reminds me of my happy childhood and my grandparents’ love for me. 它总是让我想起我的快乐童年和我的祖父母对我的爱。 2. The computer does me much good and I will make full use of it in my future studies. 这台电脑帮了我很多，我在以后的学业中会好好利用它。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.Books are the ladder of human progress. 书是人类进步的阶梯。 2.Reading makes a full man. 读书使人充实。 3.A good book is like a window into another world. 一本好书就像一扇通往另外一个世界的窗户。 4.Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。 5.Time never returns when it is lost. 时光一去不复返。 在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。你想要拥有什么？ 请以“I want to have ______”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。 1.要点：请补全标题，如a football， a mountain bike或a magic paintbrush等。 2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 I want to have 　　　 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：谈论自己想拥有的某样物品及其原因。可选角度：现实物品（足球或山地自行车等）或想象中的物品（一个神奇的画笔）等； 2.人称：介绍自己想拥有的物品，用第一人称； 3.时态：介绍自己想拥有的物品一般用一般现在时或一般将来时；描述过去某事让自己想拥有这个物品则用一般过去时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 I want to have a magic paintbrush I want to have a paintbrush with magic power so that 　(亮点点评：so that句型)　I can make whatever I draw become a reality.　(亮点点评：make sth. ＋动词原形； whatever的使用)　 With the paintbrush， I can draw a new earth where there will be no pollution.　(亮点点评：where引导的定语从句)　 The river will be clean as well as 　(亮点点评：短语as well as的使用)　the sky will be blue. With the paintbrush， I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family. I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world. 　(亮点点评：动词不定式短语作目的状语)　 话题链接： 1．学校科技节即将来临，你将介绍你的发明——智能勺子“iSpoon”。请根据下图写一篇发言稿。 要求： 1．可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2．词数：80词左右； 3．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my invention — the iSpoon Sensor. It is 15 cm long, silver in color, and made of strong steel. There is a small sensor at its front. This smart spoon has three functions. It tests food temperature to keep you safe. It also reminds you to eat healthily through a light system. What’s more, it can be folded easily. I think the iSpoon is very useful and creative. It helps people eat more safely and healthily. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇发言稿，为应用文。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：需包含外形材料、功能和评价。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候并介绍发明； 第二步，描述外形和材料； 第三步，说明功能； 第四步，给出个人评价并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①smart spoon智能勺子 ②food temperature食物温度 ③light system灯光系统 ④creative有创意的 [高分句型] I think the iSpoon is very useful and creative.（宾语从句） 2．某英文网站正在举办以“My Favorite Invention”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： 1. What’s your favorite invention? 2. Why do you like it? 3. What do you use it for? 要求： 1.短文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr. Liu/ Ms. Wang/ Ma Li/ Wang Gang； 4.词数：不少于70 My Favorite Invention ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My Favorite Invention My favorite invention is the smartphone. I like it because it is very useful and convenient. With a smartphone, I can do many things. For example, I use it to call my friends, such as Ma Li, and send messages. I also use it to search for information on the internet, which helps me with my homework. Moreover, I can listen to music and watch videos for relaxation. The smartphone makes my life easier and more enjoyable. That’s why it is my favorite invention. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时（因为描述的是当前最喜欢的发明和日常使用情况）； ③提示：短文必须包括三个要点：最喜欢的发明是什么、为什么喜欢它、用它来做什么。可适当发挥，但不能出现真实信息（如姓名、校名和地名），可使用提供的人名如Ma Li。 [写作步骤] 第一步：确定主题和结构。选择一种常见的发明（如智能手机），并规划短文结构：开头引入发明，中间解释原因和用途，结尾总结； 第二步：组织内容。先写出发明是什么，然后详细说明喜欢的原因（如实用、方便）和具体用途（如打电话、搜索信息、娱乐），最后用一句话强调喜爱； 第三步：检查语法和词数。确保句子正确、通顺，并避免真实信息。 [亮点词汇] ① be useful and convenient实用又方便 ② search for information搜索信息 ③ on the internet在互联网上 ④ help with sth.帮助做某事 [高分句型] ① I use it to search for information on the internet, which helps me with my homework.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） ② With a smartphone, I can do many things.（运用了with短语作状语） 3．学校英文网站最近正在举办主题为“My favorite invention”的演讲比赛。假设你是王华，打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语作文，不少于80词。 灯泡 (The lightbulb) 发明人 Thomas Edison，美国发明家 发明时间 1879年10月21日 原料 玻璃和金属 (metal) 用途 照明，提供光亮，人们可以在夜晚工作或学习 优点 节能 (save energy)，环保，便宜 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Hello, everyone. I’m Wang Hua. I’m excited to share my favorite invention—the lightbulb. It was invented by Thomas Edison, a famous American inventor, on October 21, 1879. The lightbulb is made of glass and metal. It provides light for us, so people can work or study at night. Also, it has many advantages. It saves energy, is environmentally friendly, and is cheap. I think the lightbulb is very useful and has changed our lives. That’s why I love it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：主要为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并引入主题，点明最喜欢的发明是灯泡； 第二步，详细描述发明的细节； 第三步，表达个人感受，总结为什么喜欢这个发明。 [亮点词汇] ①invention发明 ②environmentally friendly环保的 ③advantages优点 [高分句型] It provides light for us, so people can work or study at night. (so引导结果状语从句) 4．世界上有很多发明，它们极大地改变了人们的生活。请以“The invention that I like most”为题，并根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你最喜欢的发明是什么； 2. 它对你生活的影响； 3. …… 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100 (标题已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 The invention that I like most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The invention that I like most Many inventions change our life. As far as I’m concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and I like it most. Every day I use the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my family and friends. Besides, I can buy goods from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens up my eyes. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文 ； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：需包含最喜欢的发明、对生活的影响，可补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确主题——选择互联网作为最喜欢的发明，并开门见山点题。 第二步：分层次说明影响——从学习、沟通和娱乐三个方面展开，用连接词(First, Second, Besides)使逻辑清晰。 第三步：总结感受——用简短句子概括互联网的益处，强化主题。 [亮点词汇] ①all over the world全世界 ②keep in touch with保持联系 ③not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①As far as I’m concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and I like it most. (“as far as I’m concerned”表达个人观点) ②It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. (“not only...but also...”并列结构) ③All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever. (“all in all”用于总结) 5．发明改变世界。请你根据表格，以“A useful invention”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、发明者、手机用途 (至少三个)，并分享作为青少年我们如何合理地使用手机的建议 (至少两点)，使它真正成为最有用的发明之一。 Invention Mobile Phone Inventor American, Martin Cooper Time 1973 Usage 方便与他人交流 …… Your opinions about how to use them 上学日不能使用手机 …… 要求：短文须包含以上内容，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯，词数80—100。 A Useful Invention The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    A Useful Invention   The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by Martin Cooper, an American, in 1973.    Mobile phones are widely used in our daily life. They help us communicate with others easily. We can also use them to study online and relax by listening to music. Besides, they are useful for taking photos and checking maps.    As teenagers, we should use mobile phones properly. First, we should not use them on school days. Second, we need to control the time spent on phones and use them mainly for learning. In this way, mobile phones can truly become one of the most helpful inventions. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍手机的发明时间、发明者； 第二步，具体阐述手机用途； 第三步，提青少年合理用机建议，上学日不用、控时且多用于学习。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with与……沟通 ②in this way以这种方式 [高分句型] ①Mobile phones are widely used in our daily life.  (一般现在时的被动语态) ②It was invented by Martin Cooper, an American, in 1973. (一般过去时的被动语态) 话题六：科学技术 【词汇积累】 科学技术与发明创造 1. technology科技；技术 2. project项目；工程 3. AI人工智能 4. VR虚拟现实 5. screen屏幕 6. produce生产；制造 7. save保存；存储 8. repair修理；修补 9. online在线的 10. electronic电子的；电子设备的 　　　11. digital数字的；数码的 12. convenient方便的 　　　　　　　 13. space station太空站 14. scientific study科学研究 　　　　　 15. high­speed railway高铁 16. search for搜寻；查找 　　　　　　 17. be made of/from 由……制成 18. connect… with…把……和……连接起来 19. take the place of取代 20. be used for被用于…… 　　　　　　　 21. take place发生；出现 22. with the development of随着……的发展 23. compare… with比较；对比 24. by mistake错误地；无意中 　　　　　　25. come up with想出；提出 26. be invented by由……发明 　　　　　　27. for the first time第一次 科技与生活 1. effect作用；影响 2. advantage优点 3. information信息 4. discover发现；发觉 5. careful小心的；慎重的 6. explore探索 7. style样式；款式 　　　　　 8. play a role发挥作用；有影响 9. mobile robot移动机器人 　　　　　10. recycled material再生材料 11. thanks to由于；因为 　　　　　 12. lead to导致 13. surf the Internet上网 　　　　　 14. change one's life改变某人的生活 15. electronic product电子产品 　　　 16. in the future在未来 17. benefit from从……中受益 　　　　18. be helpful for对……有帮助 常用好句 科学技术与发明创造 1. The smart fridge can be connected to wireless networks and used for shopping.智能冰箱可以连接无线网络，用于购物。 2. In addition, the smart screen on the fridge has many functions, such as playing music and displaying menus by voice.此外，冰箱上的智能屏幕还具有播放音乐、语音控制显示菜单等多种功能。 3. The computer is one of the greatest inventions and is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.计算机是最伟大的发明之一，在我们的日常生活中越来越受欢迎。 科技与生活 4. Sweeping robots can help us do chores so that we can have more time to do other things.扫地机器人可以帮助我们做家务，这样我们就可以有更多的时间做其他的事情。 5. The advantage of AI products is that they all bring great convenience and progress to our society.人工智能产品的优点是它们给我们的社会带来了极大的便利和进步。 6. Thanks to these amazing inventions and the great inventors, our lives have been greatly improved.多亏了这些奇妙的发明和伟大的发明家，我们的生活得到了极大改善。 7. However, some students rely on AI too much so they have trouble dealing with problems independently.然而，一些学生过于依赖人工智能，所以他们在独立处理问题时遇到了麻烦。 8. Although robots can be of much help, our love for the elderly can't be replaced.虽然机器人可以提供很多帮助，但我们对老人的爱是无法被替代的。 人工智能正在改变我们的日常生活。请你结合下面图示信息，以“AI in Our Life”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校科技节举办的演讲比赛。 写作要求：1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students， As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you for your listening! AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students， As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our life. We can see many kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. If we have problems with our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers might lose their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. All in all, each coin has two sides, so does AI. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it'll bring much convenience to our future life. That's all. Thank you for your listening! 话题链接： 1．随着科学技术的发展，AI宠物正缓缓走入人们的生活。假如你是学校英语俱乐部成员，上周你们围绕话题“Would you like to keep an AI pet?”进行了讨论，请根据下面讨论观点写一篇100词左右的英文总结，概述同学们对AI宠物的看法，并谈谈自己的见解。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 2. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                   Would You Like to Keep an AI Pet?        Last week, students in our school English club talked about keeping an AI pet. Some liked the idea, but others didn’t. Those who liked AI pets said they were easy. You don’t need to feed them or take them out, so you can save time. And they never get sick or die, so you won’t feel sad if they “leave”. But some students didn’t agree. They said keeping an AI pet isn’t fun. Real pets can play with you and love you. They stay by your side and make you happy. I like real pets better. Taking care of them is hard work, but it’s worth it. The time spent with them brings so much joy—something an AI pet can never give. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；   ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时态；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤]   第一步：开门见山，引出讨论主题，点明英语俱乐部关于AI宠物的讨论。   第二步：详细陈述正反观点：支持方，AI宠物省时省力、无健康风险； 反对方，真实宠物互动性强、情感真实；   第三步：书写结语，表达个人立场，强调真实宠物的情感价值。   [亮点词汇]   ①talk about谈论 ②play with和……一起玩 ③take care of照顾 [高分句型]   ①Those who liked AI pets said they were easy.（定语从句） ②And they never get sick or die, so you won’t feel sad if they “leave”.（条件状语从句） 2．科学技术日新月异，层出不穷的新科技正快速改变着我们的生活。假如你是李华，你就读的国际学校正在举办主题为 “Life in the Future” 的科技创意大赛，设计对象可以是 school，house 等建筑物，也可以是 robot，schoolbag 等物品。请发挥你的想象，根据以下思维导图，写一篇演讲稿向同学们介绍你的一个设计构思。 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear classmates, I'm Li Hua, a big fan of new technology, and I am very excited to share my design with you all. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 【答案】例文 Dear classmates, I’m Li Hua, a big fan of new technology, and I am very excited to share my design with you all.   In the future, I’d love to design a smart schoolbag. It looks like an ordinary bag, but it is made of light, strong materials and has a built-in screen. It can remind us to do homework, teach us new words and track our health. I want to design it because students often carry heavy books, and this schoolbag can store e-books to reduce weight and protect the environment. It is special because it uses solar power and can translate different languages. I hope my creation will help students learn more easily and make life more convenient.   Thank you for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文应该主要用第三人称来写，部分需用第一人称；表明观点时，要合理畅想；要从居住和教育等方面展开写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头要表明写作内容——分享自己的设计； 第二步，详细地介绍设计的是什么及其外观和特色、设计的原因等信息； 第三步，感谢聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①looks like看起像 ②remind sb to do提醒某人做某事 ③protect the environment保护环境 [高分句型] ①I want to design it because students often carry heavy books, and this schoolbag can store e-books to reduce weight and protect the environment.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I hope my creation will help students learn more easily and make life more convenient.（宾语从句） 3．科学技术是第一生产力，现在我们处于一个科技飞速发展时代，科技产品就在我们身边，他们无时无刻都在影响着我们的生活，像冰箱、彩电、空调、计算机、机器人、数码相机、智能手机、汽车、无人驾驶汽车(driverless car)、高铁等等，在这些或其它你熟悉的科技产品中，哪一种对我们的生活产生了巨大影响，请以什么 ________ has influenced (影响) our life a lot为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。 要点： （1）科学技术的重要性； （2）你认为什么科技影响了我们的生活，它是如何影响我们的生活的； （3）对此你有什么感悟。 要求： （1）把题目补充完整； （2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名； （3）书写规范，100 词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The smart phone has influenced our life a lot Technology is important for the development of society. Some of them play an important role in our life and have greatly changed the world. In my eyes, the smart phone has influenced us a lot. In our daily life, we use smart phones almost everywhere. Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us. We use smart phones to go shopping, order meals, watch movies and listen to music and so on. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. What’s more, during covid-19, we students have online courses with the smart phone. In one word, we almost can’t live without smart phones. Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly. As students, we can’t play games or chat with others too long on it. It’s bad for our study and health. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中给出的三个要点，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“科学技术的重要性”来引出下文中对三个要点的描述； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“科技如何影响我们的生活”入手，重点介绍科技对我们生活的影响； ③第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色 ②even though 即使 ③and so on 等等，诸如此类 ④what’s more 此外 ⑤in one word 总之 [高分句型] ①Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us.（even though引导的让步状语从句） ②Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly.（though引导的让步状语从句） 4．在本月最后一个星期五，学校即将在操场开展2024科技展览会 (Tech Expo 2024)，旨在培养学生对STEM (科学、技术、工程和数学) 的热情。假如你是学校科学俱乐部的成员Kate，你需要负责邀请校内的美国交流生Lily参与活动。请你按照下列提示的要点，写一封邀请信。 要点提示： 1. 活动时间，地点及目的 2. 活动内容：①科技产品展示；②……；③…… 3. 你的期待 写作要求： 1. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书面规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 字数要求80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：技术technology    旨在aim at    充满热情的passionate    产品product Dear Lily, As the annual Tech Expo 2024 draws near, on behalf of the Science Club, I am writing to you to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply! Warm regards, Kate 【答案】例文 Dear Lily,     As the annual Tech Expo 2024 draws near, on behalf of the Science Club, I am writing to you to invite you to this exciting event. It will be held on this month’s last Friday at the school playground. The expo aims at cultivating students’ passion for STEM through hands-on experiences. Activities include a display of innovative technology products, interactive science workshops, and fun robot-building competitions. I believe you will find it both educational and inspiring. I sincerely hope you can join us and share this wonderful experience.     Looking forward to your reply!     Warm regards,     Kate 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是应用文，为邀请信。 ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：提示要点均要一一阐述，注意单词拼写正确，无语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍活动时间、地点及目的； 第二步：介绍具体的活动内容； 第三步：表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事 ②aim at旨在 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I believe you will find it both educational and inspiring. (宾语从句) 5．在这个飞速发展的数字时代，人工智能，即AI，已经悄然渗入我们生活的方方面面。河南省实验中学是一所“科技+学术”型重点中学。在校科技节上，将举办题为 “AI in Our Life” 的中英双语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。 内容要点： 1. AI的好处。 2. AI在生活中对你的帮助。 3. 对AI过度依赖带来的影响。 写作要求： 1. 参考思维导图，选取部分内容，也可自已发挥。 2. 不得出现真实的姓名和班级。 3. 词数100词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and fellow students, Nowadays, AI has found its way into many aspects of our lives, bringing us great convenience. In education, intelligent learning apps offer personalized study plans to students. In the medical field, it helps doctors make accurate diagnoses. What’s more, smart voice assistants enable us to operate home appliances with simple voice commands. The future of AI seems extremely promising. Self-driving cars will become more common, reducing traffic accidents. House hold robots will free us from tiring housework. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，可适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明AI在生活中的普及； 第二步，举例说明AI在生活中的应用； 第三步，举例说明人类对AI过度依赖带来的影响； 第四步，书写结语，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①offer sth to sb 给某人提供某物 ②make accurate diagnoses 准确诊断 ③enable sb to do 确保某人做某事 ④free sb from doing 把某人从……中解脱出来 ⑤rely on 依赖 ⑥ability to do 做某事的能力 [高分句型] ①Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. (so that引导结果状语从句) ②I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. (that引导宾语从句，if引导条件状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题03 写作通用表达 写作通用表达&范文背诵 话题一：成长与变化 从全国真题来看，该话题属于高频话题。其主要命题角度有：①介绍自身的成长变化；②他人的成长变化，包括家庭成员。 品德修养： 1. quality品质；人品 2. spirit精神 3. honesty诚实 4. kindness善良 5. admire钦佩 6. independent独立的 7. positive积极的 8. moral道德的 9. grateful感激的 10. behave politely举止文明 　　　　　 11. respect each other相互尊重 12. keep promises信守承诺 　　　　　 13. strong will坚强的意志 14. be friendly to对……友好 　　　　　 15. be responsible for对……负责 16. be patient with对……有耐心 　　　 17. be thankful to others感恩他人 18. be ready to help others乐于助人 　　　 19. never give up永不放弃 自我认识与提升： 1. influence影响 2. experience经验；经历 3. dare敢于 4. require需要 5. fail失败 6. silent不说话的；沉默的 7. helpful有帮助的 8. valuable宝贵的 9. seldom很少 10. deal with应对；处理 11. in public公开地 12. in person亲身；亲自 13. take pride in为……感到自豪 　　　14. be proud of为……骄傲 15. make plans制订计划 　　　　　 16. manage time管理时间 17. overcome challenges克服挑战 　　18. stick to doing sth.坚持做某事 19. achieve the goal实现目标 　　　　20. take… seriously认真对待…… 21. as long as只要 　　　　　 22. learn from mistakes从错误中学习 23. make progress取得进步 【佳句积累】 自我认识与提升 1. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school.为了赶上我的同学，我开始每天放学后练习跑步。 2. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to stick to exercising.无论我遇到了什么困难，我都竭尽全力坚持锻炼。 3. I find it important to keep a positive attitude when we're in trouble.我发现当我们遇到麻烦时，保持积极的态度很重要。 4. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.然而，我认为它是一个挑战，也是一个提高我的英语水平的好机会。 个人成长 5. I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public.我过去很害羞，不敢在公共场合表达自己。 6. But with the encouragement of my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.但是在老师的鼓励下，我不仅变得更加外向，而且与周围的人相处得很好。 7. Making and keeping promises plays an important role in our lives.许下承诺并信守承诺在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 8. Don't spend too much time on hard thinking because only action leads you to success.不要花太多时间苦思冥想，因为只有行动才能带你走向成功。 经典佳句 1.Along with our journey of life, we'll make plenty of personal changes. 伴随着我们的生活旅程，我们将会发生许多个人变化。 2.Instead of giving up, I chose to change.我没有放弃，而是选择了改变。 3.All in all, the biggest personal change I've made is the most valuable treasure in my life.总之，在我身上发生的最大的变化是我一生最珍贵的财富。 4.What really matters is that I have the courage to change and improve myself.真正重要的是我有了改变、完善自我的勇气。 习语和谚语 1.Nothing is impossible.一切皆有可能。 2.Learn to walk before you run.循序渐进。 3.Never underestimate your power to change yourself！永远不要低估你改变自我的能力！ 4. Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于空谈。 5. Bad luck often brings good luck.塞翁失马，安知非福。 6. A journey of a thousand li begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 生活中总有一些事在不经意间带给我们启迪，促使我们成长，改变了我们的行为处事方式，改变了我们对世界的认知，让我们受益良深。校刊以“One thing that changed my life”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1)哪件事改变了你； 2)它是如何改变你的； 3)你的感悟。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审作文 列提纲 写篇章 One thing that changed my life After our school had a policy of reducing the burden of the students and their family, my life changed a lot. In the past, I still had too much homework to do after school. Even worse, I had to stay at home to study at weekends. And I didn't have time to get some exercise and I couldn't do my favourite things. But now, I live a different life. I can finish my homework at school and I can join my favourite club. In my free time, I often do exercise with my friends. We usually play football or tennis together. I think the changes in our life are very good. I'm sure we will have a happy life in the future. 话题链接： 1．成长过程中，每个人都会发生变化。正如我们在Unit4中所认识的李文，他从一个问题学生变成了父母的骄傲。请你结合自身实际，谈谈自己过去和现在在性格、爱好、生活或学习方法等方面的变化，并分享你的感受。 写作要点： Useful expressions: 1. What did you use to be like? In the past, I used to be ... 2. How have you changed over the years? I have changed a lot. I ..., and I still ... 3. Your opinions about the changes. In my opinion, … 写作要求： 1. 短文应包含所有的写作要点，语句通顺，字迹工整，意思连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实学校和人名； 3. 不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Everyone changes as they grow up, and so do I. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．习总书记告诫青年人“艰难困苦，玉汝于成”。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。“精感石没羽，岂云惮险艰”，初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难的经历吗？请以“The harder, The better”为题，写一篇书面表达讲述你的一次经历和感悟。要求： （1）确定主题； （2）围绕主题，表达内容积极向上，有具体生动的事件； （3）词数80-100； （4）作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 提示问题：What was the difficulty? What did you do to get over the difficulty? What have you learned from it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．艰难困苦，玉汝于成。每个人的成长都是种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。 “精感石没羽，岂云惮险艰”，初中以来你有过逆势前行、克服困难的经历吗？请以“How to get over difficulty”为题写一篇英语短文，讲述你的一次经历和感悟，写一篇不少于80字的短文。 内容提示： 1. What was your difficulty? 2. How did you get over (克服)it? 3. What have you learned from it? 写作要求： 1.短文需包含所有内容提示，可适当发挥； 2.结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难的； 3.文中不得出现个人真实信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．成长伴随我们一生，无论是在容貌、习惯、爱好、个性还是学业方面，每个人都在不断变化着。在这过程中，我们一直在体验成长和自我完善。请你围绕上述内容简要描述一下自己进入初三以来的一些变化，包含自我感悟或收获，以“I Have Changed”为题写一篇英语作文。(80词左右，文中不得出现与考生相关的姓名、校名等信息) I Have Changed Everyone goes through different changes over time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。 要求： （1）短文必须包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Appearance: thin and short Personality: a little bit shy Hobby: … Ability: … Appearance: strong and tall Personality: more outgoing Hobby: … Ability: … How I’ve Changed! In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot both physically and mentally. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题二：居住环境 ★话题命题角度 “居住环境”类书面表达从全国真题来看，该话题属于高频话题。该话题可从以下角度进行命题：1.介绍自己的居住环境，如乡村、城市环境等；2.居住地过去和现在的环境对比 ★话题佳句记背 家乡位置环境 1.My hometown stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. 我的家乡坐落在一条宽阔的河边，盛产鱼和大米。 2.Our city is beautiful and is famous for many places of interest. 我们的城市很漂亮，并以许多名胜古迹而闻名。 3.This is a city with a long history， and it attracts plenty of tourists every year. 这是一座历史悠久的城市，每年吸引大量游客。 4.Compared with the country， I prefer to live in the city because the city has beautiful scenery and convenient traffic. 比起乡村，我更喜欢住在城市，因为城市风景优美，交通便利。 过去现在环境对比 1.In the past， there were only narrow and dirty streets in the village. But now the streets are becoming wider， cleaner and tidier. 过去，村子街道狭窄、肮脏。但现在街道变得更宽阔、更干净、更整洁。 2.Another great change is that there are more high buildings on both sides of the streets in the town. 另一个巨大变化是城镇的街道两旁有更多的高楼大厦。 3.There used to be a dirty river where people threw rubbish. The government has taken action to deal with water pollution. 过去河水很脏，人们总往河里扔垃圾。政府已经采取行动治理水污染。 4.Thanks to the government， the sky is becoming bluer and the water is becoming clearer than before. 多亏了政府，天空变得更蓝了，水变得比以前更清澈了。 看法建议重要性 1.I’m very glad to see the amazing changes in my town. 我很高兴看到家乡这些惊人的变化。 2.To cut down air pollution， we should take the bus or subway instead of driving. 为了减少空气污染，我们应该乘公交或地铁而不是开车。 3.It’s time for us to understand the importance of protecting the environment and do something for it. 我们是时候了解保护环境的重要性并为之做些什么了。 4.We can turn off the lights when we are not using them. 当我们不用灯的时候，我们可以关掉它们。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1.Luoyang is the place where I was born and grew up. 洛阳是我出生和长大的地方。 2.The places of interest like the Longmen Grottoes and Baiyun Mountain are well worth visiting. 像龙门石窟和白云山这样的名胜很值得一游。 3.If you expect to have a taste of delicious food， it is really a good place that you can’t miss. 如果你想品尝美味的食物，它真的是一个你不能错过的好地方。 4.One reason I like living here is that there is not much traffic here. 我喜欢住在这里的一个原因就是这里的车不多。 5.The thing touches me most is that the environment here has improved greatly. 最触动我的一件事就是这里的环境得到了很大的改善。 中间段 In the past， the river here was dirty and the sky was gray. But now， the living conditions have improved a lot. The roads are wider and the trees are greener. Tall buildings can be seen here and there and people now live a better life. 过去， 这里河水很脏， 天空也是灰暗的。但是现在， 生活条件改善了很多。道路变得更宽阔了，树木也变得更绿了。高楼大厦随处可见， 人们的生活更好了。 结尾段 1.If everyone makes an effort， the environment will become better and it will become a more comfortable place to live. 如果每个人都能做出贡献，环境会变得更好，这里也会变成一个更舒服的居住地。 2.I hope more trees will be planted here and we will live a greener life. 我希望这里能种植更多的树，我们可以过更加环保的生活。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.East or west， home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自己的草窝。 2.Home is where the heart is. 家是心之所在。 3.A good neighbor is better than a brother far off. 远亲不如近邻。 4.A man’s home is his castle. 一个人的家就是他的城堡。 5.Clear waters and green mountains are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver. 绿水青山就是金山银山。 6.Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.保护环境就是保护我们自己。 7.Prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。 　　每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下写作要点和写作要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。 1.写作要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境； 2）你喜欢这个环境的什么； 3）你对这个环境有何期望。 2.写作要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 What I like about where I live ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：我生活的环境，我喜欢的原因，我对它的期望等； 2.人称：第一人称和第三人称； 3.时态：讲述现在的环境及喜欢的原因，用一般现在时；如果涉及讲述过去的环境及条件，用一般过去时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 What I like about where I live I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from 　(亮点点评：形容词短语作状语)　other cities， it has no much tall buildings or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for 　(亮点点评：be late for短语)　their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.　(亮点点评：what引导的表语从句)　 However， my city has her problems. She has no high－speed rail station. I hope she will soon have one so that 　(亮点点评：I hope...和so that...句型)　I can travel to other cities more easily！ 话题链接： 1．安静的居住环境有助于提升人们的生活质量，促进身心健康。为了给大家创设一个更好的居住氛围，请你以社区志愿者的身份，结合下面图示信息，根据写作要求，用英语写一封倡议信，向社区报刊的英文栏目投稿。 要求： 1）文中须包含下图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：residents居民，noise-proof windows隔音玻璃 Dear residents, To create a quiet living environment for everyone, I would like to share some suggestions here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s join hands to build a better living place for all of us. Best regards, A Volunteer 2．未来有无限种可能，科技正在改变一切。你认为人类未来的生活会是怎么样的呢？请你以“The future life”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文，畅想一下人类未来的生活。 要点： 1）人类未来的生活、工作情况； 2）人类未来的居住环境和交通方式等； 3）你对人类未来生活的看法。 要求： 1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 The future life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．近些年，在党和国家惠民政策的帮助下，广元发生了翻天覆地的变化。 请以 “Great Changes in My Hometown”为题，结合以下要点写一篇英语短文。 写作要点：1. 生活水平（穿着和日常饮食）； 2. 居住环境（住房及配套设施）； 3. 公共交通（道路和出行方式）。 写作要求：1. 短文须包含以上要点，可适当增加内容，不得出现真实姓名和地名； 2. 卷面整洁，书写工整，语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯； 3. 字数不少于80词。标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：transport 交通；convenient 方便的 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown with the help of the government. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，最近你所在小区附近一处堆满了垃圾，人们随意将垃圾扔到那里，严重污染了环境。请你以“Have a better living environment”为题，用英语写一篇短文，呼吁人们立即行动起来，爱护社区居住环境。 内容包括： ●The bad environment in the neighborhood ●Take action to have a better living environment 要求：1.词数不少于 80词； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Have a better living environment _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是七年级学生Bill，请根据提示，以“My Living Environment”为标题，根据要点，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的居住环境，内容可适当发挥。 要点： 1. 住在市中心的一个公寓套房里，家里有四个房间，最喜欢的房间是书房； 2. 公寓楼对面有银行、饭馆和商店； 3. 学校离你家大约三公里，乘坐公交车去学校。 My Living Environment ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题三：环境保护 【词汇积累】 自然生态 1. nature自然 2. mountain高山 3. island岛 4. desert沙漠 5. season季节 6. climate气候 7. weather天气 8. animal动物 9. plant植物 10. endangered濒危的 11. wild野生的 12. ecosystem 生态系统 13. natural wonder自然奇观 14. food chain食物链 15. live on以……为食 环境问题 1. environment环境 2. energy能源 3. rubbish/litter/waste垃圾 4. pollution污染 5. cause造成 6. destroy破坏 7. influence影响 8. plastic塑料的 9. serious严重的 10. climate change气候变化 　　　　　　　11. greenhouse effect温室效应 12. global warming 全球变暖 13. air/water/soil/noise pollution空气/水/土壤/噪音污染 14. cut down砍伐 　　　　　　　 15. lead to导致 16. die out灭绝 　　　　　　　 17. be harmful to对……有害 环保措施 1. environmental friendly环保的 2. measure措施 3. protect保护 4. reuse重复使用 5. recycle回收利用 6. reduce减少 7. waste sorting垃圾分类 8. turn off关掉 9. call on号召；呼吁 10. put sth. to good use好好利用某物 　　　　　 11. make a difference有影响 12. take an active part in积极参与 　　　　　　　13. take action采取行动 14. try one's best尽某人最大努力 　　　　　　　15. play a role/part in 参与；发挥作用 常用好句 环境问题 1. Nowadays, our environment is becoming worse and worse.如今，我们的环境越来越糟糕。 2. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.空气污染非常严重，因为现在路上有更多汽车。 3. Even the bottom of the river was full of rubbish, and there were no more fish for fishermen to catch.就连河底也满是垃圾，渔民再也捕不到鱼了。 4. People often use things once and then throw them away, or leave them on the ground as litter. This causes mountains of rubbish and pollutes our land and seas.人们经常用一次东西就把它们扔掉，或者把它们当作垃圾扔在地上。这导致了堆积如山的垃圾，污染了我们的陆地和海洋。 环保措施 5. To cut down air pollution, we are supposed to take the bus or subway instead of driving.为了减轻空气污染，我们应该坐公共汽车或地铁而不是开车。 6. You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.你可以在离开房间时关灯来省电。 7. Recycling is a good way to help reduce pollution.回收利用是帮助减轻污染的好方法。 号召大家采取行动 8. Everyone in this town should play a part in cleaning it up！这个镇上的每个人都应该参与清理工作！ 9. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future！ 我们齐心协力就能带来变化，创造更加美好的未来！ 10. In a word, we should take action to make our school greener and cleaner.总之，我们应该采取行动让我们的学校更环保、更干净。 11. Only by working together, can we make the earth a better place.只有我们共同努力，才能让地球变得更美好。 俗语谚语 1. Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于空谈。 2. One more green, one more healthy.多一份绿色，多一份健康。 3. Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.绿水青山就是金山银山。 4. Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.保护环境就是保护我们自己。 “绿色”不仅仅是一种颜色，也意味着一种低碳环保的生活方式。请你以“My greener life”为题，根据写作要求为学校的公众号写一篇英语短文分享你的绿色生活。 写作要求：1)介绍你是如何践行绿色生活方式的，并简单谈谈你的感悟与收获； 2)你未来还打算做些什么； 3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My greener life Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. _________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【成文】 My greener life Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. ①It's necessary for us to have a greener life. ②To live a greener life, I often ride bicycles to school instead of taking a car. I turn off the lights when I leave rooms. I never throw away the rubbish everywhere. Thanks to the lifestyle, I have learned the importance of environment protection. It helps save energy, reduce pollution and waste. Besides, I've also got a lot of knowledge about it such as how to sort litter, how to keep a greener diet and so on. ③What's more, it makes me healthier and happier than before. In the future, I will call on more people to have a greener life. ④Only in these ways, can we build a greener society. 加分亮点 ①句使用“It's ＋adj. ＋ for sb. to do sth.”句型阐述践行绿色生活方式的必要性，增加文章句型多样性； ②句使用动词不定式作目的状语，进而描述自己践行绿色生活方式的做法，行文自然流畅； ③整段使用besides, what's more等连接，使语篇内容更具整体性、逻辑更连贯； ④句使用倒装句强调践行绿色生活方式的重要性，使文章表达更为出彩。 话题链接： 1．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下如何才能创建绿色城市，并谈谈你的看法。 提示： 1.骑车或坐公交车出行，减少空气污染： 2.垃圾入箱，保持城市清洁； 3.多种树木，保护自然环境： 4.不用纸巾和塑料袋，减少白色污染； 5.你的看法。 注意事项： 1.短文词数：80左右，短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数； 2.短文必须包含以上提示内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 参考词汇：paper napkin纸巾 plastic塑料 The Green City, the Healthy Life As a citizen (公民) of Liaocheng, it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．近年来，我国日益重视环境保护，积极践行“青山绿水就是金山银山”的环保新理念。4月22日是世界环境日，你们志愿社团想借此契机，加强学生的环保意识。假如你是付兴，请你写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们参与周末的“Volunteer to Clean in the Neighborhoods”活动。 请包括以下要点： （1）环境保护的重要性； （2）活动的具体内容； （3）号召参与。 要求：字数80-100；语言准确，逻辑清晰，行文流畅。 Dear students, I’m Fu Xing, a member of the school’s volunteer club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 3．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，你校开展了以“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点。 现状 ◆空气污染严重 ◆树木砍伐严重 …… 建议 ◆骑车出行，减少空气污染 ◆垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁 ◆多种树木，保护自然环境 …… 要求：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思连贯，语句通顺； 2．词数80—120词之间；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．6月5日（June 5）是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment?”为题写一篇短文。 提示：存在问题： 1. 水污染越来越严重； 2. 砍伐森林严重； 3. 大气污染严重； 4. 白色垃圾等。 写作要求：①词数：80词左右； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．日本政府于日前表示将逐步把数吨经过处理的福岛第一核电站废水排放到海洋中受到多方谴责。保护环境与自然和谐相处是人类今天面对的大问题。 假如你是李华，你们班级正就“保护地球，从我做起”这一话题开展征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 请根据表格内容，谈谈你周边的环境问题，在保护环境方面你通常是怎么做的，以及你这样做的感受。 提示词语：reduce, reuse, recycle, energy, plant, happy 环境问题 不关灯、不关水龙头、资源浪费、乱扔垃圾、森林砍伐严重、工厂排污水、污气、汽车尾气…… 采取措施 节约水电、绿色出行、绿色购物、回收利用…… 感想 自己的感受——责任、必要、自豪，以及对世界的巨大影响…… 要求： 1. 必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数90左右，短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 Many people pay little attention to protecting our environment, so pollution is more and more serious. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题四：语言学习 【词汇积累】 学习方面的困难 1. challenge挑战 2. grammar语法 3. understand理解 4. fail失败；未能(做到) 5. hard/difficult困难的 6. upset苦恼的 7. reading speed阅读速度 　　　　8. be poor at/weak in不擅长…… 9. be/get stressed out心力交瘁 　　10. be afraid of害怕…… 11. make mistakes犯错误 　　　　12. have trouble/problems doing sth.做某事有困难 学习方法与策略 1. method方法 2. skill技能；技巧 3. suggestion建议 4. prepare准备 5. discuss讨论 6. repeat重复 7. review复习 8. practice练习 9. mind map思维导图 10. take notes做笔记 　　　　 11. make a plan制订计划 12. the secret to ……的秘诀 　　　　 13. write down写下；记下 14. look up查阅 　　　　 15. take part in/join in参加 16. be helpful to对……有用 　　　　 17. follow one's advice采纳某人的建议 18. ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 　 19. pay attention to注意 感悟与收获 1. exam考试 2. ability 能力 3. grade年级；成绩等级 4. experience经历；经验 5. memorize/remember记住 6. pass通过 7. improve改进；提高 8. confident自信的 9. successfully成功地 10. have a better understanding of对……有更好的理解 　　11. be good at擅长 12. develop the good habit of养成……的好习惯 　　　　　13. make progress取得进步 【佳句积累】 学习方面的困难 1. I find it difficult to get the meaning while listening to the dialogue. 我发现自己在听对话的时候很难理解意思。 2. I was afraid to ask questions because of my poor pronunciation. 因为我的发音不好，所以我不敢提问。【RJ九全U1】 3. My handwriting is so bad that I never get high grades in writing. 我的字写得不好看，以至于我从来没有在写作上得过高分。 学习方法与策略 4. The more you speak English, the better your spoken English will be. 你英语说得越多，你的英语口语就会越好。 5. You should take notes so that you can review what you have learned in class. 你应该记笔记，这样你就可以复习你在课堂上学到的东西。 6. It's useful to review words and articles by listening to a tape and repeating out loud. 通过听录音带和大声复述来复习单词和文章是很有用的。 7. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot.我认为独自学习确实是一个很好的方式，它会使我受益匪浅。 感悟与收获 8. With the help of John, I have made great progress in playing ping­pong. 在约翰的帮助下，我在打乒乓球上有了很大的进步。 9. One of the most important things I have learned is how to make better use of the computer.我学到的最重要的事情之一就是如何更好地利用电脑。 10. These ways can not only improve my listening and speaking skills, but also develop my reading ability. 这些方法不仅可以提高我的听说技能，还可以培养我的阅读能力。 11. I learned a lesson that team work plays an important role in achieving success. 我吸取了一个教训，即团队合作在取得成功中起着重要的作用。 在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group？”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Studying alone Studying with a group ◇solve problems on my own ◇get help from others ◇keep my mind on schoolwork ◇share ideas with group members 　　写作要求：1. 文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.___________ ____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【成文】 Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. ①As for me, I like studying alone better. ②Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. ③Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. ④In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life. 加分亮点 ①句以as for me作为开头，自然而然地引出作者所喜欢的学习方式，逻辑流畅合理； ②句使用动名词作主语，说明作者喜欢独自学习的第一个理由，使文章表达更为丰富； ③句使用when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句，具体说明独自学习的其他益处，使文章内容具体充实； ④句以介词短语in this way作为开头，展望独自学习会给作者带来的影响，使文章逻辑更为严密完整。 话题链接： 1．学好英语的条件之一是科学的方法。请你以“The Change(s) in My English Learning Way(s)”为主题，写一篇短文向英语杂志社投稿。 内容： 1. 你英语学习方法有什么变化； 2. 学习方法的改变给你带来的影响。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．英语学习之路总在不断变化与成长。请结合自身经历以“My Changes in Learning English”为题写一篇短文，描述你英语学习中的今昔变化；回忆过去学习的困扰，分享自己有效的学习方法，学习能力的转变以及取得的进步，最后谈谈你从这段成长中获得的感悟。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80词； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你叫李浩，你的英国朋友Tim来信告知，他这个学期选修了汉语，但是学习起来倍感吃力，如听不懂中文授课，记不住汉语语法，口头表达时紧张，写作时没有章法等。请你根据思维导图提示，用英文给他写一封回信。 要求：(1)80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息。 Dear Tim, It’s great to learn that you have been learning Chinese and it’s normal for you to have met some difficulties. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hao 4．假如你是王华，周末班上要举行学习方法交流会，你将作发言。在学习过程中，你有自己的学习方法，它有效地帮助你提高了学习成绩，让学习成为了一种享受。请按以下的提示和要求写一篇英语短文，和同学们分享一下你的学习方法： 注意：1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．同学们已经进入初中学习生活的最后阶段，每位同学都有自己的学习方法与习惯。请围绕下面的思维导图写一篇短文，和你的同学们分享一下你的学习英语的经验和建议。 要求： 1. 80-120词。 2. 包含思维导图中的所有信息。 3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。 参考信息 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题五：事物介绍 ★话题命题角度 “介绍事物”作为命题素材，要求考生描写自己熟悉的生活学习环境及对自己有意义的物品等。此类话题作文体裁以说明文为主，偶尔涉及议论文或者应用文，如写信向笔友或媒体介绍相关事物等。 ＞话题佳句记背 事物特征作用 1.What he needs is the shirt of a happy person to wear. 他需要穿一件快乐的人的衬衫。 2.The electronic dictionary is silver and it is small enough to be put into my pocket. 这个电子词典是银色的，而且很小，可以放到我的口袋里。 3.When I meet new words， I can look them up in it. 我碰到新词时，可以在里面查。 4.It is a book with a fantastic sunrise on its cover. 这本书的封面上有美丽的日出。 喜欢的原因 1.Lucky makes a big difference to my life. “幸运儿”对我的生活影响很大。 2.Reading a good book is like talking with a wise man. 读一本好书就像与智者交谈。 3.Every morning， the clock wakes me up at the time I set for on the night before. 每天早上，闹钟都会在我前一天晚上设定的时间叫醒我。 想法感受 1.From learning how to ride the bike， I learn that I should never give up when I meet difficulties. 通过学习如何骑自行车，我明白在遇到困难时应永不言弃。 2.Every day the clock reminds me that I should be on time in order to be a responsible person. 每天，闹钟都会提醒我要守时，做一个有责任感的人。 3.Besides， it never stops working and also teaches me that I should never waste time. 此外，它从不停止工作，也教会我不应该浪费时间。 4.I will cherish it because it can not only build up my body， but also teach me how to face the difficulties bravely. 我会珍惜它，因为它不仅使我更加强壮，而且教导我如何勇敢面对困难。 ＞开头中间结尾模板 开头段 1.I want to have a magic eraser that/which can sweep away the bad memories. 我想要一块有魔力的橡皮，它可以消除不好的记忆。 2. It seems that many people all over the world drink Chinese tea. 似乎全世界有很多人喝中国茶。 3. Among all the books I have， I like Harry Potter best. 在我所拥有的书里， 我最喜欢的是《哈利·波特》。 4.There is a beautiful alarm on my desk. Behind it is a moving story between my best friend and me. 我的桌上有一个漂亮的闹钟。它的背后是一个我和我最好的朋友间的感人故事。 中间段 I got the pen at my ninth birthday. I remember that one month before my birthday， my uncle， then in Shanghai， asked what present I wanted. I thought for a while and said， I wanted a pen to write with， because we can write with a pen from Grade 3. Then on my birthday， Uncle gave the pen to me. It was a purple pen with beautiful flowers on it. I liked it very much and began to learn to write with it. 这支笔是我九岁生日时得到的。我记得在我生日的前一个月，我的叔叔，他当时在上海，问我想要什么礼物。我想了一会儿说，我想要一支钢笔用来写字，因为从三年级开始我们就可以用钢笔写字了。然后在我生日的时候，叔叔把笔给了我。那是一支紫色的笔，上面画着美丽的花朵。我非常喜欢它并开始学习用它写字。 结尾段 1.It always reminds me of my happy childhood and my grandparents’ love for me. 它总是让我想起我的快乐童年和我的祖父母对我的爱。 2. The computer does me much good and I will make full use of it in my future studies. 这台电脑帮了我很多，我在以后的学业中会好好利用它。 ＞话题俗语谚语 1.Books are the ladder of human progress. 书是人类进步的阶梯。 2.Reading makes a full man. 读书使人充实。 3.A good book is like a window into another world. 一本好书就像一扇通往另外一个世界的窗户。 4.Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。 5.Time never returns when it is lost. 时光一去不复返。 在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。你想要拥有什么？ 请以“I want to have ______”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。 1.要点：请补全标题，如a football， a mountain bike或a magic paintbrush等。 2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 I want to have 　　　 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ＞写作指导 1.内容：谈论自己想拥有的某样物品及其原因。可选角度：现实物品（足球或山地自行车等）或想象中的物品（一个神奇的画笔）等； 2.人称：介绍自己想拥有的物品，用第一人称； 3.时态：介绍自己想拥有的物品一般用一般现在时或一般将来时；描述过去某事让自己想拥有这个物品则用一般过去时。 ＞写作框架 ＞典例赏析 I want to have a magic paintbrush I want to have a paintbrush with magic power so that 　(亮点点评：so that句型)　I can make whatever I draw become a reality.　(亮点点评：make sth. ＋动词原形； whatever的使用)　 With the paintbrush， I can draw a new earth where there will be no pollution.　(亮点点评：where引导的定语从句)　 The river will be clean as well as 　(亮点点评：短语as well as的使用)　the sky will be blue. With the paintbrush， I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family. I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world. 　(亮点点评：动词不定式短语作目的状语)　 话题链接： 1．学校科技节即将来临，你将介绍你的发明——智能勺子“iSpoon”。请根据下图写一篇发言稿。 要求： 1．可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2．词数：80词左右； 3．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．某英文网站正在举办以“My Favorite Invention”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。 提示： 1. What’s your favorite invention? 2. Why do you like it? 3. What do you use it for? 要求： 1.短文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）。若文中出现人名，请选择使用：Mr. Liu/ Ms. Wang/ Ma Li/ Wang Gang； 4.词数：不少于70 My Favorite Invention ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校英文网站最近正在举办主题为“My favorite invention”的演讲比赛。假设你是王华，打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语作文，不少于80词。 灯泡 (The lightbulb) 发明人 Thomas Edison，美国发明家 发明时间 1879年10月21日 原料 玻璃和金属 (metal) 用途 照明，提供光亮，人们可以在夜晚工作或学习 优点 节能 (save energy)，环保，便宜 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．世界上有很多发明，它们极大地改变了人们的生活。请以“The invention that I like most”为题，并根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你最喜欢的发明是什么； 2. 它对你生活的影响； 3. …… 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100 (标题已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 The invention that I like most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．发明改变世界。请你根据表格，以“A useful invention”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、发明者、手机用途 (至少三个)，并分享作为青少年我们如何合理地使用手机的建议 (至少两点)，使它真正成为最有用的发明之一。 Invention Mobile Phone Inventor American, Martin Cooper Time 1973 Usage 方便与他人交流 …… Your opinions about how to use them 上学日不能使用手机 …… 要求：短文须包含以上内容，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯，词数80—100。 A Useful Invention The mobile phone is one of the most useful inventions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题六：科学技术 【词汇积累】 科学技术与发明创造 1. technology科技；技术 2. project项目；工程 3. AI人工智能 4. VR虚拟现实 5. screen屏幕 6. produce生产；制造 7. save保存；存储 8. repair修理；修补 9. online在线的 10. electronic电子的；电子设备的 　　　11. digital数字的；数码的 12. convenient方便的 　　　　　　　 13. space station太空站 14. scientific study科学研究 　　　　　 15. high­speed railway高铁 16. search for搜寻；查找 　　　　　　 17. be made of/from 由……制成 18. connect… with…把……和……连接起来 19. take the place of取代 20. be used for被用于…… 　　　　　　　 21. take place发生；出现 22. with the development of随着……的发展 23. compare… with比较；对比 24. by mistake错误地；无意中 　　　　　　25. come up with想出；提出 26. be invented by由……发明 　　　　　　27. for the first time第一次 科技与生活 1. effect作用；影响 2. advantage优点 3. information信息 4. discover发现；发觉 5. careful小心的；慎重的 6. explore探索 7. style样式；款式 　　　　　 8. play a role发挥作用；有影响 9. mobile robot移动机器人 　　　　　10. recycled material再生材料 11. thanks to由于；因为 　　　　　 12. lead to导致 13. surf the Internet上网 　　　　　 14. change one's life改变某人的生活 15. electronic product电子产品 　　　 16. in the future在未来 17. benefit from从……中受益 　　　　18. be helpful for对……有帮助 常用好句 科学技术与发明创造 1. The smart fridge can be connected to wireless networks and used for shopping.智能冰箱可以连接无线网络，用于购物。 2. In addition, the smart screen on the fridge has many functions, such as playing music and displaying menus by voice.此外，冰箱上的智能屏幕还具有播放音乐、语音控制显示菜单等多种功能。 3. The computer is one of the greatest inventions and is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.计算机是最伟大的发明之一，在我们的日常生活中越来越受欢迎。 科技与生活 4. Sweeping robots can help us do chores so that we can have more time to do other things.扫地机器人可以帮助我们做家务，这样我们就可以有更多的时间做其他的事情。 5. The advantage of AI products is that they all bring great convenience and progress to our society.人工智能产品的优点是它们给我们的社会带来了极大的便利和进步。 6. Thanks to these amazing inventions and the great inventors, our lives have been greatly improved.多亏了这些奇妙的发明和伟大的发明家，我们的生活得到了极大改善。 7. However, some students rely on AI too much so they have trouble dealing with problems independently.然而，一些学生过于依赖人工智能，所以他们在独立处理问题时遇到了麻烦。 8. Although robots can be of much help, our love for the elderly can't be replaced.虽然机器人可以提供很多帮助，但我们对老人的爱是无法被替代的。 人工智能正在改变我们的日常生活。请你结合下面图示信息，以“AI in Our Life”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校科技节举办的演讲比赛。 写作要求：1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students， As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ That's all. Thank you for your listening! AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students， As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our life. We can see many kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. If we have problems with our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers might lose their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. All in all, each coin has two sides, so does AI. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it'll bring much convenience to our future life. That's all. Thank you for your listening! 话题链接： 1．随着科学技术的发展，AI宠物正缓缓走入人们的生活。假如你是学校英语俱乐部成员，上周你们围绕话题“Would you like to keep an AI pet?”进行了讨论，请根据下面讨论观点写一篇100词左右的英文总结，概述同学们对AI宠物的看法，并谈谈自己的见解。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 2. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．科学技术日新月异，层出不穷的新科技正快速改变着我们的生活。假如你是李华，你就读的国际学校正在举办主题为 “Life in the Future” 的科技创意大赛，设计对象可以是 school，house 等建筑物，也可以是 robot，schoolbag 等物品。请发挥你的想象，根据以下思维导图，写一篇演讲稿向同学们介绍你的一个设计构思。 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear classmates, I'm Li Hua, a big fan of new technology, and I am very excited to share my design with you all. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 3．科学技术是第一生产力，现在我们处于一个科技飞速发展时代，科技产品就在我们身边，他们无时无刻都在影响着我们的生活，像冰箱、彩电、空调、计算机、机器人、数码相机、智能手机、汽车、无人驾驶汽车(driverless car)、高铁等等，在这些或其它你熟悉的科技产品中，哪一种对我们的生活产生了巨大影响，请以什么 ________ has influenced (影响) our life a lot为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。 要点： （1）科学技术的重要性； （2）你认为什么科技影响了我们的生活，它是如何影响我们的生活的； （3）对此你有什么感悟。 要求： （1）把题目补充完整； （2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名； （3）书写规范，100 词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．在本月最后一个星期五，学校即将在操场开展2024科技展览会 (Tech Expo 2024)，旨在培养学生对STEM (科学、技术、工程和数学) 的热情。假如你是学校科学俱乐部的成员Kate，你需要负责邀请校内的美国交流生Lily参与活动。请你按照下列提示的要点，写一封邀请信。 要点提示： 1. 活动时间，地点及目的 2. 活动内容：①科技产品展示；②……；③…… 3. 你的期待 写作要求： 1. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书面规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 字数要求80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：技术technology    旨在aim at    充满热情的passionate    产品product Dear Lily, As the annual Tech Expo 2024 draws near, on behalf of the Science Club, I am writing to you to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply! Warm regards, Kate 5．在这个飞速发展的数字时代，人工智能，即AI，已经悄然渗入我们生活的方方面面。河南省实验中学是一所“科技+学术”型重点中学。在校科技节上，将举办题为 “AI in Our Life” 的中英双语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。 内容要点： 1. AI的好处。 2. AI在生活中对你的帮助。 3. 对AI过度依赖带来的影响。 写作要求： 1. 参考思维导图，选取部分内容，也可自已发挥。 2. 不得出现真实的姓名和班级。 3. 词数100词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $