【人物成长家庭温情类】假期最好打开方式：爷爷奶奶的笑，比旅游景点更治愈 讲义 -2024-2025学年高二英语作文复习专项

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 江苏省南通市海安高级中学2024-2025学年高二下学期6月月考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Final exams were approaching, and everyone in school was excited about vacations. We were dreaming of far-off destinations, our minds filled with images of thrilling adventures(独立主格)(交代背景信息). After school on Friday, on my way home, I ran into my best friend. Enthusiastic about the vacations(adj短语做主语补语), I asked him about his plans. His eyes twinkled brightly as he replied, “I’ m going to visit my grandparents with my parents for a week.” “Don't you ever get tired of going to the same place year after year? I remember, every year, your family takes 7 to 10 days off to head back to your native village,” I asked, raising an eyebrow in curiosity(现在分词做伴随动作). “Oh, not at all! That's the absolute best time of the year for me! Being with my folks in the village(动名词短语做主语) is just amazing.” His face beamed with joy as he continued, “In the village, I get to meet so many wonderful people, and everyone there is so kind and welcome. Our neighborhood crew is tight! We' re always hanging out together, you know? Just running wild, chilling by the lake, or bouncing between each other's houses(动名词短语并列). Honestly, I know what really matters about these village trips. It's not the cool places we see—it's spending time with the people I love(递进句式). That's the real treasure of life(交代影响主人公的价值观).” His words made me recall my own grandparents. I realized I hadn't seen them for years. But still, it's a pleasure to be there... we had big long gardens and a big multi-story house. The next day, over breakfast, I mustered up the courage and asked my parents, “Can we visit grandparents this summer after exams?” Dad replied hesitantly, “Oh, that's unexpected.” Mom was surprised. “Well, you know it gets really hot there this time of year.” After a short pause, Dad gave a small sigh and met my hopeful gaze. “However,” he said, “if you perform well in exams, we'll make the trip.” For the next six weeks, I threw myself completely into my studies. My mom was amazed by this sudden transformation in me. Soon came the long-awaited exam results(倒装句). 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with “PLEASE”. Paragraph 2: I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. 江苏省南通市海安高级中学2024-2025学年高二下学期6月月考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Final exams were approaching, and everyone in school was excited about vacations. We were dreaming of far-off destinations, our minds filled with images of thrilling adventures. After school on Friday, on my way home, I ran into my best friend. Enthusiastic about the vacations, I asked him about his plans. His eyes twinkled brightly as he replied, “I’ m going to visit my grandparents with my parents for a week.” “Don't you ever get tired of going to the same place year after year? I remember, every year, your family takes 7 to 10 days off to head back to your native village,” I asked, raising an eyebrow in curiosity. “Oh, not at all! That's the absolute best time of the year for me! Being with my folks in the village is just amazing.” His face beamed with joy as he continued, “In the village, I get to meet so many wonderful people, and everyone there is so kind and welcome. Our neighborhood crew is tight! We' re always hanging out together, you know? Just running wild, chilling by the lake, or bouncing between each other's houses. Honestly, I know what really matters about these village trips. It's not the cool places we see—it's spending time with the people I love. That's the real treasure of life.” His words made me recall my own grandparents. I realized I hadn't seen them for years. But still, it's a pleasure to be there... we had big long gardens and a big multi-story house. The next day, over breakfast, I mustered up the courage and asked my parents, “Can we visit grandparents this summer after exams?” Dad replied hesitantly, “Oh, that's unexpected.” Mom was surprised. “Well, you know it gets really hot there this time of year.” After a short pause, Dad gave a small sigh and met my hopeful gaze. “However,” he said, “if you perform well in exams, we'll make the trip.” For the next six weeks, I threw myself completely into my studies. My mom was amazed by this sudden transformation in me. Soon came the long-awaited exam results. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with “PLEASE”. Paragraph 2: I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. 1. 文章分类与续写思路分析 文章类型：个人家庭情感类（通过家庭关系与价值观的转变体现成长）。 续写构思方向： 主题：亲情的重要性与价值观的转变（从追求外在刺激到珍惜家庭纽带）。 布局： 第一段：通过考试成绩和恳求推动情节，父母态度软化，决定前往祖父母家。 第二段：抵达后的情感爆发（如祖父母的惊喜、母亲的感动），强化主题。 框架提炼： 冲突解决：父母最初的犹豫→主角努力→达成条件→家庭和解。 情感升华：通过环境对比（城市与乡村）、动作细节（如母亲流泪）体现情感转折。 续写注意事项： 事项 说明 承接原文 需延续“考试成绩”和“父母承诺”的伏笔，衔接“PLEA”的恳求语气。 情感一致性 保持主角从“忽视亲情”到“渴望团聚”的心理变化，避免突兀。 伏笔呼应 需提及“炎热天气”“多年未见”等原文细节，解释父母最初犹豫的原因。 语言风格 延续口语化表达（如“running wild”“tight crew”）和情感形容词（如“beamed”）。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山结构： 开端：假期计划引发主角对朋友的羡慕。 发展：主角回忆祖父母，向父母提出请求。 高潮：父母设条件，主角努力学习。 回落：考试成绩公布，家庭决定成行。 结局（续写部分）：团聚的情感释放。 衔接点与关键分析： 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 朋友热爱乡村生活，主角从质疑到认同。 “His face beamed with joy...” “I realized I hadn’t seen them for years.” 情感层次 从兴奋（假期）→羡慕（朋友）→愧疚（祖父母）→决心（考试）。 “His words made me recall...” “I threw myself completely into my studies.” 关键情节点 父母的条件成为转折点。 “if you perform well in exams, we’ll make the trip.” 隐含线索 祖父母家的环境（花园、大房子）暗示家庭温暖。 “we had big long gardens and a big multi-story house.” 冲突点 主角渴望团聚 vs 父母对炎热天气的担忧。 “Mom was surprised... it gets really hot there.” 解决方案 主角通过努力达成父母条件，推动家庭行动。 续写需体现父母被感动，兑现承诺。 3. 动作、心理、环境描写 动作描写 1. His hands trembled as he unfolded the letter.（他颤抖着双手展开信。） 2. She clenched her fists, trying to hold back tears.（她攥紧拳头，强忍泪水。） 3. He dashed into the room, breathless with excitement.（他冲进房间，兴奋得上气不接下气。） 4. Her fingers traced the faded photograph gently.（她的手指轻轻抚过褪色的照片。） 5. The old man shuffled slowly across the creaky wooden floor.（老人拖着脚步慢慢走过吱呀作响的木地板。） 6. She flung her arms around her grandmother in a tight hug.（她张开双臂紧紧抱住祖母。） 7. He hesitated at the door, gripping the handle tightly.（他在门口犹豫着，紧紧握住门把手。） 8. The kids sprinted across the field, laughing wildly.（孩子们大笑着冲过田野。） 9. She slumped onto the couch, exhausted from the journey.（她瘫倒在沙发上，旅途让她筋疲力尽。） 10. His footsteps echoed in the empty hallway.（他的脚步声在空荡的走廊里回荡。） 心理描写 1. A wave of guilt washed over him as he remembered his promise.（想起自己的承诺，一阵愧疚感涌上心头。） 2. Her heart swelled with joy at the sight of her childhood home.（看到童年的家，她心中充满喜悦。） 3. Doubt gnawed at him—had he made the right decision?（疑虑啃噬着他——他是否做了正确的决定？） 4. A flicker of hope sparked in her chest.（她心中闪过一丝希望。） 5. His mind raced, searching for an excuse.（他思绪翻腾，寻找借口。） 6. She bit her lip, torn between staying and leaving.（她咬着嘴唇，在留下和离开之间挣扎。） 7. A deep sense of nostalgia settled over him.（一种深深的怀旧感笼罩着他。） 8. Fear coiled in his stomach like a snake.（恐惧像蛇一样在他胃里缠绕。） 9. Relief flooded through her when she heard the good news.（听到好消息，她如释重负。） 10. His confidence wavered as the moment of truth approached.（真相即将揭晓，他的信心动摇了。） 环境描写 The golden sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dancing shadows.（金色的阳光透过树叶，投下摇曳的阴影。） A crisp autumn breeze rustled the fallen leaves.（清爽的秋风拂过落叶，沙沙作响。） The scent of freshly baked bread wafted from the kitchen.（新鲜出炉的面包香气从厨房飘来。） The old house groaned under the weight of time.（老房子在岁月的重压下发出吱呀声。） The lake shimmered under the moonlight like liquid silver.（湖水在月光下闪烁，如流动的银。） The bustling market buzzed with chatter and laughter.（熙熙攘攘的市场充满了谈笑声。） A thick blanket of snow muffled all sound.（厚厚的雪毯消弭了一切声音。） The scent of rain hung heavy in the air.（空气中弥漫着雨的气息。） Crickets chirped in the tall grass, a lullaby of the night.（蟋蟀在高草丛中鸣叫，像夜晚的摇篮曲。） The city lights twinkled like distant stars.（城市的灯光像遥远的星星一样闪烁。） 4. 高级替换词（按场景分类） 场景 基础词 高级替换词 快乐 happy elated, overjoyed, ecstatic, jubilant, euphoric 悲伤 sad melancholic, despondent, heartbroken, forlorn, crestfallen 惊讶 surprised astonished, flabbergasted, dumbfounded, startled, taken aback 紧张 nervous apprehensive, jittery, on edge, uneasy, fretful 愤怒 angry furious, enraged, livid, incensed, seething 5. 常见搭配、词法解析及语料积累 固定搭配（Collocations） Muster up courage（鼓起勇气） She mustered up the courage to ask her parents. Throw oneself into（全身心投入） He threw himself into his studies. Be taken aback（大吃一惊） She was taken aback by his sudden question. Burst into tears（突然大哭） He burst into tears when he saw his old home. Eyes twinkled with joy（眼中闪烁着喜悦） Her eyes twinkled with joy at the news. 可积累的生词短语 Beam with joy（喜笑颜开） His face beamed with joy when he saw his family. 近义词： glow with happiness 反义词： frown in disappointment Hesitantly reply（犹豫地回答） Dad replied hesitantly, “Oh, that’s unexpected.” 近义词： reluctantly answer 反义词： confidently state A wave of nostalgia（一阵怀旧感） A wave of nostalgia hit her when she entered the old house. 近义词： flood of memories 反义词： sense of detachment Echo in the hallway（在走廊里回荡） His laughter echoed in the empty hallway. 近义词： resonate in the corridor 反义词： fade into silence Shuffle across the floor（拖着脚走过地板） The old man shuffled across the creaky floor. 近义词： trudge slowly 反义词： stride confidently 5. Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1: I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with “PLEASE.” Heart pounding with excitement(独立主格), I watched them read my scorecard, fingers crossed tightly behind my back(独立主格). My dad's brows lifted in pleasant surprise, and my mom covered her mouth, smiling with watery eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Without hesitation, Dad gave a nod, “A promise is a promise.” My heart leapt with joy. We packed quickly and hit the road the next morning. As we neared the village, childhood memories resurfaced—the scent of fresh soil, the chirping of birds, the narrow lanes(名词并列) I once explored. Grandpa opened the wooden gate, arms outstretched(独立主格), while Grandma gently held my hand, her palm as warm as ever(独立主格). We shared simple meals under the trees in the big long garden and laughed over stories long forgotten(过去分词做后置定语). The big multi-story house hadn’t changed, but I had(递进描写). I now saw it not just as a building, but as a home brimming with(现在分词短语做后置定语) love, comfort, and unspoken connection(名词并列).We all lost track of time completely, only to find us saying goodbye. Paragraph 2: I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. She stood at the doorstep, her hand resting gently on Grandma’s arm(独立主格), reluctant(adj短语做主语补语)to let go. Grandpa waved with a weathered smile, urging us to visit again soon(现在分词做伴随动作). As we drove away, the mirror caught my mother wiping her cheeks silently, her lips quivering(独立主格). I felt a tug at my heart. That summer had planted something new in me—a deep appreciation for family ties. Replaying Grandpa’s jokes and Grandma’s warm laughter in my head(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized I had uncovered a part of myself I didn’t know was missing. My best friend’s words echoed: “It’s about the people, not the places.” That moment I knew—life's most genuine happiness lies not in adventures far away, but in moments shared with those who love you unconditionally. From that day forward, we made visiting them not an exception, but a tradition. Version 2 Paragraph 1: I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE." Seeing my score cards(现在分词做伴随动作), my dad raised his eyebrows, then broke into a rare smile. “Looks like someone really meant it”, he chuckled, handing the note to Mom(现在分词做伴随动作). Without hesitation, they nodded in agreement. The very next week, we packed our bags and boarded the train. On stepping into the village, the familiar scent of blooming flowers and the warmth of the sun on the tiled roofs instantly brought back memories(无灵主语句). Grandpa stood at the gate, waving with that same gentle smile(现在分词做伴随动作). During the visit, we worked together in the long garden, picking vegetables and watering the plants(动作串描写). I spent hours with my family under the shade of old trees, laughing(现在分词做伴随动作)just like we did when I was kids. The streets, though quieter than before, still echoed with the joy of our childhood(无灵主语句). Everything seemed slower, simpler—and somehow more real(环境描写). That week was filled with peaceful moments, shared stories, and a renewed sense of connection(名词并列). It wasn’t just a vacation; it was like finding a missing piece of myself(递进描写). Paragraph 2: I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. She gave Grandma one last hug, her voice trembling(独立主格刻画人物神态), “We shouldn’t have waited so long.” As we drove away, silence filled the car(无灵主语句). Looking out the window(现在分词做伴随动作), I watched the dusty roads disappear behind us, and with them, a part of me stayed(情绪渲染). That summer had changed everything—not just my exam results, but my understanding of love and home. I finally grasped what my friend meant: the most valuable treasures are not bought, but felt—through shared meals, quiet moments, and hands(名词并列) held in silence(过去分词做后置定语). Ever since that trip, returning to our village(动名词短语做主语) became more than a holiday; it was a ritual of remembrance and rediscovery. 动作描写：raised his eyebrows, boarded the train, packed our bags, greeted us with open arms, hugged tightly 心理描写词汇：warm memories flooded my mind, heart beat in tune, a part of me stayed 地道搭配：board the train, flooded with memories, beat in tune, shared laughter, dusty roads disappear 情绪描写：tears in her eyes, voice trembling, silence filled the car 词汇升级： “happy” → “joyful”, “delighted” “big” → “spacious”, “vast” “nice” → “heartwarming”, “comforting” “remember” → “recall”, “reminisce” “say” → “whisper”, “murmur” Version 3 Paragraph 1: I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE." Dad raised his eyebrows, exchanged a glance with Mom, and both burst into smiles(动作串描写). “You did it!” Mom said, giving me a tight hug(现在分词做伴随动作). Soon, we packed our bags and boarded the train to the village. When we arrived, the sight of our old home warmed my heart(无灵主语句). Grandpa greeted us at the gate with open arms, his voice shaky yet cheerful(独立主格刻画人物状态). We spent the week harvesting vegetables, sharing laughter at dinner, and listening to Grandma’s tales under the stars(现在分词短语做动作串描写). I found joy in simple things — feeding chickens, drawing water from the well, or sitting quietly by the pond, listening to the frogs croak and the wind rustle the trees(现在分词短语并列).My heart, once distant from it(对比描写), beat in tune with its rhythm again. Paragraph 2: I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. Grandma held her hand and whispered, “Come back soon.” Mom smiled through her tears and nodded. As the car started, I looked back to see Grandpa waving, his figure growing smaller(独立主格). On the road, I found myself silently promising to return. That trip taught me that roots, once ignored(对比描写), don’t vanish; they wait patiently to be found again. Back in the city, everything felt faster, louder(无灵主语，主动表被动), but I tresured this trip and what my best friend meant: the most valuable thing is spending time with the people I love and who love me. From that year on, visiting my grandparents(现在分词短语做主语) was not an option—it became a heartfelt need(递进句式). And with every return, my connection to them, and to myself, deepened. 心理动作描写：eyes widened with surprise, hearts softened with pride, silently promising 固定搭配：sense of simplicity, faded into distance, held her hand, smiled through tears 同义/替换词： “fast” → “rapid”, “hurried” “look” → “gaze”, “glance” “feel” → “sense”, “experience” “start” → “begin”, “set off” 读后续写： I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and a note with "PLEASE. " Upon seeing the high marks on my scorecard(一...就), they kept their word, nodding with a firm and delighted “yes.(现在分词做伴随动作)” Exclaiming with wild joy(现在分词做伴随动作), I along with my parents, headed for my grandparents' house. On our arrival, we were greeted with Grandparents’ open arms, their faces beaming with happiness(独立主格). The following week witnessed my family's simple yet pure pleasure(无灵主语句). We appreciated the flowers shyly displaying(现在分词做后置定语)their full blossom in the big long gardens and stayed in the cozy and multi-story home with grandpa narrating the behind-the-screen story(with 复合结构). I was drowned in warm and heartfelt happiness, enjoying the sweet time(现在分词短语做伴随动作) spent with my grandparents(过去分词短语做后置定语). Despite the heating temperature, so immersed was I that(倒装句) I could barely believe it was time to say goodbye. I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. She blinked hard, trying to fight back the tears(现在分词短语做伴随动作) spinning in her red-rimmed eyes(现在分词短语做伴随动作) but failed. Grandparents stroked her shoulder affectionately, blooming a warming smile(现在分词短语做伴随动作) to us and saying(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that it was the most pleased summer they had experienced. On the way back home, all the memories flooded in my mind. With all the scenes unfolded in my brain(with复合结构), I came to realize my best friends’ words: nothing was more precious than family bond, constantly reminding(现在分词短语做后置定语) us to cherish people we love, remembering them and restoring beautiful memory with them(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Since then, we've been frequent guests of my grandparents' house, and every time I got there, I was savoring the real treasure of life - sharing time with the beloved ones(现在分词短语做伴随动作). 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $