新课标I卷：人与人情感修复类读后续写 讲义-2026届高考英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习讲义聚焦读后续写核心考点，围绕亲情修复类文本的情节逻辑、情感线索及语言表达，按“题材分类-故事山结构-线索梳理-描写策略”体系架构知识，通过考点解读、方法指导（如心理动作描写技巧）、真题演练（多版本范文对比）等环节，帮助学生构建续写思维框架，突破情节衔接与情感表达难点。 讲义突出思维品质与语言能力培养，创新采用“故事山结构分析”引导学生掌握情节发展规律，结合“动作心理环境描写语料库”（如“a wave of guilt washed over me”等高级表达）提升语言精度。设置分层练习与亮点搭配解析，如通过对比不同范文的道歉场景描写，让学生快速掌握情感递进技巧，为教师精准把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供系统支持。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 2025年高考英语 新课标I卷读后续写【题目来源于网络】 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer (交代故事的背景信息). She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order (经典用法，宾补). There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: my brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire (同位语，给出补充信息). Though friendly (让步), he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter(潜在的风险，也就是冲突). So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog(冲突点). Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise—a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking(现在分词做伴随动作) he should call first. However, my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues(冲突点), and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I realized it was me who was at fault. Paragraph 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. 2025年高考英语 新课标I卷读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: my brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise—a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues, and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1) 续写词数应为150左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. 一、 文章分类与续写思路分析 分析角度 内容说明 题材类型 亲情修复类 / 家庭冲突类（误会→反思→修复） 续写类型 情感递进型（心理转变＋行为行动） 冲突设置 室内接待安排与兄弟之间的误解 情节主线 主人公意识到自己处理方式不妥→尝试修复兄弟关系 情感线索 误会→自责→共情→修复→和解 续写思路 围绕主人公“意识到自己的错误”展开 → 行动求和 → 情感共鸣回归亲情 续写布局 第一段：心理转变 + 起身行动；第二段：见面沟通 + 情感修复 续写注意事项 ① 不引入新人物；② 保持语体一致；③ 语言自然合理；④ 情感层层递进；⑤ 心理和行为描写结合；⑥ 合理运用原文线索承接 二、故事山结构分析 故事山结构 内容说明 原文反应句 背景介绍 家庭聚会准备，分工明确 “My wife and I wanted to share our new home…” 冲突出现 狗带来的问题＋哥哥离开 “Eventually, my brother decided to leave…” 情感低谷 哥哥冷淡回复，两个月无联系 “Not a chance.” / “Two months passed…” 转折点 主人公换位思考，理解哥哥 “I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes…” 情感上升 主动承担责任，决定修复关系 “I realized it was me who was at fault.” 高潮 登门拜访，沟通修复 续写首句：“With the biscuits my wife had made…” 结局 （应续写设计）关系缓和，情感升华 续写结尾句应体现“共情”与“原谅” 三、可用于续写的线索 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 主人公（自尊但善良）、哥哥（敏感+依赖Toby） “I resisted, thinking he should call first.” / “Toby was his constant companion…” 情感层次 起初防备→冷战→理解→修复 “Well, he’ll get over it… I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes.” 关键情节点 狗引起的矛盾、哥哥离开、收到拒绝短信、自我反思 “Eventually, my brother decided to leave.” / “Not a chance.” / “I realized it was me…” 语言特色 叙述简洁、细节具体，动作心理交织 “my conscience kept bothering me…” 关键词分析 “awkward moment”, “wet dog”, “not a chance”, “conscience”, “shoes” 心理描写 自我辩解→愧疚→换位思考→愿意行动 “my conscience kept bothering me…” / “I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes…” 动作描写 准备庭院、阻止进屋、发短信、最终决定登门 “I asked him to watch Toby…” / “I texted him…” 环境描写 天气变化突生转折，增强情节真实感 “Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed…” 隐含主题 家庭包容、理解的重要性；换位思考化解矛盾 情感转折 从自我为中心→设身处地体谅哥哥 → 主动求和 “I realized it was me…” 是心理拐点 空间转换 后院→屋内→沉默冷战→再次拜访哥哥家 时间过渡 “A few days passed…” “Two months passed…”形成合理时间线 四、续写内容设计建议 项目 建议 第一段（段首句：I realized it was me who was at fault.） 用心理描写 + 回忆细节 + 下决心行动构成段落核心。结合“我”意识到当时过于强硬、忽略哥哥情绪；反思狗对哥哥的重要意义；下决心亲自登门求和，展现人物成长。 第二段（段首句：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.） 通过见面场景 + 对话 + 情感缓和推进故事，描写敲门、犹豫、打开门时的眼神、沉默或动作等细节，然后通过狗Toby的反应制造破冰契机，加入简洁真诚的道歉和亲情回应。结尾用一个象征“关系缓和”的动作或对话收束（如：哥哥说“Come in, let’s talk.”，或Toby扑上来亲昵地舔“我”） 3. 动作、心理、环境描写 动作描写 He knocked softly on the door, heart pounding with anticipation. 　他轻轻敲了敲门，心中满是期待。 She handed me the biscuits with a warm smile. 　她带着温暖的微笑把饼干递给我。 My brother stood frozen for a moment before stepping aside. 　我哥哥愣了一下，然后让开了身子。 I reached out to pat Toby gently on the head. 　我伸手轻轻拍了拍Toby的头。 We hugged briefly, both a little awkward. 　我们简单地拥抱了一下，略显尴尬。 He pulled out a chair and gestured for me to sit. 　他拉出一把椅子，示意我坐下。 She brushed a crumb off the table absent-mindedly. 　她心不在焉地扫了一下桌上的面包屑。 He ran his fingers through his hair, clearly conflicted. 　他用手指梳理头发，明显情绪复杂。 I poured him a cup of tea with trembling hands. 　我颤抖着手为他倒了杯茶。 Toby wagged his tail and licked my hand. 　Toby摇着尾巴舔了舔我的手。 心理描写 A wave of guilt washed over me as I looked at him. 　我看着他，一股内疚涌上心头。 I couldn’t help but wonder if I had been too harsh. 　我不禁怀疑自己是否太苛刻了。 A knot of regret twisted in my stomach. 　一股悔意纠结在我的心头。 I felt a lump rise in my throat. 　我喉咙一紧，感到一阵哽咽。 My conscience nagged at me more than ever. 　我的良心前所未有地谴责着我。 I tried to imagine how lonely he must have been. 　我试着想象他该有多孤独。 I hesitated, unsure if he would welcome me. 　我犹豫了，不确定他是否会欢迎我。 A mix of relief and shame flooded through me. 　一种如释重负却又羞愧的感觉涌上心头。 I longed to make things right between us. 　我渴望修复我们之间的关系。 For the first time in weeks, I felt hopeful. 　几个星期以来，我第一次感到希望。 环境描写 The sky was gray, with low clouds hinting at rain. 　天空灰蒙蒙的，低垂的云仿佛预示着即将下雨。 A soft breeze rustled the trees around his house. 　一阵微风吹过他家的树木，树叶沙沙作响。 The smell of fresh biscuits hung in the air. 　空气中弥漫着新出炉饼干的香味。 The room felt warm, though the silence between us was heavy. 　屋子里很温暖，尽管我们之间的沉默让气氛变得沉重。 His front yard was quiet, only broken by Toby’s occasional bark. 　他家前院很安静，只有Toby偶尔的叫声打破寂静。 Rain tapped gently against the windows. 　雨点轻轻地敲打着窗户。 The late afternoon light filtered through the curtains. 　下午的阳光透过窗帘洒进屋内。 The fireplace crackled softly in the background. 　壁炉在背景中轻轻地噼啪作响。 The kitchen smelled like cinnamon and butter. 　厨房里弥漫着肉桂和黄油的香味。 A framed photo of his late wife sat on the mantelpiece. 　他已故妻子的相框照片摆在壁炉台上。 常见词汇替换 基础词 高级替换 适用场景 sad sorrowful / heartbroken / distressed 描写心理、冲突后情感 happy delighted / content / overjoyed 和解、团聚情节 said admitted / murmured / responded 叙事对话写作 think reflect / reason / consider 内心转变、心理描写 walk stroll / pace / march 动作描写变化丰富性 4. 搭配现象、固定搭配、词法解析与语料积累 常见搭配与固定表达解析： host a gathering（举办聚会） 　搭配词义：表示组织社交聚会或集会 　例句：They hosted a small gathering for close friends. keep (sb./sth.) in order（使……井然有序） 　搭配用法：可用于人、物，也用于场面管理 　例句：He tried hard to keep the kids in order during the party. leave someone little choice（让某人几乎别无选择） 　强调被动接受某种结果的无奈 　例句：His attitude left me little choice but to leave. get over something（从……中恢复、释怀） 　常用于感情、疾病、冲突等恢复 　例句：He still hasn’t got over the death of his wife. put oneself in someone’s shoes（设身处地为他人着想） 　固定短语表达共情与反思 　例句：Try to put yourself in his shoes before judging. 可积累的语料与词汇 awkward（adj. 尴尬的） 　同义词：embarrassed, uneasy 　反义词：comfortable, relaxed 　例句1：There was an awkward silence between them. 　例句2：He gave an awkward smile and looked away. conscience（n. 良心） 　同义词：moral sense, inner voice 　反义词：indifference, apathy 　例句1：His conscience wouldn’t let him ignore the issue. 　例句2：She acted according to her conscience. companion（n. 同伴） 　同义词：partner, friend 　反义词：enemy, stranger 　例句1：Toby had been his loyal companion for years. 　例句2：She treated the dog as her constant companion. resent（v. 怨恨，不满） 　同义词：begrudge, dislike 　反义词：accept, welcome 　例句1：He resented being treated like a child. 　例句2：They deeply resented his criticism. hesitate（v. 犹豫） 　同义词：pause, waver 　反义词：decide, proceed 　例句1：I hesitated before knocking on the door. 　例句2：She didn’t hesitate to speak her mind. 5. Possible Versions(4) Version Special Paragraph 1: I realized it was me who was at fault. But it took me weeks to admit it. I had convinced myself that asking my brother to leave with Toby (动名词短语做主语) had been reasonable. But reason doesn't always equal kindness. Every time I saw Toby’s leash hanging in the hallway, a quiet guilt would creep in. My wife had mentioned gently, once or twice, how much my brother had gone through—the worsing health, the lonely nights after his wife passed, the way Toby filled that silent void. I began to see things differently. The dog wasn’t just a “problem guest”; he was my brother’s last thread of connection and comfort. My conscience had spoken louder than I intended. I kept imagining how he must’ve felt, soaked from the rain, uninvited, unloved (过去分词并列). The thought stayed with me until I couldn’t ignore it anymore. Paragraph 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. I stood there longer than I should have, rehearsing my apology (现在分词做伴随动作). The door creaked open, and there he was—older, wearier (并列), but still my brother. Toby barked once, then wagged his tail, sensing something different (现在分词做伴随动作). I held out the tin of biscuits like a peace offering. “They’re still your favorite, right?” I said, trying to sound casual (现在分词做伴随动作). He didn’t speak immediately, but he stepped aside to let me in. The room smelled faintly of dog and old memories. We sat in silence until I said, “I should’ve understood. About Toby. About everything.” His eyes softened, and he nodded slowly. “You’re here now. That’s what matters.” As Toby curled up between us, the distance we’d built quietly began to shrink. Version 1 Paragraph 1： I realized it was me who was at fault. But the thought didn't hit me until my wife placed a cup of tea in front of me and gently said, “Toby wasn’t just a dog, but the only living link to his late wife. (递进描写).” Her words pierced the wall(无灵主语句) I had built around my pride. I looked at the rain-stained window, standing silently (现在分词做伴随动作). I suddenly recalled my brother’s look—hurt and frustrated (adj补充说明)—when he left with Toby soaking wet (现在分词做后置定语). Ashamed(过去分词做adj主语补语), I murmured, “Maybe... I should do something.” Seeing the change in my eyes(现在分词做伴随动作), she smiled and walked into the kitchen. “I’ll bake his favorite biscuits,” she said softly, as if forgiving my stubbornness too. The kitchen filled with the familiar smell of butter and warmth, and for the first time in months, my heart felt lighter.(寓情于景) Paragraph 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. I lifted the door knocker with a trembling hand, my heart pounding(独立主格刻画人物). Toby’s leash was coiled neatly beside the biscuits—a small peace offering. My brother answered, surprise flickering across his face(独立主格刻画人物). I murmured an apology: “I’m truly sorry for how I behaved,” and offered the biscuits. Toby bounded forward, licking my hand, breaking the ice.(现在分词做伴随动作) He accepted them, his expression softening(独立主格). We sat on the porch, the tension easing(独立主格) as I shared how much I’d missed him both and Toby. He sighed, “I understand.” At that moment, I realized that sometimes pride must yield to love. 亮点搭配 & 语料积累 · guilt washed over me 替代 “felt guilty” · nagged at me 替代 “kept bothering me” · peace offering 替代 “gifts” · murmured an apology 替代 “said sorry quietly” · softening expression 替代 “gentler look” 短语替换（同义/升级/联想词） 1. wash over sb. 同：overwhelm / 联想：flood 2. nag at sb. 同：pester；联：nagging conscience 3. trembling hand 同：shaking hand；联想：cold sweat 4. softening 同：easing / opp：hardening；联想：melting away 例句 A wave of shame washed over me when I saw my brother’s reaction. My conscience nagged at me until I finally called him. She offered a peace offering in hopes of reconciliation. He murmured an apology, his voice quivering with regret. Version 2 Paragrpah 1: I realized it was me who was at fault. The quarrel had started small(无灵主语句)—about the dog, about rules—but I had let it grow into a wall of silence. As I sat by the fireplace, my wife sat beside me and asked,“Have you considered how he feels? He didn’t shut you out, you walked away.”Her voice was calm but firm. I sighed, rubbing my temples(现在分词做伴随动作). I replayed my actions—the tone I used, the insistence Toby stayed outside. I suddenly recalled my brother’s look—hurt and frustrated (adj补充说明)—when he left with Toby soaking wet (现在分词做后置定语). She stood up without a word and returned moments later with flour on her hands and warmth in her smile. “Then let’s start fixing it,” she said. “Help me make the biscuits our family valued.” Her kindness, her silent support, made the decision easier. And as we worked together in the quiet kitchen, I began to believe that maybe reconciliation wasn’t so far out of reach. Paragraph 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. I held the warm biscuits in one hand and Toby’s leash in the other. My brother opened the door, eyes wary(独立主格刻画人物). Softly, I said, “I’ve missed you both.” His gaze flickered to the biscuits, then to me(细节刻画). We moved to the porch swing, and I handed him a biscuit. Toby sat between us, tail wagging(独立主格). As I apologized again, I saw tears of relief in my brother’s eyes. The porch light lit the moment, turning awkward silence into heartfelt conversation(现在分词做结果状语). We laughed, shared memories of his late wife, and in that simple exchange, family felt whole again. 亮点搭配 & 语料积累 · I’ve missed you both 情感真挚简洁 · eyes wary 替代 “hesitant look” · tail wagging 直观描写动作 · tears of relief 替代 “crying happily” · heartfelt conversation 替代 “deep talk” 短语替换（同义/升级/联想词） 1. weigh pride against heart 同：struggle；联想：inner conflict 2. flicker to 同：shift to；联：瞬间表达 3. porch swing 同：yard bench；联想：放松场景 4. heartfelt 同：sincere；反：insincere；联想：deep emotion 例句 She said softly, “I’ve missed you too,” and warmth returned. His eyes were wary, but the biscuits helped ease his guard. Toby sat calmly, tail wagging, as we talked. There were tears of relief when we hugged again. Version 3 Paragraph 1: I realized it was me who was at fault. In the stillness of the night, I understood that my insistence had set a wall between us. I dwelt on Toby’s importance as a comfort after his loss and saw how my actions had invalidated that. My conscience seized me—this wasn’t about control; it was about my inability to empathize.That morning, she placed a worn photo of the three of us on the table—me, my brother, and the dog as a puppy. “Some things are bigger than pride,” she whispered, handing me a box(现在分词做伴随动作). It was time, I realized, to humble myself and bridge the gap I had created. Paragraph 2: With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. Standing in the sunlight (现在分词做伴随动作), , the warmth seeping into my back (独立主格), I knocked at the door. Toby’s familiar bark rang out. The door swung open, revealing my brother(现在分词做结果状语), his face unreadable(独立主格). I offered the biscuits and said, “I hope this is a start.” He invited me in, and Toby greeted me with a friendly nudge. We sat at the kitchen table, steam rising from mugs of tea(独立主格). I explained how I regretted prioritizing order over understanding. He nodded slowly, replying(现在分词做伴随动作), “I needed my dog close that night.” I listened, attentive and remorseful(adj做主语补语). Gradually, conversation warmed(无灵主语句); old jokes resurfaced, and the silence vanished(短句并列). When I left, he walked me to the door, and we embraced—peace restored. 亮点搭配 & 语料积累 · humble myself 替代 “lower myself” · seized me 替代 “hit me” · friendly nudge 替代 “push” · steam rising 环境描写自然 · restored peace 替代 “fixed things” 短语替换（同义/升级/联想词） 1. seize (emotion) 同：overcome；联想：抓住机会 2. invite in 同：welcome in；联：open door policy 3. nudge 同：jostle；联想：轻推动作 4. restore peace 同：reconcile；反：disturb；联感：harmony restoration 例句 A sense of regret seized me as I knocked. Toby gave me a friendly nudge, easing the tension. Steam rising from the tea made the kitchen feel warm. By the end, we had restored peace between us. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $