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2025年秋期北京通州区初三英语写作二阅读方式的多样化+高分范文
写 作 任 务
科技改变了我们的阅读方式,带来了更多阅读方式的选择。假设你是李华,你们学校英语社团公众号在做关于选择纸质书或电子书进行阅读为主题的推送。请用英语向同学们推荐你选择的阅读方式及其原因。
提示词语:recommend (推荐), interesting, store, benefits
内容提示:Which do you want to recommend, e-books or paper books?
Why do you recommend this way of reading?
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9.
思 路 点 拨
第一步:审题
文体:这是一篇推荐性的短文,属于说明文的一种。
人称:使用第一人称“I”进行叙述。
时态:主要使用一般现在时。
内容要点:
表明自己推荐的阅读方式(电子书或纸质书)。
详细阐述推荐这种阅读方式的原因。
第二步:写作提纲
开头:简单介绍自己,引出要推荐的阅读方式。
主体:从多个方面阐述推荐的原因,比如阅读的趣味性、存储的便利性、对眼睛的影响等。
结尾:总结观点,再次强调推荐这种阅读方式。
第三步:选词组句
可能用到的词语及中文解释:
recommend推荐,建议。例如:I recommend this book to you.(我向你推荐这本书。)
interesting有趣的,有吸引力的。例如:This story is very interesting.(这个故事非常有趣。)
Store
储存,存储。例如:You can store a lot of files on this USB drive.(你可以在这个U盘上存储很多文件。)
Benefits
好处,益处。例如:There are many benefits of doing exercise.(做运动有很多好处。)
convenient
方便的,便利的。例如:It's very convenient to take the subway.(乘坐地铁非常方便。)
protect
保护。例如:We should protect our eyes.(我们应该保护我们的眼睛。)
environmentally - friendly
环保的。例如:Using reusable bags is environmentally - friendly.(使用可重复使用的袋子是环保的。)
高分作文一:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I strongly recommend e - books as a great way of reading.
There are several reasons for my recommendation. Firstly, e - books are really interesting. They often come with colorful pictures, animations and even sound effects, which can make the reading experience more vivid and engaging. Secondly, storing e - books is super convenient. You can store thousands of e - books on a small device like a tablet or an e - reader, saving a lot of space compared to paper books. Moreover, e - books are environmentally - friendly. They don't require paper, which helps reduce deforestation.
In conclusion, e - books bring us many benefits. They are a wonderful choice for modern readers. So why not give e - books a try?
我是九年级一班的李华。我强烈推荐电子书作为一种很棒的阅读方式。
我推荐电子书有几个原因。首先,电子书非常有趣。它们常常配有彩色图片、动画,甚至还有音效,这能让阅读体验更加生动有趣、引人入胜。其次,存储电子书极其方便。你可以在像平板电脑或电子阅读器这样的小设备上存储数千本电子书,与纸质书相比,节省了大量空间。此外,电子书很环保。它们不需要纸张,这有助于减少森林砍伐。
总之,电子书给我们带来了很多好处。它们是现代读者的绝佳选择。所以为什么不试试电子书呢?
高分作文二:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I'd like to recommend paper books for reading.
Paper books have their unique advantages. For one thing, they are interesting in a different way. The smell of the paper and the feel of turning the pages can create a special reading atmosphere that e - books can't match. For another, reading paper books is good for our eyes. Unlike staring at a screen for a long time when reading e - books, paper books don't put too much strain on our eyes. Also, paper books don't need electricity. You can read them anytime and anywhere without worrying about the battery.
In a word, paper books offer us many benefits. They are a classic and reliable way of reading. I highly recommend them.
我是九年级一班的李华。我想推荐纸质书用于阅读。
纸质书有它们独特的优势。一方面,它们以一种不同的方式有趣。纸张的气味和翻页的感觉能营造出一种电子书无法比拟的特殊阅读氛围。另一方面,阅读纸质书对我们的眼睛有好处。与阅读电子书时长时间盯着屏幕不同,纸质书不会给我们的眼睛带来太多压力。而且,纸质书不需要用电。你可以随时随地阅读它们,不用担心电池问题。
总之,纸质书给我们提供了很多好处。它们是一种经典且可靠的阅读方式。我强烈推荐它们。
好 句 背 诵
以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达:
I strongly recommend e - books as a great way of reading.
中文翻译:我强烈推荐电子书作为一种很棒的阅读方式。
理由:“strongly recommend”这个短语表达出强烈的推荐态度,“as a great way of...”清晰明了地指出电子书在阅读方式中的地位,简洁有力地引出下文。
They often come with colorful pictures, animations and even sound effects, which can make the reading experience more vivid and engaging.
中文翻译:它们常常配有彩色图片、动画,甚至还有音效,这能让阅读体验更加生动有趣、引人入胜。
理由:“come with”形象地说明了电子书附带的内容,“which”引导的非限制性定语从句进一步阐述了这些附带内容对阅读体验的积极影响,使句子逻辑清晰且内容丰富。
You can store thousands of e - books on a small device like a tablet or an e - reader, saving a lot of space compared to paper books.
中文翻译:你可以在像平板电脑或电子阅读器这样的小设备上存储数千本电子书,与纸质书相比,节省了大量空间。
理由:“saving a lot of space compared to...”这个现在分词短语简洁地说明了电子书在存储方面相对于纸质书的优势,使句子结构紧凑,表达流畅。
The smell of the paper and the feel of turning the pages can create a special reading atmosphere that e - books can't match.
中文翻译:纸张的气味和翻页的感觉能营造出一种电子书无法比拟的特殊阅读氛围。
理由:“the smell of... and the feel of...”通过描述纸质书的两个独特感官体验,“that e - books can't match”进一步强调了这种氛围的独特性和纸质书不可替代的特点。
Unlike staring at a screen for a long time when reading e - books, paper books don't put too much strain on our eyes.
中文翻译:与阅读电子书时长时间盯着屏幕不同,纸质书不会给我们的眼睛带来太多压力。
理由:“Unlike...”这个介词短语通过对比,突出了纸质书在保护眼睛方面的优势,使读者能更直观地感受到两者的差异。
In a word, paper books offer us many benefits. They are a classic and reliable way of reading.
中文翻译:总之,纸质书给我们提供了很多好处。它们是一种经典且可靠的阅读方式。
理由:“In a word”用于总结全文,“classic and reliable”准确概括了纸质书的特点,简洁有力地表达出对纸质书的肯定。
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