内容正文:
建议信 Writing
----a letter of advice
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
一、文体概述
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter近期写信给你,信中说他刚刚升入高中,备受压力,导致睡眠不足,无法专注学习。请回复一封信,给出你的建议。内容包括:
1. 做计划;
2. 锻炼;
3. 保持积极的态度。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
二、范文赏析1
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel so worried and stressed at senior high school that you couldn’t sleep well and focus on your study. Here are some tips(建议) for you.
Firstly, make a schedule for your study and finish the to-do list step by step. Besides, working out more and listening to music can cut down your stress and tiredness after study and make you more energetic. What's more, you’d better live in the moment and stop feeling upset about something new or out of control. Instead, smile as often as possible and stay positive.
I hope you'll find my suggestions helpful and get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析2
假设你是李华,贵校在学生中征集意见,询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课程(iPad class)。你代表学生会,支持开设iPad课程。请给校长谢一封建议信,要点如下:
1.资源丰富;
2.促进交流;
3.利于环保;
4.其他理由。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear headmaster,
We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classes.Here I am writing on behalf of the Students’ Union to voice our views on it. We are in favor of this plan for the following reasons.
To begin with, everyone learns in a respective way. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor them to meet their different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently, which will contribute favorably to their learning efficiency. Furthermore, we also consider it environment-friendly to open iPad classes, for paper is no longer a necessity. More importantly, students’passion for study will be enormously sparked with this brand-new way of learning.
We hope you would take our idea into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
尊敬的校长:
学校就开设iPad课程征求我们的意见,在此我代表学生会阐述相关看法。我们十分赞成这一计划,理由如下:
首先,每个学生的学习方式各不相同。大家可以根据自身水平和学习风格,在iPad上定制适合自己的学习资料,满足个性化需求。其次,联网状态下,学生能更便捷地与老师、同学就所学内容交流,这将有效提升学习效率。此外,开设iPad课程也符合环保理念,因为不再需要大量纸张。更重要的是,这种全新的学习方式能极大激发学生的学习热情。
希望您能考虑我们的建议,期待能参与iPad课程的学习。
此致
敬礼!
李华
三、The Structure of a Letter of Advice
A Letter of Advice
P1:
_________
Opening
_______________
background of writing (写作背景)
_____________
purpose of writing(写作目的)
P2:
______
Body
_______
advice 1 ……
_______
advice 2 ……
_______
advice 3 ……
P3:
______
Closing
wishes and hopes
_______________
开头:说明写信的 。
主体:阐述具体 。
结尾:表达 。
目的
建议
愿望
总结建议信的结构
1.段首常用语(照应材料,表明写作意图):
①I am writing to express my views concerning(关于)...
②After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...
③You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some suggestions(建议).
④I am very glad to hear that you want to...
四、建议信常用句式:
2.表达建议常用语:
①I think the most suitable(合适的)...for you is...
②I would like to suggest that you (should)...
③You'd better.../It's better to...
④As far as I am concerned(就我看来).../In my opinion/...
⑤For one thing...; for another...(一方面;另一方面)
⑥If I were you, I would...(如果我是你,我将...)
⑦It seems(似乎) to me that you could...
⑧I think it would be more beneficial(有益的) if you could..
3.段尾常用语:
①In the end(最后), I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration(把我的建议考虑在内).
③I hope you will find these proposals(建议)/suggestions practical(实用性的)/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(方面).
万能作文模板:
How is everything going? (熟人之间要问候)/ I’m XX, a senior high school student. (生人之间要自我介绍)Having learned that you'd like to do/ you are interested in(doing) /you have difficulty in(doing)…, I am more than +adj. to __________________.
① I’m more than pleased to share some advice with you.(建议信)
② I’m more than pleased to invite you to do…(邀请信)
③ I’m more than honored to apply for the position.(申请信)
④ I’m more than pleased to express my thanks to you.(感谢信)
⑤ I’m more than pleased to tell you some details about it.(活动)
⑥ I’m terribly sorry to tell you that+句子.(道歉信)
First and foremost/First of all, XX plays a leading role in our school life. It would be a good idea to do sth. In addition/Moreover/Besides, the reason why +句子is that +句子. Last but not least, it goes without saying that+句子(更不用说), which helps us have a better understanding of sth.
All in all,I would be grateful if you could take sth. into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply.
假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪
注意:1.词数不少于80;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
五、迁移应用:
Homework:
Get your draft back and revise it(套用建议信模板).
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and feel confused about the Chinese customs, I am more than pleased to share you some advice.
First and foremost, I would like to suggest that you should arrive on time, because it is impolite to be late in Chinese traditional culture. In addition, it is a good idea to bring some appropriate gifts, such as a bunch of flowers or a box of Chocolates. Last but not least, you are supposed to pay attention to table manners when enjoying the meal. For example, you should avoid making noise while chewing the food or sticking your chopsticks into your food.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful. I am sure you will have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
迁移应用范文:
$ 高中英语 建议信
建议信Writing----a letter of advice
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
二、范文赏析1
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter近期写信给你,信中说他刚刚升入高中,备受压力,导致睡眠不足,无法专注学习。请回复一封信,给出你的建议。内容包括:
1. 做计划;2. 锻炼;3. 保持积极的态度。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel so worried and stressed at senior high school that you couldn’t sleep well and focus on your study. Here are some tips(建议) for you.
Firstly, make a schedule for your study and finish the to-do list step by step. Besides, working out more and listening to music can cut down your stress and tiredness after study and about something new or out of control. Instead, smile as often as possible and stay positive.
I hope you'll find my suggestions helpful and get better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析2
假设你是李华,贵校在学生中征集意见,询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课程(iPad class)。你代表学生会,支持开设iPad课程。请给校长谢一封建议信,
要点如下:1.资源丰富;2.促进交流;3.利于环保;4.其他理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear headmaster,
We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classes.Here I am writing on behalf of the Students’ Union to voice our views on it. We are in favor of this plan for the following reasons.
To begin with, everyone learns in a respective way. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor them to meet their different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and peers about what they learn more conveniently, which will contribute favorably to their learning efficiency. Furthermore, we also consider it environment-friendly to open iPad classes, for paper is no longer a necessity. More importantly, students’passion for study will be enormously sparked with this brand-new way of learning.
We hope you would take our idea into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3、 The Structure of a Letter of Advice (建议信的结构)
开头:(第一段)说明写信的 _______________。
主体:(第二段)阐述具体 __________________。建议信
__________________。
__________________。
结尾:(第三段)表达 __________________。
4、 常用词汇
1. 同样的问题 The same problem 2.担心 worry about
2. 改变 make a change 4.参加 take part in
5. 与......交流 communicate with 6.处于困境 in trouble
7.就......而言 as far as... concerned 8.交许多新朋友 make many new friends
五、建议信常用句式
1.段首常用语(照应材料,表明写作意图):
①I am writing to express my views concerning(关于)...
②After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...
③You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some suggestions(建议).
④I am very glad to hear that you want to...
2.表达建议常用语:
①I think the most suitable(合适的)...for you is...
②I would like to suggest that you (should)...
③You'd better.../It's better to...
④As far as I am concerned(就我看来).../In my opinion/...
⑤For one thing...; for another...(一方面;另一方面)
⑥If I were you, I would...(如果我是你,我将...)
⑦It seems(似乎) to me that you could...
⑧I think it would be more beneficial(有益的) if you could..
3.段尾常用语:
①In the end(最后), I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration(把我的建议考虑在内).
③I hope you will find these proposals(建议)/suggestions practical(实用性的)/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(方面).
六、迁移应用:
假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪
注意:1.词数不少于80;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Homework: Get your draft back and revise it (套用建议信模板).
Dear Terry ,
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信Writing----a letter of advice 参考答案
答案:
三、The Structure of a Letter of Advice (建议信的结构)
开头:(第一段)说明写信的目的,点名了解对方的问题
主体:(第二段)阐述具体 建议1及其原因建议信
建议2及其原因
建议3 及其原因
结尾:(第三段)表达 希望和祝福
六、迁移应用 参考范文
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and feel confused about the Chinese customs, I am more than pleased to share you some advice. First and foremost, I would like to suggest that you should arrive on time, because it is impolite to be late in Chinese traditional culture. In addition, it is a good idea to bring some appropriate gifts, such as a bunch of flowers or a box of Chocolates. Last but not least, you are supposed to pay attention to table manners when enjoying the meal. For example, you should avoid making noise while chewing the food or sticking your chopsticks into your food.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful. I am sure you will have a great time. Yours,
Li Hua
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