Unit 8 单元主题写作满分10篇精练-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元重难点精讲精练全突破（人教版2024）

Unit 8 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （讲义&题型突破) 1、 写作主题 交流与沟通 2、 主题分析 本单元以“交流与沟通”为话题，主要探讨如何运用沟通技巧解决生活、学习或者人际交往中出现的一些困惑或者烦恼，并提出相关建议。此类话题涉及的写作以书信、日记等体裁为主，人称多为第一人称，时态涉及一般现在时和一般过去时。 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇： 词汇 difficulty , challenge , misunderstanding, conflict, argument , misunderstanding, communication, explain ,disagreement, apologize ,understand, solve, patience, trust 短语 feel stressed /confused / upset , argue with..., have trouble (doing)... , disagree with... , listen to, in person, worry about, by yourself, benefit...from... calm down, put oneself in one’s shoes, send emails, open one’s heart, keep calm clear up the misunderstanding, reach an agreement, have a face-to-face talk, make a phone call （二）.常用的句型句式： 句型 ①I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.     听说你和你的父母出现了问题，我很难过。 ②It's normal to feel worried before exams. 考前感到焦虑是很正常的。 ③We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life.     我们日常生活中总是有很多的问题和焦虑。 ④I decided to talk to... about it. 我决定和...谈谈这件事。 ⑤We sat down and had an honest conversation. 我们坐下来进行了一次坦诚的对话。 ⑥I explained how I felt and why... 我解释了我的感受以及为什么...。 ⑦We tried to understand each other's point of view. 我们努力理解彼此的观点。 ⑧As a result, we... 结果，我们...。 ⑨To communicate better, you should... 为了更好地沟通，你应该......。 ⑩We found a solution that worked for both of us. 我们找到了一个对我们双方都有效的解决方案。 ⑪You should call your best friend and talk with him or her. 你应该打给你的朋友和他们聊一聊。 ⑫You should let your parents know your feelings. 你应该让你的父母知道你的感受。 ⑬Our relationship became stronger after that talk. 那次谈话之后我们的关系变得更牢固了。 ⑭I learned that communication is key to... 我认识到沟通是...的关键。 ⑮Hope everything goes well with you. 希望万事顺利。 名言 ①A problem shared is a problem halved. 分享问题等于解决一半问题。 ②Communication is the bridge between two hearts. 沟通是两颗心之间的桥梁。 ③Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。/集思广益。 4、 写作步骤 （1） Beginning 摆问题:简单介绍遇到的问题是什么，当时的感受（引出问题）。 Dear _______, I’m sorry to hear that you ...... We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life. Here is my advice/are my suggestions. （二）Body 详细描述沟通过程: ① 问题的具体表现（What happened?）； ② 交流的过程（How did you communicate? 说过什么、做过什么）； ③ 问题如何解决（What was the result?） Last year, I.... We argued about.... Later, I.... The first step is to … You had better … You should ...... It’s best to do .... It’s a good idea to do... 可以使用连接词使文章流畅：First, ... Then, ... Next, ... After that, ... Finally, ... / However, ... Therefore, ... As a result, .../ For example, ... 。 （三）Ending 谈想法: 沟通的结果是什么？关系有什么变化？你的感受如何？从中学到了什么（强调沟通的价值）？ I believe that if you....,you will...I hope that my advice can help you a lot. All in all, it's easy to get along well with your parents as long as you try your best. 五、例题精讲 你的朋友Tina成长阶段遇到了困惑，写信向你求助。假如你是李华，请根据她来信中的问题选取其中三点提出建议，并用英语给她回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m not happy these days. Because I can’t get good grades and have too much pressure. I always feel lonely, so I spend more time playing computer games. My mother thinks it’s not safe to make friends on the Internet. Relations between my mother and I become difficult. What should I do? I hope you can give me some advice and help me solve these problems. Yours, Tina 要求： 1.短文应围绕以上信件中的相关问题展开，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等信息； 3.词数80左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：对书信中的问题给出建议，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“日常生活中的问题很正常”来引出重点介绍的内容，即针对Tina的问题提出建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习压力、孤独感、网络游戏和与母亲的关系”几个方面，针对Tina的问题提出具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Tina的情况能尽快好转”的愿望。 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. First, you should spend more time on your study instead of playing computer games. If you have some problems, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Secondly, why not sit down and communicate with your mother? You can ask her not to push you so hard and you can make an effort to study. Last but not least, you should use the Internet wisely even if it is useful. You have to make friends online carefully. You can’t leave more personal information on the Internet. I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 六、写作精练 1. 在人际交往中，我们有时会遇到困难，但积极的态度，正向的表达和巧妙的技巧能帮助我们有效沟通，解决问题。《蟋蟀》杂志Cricket 正在开展以“用心交流，有效沟通”为主题的英文写作比赛。假设你是李华，请根据下列要求，写一篇短文投稿，分享你生活中一次有效沟通的经历以及你的收获，词数80左右。 Cricket Writing Competition :Effective Communication Enjoyable Life ◆Share your experience ◆ Talk about your feelings Email address:cricket@mail.com 注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数： 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Effective communication plays an important role in solving problems and building relationships. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Effective communication plays an important role in solving problems and building relationships. I think the most useful skill to communicate better is to respect others. I would like to share my experience with you.      Last year I went travelling with my good friend. When I made the plan, he disagreed. We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. Later, I thought about it and realized that his advice was actually pretty good. We should respect each other. I said sorry to him and then we had a good trip.      In my opinion, the effective communication is very helpful. I should learn how to get on well with others. I should learn to be a good listener and understand others. I should also respect others politely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，点明主题； 第二步，具体介绍自身的经历； 第三步，书写结语，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①go travelling去旅行 ②say sorry to sb.向某人道歉 ③get on well with sb.与某人相处得很好 [高分句型] ①When I made the plan, he disagreed. (when引导时间状语从句) ②We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. (because引导原因状语从句) 2. 假设你是华清中学英语俱乐部的负责人，计划邀请Professor Williams来你校做关于青少年业余活动的讲座。请根据下面的要点，用英语给Professor Williams写一封不少于80词的邮件。 要点：1．讲座时间：7月1日上午9点；2．讲座地点：学校图书馆；3．讲座内容：青少年的业余活动；4．请在周五前回复。 Dear Professor Williams, The Huaqing Middle School English Club 【答案】 Dear Professor Williams, I am writing on behalf of① the Huaqing Middle School English Club to extend a sincere invitation to you to deliver a lecture on the topic of teenagers' leisure activities at our school. The lecture is scheduled to take place at 9 a.m. on July 1st in the school library. We believe that your expertise and insights on this subject will be highly beneficial to our students and will provide them with valuable perspectives on how to make the most of their free time. We would be extremely grateful if you could confirm your availability by this Friday②. If you have any questions or need further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for considering our invitation. We look forward to③ your positive response. The Huaqing Middle School English Club 亮点评析 1．on behalf of表示“代表”，这种表达方式使邀请信更正式。 2．if引导的条件状语从句，以一种委婉、礼貌的方式提出请求。 3．look forward to用于表达对某件事情的期待和渴望。在邀请信中能够明确地表达出邀请方对得到受邀者积极响应的真诚期望。 3. 假如你是李华，本周日，你准备邀请你们班交换生Peter一起去公园野餐，请用英语给Peter写一封邀请信，告诉他野餐的时间和地点，往返的交通方式，以及需要做什么准备。 提示词语：park, bike, bring, food 提示问题： · When and where are you going for a picnic? · How are you going to get there? · What do you advise Peter to prepare for the picnic? Dear Peter,     How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to invite you to a picnic. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Peter, How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to invite you to a picnic. My friends and I are going to have a picnic this Sunday in Sunshine park. We are going to meet at the school gate at nine in the morning. We are going there by bike. In the park, we are going to take some photos, play games, fly kites and sing songs. You can bring some food for lunch, such as sandwiches. I am sure we will have a good time. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ① 题材：这是一篇书信作文，为记叙文； ② 时态：主要采用“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作内容包括：野餐的时间和地点、往返的交通方式、需要做什么准备。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍野餐的时间和地点； 第二步，介绍往返的交通方式； 第三步，介绍需要做什么准备。 [亮点词汇] ① take some photos 拍照 ② such as 例如 ③ look forward to 期待 ④ have a good time 玩得开心 [高分句型] I am sure we will have a good time.（宾语从句） 4. 友情是一种财富，有了朋友的陪伴、理解和帮助，我们的生活变得更加美好。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Betty转到了新学校，她担心没有朋友，也不知道如何跟同学相处，这让她感到担心和不安。请你给她发一封邮件，帮她渡过难关。 写作要点： 1.对Betty将要遇见的情况表示理解； 2.针对Betty的担忧给出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括写作要点中的所有信息； 2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯； 3.文中不能透露个人信息； 4.词数80词左右。 Dear Betty, I am sorry to hear that you have problems in the new school. __________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Betty, I am sorry to hear that you have problems in the new school. But don’t worry. I can help you. Here is some advice. First, you should be kind to others. People enjoy making friends with people who are nice to them. Second, be ready to help others. If you give a hand when others need help, they will help you when you are in trouble. Third, remember to give everyone a smile every day. If you smile at others, you are sure to get a smile back. Last but not least, why not join in more activities after school? They can provide you with a chance to make friends with your classmates. I hope my advice will help you and you can make new friends soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对Betty将要遇见的情况表示理解； 第二步，针对Betty的担忧给出一些建议； 第三步，最后表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ① be kind to对……友好 ② give a hand帮助 ③ last but not least最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①People enjoy making friends with people who are nice to them.（定语从句） ②If you give a hand when others need help, they will help you when you are in trouble.（条件状语从句） 5. 从学校重视沟通的举措中，不难发现沟通在我们的生活中非常重要。那么该如何使沟通更有效呢？请以Communication in Our Life为题，结合以下思维导图内容，融入你的个人思考，谈谈你对沟通的看法。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，词句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 包含以上所有要点，并作适当发挥； 3. 字数在80词左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。 Communication in Our Life Communication is like a key that unlocks many doors in our life. 【答案】76．Because of a strong sense of privacy and the tiring preparation work. 77．For 30 minutes. 78．(It offers) group activities and book clubs. 79．Yes, (they can). 80．参考答案1：I prefer parent-teacher meetings. They let many parents get information about school at once, saving time for both teachers and parents. 参考答案2：I like home visits. Teachers can better understand my home environment, and it’s a more private talk for my study problems. 81．例文： Communication in Our Life Communication is like a key that unlocks many doors in our life. It helps us share ideas clearly, making cooperation much easier. Without good communication, we may face misunderstandings and have trouble getting along with others.      To communicate effectively, first, we should learn to listen and understand others. Really focus when they talk, so we can know their thoughts better. Second, we must respect others politely. This shows our good manners. Moreover, clearly expressing ourselves in simple words enables us to convey our ideas more effectively.      I think learning to communicate plays an important role in our life. It can help us build better relationships and make our lives more harmonious. 【导语】本文主要讲述了传统家访的现状及其不受欢迎的原因，并介绍了一些新的家校沟通方式，如家长会、家长课堂和灵活的家访方式。 76．根据“A strong sense of privacy (隐私) and the tiring preparation work are the main reasons.”可知，家长不喜欢老师家访的主要原因是强烈的隐私感和令人疲惫的准备工作，故填Because of a strong sense of privacy and the tiring preparation work. 77．根据“During these meetings, teachers give a 30-minute summary (总结) and then have one-on-one meetings with each parent for 15-20 minutes.”可知，家长会上，老师会进行一个30分钟的总结，故填For 30 minutes. 78．根据“It offers group activities and book clubs to support parents’ development.”可知，学校的家长课堂提供小组活动和读书俱乐部来支持家长的发展，故填(It offers) group activities and book clubs. 79．根据“Shanghai Municipal Kindergarten asks parents first. If they agree, home visits take place; if not, communication happens online. ”可知，上海的一所幼儿园会先询问家长意见，如果家长不同意家访，那么家长和老师就会在网上进行交流，故填Yes, (they can). 80．本题是开放性试题，答案言之有理即可。参考答案1：I prefer parent-teacher meetings. They let many parents get information about school at once, saving time for both teachers and parents. 参考答案2：I like home visits. Teachers can better understand my home environment, and it’s a more private talk for my study problems. 81．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题； 第二步，具体阐述沟通的重要性以及有效沟通的方法； 第三步，书写总结。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble (in) doing sth做某事有困难 ②enable sb to do sth使某人能够做某事 ③play an important role in在……中起重要作用 [高分句型] I think learning to communicate plays an important role in our life. (宾语从句) 6. 生活中，和他人合作完成一件事往往能带来特别的收获——可能是一起解决问题的成就感，也可能是彼此支持的温暖。请你写一篇短文，分享一次你和他人 (如同学、家人) 合作完成的事。 内容包括：1. 你们合作做了什么 (如制作物品、准备活动、攻克学习难题等)；2. 合作过程中你们是如何互相配合或帮助的；3. 这次合作让你有什么收获或感受。 要求：词数 80—100，条理清晰、语句通顺、语法正确。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Last month, my classmate Li Ming and I cooperated to complete a handmade poster for the school art festival. We divided the work into three parts: design, content, and decoration. I took charge of designing the layout and drawing illustrations, while Li Ming was responsible for collecting materials and writing articles. During the process, we constantly exchanged ideas. When I got stuck on a drawing, Li Ming would offer suggestions. Meanwhile, while I was busy drawing illustrations, my partner was carefully arranging the text, which made our work efficient and harmonious. Thanks to our teamwork spirit, we finished the handmade poster ahead of schedule and won the first prize. Through this cooperation, I not only improved my creativity but also learned the importance of teamwork. It truly brought me a sense of achievement and warmth from mutual support. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为一篇记叙文，要求描述一次合作经历； ②时态：以一般过去时为主，叙述已发生的合作事件； ③提示：需涵盖合作内容、配合方式及个人收获，注意内容连贯与细节补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“回忆一次与同学合作完成手抄报的经历”引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“分工设计、资料收集、版面制作”等方面详细描述合作过程； 第三步，书写结语。表达“合作带来的成就感及对团队合作的感悟”。 [亮点词汇] ①divide the work分工合作 ②collect materials收集资料 ③decorate the layout装饰版面 ④teamwork spirit团队精神 ⑤gain a sense of achievement获得成就感 [高分句型] ①We divided the work into three parts: design, content, and decoration. (并列结构分句) ②While I was busy drawing illustrations, my partner was carefully arranging the text, which made our work efficient and harmonious. (While引导时间状语从句+which引导非限定性定语从句) ③Through this cooperation, I not only improved my creativity but also learned the importance of teamwork. (not only...but also...并列结构) 7. 在学习和生活中，每个人都会有苦恼的事。生地会考在即，八年级的学生压力骤增。假设你叫Lucy，你的好朋友Mary遇到了一些烦恼的事。请根据下面的提示，给她写一封80词左右的邮件，并提出自己的建议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：生物biology、地理geography Dear Mary, I’m sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will feel happy again. Yours, Lucy 【答案】例文 Dear Mary, I’m sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. Firstly, you say that you don’t have many friends at school. I think you should join some clubs and make new friends there. Secondly, you find biology and geography are difficult and often get poor grades in exams. You should ask the teacher or your classmates for help and do more exercises. Then you’ll be good at it. Finally, you think it’s not easy to talk with your parents. Why not open your heart to them and tell them how you feel? I’m sure they’ll understand you. I hope you will feel happy again. Yours, Lucy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达以下是一些给你的建议； 第二步，根据提示内容，针对Mary的问题，提出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①make new friends交新朋友 ②get poor grades取得不好的成绩 ③talk with sb和某人交谈 [高分句型] ①I think you should join some clubs and make new friends there. (宾语从句) ②Why not open your heart to them and tell them how you feel? (why not do sth“为什么不做某事”) 8. 假如你是某英文杂志的Ask Paul栏目的编辑，专门帮助青少年解决一些烦恼。下面是一位叫李华的中学生在信中诉说的烦心事，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议来帮助他。 Dear Paul, I argued with my parents last week. I want to keep a pet dog at home, but they don’t agree. They don’t think I can look after it by myself. I don’t know what I should do. Can you help me? Thanks a lot! Yours, Li Hua 要求： 1. 所提建议一定要有积极意义并符合实际； 2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear about your problem. I’d be happy to give you some advice. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really hope my advice can help you. Yours, Paul 【答案】例文 Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear about your problem. I’d be happy to give you some advice. I think you should follow your parents’ wish. If you keep a pet dog, you’ll have to spend a lot of time looking after it. For example, you’ll have to walk it every day and clean it often. If so, you’ll spend less time on your study. If there is a pet dog at home, it will make noise. If so, both you and your parents won’t get good sleep. Have a patient talk with your parents. Why not wait until you get older, and then ask your parents for it again? I really hope my advice can help you. Yours, Paul 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；   ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤] 第一步，表达关心与同情，直接切入主题；   第二步，分析养宠物狗可能带来的问题，以此说明父母反对的合理性，然后给出具体建议； 第三步，给予对方鼓励。   [亮点词汇] ①follow one’s wish遵从某人的意愿 ②spend time on sth.花费时间在某事上 ③have a patient talk with sb.和某人耐心交谈 [高分句型] ①If you keep a pet dog, you’ll have to spend a lot of time looking after it. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②Why not wait until you get older, and then ask your parents for it again? (Why not句型提出建议) 9. 在数字化时代，青少年如何与朋友保持联系？校刊英语专栏以“Staying Connected: Online or Face-to-face?”为题征集稿件，请从以下两种社交方式中任选其一，结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文陈述理由并投稿。 Online Communication Face-to-face Meeting ☆fast and convenient ☆share real-time feelings ☆build deeper friendships ☆create special memories 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所选方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Staying Connected: Online or Face-to-face? Some students prefer communicating with friends online. Others think face-to-face meetings are better.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version 1： Staying Connected: Online or Face-to-face? Some students prefer communicating with friends online. Others think face-to-face meetings are better. I prefer online communication because it is fast and convenient. First, online communication allows us to connect anytime and anywhere. For example, I can chat with my friends even when I am at home or traveling. This makes staying in touch much easier. Second, it is great for sharing real-time feelings. If something interesting happens, I can send a message or a photo to my friends immediately. They usually reply quickly, and we can enjoy the moment together. In conclusion, online communication is a modern and easy way to stay connected with friends. Possible version 2: Staying Connected: Online or Face-to-face? Some students prefer communicating with friends online. Others think face-to-face meetings are better. I believe face-to-face meetings are more meaningful. First, meeting in person helps build deeper friendships. By talking face-to-face, we can see each other’s expressions and share real feelings. This makes our connection stronger. Second, being together creates special memories. For example, last weekend, I played basketball with my friends. We had fun and laughed a lot. These are moments that chatting online cannot replace. In short, face-to-face meetings allow us to understand and enjoy each other better. It’s the best way to stay connected. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：结合提示要点，选择一种社交方式进行陈述，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，点明主题。介绍自己选择何种社交方式； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合自身经历，介绍自己选择这种社交方式的理由； 第三步，书写结语。介绍这种社交方式的好处。 ［亮点词汇］ ①online communication 在线交流 ②chat with sb.与某人聊天 ③in conclusion 最后；总而言之 ［高分句型] ①I prefer online communication because it is fast and convenient.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②For example, I can chat with my friends even when I am at home or traveling.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③If something interesting happens, I can send a message or a photo to my friends immediately. （if引导的条件状语从句） 10. 作为八年级学生，我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到烦恼，为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的问题，班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely”为主题的英语班会。假如你是主持人李华，请你根据下面的班会记录的思维导图，做总结性发言并提出你的建议或看法，并谈一谈自己的看法。 注意： 1.短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。 3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Face Problems Bravely Problems and worries are normal in life. ___________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Face Problems Bravely   Problems and worries are normal in life. Many of us have troubles: some students can’t get on with parents, some students don’t get enough sleep, and others have lots of pressures with heavy schoolwork. Problems are normal, but we must solve them actively. First, we should communicate with parents—share our ideas and listen to theirs. Second, we should finish homework quickly to ensure enough sleep. Third, we should set small goals, like improving one subject little by little, to reduce pressure.   In my eyes, facing problems bravely helps us grow. Let’s take action and turn difficulties into opportunities! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明问题普遍性； 第二步，列举三类典型困扰并提出解决办法； 第三步，总结勇敢面对的意义，呼吁行动。 [亮点词汇] ①get on with与……友好相处 ②communicate with与……交流 ③little by little一点一点地 [高分句型] ①Second, we should finish homework quickly to ensure enough sleep. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②In my eyes, facing problems bravely helps us grow. (动名词作主语) 22 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 21 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 8 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （讲义&题型突破) 1、 写作主题 交流与沟通 2、 主题分析 本单元以“交流与沟通”为话题，主要探讨如何运用沟通技巧解决生活、学习或者人际交往中出现的一些困惑或者烦恼，并提出相关建议。此类话题涉及的写作以书信、日记等体裁为主，人称多为第一人称，时态涉及一般现在时和一般过去时。 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇： 词汇 difficulty , challenge , misunderstanding, conflict, argument , misunderstanding, communication, explain ,disagreement, apologize ,understand, solve, patience, trust 短语 feel stressed /confused / upset , argue with..., have trouble (doing)... , disagree with... , listen to, in person, worry about, by yourself, benefit...from... calm down, put oneself in one’s shoes, send emails, open one’s heart, keep calm clear up the misunderstanding, reach an agreement, have a face-to-face talk, make a phone call （二）.常用的句型句式： 句型 ①I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.     听说你和你的父母出现了问题，我很难过。 ②It's normal to feel worried before exams. 考前感到焦虑是很正常的。 ③We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life.     我们日常生活中总是有很多的问题和焦虑。 ④I decided to talk to... about it. 我决定和...谈谈这件事。 ⑤We sat down and had an honest conversation. 我们坐下来进行了一次坦诚的对话。 ⑥I explained how I felt and why... 我解释了我的感受以及为什么...。 ⑦We tried to understand each other's point of view. 我们努力理解彼此的观点。 ⑧As a result, we... 结果，我们...。 ⑨To communicate better, you should... 为了更好地沟通，你应该......。 ⑩We found a solution that worked for both of us. 我们找到了一个对我们双方都有效的解决方案。 ⑪You should call your best friend and talk with him or her. 你应该打给你的朋友和他们聊一聊。 ⑫You should let your parents know your feelings. 你应该让你的父母知道你的感受。 ⑬Our relationship became stronger after that talk. 那次谈话之后我们的关系变得更牢固了。 ⑭I learned that communication is key to... 我认识到沟通是...的关键。 ⑮Hope everything goes well with you. 希望万事顺利。 名言 ①A problem shared is a problem halved. 分享问题等于解决一半问题。 ②Communication is the bridge between two hearts. 沟通是两颗心之间的桥梁。 ③Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。/集思广益。 4、 写作步骤 （1） Beginning 摆问题:简单介绍遇到的问题是什么，当时的感受（引出问题）。 Dear _______, I’m sorry to hear that you ...... We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life. Here is my advice/are my suggestions. （二）Body 详细描述沟通过程: ① 问题的具体表现（What happened?）； ② 交流的过程（How did you communicate? 说过什么、做过什么）； ③ 问题如何解决（What was the result?） Last year, I.... We argued about.... Later, I.... The first step is to … You had better … You should ...... It’s best to do .... It’s a good idea to do... 可以使用连接词使文章流畅：First, ... Then, ... Next, ... After that, ... Finally, ... / However, ... Therefore, ... As a result, .../ For example, ... 。 （三）Ending 谈想法: 沟通的结果是什么？关系有什么变化？你的感受如何？从中学到了什么（强调沟通的价值）？ I believe that if you....,you will...I hope that my advice can help you a lot. All in all, it's easy to get along well with your parents as long as you try your best. 五、例题精讲 你的朋友Tina成长阶段遇到了困惑，写信向你求助。假如你是李华，请根据她来信中的问题选取其中三点提出建议，并用英语给她回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m not happy these days. Because I can’t get good grades and have too much pressure. I always feel lonely, so I spend more time playing computer games. My mother thinks it’s not safe to make friends on the Internet. Relations between my mother and I become difficult. What should I do? I hope you can give me some advice and help me solve these problems. Yours, Tina 要求： 1.短文应围绕以上信件中的相关问题展开，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等信息； 3.词数80左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：对书信中的问题给出建议，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“日常生活中的问题很正常”来引出重点介绍的内容，即针对Tina的问题提出建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习压力、孤独感、网络游戏和与母亲的关系”几个方面，针对Tina的问题提出具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Tina的情况能尽快好转”的愿望。 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 六、写作精练 1. 在人际交往中，我们有时会遇到困难，但积极的态度，正向的表达和巧妙的技巧能帮助我们有效沟通，解决问题。《蟋蟀》杂志Cricket 正在开展以“用心交流，有效沟通”为主题的英文写作比赛。假设你是李华，请根据下列要求，写一篇短文投稿，分享你生活中一次有效沟通的经历以及你的收获，词数80左右。 Cricket Writing Competition :Effective Communication Enjoyable Life ◆Share your experience ◆ Talk about your feelings Email address:cricket@mail.com 注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数： 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Effective communication plays an important role in solving problems and building relationships. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 假设你是华清中学英语俱乐部的负责人，计划邀请Professor Williams来你校做关于青少年业余活动的讲座。请根据下面的要点，用英语给Professor Williams写一封不少于80词的邮件。 要点：1．讲座时间：7月1日上午9点；2．讲座地点：学校图书馆；3．讲座内容：青少年的业余活动；4．请在周五前回复。 Dear Professor Williams, The Huaqing Middle School English Club 3. 假如你是李华，本周日，你准备邀请你们班交换生Peter一起去公园野餐，请用英语给Peter写一封邀请信，告诉他野餐的时间和地点，往返的交通方式，以及需要做什么准备。 提示词语：park, bike, bring, food 提示问题： · When and where are you going for a picnic? · How are you going to get there? · What do you advise Peter to prepare for the picnic? Dear Peter,     How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to invite you to a picnic. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4. 友情是一种财富，有了朋友的陪伴、理解和帮助，我们的生活变得更加美好。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Betty转到了新学校，她担心没有朋友，也不知道如何跟同学相处，这让她感到担心和不安。请你给她发一封邮件，帮她渡过难关。 写作要点： 1.对Betty将要遇见的情况表示理解； 2.针对Betty的担忧给出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括写作要点中的所有信息； 2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯； 3.文中不能透露个人信息； 4.词数80词左右。 Dear Betty, I am sorry to hear that you have problems in the new school. __________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5. 从学校重视沟通的举措中，不难发现沟通在我们的生活中非常重要。那么该如何使沟通更有效呢？请以Communication in Our Life为题，结合以下思维导图内容，融入你的个人思考，谈谈你对沟通的看法。 要求： 1. 要点齐全，词句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 包含以上所有要点，并作适当发挥； 3. 字数在80词左右（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。 Communication in Our Life Communication is like a key that unlocks many doors in our life. 6. 生活中，和他人合作完成一件事往往能带来特别的收获——可能是一起解决问题的成就感，也可能是彼此支持的温暖。请你写一篇短文，分享一次你和他人 (如同学、家人) 合作完成的事。 内容包括：1. 你们合作做了什么 (如制作物品、准备活动、攻克学习难题等)；2. 合作过程中你们是如何互相配合或帮助的；3. 这次合作让你有什么收获或感受。 要求：词数 80—100，条理清晰、语句通顺、语法正确。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7. 在学习和生活中，每个人都会有苦恼的事。生地会考在即，八年级的学生压力骤增。假设你叫Lucy，你的好朋友Mary遇到了一些烦恼的事。请根据下面的提示，给她写一封80词左右的邮件，并提出自己的建议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：生物biology、地理geography Dear Mary, I’m sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will feel happy again. Yours, Lucy 8. 假如你是某英文杂志的Ask Paul栏目的编辑，专门帮助青少年解决一些烦恼。下面是一位叫李华的中学生在信中诉说的烦心事，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议来帮助他。 Dear Paul, I argued with my parents last week. I want to keep a pet dog at home, but they don’t agree. They don’t think I can look after it by myself. I don’t know what I should do. Can you help me? Thanks a lot! Yours, Li Hua 要求： 1. 所提建议一定要有积极意义并符合实际； 2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear about your problem. I’d be happy to give you some advice. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really hope my advice can help you. Yours, Paul 9. 在数字化时代，青少年如何与朋友保持联系？校刊英语专栏以“Staying Connected: Online or Face-to-face?”为题征集稿件，请从以下两种社交方式中任选其一，结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文陈述理由并投稿。 Online Communication Face-to-face Meeting ☆fast and convenient ☆share real-time feelings ☆build deeper friendships ☆create special memories 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所选方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Staying Connected: Online or Face-to-face? Some students prefer communicating with friends online. Others think face-to-face meetings are better.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10. 作为八年级学生，我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到烦恼，为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的问题，班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely”为主题的英语班会。假如你是主持人李华，请你根据下面的班会记录的思维导图，做总结性发言并提出你的建议或看法，并谈一谈自己的看法。 注意： 1.短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。 3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Face Problems Bravely Problems and worries are normal in life. ___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 22 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 21 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $