内容正文:
Unit 7 单元主题写作满分精讲精练
(讲义&题型突破)
1、 写作主题
对未来的畅想
2、 主题分析
本单元的写作属于“人与社会”中的主题“对未来的畅想”,针对这一话题,我们可以围绕未来人们的工作和生活、环境、科技进步等方面展开写作。在描写未来的生活或者未来的城市时,要重点描述与现在相比发生的变化以及这些变化给生活带来的影响,作文人称多用第一人称, 时态多为一般将来时。同时可以用比较级结构,以增强对比效果。写作时一般按照“总—分—总”的说明或叙述顺序行文布局。
三、写作积累
(一).常用的词汇:
词汇
doctor, teacher, cook, artist, driver,pilot, city, village, house, school, park,work, study, play, travel, help,education,,impossible, develop, prediction , environment , futurist, pollution,happy, excited, proud, busy, creative
短语
live in..., work as..., in free time, want to be... , play with... , take care of... ,
build more tall buildings , fly rockets to the moon , on the earth , world peace ,
live on a space station, fast car, big computer, robot helper, smart home, beautiful garden, flying bike (imagine!), virtual reality games, last but not least
(二).常用的句型句式:
句型
①In 20 years, I will be...... .
②I will live in......, because......
③I want to be a ________ because...... .
④In my free time, I will......
⑤I hope my life will be...... .
⑥I will live in a comfortable house with a red door and a garden full of flowers.
⑦Maybe I will have a robot to help me clean my room!
⑧In the future, people will travel everywhere by spaceship.
⑨All the differences will make people's life very different.
⑩Our life will be better and better.
⑪I think life in 20 years will be different but exciting.
⑫In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
名言
①Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
②No pain, no gain. 没有付出就没有回报。
③Hold on your dream and never give up. 坚持梦想,永不言弃。
4、 写作步骤
一).Beginning
开篇点题,用一句话简单引出主题 In 20 years, I think my life will be very different/exciting/happy. I imagine my life in 20 years will be....
二)Body 从居住环境、职业情况、生活水平、出行方式、日常饮食、科技发明等描述具体活动。 使用because ,however, but,so,so that 等连词拓展句子。
正确使用“there will( not) be” 句型对未来的生活进行预测。
正确使用more/less/fewer和其他形容词的比较级描述将来的变化。
1.Places to live (Where will you live?)
In 20 years, I think I will live in Beijing. There will be more free time for me because robots can help people do different kinds of housework.
2.Jobs (What will you be in the future?)
I believe I will be an English teacher, I will try my best to make every students learn something useful for their future and let them know the world.
3. Transportation (How will you go to work?)
Life in 20 years will be more interesting than now. Some people may fly rockets to the moon to work or take a holiday. others probably are able to live on a space station on another planet.
4.Hobby (What will you do in your free time?)
In my free time, I will have more time to relax with my family and friends, we can travel different planets by rockets.
三)Ending 表达期望 I hope this life will come true. Now, I need to study hard.
In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
五、例题精讲
科技正以前所未有的态势重塑人类的就业方式。某英文公众号正在开展以“我的未来职业”为题的征文活动。假设你来是什么样的,以及你选择这个职业的原因。词数80词左右。
提示词语:give lessons, robot, challenge, guide
提示问题:
·What do you want to be in the future?
·What will the job be like in the future?
·Why do you want to choose the job?
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①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍未来想从事的职业;
第二步,具体介绍未来的工作;
第三步,具体介绍选择这份工作的原因。
【答案】例文
I want to be a teacher in the future. As technology will change how we work, teaching will combine traditions with modern tools. In the future, teachers will give lessons with the help of AI robots and use virtual reality to bring lessons to life. Moreover, teachers can monitor students’ progress through technology in order to give them specific suggestions on their study.
There are two reasons for me to be a teacher. First, I love children and teaching brings me a strong sense of achievement. Second, I got a lot of help from my teacher and I’d like to be a great person like her. I’m excited to use technology in teaching and guide students to a better future.
六、写作精练
1.
智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展,人工智能(AI)将越来越多地被应用于课堂。你觉得未来的课堂会变成什么样子呢?你将如何利用AI来辅助学习?新的学习方式会给你带来什么好处?请根据所给提示,写一篇80词以上的短文。
提示词语:robot, make a difference, improve, creative ideas
提示问题:·What will the future classroom be like?
·How will you learn with the help of AI?
·What benefits can you get from the new ways of study?
In the future, ___________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】One possible version:
In the future, AI will certainly bring about a change in the classroom. Every teacher and student will have their own robot. These robots will help teachers with their lesson preparations and will patiently explain problems to students when they have difficulty in learning.
AI will help me in different ways as well. Firstly, it will make a plan for my schoolwork, enabling me to learn at my own pace. Moreover, it will act like a foreign friend and practice English with me at any time and in any place.
Undoubtedly, these new learning methods will make my study easy and convenient. It will not only improve my learning efficiency but also make learning more enjoyable. I’m expecting the future life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇想象类说明文;
②时态:主要时态为一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述未来课堂场景;
第二步,说明AI辅助学习的具体方式;
第三步,总结新学习方式的优势。
[亮点词汇]
①bring about a change带来改变
②at one’s own pace按自己的节奏
③learning efficiency学习效率
[高分句型]
①These robots will help teachers with their lesson preparations and will patiently explain problems to students when they have difficulty in learning.(时间状语从句)
②Firstly, it will make a plan for my schoolwork, enabling me to learn at my own pace. (现在分词作结果状语)
2.
假设你是Susan,本周你校要举行一场有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛。请你以“My Dream Life in 10 Years”为题,根据以下内容提示从十年之后你希望从事的工作、生活的城市和原因及感想等方面完成一篇演讲稿。
内容提示:
What do you want to be? How are you going to do that?
Where will you live and work? Why?
What will you do in your free time?
Something more about your dream life in ten years.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校:词数60-80;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Life in 10 Years
Hello, everyone! I’m Susan from Class 14, Grade 8. ___________________________________________
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【答案】
My Dream Life in 10 Years
Hello, everyone! I’m Susan from Class 14, Grade 8. I think my dream life in ten years will be wonderful.
I’ll be a teacher then. Because I think teaching is really meaningful. If I become a teacher, I can help students learn more about the world. What’s more, I am good with children. I will enjoy it a lot. To realize my dream, I will study hard to go to a good university. In my free time, I will read more books about education. Maybe I can take a part-time job about teaching to get myself prepared for the teacher. I plan to work in Wuhan to make my hometown better. I believe I can make it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:内容提示已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总结十年之后自己的梦想未来生活将是精彩的;
第二步,从十年之后从事的工作、生活的城市和原因及感想介绍自己未来梦想生活的样子;
[亮点词汇]
①learn more about the world 多了解这个世界
②what’s more 此外
③realize my dream 实现我的梦想
[高分句型]
①Maybe I can take a part-time job about teaching to get myself prepared for the teacher.(动词不定式作目的状语)
3.
假如你是Wilson,你班正准备召开一次主题班会畅想未来生活,请根据下面要点提示,写一篇80词左右的英文发言稿。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:
1.二十年后,我将成为一名作家, 在北京工作。
2.我能在家通过电脑工作。家里有机器人帮忙做家务,因此我有更多的闲暇时间去环游世界,了解不同国家的文化(culture)。
3.未来环境会更好,树木会更多,污染将更少,人们的寿命会更长。
4.为了实现我的梦想,我将努力学习。
My dear classmates,
My name is Wilson. I’m very glad to share my prediction about the life in the future.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文
My dear classmates,
My name is Wilson. I’m very glad to share my prediction about the life in the future.
In twenty years, I will be a writer. I will work in Beijing, because there will be more jobs in that city. I will probably work on computers at home, and robots will help with the housework, so I will have more free time to travel around the world, and experience the culture in different countries. The environment will become better and better. There will be more trees and less pollution. As a result, people will live longer.
In order to realize my dream, I’m going to study hard and get good grades. I believe my dream will come true one day.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容畅想未来生活,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示内容介绍未来的生活;
第三步,介绍为了实现梦想,自己要怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮助
②travel around the world环游世界
③as a result结果
[高分句型]
①I will work in Beijing, because there will be more jobs in that city. (原因状语从句)
②In order to realize my dream, I’m going to study hard and get good grades. (动词不定式作目的状语)
4.
某英语报社正在就“20年后的生活”这一主题进行征稿。假如你是李华,请你以“What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years”为题,用英语写一篇短文向该报社投稿,简单介绍一下你未来的职业、休闲活动等。
提示词语:businessman, travel around, sports, happy
提示问题:
1. What will your job be in the future?
2. What will you do in your free time?
3. What do you think of your future life?
What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years
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【例文】
What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years
In 20 years, I will be a businessman. I will work in a big company and help people solve problems with new technology. I think this job will be interesting and meaningful. In my free time, I will travel around the world with my family. I want to visit places like Paris and Tokyo. Besides, I will play sports such as basketball and swimming to keep healthy.
I believe my future life will be happy. I will have a warm family and a good job. I will work hard and enjoy my life every day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍将来自己的职业;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍自己空闲时间的活动;
第三步,介绍自己对未来生活的看法,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
①I think this job will be interesting and meaningful.(宾语从句)
②I want to visit places like Paris and Tokyo.(不定式作宾语)
5.
假如你是Kate,你的英国笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件,向你询问你十年后的计划,请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1. 你十年后选择从事的职业及理由;
2. 你十年后选择定居的城市及理由;
3. 你十年后的兴趣爱好(至少两点)。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you about my future.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
81.例文:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you about my future. First, I think I will be a reporter in ten years, because being a reporter is my dream. As a reporter, I will visit many different places and meet lots of interesting people. Second, I’ll live in Shanghai, because Shanghai is a modern city and I can live a comfortable life there. As for my hobbies, in my free time, I’ll take dancing lessons to keep fit. And I’ll do some voluntary work to help those in need.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
81.1. 题干解读:本题是一篇书信作文,根据题干内容提示,谈谈自己十年后计划,具体包括职业、定居的城市和兴趣爱好等方面。
2. 写作指导:本文时态用一般将来时,人称用第一人称。写作时首先承接开头,然后具体介绍自己未来要从事的职业,可能会定居的城市,以及兴趣爱好,最后表达希望自己梦想成真。注意涵盖要点,逻辑连贯,无拼写和语法使用错误。
6.
科技改变未来,学校正在开展主题为《畅想未来》的征文活动。请根据以下图示写一篇英语短文,进行投稿,谈谈你对未来生活的畅想。
注意:
1. 词数80-120个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入词数,请根据要点提 示适当发挥);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
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【答案】例文:
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
Our environment will be much better. There will be no more pollution because more green energies will be developed. New kinds of plants and flowers will be grown to make the earth more beautiful. Besides, higher and newer technology will come along to make our life more comfortable. Robots will be commonly used in all fields.With moving houses, people don’t have to stay in hotels even when travelling. The exploration of space will be another big progress. Our dream to travel in space freely and learn more about other planets will come true. More excitingly, making friends with aliens will also be possible.
Life in the future will be fantastic. How I wish it would come soon!
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。针对未来生活进行畅想,完成写作,包括环境、科技和太空三方面。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第三人称为主。第一段已给出;第二段叙述环境、科技和太空方面未来的情况;最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时做到无语法和标点错误。
7.
“少年强则国强,少年智则国智。”青少年是祖国的未来,家庭的期待。近几年,中学生职业生涯规划正悄然兴起。假如你是张磊,你校英语社团近期在开展有关职业规划的讨论。下表是你的职业规划,请根据表格要点写一篇发言稿。
自我评价
职业规划
梦想职业
如何实现
性格外向,有耐心,擅长与他人交流,喜欢阅读,……(补充两条)
教师/医生/工程师/飞行员/……
制定学习规划;改进学习方法;多向老师请教;注意锻炼身体;……(补充两条)
注意:1. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 请根据自己的职业规划把题目补充完整,文中须包含以上提示信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
I want to be a/an ________ in the future
We never know what will happen in the future. But knowing ourselves well and making plans are meaningful for our future. ________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
I want to be a designer in the future
We never know what will happen in the future. But knowing ourselves well and making plans are meaningful for our future. Now let me tell you about myself.
I’m an outgoing and patient boy. I love reading and communicate with others. I also love drawing and solving puzzles. I dream of becoming a designer. To achieve my dream, I plan to make study plans, improve my study methods and ask teachers for help. I’m going to do more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, I will focus on art and math in school. I’ll also join art clubs to improve my skills.
I believe learning and practicing will help me grow into a successful designer!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出自我介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从自我评价、梦想职业以及如何实现梦想三个方面重点介绍自己;
第三步,书写结语,表达实现梦想的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with 和……交流
②dream of 梦想……
③ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
④focus on专注于
[高分句型]
①To achieve my dream, I plan to make study plans, improve my study methods and ask teachers for help.(不定式作状语;and连接三个并列动词短语)
②I believe learning and practicing will help me grow into a successful designer!(省略that的宾语从句)
8.
只有好好地规划人生,才能成就美好未来。请根据下列导图中的信息,预测一下10年后的自己将是什么样的,然后谈谈你打算如何实现自己的梦想。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What will my future be like? I can’t stop thinking about it.
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【答案】参考范文
What will my future be like? I can’t stop thinking about it.
As time goes by, all of us will change a lot. I dream to be a professional football player. In ten years, I will live in Beijing and I will play for a football club. As a football player, I will train hard for the games. I will get on well with my partners and make friends with them. I will live in a small apartment alone. On weekends, I will go to the places of interest to learn more about the history of China. In order to achieve my dream, I am going to spend more time playing football. I am going to go to a football school to learn how to play football well.
In a word, I will try my best to make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写你梦想的工作,你未来的生活和工作,你将如何度过你的空闲时间和你打算为实现你的梦想做些什么;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with和……相处得好
②make friends with与……交朋友
③in order to为了
④achieve one’s dream实现某人的梦想
⑤be going to do sth.打算做某事
⑥spend more time doing sth.花费更多时间做某事
[高分句型]
As time goes by, all of us will change a lot. (时间状语从句)
9.
随着科技的飞速发展,我们的世界每天都在发生着翻天覆地的变化。那么,你有过关于未来的畅想吗?你认为人们的生活将会在未来变成什么样的呢?而你又希望哪些方面能够保持不变呢?为什么?请以“Life in the Future”为题,完成写作。要求:1. 80—120词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息:
Life in the future
Things that I hope won’t change
more tall buildings
more robots
cars in the sky
...
books on paper
hand-made things
studying at school
...
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology, our world is changing every day.
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【答案】例文
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology, our world is changing every day.
In the future, people will live in taller buildings and use robots for housework. We may travel by flying cars, which will make transportation faster. However, I hope some things will remain the same. For example, reading paper books can help us relax, and hand-made presents can show our love and creativity. I also hope we can still study at school to spend time with friends face to face. Then we will not lose the true connection between people.
I believe my life in the future will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于短文开头已给出,故接下来具体描述关于未来的畅想;
第二步,描写未来的生活将会变成什么样、你希望哪些方面能够保持不变并说明原因;
第三步,表达对未来生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
①transportation交通
②relax放松
③creativity创造力
④connection联系
[高分句型]
①We may travel by flying cars, which will make transportation faster.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I believe my life in the future will be better and better.(省略that的宾语从句)
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亲爱的同学们,随着年龄的增长,你们承担的责任和面临的挑战会更多。学校英文月刊发起了题为“I Am Ready for the Future”的征文活动。请根据以下征文要求,结合自身实际,用英文写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
Notice
●As you are growing up, are you going to be prepared for the future?
●What kind of person do you want to be? Why?
●What is your dream?
●How are you going to achieve them?
●Share with us!
ENGLISH MONTHLY
注意:1.根据征文所给提示,适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Am Ready for the Future
As a teenager, I will have more and more duty and challenges._______________________
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【答案】例文
I Am Ready for the Future
As a teenager, I will have more and more duty and challenges.
I want to be a doctor, because doctors can help more people in need. Thanks to the doctors like my father, we become healthier and we can live a happier life. What’s more, I’ll study harder to get into a medical college so that I can realize my dream—work as a doctor. After that, I will learn more practical skills. Besides, I also need to exercise to be stronger both in body and mind.
No matter what may happen to me, I will be ready for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明已经为未来做好准备;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍你想成为什么样的人及原因,你的梦想及如何实现;
第三步,书写结语。表达无论发生什么,都会为未来做好准备。
[亮点词汇]
①in need有需要
②practical skills实用的技能
③body and mind身心
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I’ll study harder to get into a medical college so that I can realize my dream—work as a doctor. (动词不定式表目的;目的状语从句)
②No matter what may happen to me, I will be ready for the future. (让步状语从句)
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Unit 7 单元主题写作满分精讲精练
(讲义&题型突破)
1、 写作主题
对未来的畅想
2、 主题分析
本单元的写作属于“人与社会”中的主题“对未来的畅想”,针对这一话题,我们可以围绕未来人们的工作和生活、环境、科技进步等方面展开写作。在描写未来的生活或者未来的城市时,要重点描述与现在相比发生的变化以及这些变化给生活带来的影响,作文人称多用第一人称, 时态多为一般将来时。同时可以用比较级结构,以增强对比效果。写作时一般按照“总—分—总”的说明或叙述顺序行文布局。
三、写作积累
(一).常用的词汇:
词汇
doctor, teacher, cook, artist, driver,pilot, city, village, house, school, park,work, study, play, travel, help,education,,impossible, develop, prediction , environment , futurist, pollution,happy, excited, proud, busy, creative
短语
live in..., work as..., in free time, want to be... , play with... , take care of... ,
build more tall buildings , fly rockets to the moon , on the earth , world peace ,
live on a space station, fast car, big computer, robot helper, smart home, beautiful garden, flying bike (imagine!), virtual reality games, last but not least
(二).常用的句型句式:
句型
①In 20 years, I will be...... .
②I will live in......, because......
③I want to be a ________ because...... .
④In my free time, I will......
⑤I hope my life will be...... .
⑥I will live in a comfortable house with a red door and a garden full of flowers.
⑦Maybe I will have a robot to help me clean my room!
⑧In the future, people will travel everywhere by spaceship.
⑨All the differences will make people's life very different.
⑩Our life will be better and better.
⑪I think life in 20 years will be different but exciting.
⑫In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
名言
①Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
②No pain, no gain. 没有付出就没有回报。
③Hold on your dream and never give up. 坚持梦想,永不言弃。
4、 写作步骤
一).Beginning
开篇点题,用一句话简单引出主题 In 20 years, I think my life will be very different/exciting/happy. I imagine my life in 20 years will be....
二)Body 从居住环境、职业情况、生活水平、出行方式、日常饮食、科技发明等描述具体活动。 使用because ,however, but,so,so that 等连词拓展句子。
正确使用“there will( not) be” 句型对未来的生活进行预测。
正确使用more/less/fewer和其他形容词的比较级描述将来的变化。
1.Places to live (Where will you live?)
In 20 years, I think I will live in Beijing. There will be more free time for me because robots can help people do different kinds of housework.
2.Jobs (What will you be in the future?)
I believe I will be an English teacher, I will try my best to make every students learn something useful for their future and let them know the world.
3. Transportation (How will you go to work?)
Life in 20 years will be more interesting than now. Some people may fly rockets to the moon to work or take a holiday. others probably are able to live on a space station on another planet.
4.Hobby (What will you do in your free time?)
In my free time, I will have more time to relax with my family and friends, we can travel different planets by rockets.
三)Ending 表达期望 I hope this life will come true. Now, I need to study hard.
In a word, I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life.
五、例题精讲
科技正以前所未有的态势重塑人类的就业方式。某英文公众号正在开展以“我的未来职业”为题的征文活动。假设你来是什么样的,以及你选择这个职业的原因。词数80词左右。
提示词语:give lessons, robot, challenge, guide
提示问题:
·What do you want to be in the future?
·What will the job be like in the future?
·Why do you want to choose the job?
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①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍未来想从事的职业;
第二步,具体介绍未来的工作;
第三步,具体介绍选择这份工作的原因。
【答案】例文
I want to be a teacher in the future. As technology will change how we work, teaching will combine traditions with modern tools. In the future, teachers will give lessons with the help of AI robots and use virtual reality to bring lessons to life. Moreover, teachers can monitor students’ progress through technology in order to give them specific suggestions on their study.
There are two reasons for me to be a teacher. First, I love children and teaching brings me a strong sense of achievement. Second, I got a lot of help from my teacher and I’d like to be a great person like her. I’m excited to use technology in teaching and guide students to a better future.
六、写作精练
1.
智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展,人工智能(AI)将越来越多地被应用于课堂。你觉得未来的课堂会变成什么样子呢?你将如何利用AI来辅助学习?新的学习方式会给你带来什么好处?请根据所给提示,写一篇80词以上的短文。
提示词语:robot, make a difference, improve, creative ideas
提示问题:·What will the future classroom be like?
·How will you learn with the help of AI?
·What benefits can you get from the new ways of study?
In the future, ___________________________________________________________________________
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2.
假设你是Susan,本周你校要举行一场有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛。请你以“My Dream Life in 10 Years”为题,根据以下内容提示从十年之后你希望从事的工作、生活的城市和原因及感想等方面完成一篇演讲稿。
内容提示:
What do you want to be? How are you going to do that?
Where will you live and work? Why?
What will you do in your free time?
Something more about your dream life in ten years.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校:词数60-80;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Life in 10 Years
Hello, everyone! I’m Susan from Class 14, Grade 8. ___________________________________________
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3.
假如你是Wilson,你班正准备召开一次主题班会畅想未来生活,请根据下面要点提示,写一篇80词左右的英文发言稿。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
要点提示:
1.二十年后,我将成为一名作家, 在北京工作。
2.我能在家通过电脑工作。家里有机器人帮忙做家务,因此我有更多的闲暇时间去环游世界,了解不同国家的文化(culture)。
3.未来环境会更好,树木会更多,污染将更少,人们的寿命会更长。
4.为了实现我的梦想,我将努力学习。
My dear classmates,
My name is Wilson. I’m very glad to share my prediction about the life in the future.
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Thank you for listening!
4.
某英语报社正在就“20年后的生活”这一主题进行征稿。假如你是李华,请你以“What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years”为题,用英语写一篇短文向该报社投稿,简单介绍一下你未来的职业、休闲活动等。
提示词语:businessman, travel around, sports, happy
提示问题:
1. What will your job be in the future?
2. What will you do in your free time?
3. What do you think of your future life?
What Will My Life Be like in 20 Years
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5.
假如你是Kate,你的英国笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件,向你询问你十年后的计划,请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容包括:
1. 你十年后选择从事的职业及理由;
2. 你十年后选择定居的城市及理由;
3. 你十年后的兴趣爱好(至少两点)。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you about my future.
I believe my life will be wonderful in ten years.
Yours,
Kate
6.
科技改变未来,学校正在开展主题为《畅想未来》的征文活动。请根据以下图示写一篇英语短文,进行投稿,谈谈你对未来生活的畅想。
注意:
1. 词数80-120个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入词数,请根据要点提 示适当发挥);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different.
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“少年强则国强,少年智则国智。”青少年是祖国的未来,家庭的期待。近几年,中学生职业生涯规划正悄然兴起。假如你是张磊,你校英语社团近期在开展有关职业规划的讨论。下表是你的职业规划,请根据表格要点写一篇发言稿。
自我评价
职业规划
梦想职业
如何实现
性格外向,有耐心,擅长与他人交流,喜欢阅读,……(补充两条)
教师/医生/工程师/飞行员/……
制定学习规划;改进学习方法;多向老师请教;注意锻炼身体;……(补充两条)
注意:1. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 请根据自己的职业规划把题目补充完整,文中须包含以上提示信息,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
I want to be a/an ________ in the future
We never know what will happen in the future. But knowing ourselves well and making plans are meaningful for our future. ________________________________________________________
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8.
只有好好地规划人生,才能成就美好未来。请根据下列导图中的信息,预测一下10年后的自己将是什么样的,然后谈谈你打算如何实现自己的梦想。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What will my future be like? I can’t stop thinking about it.
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9.
随着科技的飞速发展,我们的世界每天都在发生着翻天覆地的变化。那么,你有过关于未来的畅想吗?你认为人们的生活将会在未来变成什么样的呢?而你又希望哪些方面能够保持不变呢?为什么?请以“Life in the Future”为题,完成写作。要求:1. 80—120词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息:
Life in the future
Things that I hope won’t change
more tall buildings
more robots
cars in the sky
...
books on paper
hand-made things
studying at school
...
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology, our world is changing every day.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.
亲爱的同学们,随着年龄的增长,你们承担的责任和面临的挑战会更多。学校英文月刊发起了题为“I Am Ready for the Future”的征文活动。请根据以下征文要求,结合自身实际,用英文写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
Notice
●As you are growing up, are you going to be prepared for the future?
●What kind of person do you want to be? Why?
●What is your dream?
●How are you going to achieve them?
●Share with us!
ENGLISH MONTHLY
注意:1.根据征文所给提示,适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.词数80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Am Ready for the Future
As a teenager, I will have more and more duty and challenges._______________________
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