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Unit 6 单元主题写作满分精讲精练
(讲义&题型突破)
1、 写作主题
自我规划
2、 主题分析
本单元的主要话题是“自我规划”,谈论对于自己或他人未来的职业和理想生活的打算,或者对新年或新学期的决心,写此类文章时,文体多为记叙文,人称多用第一人称,使用一般将来时be going to do的句型结构。叙述要条理清晰、逻辑清楚。先描述未来的职业和理想生活,再描述打算采取的行动。结尾要谈一谈自己对于实现理想的决心或希望。
三、写作积累
(一).常用的词汇:
engineer, designer, director, painter, lawyer, resolution, goal, promise, achieve, keep, improve, develop, master, learn, healthy, balanced, quit, form,
take measures/steps to do sth.(采取措施做某事)
take up a hobby (培养一种爱好)
get into the habit of doing sth.(养成做某事的习惯)
in order to/so as to(为了) overcome challenges(克服挑战)
look forward to(期待) Set a goal of doing sth. (树立目标做某事)
Make up one's mind to do sth. (下定决心做某事) stick to(坚持)
improve one's relationships with…(改善……和……的关系)
get good grades (取得好成绩) make a weekly plan (制定周计划)
(2) .常用的句型句式:
1.As the New Year comes, I decide to...(新年到来,我决定……)
2.One of my resolutions is to..., because...(我的一个决心是……,因为……)
3.To make it come true, I will...(为了实现它,我会……)
4.I think that by doing..., I can...(我认为通过……,我能……)
5.A good beginning is half done.(良好的开端是成功的一半。)
6. Actions speak louder than words.(行动胜于言语。)
7.A year's plan starts with spring. (一年之计在于春。)
8. Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成。)
9. Little by little, one goes far. (千里之行,始于足下。)
4、 写作步骤
1. Beginning 用一句话点明新年的意义,引出决心
The New Year brings a chance to start fresh, and I’ve made some resolutions to become better.
2.Body 逐个介绍决心,每个决心需包含:
1.)具体内容(是什么决心)
2.) 制定原因(为什么选这个决心)
3.) 实施计划(如何实现) ①My first resolution is about improving...
...eat more vegetables and fruit.../ ...get more exercise...
②My second resolution is ..., because...
...take up the same hobby.../ care about my parents.../spend more time with...
③My last resolution is about...
...do the homework on time.../ read more/ ask the teacher or classmate for help if ...
④I plan to spend 40 minutes reviewing math notes every evening, so I can improve my grades in the final exam.
⑤I think that by doing..., I can...
3.Ending 表达坚持的信心或对新年的期待。
I know it won’t be easy, but I’ll try my best to keep these promises.
I am sure my resolutions can come true ./ Where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure I can keep my resolutions through ...
5、 例题精讲
随着新年的钟声响起,每个人都怀揣着一份美好的新年愿望和坚定的新年决心。假如你是李华,请根据思维导图提示,用英语给你的美国笔友Lily写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的新年决心。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Lily,
How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lily,
How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year.
Firstly, I’m determined to improve my health. I plan to exercise regularly and have a healthier diet. I believe that a healthy body can make us have a happy life. Secondly, I will do more reading because I can learn a lot from books. I will learn to make better use of my time. I will try my best to keep balance between study and entertainment. Lastly, I will do some volunteer work in my free time. I plan to help the old and clean up our city parks.
I wish I can keep these resolutions. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你的新年决心,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据思维导图详细介绍自己的新年决心;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②make better use of更好地利用
③try my best尽我最大的努力
④clean up清理
[高分句型]
①I believe that a healthy body can make us have a happy life. (that引导的宾语从句)
②I will do more reading because I can learn a lot from books. (because引导的原因状语从句)
六、写作精练
1.
每个人都有自己的梦想职业,学校将举办以“My Dream Job”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你根据提示写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
1.你的梦想职业是什么?
2.选择这份职业的原因。
3.为实现梦想你会做哪些具体努力。
写作要求:
1.包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m glad to share my dream job with you today.
My dream job is to be a ________. I choose this job because _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m glad to share my dream job with you today.
My dream job is to be a teacher. I choose this job because I have a deep love for sharing knowledge and helping students grow. Seeing students make progress and gain confidence through learning brings me a great sense of achievement.
To achieve this dream, I will study hard at school, especially in subjects like Chinese, English and history, to build a solid knowledge foundation. I’ll also take part in volunteer teaching activities to get more experience in interacting with students. Besides, I plan to read more books about education to learn effective teaching methods.
I believe that with persistent effort, I can become a good teacher in the future.
【知识点】工作与职业、愿望、应用文
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主,讲述当下的梦想与计划;
③提示:介绍自己的梦想职业、选择原因及为实现梦想所做的努力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明要分享梦想职业。
第二步,中间说明梦想职业是教师,阐述选择的原因,以及为实现梦想在学习、实践、阅读方面的具体努力。
第三步,结尾表达通过努力能成为好老师的信念。
[亮点词汇]
①foundation基础;地基
②persistent坚持不懈的;执意的
③interaction相互作用;交流
④achievement成就;成绩
[高分句型]
①I choose this job because I have a deep love for sharing knowledge and helping students grow.(使用“because”引导原因状语从句,清晰说明选择教师职业的原因。)
②I believe that with persistent effort, I can become a good teacher in the future.(运用“that”引导的宾语从句,表达对未来的信念。)
2.
假如你是Li Hua,2026新年来临之际,你校英文报刊正以“Looking ahead to the coming year (展望未来)”为题的征文。请你根据以下提示问题,写一篇短文投稿。
提示问题:What’s your New Year’s resolution?
What’s your dream job?
How are you going to do that?
Something more about your future.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Looking ahead to the coming year
The year 2026 is coming. ________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Looking ahead to the coming year
The year 2026 is coming. My New Year’s resolution is to become a better English speaker and to keep healthy.
I dream of being a wildlife reporter because I love animals and writing. To achieve my dream, I’m going to read two English books every month, write a weekly diary, and join the school newspaper club. I will also watch short English videos to improve my listening.
In the future, I hope to travel around the world, interview scientists, and tell people how to protect our Earth. I believe hard work will make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般将来时和一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍自己的新年决心;
第二步:介绍你的梦想工作以及如何实现自己的梦想;
第三步:介绍更多关于你的未来的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②dream of梦想
③travel around the world环游世界
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①I dream of being a wildlife reporter because I love animals and writing. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I believe hard work will make my dream come true. (宾语从句)
3.
每当新年来临,人们常常会设定提升自己的目标。他们或者决心努力学习、开始培养新的兴趣爱好,或者决定来一次说走就走的旅行。现在请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文说一说自己来年的计划。
要点:1. What are your New Year's resolutions? (at least three)
2. How are you going to do that?
要求:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范,可适当增加细节,使行文流畅;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80以上。
【答案】
As the New Year is coming, it is the perfect time to think about the changes we want to make. I have made some resolutions to make myself better①. I hope I can keep them.
First②, I want to improve my English. I plan to read English books and listen to English songs every day. I am going to try to speak English with my friends. Second②, I decide to learn to play the guitar. I am going to take guitar lessons and practice for at least half an hour every day. Third②, I want to exercise more. I am going to go running in the park three times a week and play basketball with my friends. I also plan to eat more vegetables and fruits to stay healthy.
I know it's not easy to keep these resolutions, but I am going to try my best. I believe I can make it and have a great year ahead③!
亮点评析
1. “make… better”可以体现作者对未来的期待和积极进取的心态,让读者感受到作者的决心和信心。
2. “First”“Second”“Third”这些衔接词能够有效地连接各个句子,使文章的过渡更加自然、流畅。
3. 宾语从句可以使文章的各个部分更加紧密地联系在一起,增强连贯性。
4.
81.目标是人生奋斗的方向,每个人都有自己的目标,都对未来有畅想。你对未来职业的憧憬是什么?假如你是李华,请你以“I want to be a/an...” 为题写一篇英语短文,根据给出的思维导图谈谈自己的看法。
注意:
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不得在作文中出现考生真实的姓名和校名。
(3) 语句连贯,词数 80 左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上,但作文 标题要写在答题卡上。
I want to be a/an ________
I have a dream.
81.范文:
I want to be a teacher
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.
The motto that encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!”. I think teachers are very important people in our life. They teach us knowledge. They help us with our study. They give us confidence. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.
To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I want to enter the university to get further study. I won’t give up my dreams. I think it will come true soon.
81.[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文应该主要用第一人称来写;描述自己喜欢这个职业的原因时,要写得具体;同时要把做好这一职业的决心展现出来。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头要表明自己喜欢的职业。
第二步,描述自己喜欢这个职业的原因和如何去做;
第三步,总结并进行情感升华。表明做好这一职业的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up成长
②be patient with ... 对某人有耐心
③from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
①I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.(where引导的定语从句)
②If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.(If引导的条件状语从句)
5.
梦想对每个人来说都很重要,梦想职业也如空中之星,指引我们不断奋斗,不断朝着未来前进。请你根据以下提示问题用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的梦想职业。
提示问题:
(1) What’s your dream job?
(2) Why is it your dream job?
(3) How are you going to make it come true?
写作要求:
(1) 文中须包含所有的要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3) 词数80左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dream is very important to everyone.
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【答案】例文
Dream is very important to everyone. It is like the star in the sky. I dream to be a taikonaut because. I am curious about the secrets of space. Space is so large and I want to learn about it.
In order to achieve my dream, I will work hard at school. What’s more, I will do exercise every day, and I will eat more healthy food like milk, fruit and vegetables because good health is very important to taikonauts. With such hard work, I am sure I can be a taikonaut in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,描述未来计划时可用“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已通过提示问题给出,考生需确保涵盖所有要点,包括梦想职业是什么、为何选择该职业以及如何实现,可适当发挥并突出个人特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“梦想对每个人来说都很重要”来引出个人梦想职业的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。依次回答提示问题,从“梦想职业是什么、为何选择该职业以及如何实现梦想”几个方面详细介绍;
第三步,书写结语。表达对实现梦想的信心和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②be curious about对……感到好奇
③what’s more而且,此外
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
①It is like the star in the sky.(比喻句型)
②With such hard work, I am sure I can be a taikonaut in the future.(With复合结构表伴随)
6.
近期,学校英语报开展了围绕“我的梦想职业”为主题的作文比赛。请你结合实际情况,围绕以下要点完成你的写作。
参考短语:be good at..., like/ enjoy doing sth., practise hard
注意:1.词数70词左右,已给出的句子不计入总词数。
2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job. My dream job is to be
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【答案】
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job. My dream job is to be a teacher.
I am good at communicating with others and enjoy helping students solve problems. Teaching can let me share knowledge and watch students grow, which makes me feel meaningful. I know it’s not easy, so I will study hard to get more knowledge. I also plan to practise teaching by helping my classmates with their lessons after school.
I hope my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:文章紧扣主题,明确梦想职业是教师,阐述了自己的优势以及为实现梦想将努力学习、练习教学的计划,内容完整,逻辑清晰,词数符合要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇承接已给句子,直接点明自己的梦想职业是教师,引出下文;
第二步,说明自己适合当教师的原因,并阐述为实现梦想的具体行动;
第三步,结尾表达希望梦想成真的愿望,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with与……交流
②solve problems解决问题
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①Teaching can let me share knowledge and watch students grow, which makes me feel meaningful.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
② I hope my dream will come true one day.(宾语从句)
7.
1.你的理想与热情,是你航行的舵和帆。每个人都有自己的梦想,你梦想中的未来工作是什么样的?请以“My Dream Job”为题,介绍你未来想要从事的工作及其原因,并谈谈为了未来的理想工作,你将做哪些准备。
提示问题:
What is your dream job?
Why do you want to do this job?
What will you do to prepare for your dream job?
My Dream Job
Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs.
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【答案】例文
My Dream Job
Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs. For me, my dream job is to become a successful writer.
Writing has always been a passion of mine since I was young. I love how words can be used to express emotions, ideas, and stories. It fascinates me how a simple combination of letters can create something so powerful and meaningful.
To achieve my dream job, I know that I need to work hard and be dedicated. I need to read and write as much as I can, and constantly improve my skills. I also need to be open to criticism and feedback, and learn from my mistakes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出“我梦想的工作”话题;
第二步,具体介绍工作名称、选择这份工作的原因、如何准备做好工作;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①passion热情
②meaningful有意义的
③need to do sth.需要做某事
[高分句型]
To achieve my dream job, I know that I need to work hard and be dedicated.(that引导宾语从句)
8.
每个人都有自己理想中的工作,一切工作都有其意义。你理想中的工作是什么呢?请根据写作要点写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你理想的工作。
写作要点:
1. What do you want to be when you grow up?
2. Why do you want to do that?
3. How are you going to do that?
要求:
1. 应包括所有的写作要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. Today the topic of my speech is “My dream job”.
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone. Today the topic of my speech is “My dream job”.
Everyone has his or her own dream job and each job has its meaning. I also have my dream job. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I think teachers are great. On the one hand, they teach their students much knowledge. On the other hand, they can learn something new from their students while teaching. So I think this job is meaningful.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education.
I believe I’ll realize my dream — to be a teacher.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿,谈论自己理想的工作;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,需涵盖自己的理想工作、原因以及实现方式等要点,注意语言流畅,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明演讲主题是理想工作;
第二步,说明自己的理想工作,具体阐述原因,讲述为实现梦想的具体行动;
第三步,表达对实现梦想的信念,结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①knowledge知识
②meaningful有意义的
③realize实现
[高分句型]
①I think teachers are great. (宾语从句)
②To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education. (动词不定式作目的状语)
9.
愉快的暑假结束了,为了更好规划新学期生活,现校刊英文专栏以“My Plans for New Term”为题征稿,请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点:
1. 学习计划;
2. 运动计划;
3. ……计划;
4. 你对新学期的期望。
注意:
1. 内容必须包含题干中的所有信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数70左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:improve (v.提高), do sports (做运动), look forward to (期望)
My Plans for New Term
Hi, everyone. I’m happy to tell you my plans for the new term.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】(参考范文)
My Plans for New Term
Hi, everyone. I’m happy to tell you my plans for the new term.
First, I’m going to study English hard. Last term, I didn’t get good scores in English. In the new term, I plan to join the English Club and improve my spoken English. Second, I will do sports every day to keep healthy because exercise will make me happy and relaxed. Last, I’m going to share more housework with my parents. I will learn to cook and cook for them at weekends. I’m looking forward to having a wonderful new term.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:本文以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:题目要求根据提示谈谈新学期的计划,要从学习、运动等方面展开,最后谈对新学期的期望。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题(已给出);
第二步,根据所给要点,依次从学习、运动、分担家务方面展开介绍自己的计划;
第三步,最后表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth. 计划做某事
②do sports 做运动
③look forward to doing 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①Second, I will do sports every day to keep healthy because exercise will make me happy and relaxed.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I will learn to cook and cook for them at weekends.(动词不定式作宾语)
10.
假如你是王建,请根据邮件的内容和所给提示,给你的笔友John回复一封邮件,并表达收到来信很开心。
Dear Wang Jian,
I am lucky to be your pen pal. I’m very interested in designing and building things. So I want to be an engineer in the future. What about your dream job? Tell me the reasons and how you will make your dream come true . By the way, what will you do this summer holiday? Tell me your plans. Wait for your reply.
Yours,
John
写作要求:
(1)短文应包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数:70词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名。
Dear John,
How’s everything going?________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Jian
【答案】例文:
Dear John,
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to receive your letter! It’s great to know you want to be an engineer.
My dream is to be a teacher because I love sharing knowledge with others. To achieve this, I will study hard and improve my communication skills.
This summer, I plan to visit my grandparents in the countryside and learn to cook. Maybe I can even teach them some English! What about your summer plans? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Jian
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生需涵盖梦想职业、实现方式及暑假计划,适当添加细节,注意语言流畅和逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候,并回应对方收到信的感受。
第二步,描述自己的职业理想及原因,并简述实现的方式。
第三步,介绍自己的暑假计划,并反问对方计划以保持互动。
第四步,结尾。
[亮点词汇]
① be glad to do很高兴做某事
② communication skills沟通能力
③ looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①My dream is to be a teacher because I love sharing knowledge with others.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②To achieve this, I will study hard and improve my communication skills.(不定式作目的状语)
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Unit 6 单元主题写作满分精讲精练
(讲义&题型突破)
1、 写作主题
自我规划
2、 主题分析
本单元的主要话题是“自我规划”,谈论对于自己或他人未来的职业和理想生活的打算,或者对新年或新学期的决心,写此类文章时,文体多为记叙文,人称多用第一人称,使用一般将来时be going to do的句型结构。叙述要条理清晰、逻辑清楚。先描述未来的职业和理想生活,再描述打算采取的行动。结尾要谈一谈自己对于实现理想的决心或希望。
三、写作积累
(一).常用的词汇:
engineer, designer, director, painter, lawyer, resolution, goal, promise, achieve, keep, improve, develop, master, learn, healthy, balanced, quit, form,
take measures/steps to do sth.(采取措施做某事)
take up a hobby (培养一种爱好)
get into the habit of doing sth.(养成做某事的习惯)
in order to/so as to(为了) overcome challenges(克服挑战)
look forward to(期待) Set a goal of doing sth. (树立目标做某事)
Make up one's mind to do sth. (下定决心做某事) stick to(坚持)
improve one's relationships with…(改善……和……的关系)
get good grades (取得好成绩) make a weekly plan (制定周计划)
(2) .常用的句型句式:
1.As the New Year comes, I decide to...(新年到来,我决定……)
2.One of my resolutions is to..., because...(我的一个决心是……,因为……)
3.To make it come true, I will...(为了实现它,我会……)
4.I think that by doing..., I can...(我认为通过……,我能……)
5.A good beginning is half done.(良好的开端是成功的一半。)
6. Actions speak louder than words.(行动胜于言语。)
7.A year's plan starts with spring. (一年之计在于春。)
8. Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成。)
9. Little by little, one goes far. (千里之行,始于足下。)
4、 写作步骤
1. Beginning 用一句话点明新年的意义,引出决心
The New Year brings a chance to start fresh, and I’ve made some resolutions to become better.
2.Body 逐个介绍决心,每个决心需包含:
1.)具体内容(是什么决心)
2.) 制定原因(为什么选这个决心)
3.) 实施计划(如何实现) ①My first resolution is about improving...
...eat more vegetables and fruit.../ ...get more exercise...
②My second resolution is ..., because...
...take up the same hobby.../ care about my parents.../spend more time with...
③My last resolution is about...
...do the homework on time.../ read more/ ask the teacher or classmate for help if ...
④I plan to spend 40 minutes reviewing math notes every evening, so I can improve my grades in the final exam.
⑤I think that by doing..., I can...
3.Ending 表达坚持的信心或对新年的期待。
I know it won’t be easy, but I’ll try my best to keep these promises.
I am sure my resolutions can come true ./ Where there is a will, there is a way. I am sure I can keep my resolutions through ...
5、 例题精讲
随着新年的钟声响起,每个人都怀揣着一份美好的新年愿望和坚定的新年决心。假如你是李华,请根据思维导图提示,用英语给你的美国笔友Lily写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的新年决心。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Lily,
How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lily,
How time flies! I have many resolutions for the new year.
Firstly, I’m determined to improve my health. I plan to exercise regularly and have a healthier diet. I believe that a healthy body can make us have a happy life. Secondly, I will do more reading because I can learn a lot from books. I will learn to make better use of my time. I will try my best to keep balance between study and entertainment. Lastly, I will do some volunteer work in my free time. I plan to help the old and clean up our city parks.
I wish I can keep these resolutions. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你的新年决心,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据思维导图详细介绍自己的新年决心;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②make better use of更好地利用
③try my best尽我最大的努力
④clean up清理
[高分句型]
①I believe that a healthy body can make us have a happy life. (that引导的宾语从句)
②I will do more reading because I can learn a lot from books. (because引导的原因状语从句)
六、写作精练
1.
每个人都有自己的梦想职业,学校将举办以“My Dream Job”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你根据提示写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括:
1.你的梦想职业是什么?
2.选择这份职业的原因。
3.为实现梦想你会做哪些具体努力。
写作要求:
1.包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m glad to share my dream job with you today.
My dream job is to be a ________. I choose this job because __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.
假如你是Li Hua,2026新年来临之际,你校英文报刊正以“Looking ahead to the coming year (展望未来)”为题的征文。请你根据以下提示问题,写一篇短文投稿。
提示问题:What’s your New Year’s resolution?
What’s your dream job?
How are you going to do that?
Something more about your future.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Looking ahead to the coming year
The year 2026 is coming. ________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.
每当新年来临,人们常常会设定提升自己的目标。他们或者决心努力学习、开始培养新的兴趣爱好,或者决定来一次说走就走的旅行。现在请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文说一说自己来年的计划。
要点:1. What are your New Year's resolutions? (at least three)
2. How are you going to do that?
要求:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范,可适当增加细节,使行文流畅;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80以上。
4.
81.目标是人生奋斗的方向,每个人都有自己的目标,都对未来有畅想。你对未来职业的憧憬是什么?假如你是李华,请你以“I want to be a/an...” 为题写一篇英语短文,根据给出的思维导图谈谈自己的看法。
注意:
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不得在作文中出现考生真实的姓名和校名。
(3) 语句连贯,词数 80 左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上,但作文 标题要写在答题卡上。
I want to be a/an ________
I have a dream.
5.
梦想对每个人来说都很重要,梦想职业也如空中之星,指引我们不断奋斗,不断朝着未来前进。请你根据以下提示问题用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的梦想职业。
提示问题:
(1) What’s your dream job?
(2) Why is it your dream job?
(3) How are you going to make it come true?
写作要求:
(1) 文中须包含所有的要点提示,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3) 词数80左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dream is very important to everyone.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.
近期,学校英语报开展了围绕“我的梦想职业”为主题的作文比赛。请你结合实际情况,围绕以下要点完成你的写作。
参考短语:be good at..., like/ enjoy doing sth., practise hard
注意:1.词数70词左右,已给出的句子不计入总词数。
2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job. My dream job is to be
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.
1.你的理想与热情,是你航行的舵和帆。每个人都有自己的梦想,你梦想中的未来工作是什么样的?请以“My Dream Job”为题,介绍你未来想要从事的工作及其原因,并谈谈为了未来的理想工作,你将做哪些准备。
提示问题:
What is your dream job?
Why do you want to do this job?
What will you do to prepare for your dream job?
My Dream Job
Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.
每个人都有自己理想中的工作,一切工作都有其意义。你理想中的工作是什么呢?请根据写作要点写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你理想的工作。
写作要点:
1. What do you want to be when you grow up?
2. Why do you want to do that?
3. How are you going to do that?
要求:
1. 应包括所有的写作要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. Today the topic of my speech is “My dream job”.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
9.
愉快的暑假结束了,为了更好规划新学期生活,现校刊英文专栏以“My Plans for New Term”为题征稿,请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点:
1. 学习计划;
2. 运动计划;
3. ……计划;
4. 你对新学期的期望。
注意:
1. 内容必须包含题干中的所有信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数70左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:improve (v.提高), do sports (做运动), look forward to (期望)
My Plans for New Term
Hi, everyone. I’m happy to tell you my plans for the new term.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
10.
假如你是王建,请根据邮件的内容和所给提示,给你的笔友John回复一封邮件,并表达收到来信很开心。
Dear Wang Jian,
I am lucky to be your pen pal. I’m very interested in designing and building things. So I want to be an engineer in the future. What about your dream job? Tell me the reasons and how you will make your dream come true . By the way, what will you do this summer holiday? Tell me your plans. Wait for your reply.
Yours,
John
写作要求:
(1)短文应包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数:70词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名。
Dear John,
How’s everything going?________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Jian
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